Welcome to my poem pool~ We'll this is a thread to store and share both my past, present and future poems, I had written or will be writing in the future. For the reason I made this, that was because I was friendly advised many times by @brasca123, @Pyoo and I guess @BlancFrost too~ But It was also meanly inspired by ❅[PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool❅, and then I want to make one pool too, but was lazy at same time. So even though I planned it for a long time ago, I just don't have the motivation to start until now. In beginning, I write poems for fun and post them randomly on spot to people I know, without a single title for my poems. Mostly they are in posted in the profile of people, because I will a bit happy too. In the future, I want to make more creative poem, and develop a habit to make a title for every poem I create. I may also revise the old ones, then I feel like it. ____________________________________________________ Poem links: Random spread poems (Sep 22 2016 - Apr 4 2017) Random spread poems (Apr 10 and after) Challenge poems and poems from this site
There poems under here, is where my random posted poems lay after date Spoiler: For You, I Will... @ExitedDeviljho ,you are my ace! No one like you are so nice! @ExitedDeviljho ,you are my light! For only you, I will fight! For me, you will always shine For my love, are red like a wine Date: Sep 22 2016 Link: The Rhyming Game Thread Spoiler: Day and Night If I am the stars and sun, then you are the day and night In the darkness or light, I shall be by your side Only in the day, are there a sun Only in the night, shall the stars come As time go on, things will change, but the sky will always be the same! Date: Sep 23 2016 Source: PM Spoiler: Red String Spoiler: Orginal Someday,I fund a red string was tied to my littlefinger, for some reson, I don't want to take it off. As I wonder where it will lead me to, I follow the string of fate, to find you have the same string, tied to your littlefinger. When I saw you, I couldn't help, but give you a smile. A smile of happiness, for you to be my fated one. I can only hope, hope this string will never break, and stay with us forever and always Spoiler: Revised(Apr 9 2017) I fund a red string Tied to my little finger Don't want to take it off Wonder where it will take me to I follow a string of fate To find you have the same thread Tied to your little finger When I saw you I couldn't help But give you a smile A smile of happiness A smile for you For you are my fated one Can only hope A string will never break This string will never break And so, it will stay with us Forever and always Date: Oct 1 2016 Source: PM (Revised: Apr 9 2017) Spoiler: A Match? Roses are red, and violets are blue They are a mismatch, and yet can match Just like the troublesome @LittleFox21, and the kind @Bielt Seems to be a mismatch, and yet they truely match Date: Oct 2 2016 Link: LittleFox21 profile Spoiler: Hikari's Shadow People may think, I belong to the light I will give a smile, that seems truely bright Yet in my heart, there is only one I will follow A name from the dark, yes he are mine shad12ow Date: Oct 2 2016 Link: brasca123 profile Note: My gift for Brasca123 status Spoiler: My Bond With Three I'm just a normal one Never expect there will be someone Create a bond to someone as me Yet I fund a place, I will be In font of me, there are a group of three Together with them, I can be truly free Date:Oct 4 2016 Link: Justderpin profile Spoiler: Don't Leave If our love was a sweet Then it will taste, so bittersweet You are the one I care, my dear Yet in my heart, there are something I truely fear I'm afraid, you will have other then me And say, that we was never meant to be Please, don't leave me all alone For without you, I may as well be a stone Date: Oct 8 2016 Link: ExitedDeviljho profile Spoiler: A Moment Together Under a night, with a land of snow I was with you, to see a star show It's was a moment, I could just say wow Together with you, I wish for the time to go slow You give me a smile, that seems to glow I know you someday, will have to grow Yet I want you to be, the one I always had know Date: Oct 17 2016 Link: ExitedDevljho profile Spoiler: My Angel Without Wings It was your beauty, that made me look at you. It was your voice, that made me listen to you. However, it's was your personality, that made me like you, fall for you and finally love you. Someday, I saw you in a dress, a dress so white, so pure and so pretty like you. Are you perhaps a wingless angel? If so, then let me be your wings, the wings that carry you across the sky, the wings that carry you under the starry night. I wonder if you are quite alright? For you are a weak knight. I can come to protect you, right? Then my wings shall protect you in my flight. I may lose my feathers, I may break my wings, I may even lose my life. But as long you are alife, then it's all worthwhile. Without you, my heart will be gone. Without you, my mind will go crazy. Without you, my life will go empty. Because, I simply love you. Because, I can't stop loving you. