Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool

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  1. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Why don't kick the door down
     
  2. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Kicking it means I would have to find a replacement. You want to kick doors open Sio?
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Naah~ just thought of blaze knight, I think it was called~
     
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    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Alright~ I have no idea who that is though lol
     
  5. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Playing with Poems Third Theme (Unlocked):
    A challenge for those who want to do it. Themed poems to enjoy and share, among those who dare:

    A puppet, a thing, an empty shell
    Cute, pretty and nice to hold
    That is my friend, a human doll

    Therefore The Third group theme will be [Doll/Puppet]

    General Rules for Housekeeping:
    1 - Remembering that all the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes.
    2 - Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it on the post.
    3 - Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes up to date:
    "Freedom" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Distance" by Bielt ♡
    "Doll/Puppet" by Siostar ☆
    "Flowers/Blossoms" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Discovering" by Siostar ☆
    "Fear" by Bielt ♡
    "Forgotten" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Fate" By Siostar☆

    Calling those who have shared poems with us, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.
    @BlancFrost @Bielt @Siostar @Pyoo @Lady Luck @Carm @Omnifarious @shad12ow

    Participants
    Siostar
    Arcadia Blade
    BlancFrost
    Bielt
    Nurman
     
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  6. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    A character from legend of sun knight~
    It is a funny light novel~
     
  7. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Oh I have that on my reading list but haven't gotten around to starting it. I might start reading it soon then~
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Goodluck~
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Theme: Doll/Puppet
    Title: My Doll

    Black hair
    With blue eyes
    Such pretty face
    With a little smile
    May you dance
    My red little friend
    Once you was soulless
    Once your eyes was lifeless
    But now, you can really move
    But now, you are really alive
    So move, just like you will
    So talk, like you will

    My friend, with a will
    For now, you are real
    A friend, with a real will

    A living doll
    My true treasure
     
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  10. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Theme: Doll/Puppet
    Title: To be a Living Doll

    Created to be a certain doll for a child
    A certain day to be so mild
    I truly wished to be alive
    But one day she will leave
    Since she isn't a puppet with no strings
    How i wish that she one day wear a ring
    I love the person who controls me
    Yet, i know a doll cannot love.

    A certain day had arrived
    He, who was alive had come and take her away
    I'm just a puppet no more than that
    Truly wishing to be more than that
    Yet, that day had arrive for me
    To be abandoned in the darkest place
    I had no choice but acceptance
    Since i'm no more than a doll

    One day all strings on mine cut
    But i know that i'll fadeout
    For my last wish to dance with that child
    In the blossoming field, we smile
    The child became a woman
    And i, a doll to man
    As we dance in the miss of the field
    Until i become a doll once more.​
     
  11. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Theme: Doll/Puppet

    Boxed up neatly, put on display.
    Shiny and new, taken out to play.
    Constant companion, throughout the years.
    Tea parties abundant, those were the days.
    Dressing up with ribbons to match.
    We sit side by side to watch the show.

    So elegant, so pretty.
    You were eager to join, to learn.
    Not noticing that you had changed.

    I sit on the shelf, waiting for us to start the day.
    Forgotten by the one who held me dear.

    I was not missed, as my time was up.
    Just another doll on the shelf left in dust.

    Just another memory of your childhood days.
    A replacement was found, in the form of pink.
    A figure who twirled. A figure who danced.

    A figure not me.


     
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  12. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Theme: Doll

    Erstwhile a cheerful girl,
    Working hard for her future.
    Always with a large smile,
    Spreading her optimism around.
    Always giving her all,
    Showing her brightness on her studies.
    But everything started to fall...
    His poisonous words,
    Echoing inside her mind.
    Slowly corruption her thoughts,
    Making her brightness fade...
    Killing her determination, Her will.
    Making her heart hollow.
    Turning her into a lifeless doll,
    Dancing as he pulled the strings.
    She keeps waiting silently,
    As he cut string by string...
     
  13. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Poem Challenges

    Playing with Poems Fourth Theme (Unlocked)

    A challenge for those who want to do it. Themed poems to enjoy and share, among those who dare:​

    Spring blossoms fill the streets,
    Waiting for their moment to shine.
    Look at me and not at her.
    I am the prettiest one to see.
    Admire me above all,
    You will have no regrets.
    Trust me.

    Which this I annonuce the fourth group theme to be [Flowers/Blossoms].


    General Rules for housekeeping:
    1. All the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes as time goes on.
    2. Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it on the post.
    3. Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes to date:
    "Freedom" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Distance" by Bielt ♡
    "Doll/Puppet" by Siostar ☆
    "Flowers/Blossoms" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Discovering" by Siostar ☆
    "Fear" by Bielt ♡
    "Forgotten" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Fate" by Siostar ☆

    Calling those who have shared poems with me, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.

