[Partners in Rhyme] Pyoo's Poem Process (Tutorial)

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I'm a person who started poeming on NUF. Here I met @Autumn Wind who carries poetry in her every breeze~ Inspired, I made a poem to her. To confess her effect on me. From there this whole journey started, until I can call myself on of the first NUF Poets, one of those that basically forced a wave of poetry on NUF, an anonymous forum about novels. From her, my first Partner in Rhyme.

I'm a total amateur poet. I would even call myself as self-taught, but poems are self-expression anyway~ Why would it need to be taught~ Why does it need rules and a fixed structure~ That's why most of my poems are free verse~ and the pattern isn't always the same. It's like a self-discovery!

But people keep telling me they don't know how to poem. Some would ask how I do it. It's weird for me cause I just look at poems and tried to imitate it without knowing hows or whatnots. Because to me, there is no definite 'how'. It's all just, what my head tells me to write~

And well, it differs from each poem. Sometimes you just resound so strongly to the topic/theme that you don't even need to think, it all just flows from your head to your hands, to the paper (screen). Sometimes you have to think a bit more about why you want to do that theme, about each and every word you're trying to use, about how the lines don't work beside each other and should be at other parts of the poems instead. But here's my usualy how-to~

  1. Be inspired, get a theme that interests you, or twist a theme your way.
    Themes can be a random word, a happening in your life, a thought that passed by, anything~ If you need theme inspirations, check this out!
  2. Let the words flow, what do you wish to convey about the theme?
    What do you think is interesting about the theme? What do you wanna say about the theme? What emotions happened or what thought happened on the story in the poem?
  3. Use rhymezone.com for rhymes and google.com for synonyms.
    I really don't like it when someone says if you use thesaurus/rhymezone or other help that means it's not a "real" poem, not a real creative outflow. I disagree strongly! They are tools, just like the brush of a painter. The exist to aid the creation process, to allow you to create more beautiful poems. Never does using tools means your creation is invalid.
  4. Try getting each lines as you want it and then try to restructure it if you dont think it works.
    For me I like having a pattern. Sometimes the pattern is in a certain word repeated (in synonyms), sometimes it's just in having an adverb as the start of every line, sometimes it's having a gerund for the first line, about a subject on the second line, about a place on the third line, and what that lead to on the fourth line, weird structures like that which might or might not be noticable. But having this structure for me makes it easier to flow the poem~
  5. Look at it again and see how each paragraphs flow.
    Is the whole poem structure works best as is in conveying what you want to convey? What if you switch around a few paragraphs?

This is only how I make poems. Each people have their different methods, which allows them to create different art. Try to explore as you write and express. Have fun poeming!

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Comments

    1. Fabulist Ed Jun 14, 2017
      @Pyoo
      "but wouldn't that mean you talk really dramatically irl?"
      Yeah...

      I once asked my friend:
      Me: Hey... have you noticed that.. when I talk. I used a lot of ... dramatic pauses- (I started to laugh)
      Friend: You can't even keep a straight face saying it
      Me: Yeah, I...I just realised I am doing it right now...
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    2. Pyoo Jun 14, 2017
      XD it's basically one! XD

      oooh lol~~~~ hahaha yea it's kinda weird/hard. too many pauses~
      congrats XD you've grown out of it XD
      but wouldnt tht mean you talk really dramatically irl?
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    3. Fabulist Ed Jun 14, 2017
      [​IMG]

      IT'S not A POEM !!!

      lol

      Actually, now that I think about it. I think I almost always like talking in short sentences... Email to friends, talking in RL. I add a lot of dramatic pauses and short beats... I actively try to avoid it on Nuf. Coz I think I annoyed... @brasca with my short sentences with many breaks a loooooong time a go.

      http://forum.novelupdates.com/posts/760977/

      But see. I talk properly now!!!
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    4. Pyoo Jun 14, 2017
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    5. Fabulist Ed Jun 14, 2017
      Lol
      I am a thesaurus Poet.
      I am like... systems, patterns
      so I struggle with free forms

      Usually, I find something to say
      I say it
      I say it in different words
      I say it in rhyme
      then I say it in verse

      then I am done.
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    6. BlancFrost Jun 13, 2017
      Hahaha yes the three 3P's~

      Mm it is rather hard when the theme is given by another person, I guess the best thing to do if to loosely base it off the theme and inspiration will flow better. At the end, sometimes the poem you write down actually fits the theme without you try to word your way around it.

      Broken sentences \o/ Hurrah for long sentences broken into a stanza \o/
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    7. Pyoo Jun 13, 2017
      @BlancFrost *claps~* I should have called it process so its 3 Ps again like the poem pool~

      Nods nods yupyup~
      Tho when the theme is given by others it gets a bit challenging for the inspiration to hit~

      Nods yup~ or in (broken) sentences to be restructured is fine too~
      *claps*
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    8. BlancFrost Jun 13, 2017
      *clap clap*
      Tutorial \o/
      I get those questions too :X3: Glad Pyoo was able to write a tutorial on it though.

      Inspiration is really the way to go with poems for me. I get inspired by the smallest things or even just random thoughts.

      If I can picture the scene in my mind, that is how the poems just flow out. Some may be analytical in their poetry or find their own poems not good enough. But I think that which each person being a unique individual being, all poems are good in their own way (well dependent on the sincerity of the writer...I have read *shudders* not good ones.).

      My advice when people ask is to just write down your thoughts and organise them into a poetry format. It doesn't have to be specifically structured, but the essence is still there.

      A stroke of pen
      Leads to a string of words
      Thoughts forming on the page

      Inspired by all
      Inspired by naught
      Just an inkling of your every day

      Don't hesitate to try
      Something simple and clean
      Complex metaphors
      Are not as hard as they seem