Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool

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  1. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Too true~ sometimes we don't think of the obvious things and write about objects/situations that are more closer to us. Interacting with other people gives us a chance to try out something new.

    ehehehe well I have to gain inspiration from something, I am hopeless at pulling something out of thin air.

    *pats her on the head*
    Just in case it wasn't clear enough :X3:
     
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  2. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Ayee~
    Sometimes we focus too much in a kind of theme~
    And end up not only doing Poems in that field~ >w<

    Yes~ the new chances are nice~
    And coupled with viewing how each person write about said subject~
    Is really interesting~

    *Pat pat*
    Hahaha~
    Pulling things from the air is hard~ XD
    But thinking of a scene and them taking a theme out of it~
    Is really interesting~

    *Enjoys*
    Hahaha~
    Ayee~
    It sure was understood~
    *GIGGLES*
     
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  3. LittleFox21

    LittleFox21 The Soon-to-be famous Nyatsune

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    dumping my instant poem
    those twinkling stars
    beyond our reach
    beautiful as each
    how i want to put them in jars

    one peach so sweet
    takes you to grit
    grit to get it?
    no, you grit to eat

    a simple answer
    to your question
    and it bangs louder
    because it's a poison

    a walk so peaceful
    goes to the mountain
    it roughs so tearful
    out of my pain
     
  4. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Poem Challenges

    Playing with Poems First Theme

    A challenge for those who want to do it. Themed poems to enjoy and share, among those who dare:​

    Fluttering in the wind, without a care in the world. Enjoying life to the fullest under the open sky. The first group theme will therefore be freedom.


    General Rules for housekeeping:
    1. All the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes as time goes on.
    2. Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it on the post.
    3. Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes to date:
    "Freedom" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Distance" by Bielt ♡
    "Doll/Puppet" by Siostar ☆
    "Flowers/Blossoms" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Discovering" by Siostar ☆
    "Fear" by Bielt ♡
    "Forgotten" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Fate" by Siostar ☆

    Calling those who have shared poems with me, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.
    @Bielt @Siostar @Pyoo @Lady Luck @Carm @Omnifarious @shad12ow

    Participants

    BlancFrost
    Pyoo
    Siostar
    Bielt
    Nurman
    shad12ow
    Aster Anemone
    hatoyin97
    Fabulist Ed
    Osamaru
    warlokid
     
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  5. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Theme: Freedom

    Perception of the individual

    Wanting to be able to do more,
    Than just simple tricks.
    Constrained by expectations,
    Due to her gift.

    Looking out the window,
    To those below.
    Their happiness was her all,
    As she watched the show.

    Those four rectangles of wood,
    Encased the world.
    The hills looked inviting,
    As they twirled.

    Clouds so soft,
    Covering the sun.
    Rain falls down,
    Halting their fun.

    Pressing against the glass,
    For one last glimpse.
    Fog obstructs her view,
    Unforgiving.

    Looking at the door,
    Longingly.
    Perhaps she could,
    Perhaps she would.

    Leave these four walls,
    Just for a moment.
    One small break,
    Was all she would take.

    Turning the knob,
    With shaking hands.
    Wanting to find,
    Someone who understands.

    Stepping out into the yard,
    The scent of orange blossoms fill her with ease.
    Running out under the rain,
    Happy and free.

    Tripping and falling,
    Running and tumbling.
    So filled with life,
    Away from strife.

    She did not know,
    The shackles within.
    Were nothing but,
    Her own doing.
     
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  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Basking under the sun
    Breathing in the chill air
    Walking along the pavement
    Skipping my steps lightly
    Humming a random tune
    Ridding myself of thoughts
    Letting any chains go
    Enjoying the moment as it is
    Living life weightlessly
    Looking almost like flying
    Freeing myself to spend the days
    Smiling at each passing moment
     
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  7. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Flying in the blue sky


    Riding along the genlte wind

    Ever seeking the pleasure of freedom

    Even in the harsh storms

    Does it never give up

    Over and over again

    May the eagle see over the great sky
    [​IMG]
     
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  8. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    In my youth,
    I was imprisoned.
    Studies and expectations,
    Burders over my shoulders.
    Rules and duties,
    Binding me in a endless cycle.

    As I grew up,
    I became wild and unwinding.
    Nothing could bind me,
    As I roomed aimlessly.
    Following no rules,
    Doing only as I wished.

    When I became old,
    I looked past and saw.
    A young who carried the expectations of many,
    Silently drowning in her burdens,
    Till she rebelled against all.
    I saw a person who lives a ruleless life,
    Aimlessly and without reason letting nothing for others,
    Living in constant fear of being held back fleeing from any responsibilities.

    And then I understood.
    What binded me,
    Wasn't the responsibilities,
    Nor the expectations from others,
    It was my own expectations.
    I understood,
    What I had always seek,
    Wasn't be able to travel to where I wished,
    Nor being free of rules or responsibilities,
    It was having a clean mind.

    Lastly I understood,
    It's not others that binds and imprison us,
    But our own mind.
    And only by accepting ourselves,
    Only by liberating our own hearts,
    We can truly reach freedom.
     
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  9. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Playing with Poems Second Theme:
    A challenge for those who want to do it. Themed poems to enjoy and share, among those who dare:​

    In the world where new technologies rise, making it more connected,
    Where information can travel around the planet in an instant.
    The Distances between places shrink,
    And yet we are all so far apart from each other.
    Our families and friends go to far away places,
    And while we can talk and even see them,
    We are unable to touch them unable to feel their warmth.

    Therefore The second group theme will be [Distance]


    General Rules for Housekeeping:
    1 - Remembering that all the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes.
    2 - Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it on the post.
    3 - Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes up to date:
    "Freedom" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Distance" by Bielt ♡



    Calling those who have shared poems with us, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.
    @BlancFrost @Bielt @Siostar @Pyoo @Lady Luck @Carm @Omnifarious @shad12ow

    (PS: Would @Lucky Charm want to participate?)

    Participants

    Bielt
    Blanc
    Nurman
     
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  10. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Theme: [Distance]

    [Faraway]
    Since the first day I met you,
    I knew that you were different.
    We played we laughed and talked,
    Getting to know each other better.
    And without me noticing,
    I started to like you... To love you.
    An impossible love I know,
    Something that may never bear fruits.
    But there isn't even a day on which,
    I don't think about what we could be,
    If only the distance between us wasn't so big,
    Maybe we could meet.
     
  11. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Theme: Distance

    What is the point of traveling,
    When it is not to reach you?
    Taking the train has no meaning,
    When no stop is yours.
    Looking out the window,
    Watching the landscape pass by.
    Endless sand,
    Endless land,
    Boundless with time.
     
  12. Nurman

    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    Theme: Freedom

    Liberated from the despair you inflict,
    No longer set on the path that you picked.
    From now on I will travel alone,
    Seeking the destination that’s still unknown.

    Uncaged, unchained and unbound,
    The freedom of choice is so profound.
    The journey forwards is a lonesome endeavour,
    But still my heart I will miss you forever.
     
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  13. Nurman

    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    Theme: Distance

    “Chasing Autumn”

    To know is to hurt and to feel is to cry.
    Time can’t divert the tears from goodbyes.
    Ignorance is bliss, the privilege of the young.
    Laughing at the abyss are the fledglings whom yet to be stung.

    Their passion overflowing, their destination unknown.
    Forwards she kept going, never a moment postponed.
    Hand-in-hand she led, joys and sorrows they shared.
    He smiled ahead, his soul lay bared.

    The wedding bells sung, and not a moment too soon.
    The setting sun hung over the celebratory tunes.
    In sickness and in health, they vowed, “We do”.
    Regardless of wealth, their hearts stayed true.

    His emotions awry, she wipes his tears.
    Her ending is nigh, the moment he fears.
    Severely ill, she falls into his embrace.
    Her body chills and he holds her in place.

    She posed, “Have you, do you, will you regret?”
    Her complexion blue, he asked, “Did you forget?”
    Like Romeo, he fell in love at first sight.
    Standing below, her glare gave him a fright.

    With desires to pursue he sung her a ballad.
    Rejecting his cue, her face turned pallid.
    She cried that she would bring him nothing but sadness.
    Mystified, he countered that she had brought him nothing but gladness.

    All night they contended, no thoughts were spared.
    It only ended when he forcefully declared,
    “Give me a year and I’ll make you love me!”
    She gave him a sneer and the word “Dummy.”

    After three months of pursuit, she gave in to dread.
    “You stupid brute, by next autumn I’ll be dead!”
    He stood before her resolute, “Let me accompany you”, he repeated again.
    Now enclosed in his suit, they have been together since then.

    In silence she slept, her final moments peaceful.
    The winds wept whilst he remained wistful.
    “To you my Juliet, our times I have hold dear.”
    “No need to fret, my love for you is sincere…”
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    shad12ow 『Semi-Offline』

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    Theme: Freedom


    To speak...
    Of everything that come in your mind
    Be it good or bad, harsh or kind
    To pour out your thought or just to whine
    When you walk, drive, or dine

    You have a choice...

    Yet....why you choose that!?
    To make someone have nothing but sorrow
    To make them timid, afraid to grow
    Convincing them that they are very low
    That they have no chance, now or tomorrow

    Why you say it like that!?
    To give their heart constant aching!
    As if they are absolutely nothing!
    That they are not worth mentioning!
    Not more than trash to fling!

    You have a lot of choice....

    To speak...
    So please be careful of your word
    As they are sharper than sword
    They can hurt, injure, or even kill
    Even if you have no ill will

    You have a choice....
    [P.S.: Well....not just exact and pure freedom. Don't mind me. I'm rambling...as usual. Hahahaha~!]
     
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    shad12ow 『Semi-Offline』

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    Theme: Distance
    ...I hate this....
    I heard your wound as you were hurt
    I read your cry as you were injured
    But I can't do anything
    Only heard and read

    ...I hate this....
    I can only send you word
    At most, picture or images
    Yet they are fruitless
    I sincerely hope that they're not useless

    ...I hate this....
    I want to be beside you
    Lending my shoulder while you grieve
    But, alas, I can't do that
    Not with the land and sea between us

    ...I hate this....
    This space between us
    This gap between us
    ....I hate this....
     
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  17. Carm

    Carm Drip drop, when will time stop

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    *cough cough*
    More like a good way to flood my profile.........................
     
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    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    *hands him some water*
    Well it was a better way than slamming doors or announcing a sleep schedule huhu
    I liked reading the poems too! You were both a good influence, isn't that great. :X3:
     
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    Carm Drip drop, when will time stop

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    Such a sweet little sis.
    Thanks for the water.
    And I wonder if I should slam open doors or other such things.....
     
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    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    *beams at him*
    Why? To announce your presence? Slamming doors is fun, you should try it some time! I haven't done it in a while, been writing poems instead...
     
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