    Participants

    Arcadia Blade
    BlancFrost
    Nurman
    Siostar
    Bielt
    Princess Renesmee
    hatoyin97
     
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  14. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Title: Flowers to my first love
    Theme: Flowers/Blossoms

    First to Everything i make
    Loving what cooks would bake
    My first love is discovered
    Yet, my love was uncovered
    A cute yet sad tale
    Told in a pathetic tale

    I start when i like a certain girl
    Yet, an ocean without pearls
    A love that is one-sided
    Truth be told, a flower that doesn't blossomed
    A pathetic old me, waited till the end
    Confessed too late, what awaited me was a bad end

    A boy whom she found and loved
    A one-sided love i stared
    The boy and girl without afair
    To the me who stare from afar
    A onced blossomed love
    Turned into a one-sided love​
     
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    Diabeetus [NUFs cutest Panda][Pandesu~][BootyFul][Hungry]

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    making burritos:
    Roses are red
    Violets not blue
    i'm using my hand
    while thinking of you
    >///////<
     
  16. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Theme: Flowers/Blossoms


    Blooming free without worries about the rest.
    There was no competition as she was the best.
    Curious of the blooms, people gather around.
    To find the best flower in this bud filled town.

    So proud and tall you stand above them all.
    Notice me as I am the one to pick.

    Such soft petals,
    Don't you think?

    Waiting for their choice to be made.
    Ignored.
    Slowly wilting under their gaze.
    Shame.
    Roses,
    Tulips,
    Daisies

    Take the stage.
    Such commons flowers you all pick.
    Such peasants who lack taste.

    Roses may represent love.
    Tulips may vary in colour.

    Daisies may show innocence.
    But peonies bloom without regret.

    She liked all flowers equally,
    So put away those shears.
    It was just a jest.
     
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  17. Nurman

    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    Theme: Dolls

    Striving for perfection they mindlessly follow,
    Their complexions fantastic yet eyes were hollow.
    Burning passion ablaze in pursuit of fashion,
    Their ashen cheeks lacked nothing but compassion.
    Enduring the pains and sacrificing time,
    Their focus took away years off their prime.
    If the price for beauty was to live as a doll,
    Maybe it would be better for the curtains to fall.
     
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    Nurman ( ಠ∩ಠ) [Retired Ton]

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    Theme: Flowers/Blossoms

    Bleeding Hearts opens upon finding beauty within sorrow
    Lilacs strive to survive by holding on to see tomorrow
    Orchids only display their allure in full bloom
    Snowdrops try to elevate ones heart from gloom
    Sakuras illustrate the short-lived beauty of youth
    Oriental lilies never shies away from the truth
    Morning Glories are tender with persisting tenacity
    Sunflowers stand tall with up front audacity


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    Theme: Flowers/Blossoms
    Title: My Dandelion

    You may be common
    You may also be normal

    Some will see you as a weed
    Some may see you, just as weird
    But for me, you are a healing sight
    A blighting sight, a nice sunshine

    A cheerful color, a wam color
    With a yellow color

    You . . . . . . . : . . .Send a . . . . . . . . . .Little
    Smile . . . . . . . . To the . . . . . . Childen
    And then . . . you turn . . . . . white

    With a blow, and you will fly
    With a wish, on your flight

    Plant a seed, to where you go
    And spread your pureness, to everywhere you go
    My dandelion, that just how you are
    Therefor, I give you to him
    Your flower to him

    A present for you, @ExitedDeviljho
     
  20. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Theme: Blooming

    Not beautiful, nor colorful but with a sublime essence,
    They are born in delicate buds,
    Simply waiting and swaying,

    They soon start to grow and transform,
    Gaining their colors, their Shapes.

    The petals form a flower,
    A flower who start to bloom,

    In a spectacle of exquisite colors and shapes,
    They reach the climax for their short lives.

    As the seasons pass,
    The Petals abandon their buds,
    Falling in a rain of sublime colors,

    Creating a stunning show,
    With their hundreds of hues
    And thousands of patterns,

    As they dance with the wind,
    Heading for their own destination,
    Painting the world with their colors.


    As they touch the ground and wither,
    As fast they were born,
    As fast as the grew and bloomed,

    They die and disappear,
    But even if their time is short,
    Their dazzling colors will f
    orever be remembered,
    By those who witnessed their show,
    By those who were near,
    The
    ir Blooming lives will forever exist....
    In the hearts of their Family and Friends....


    Title: Blooming Lives
     
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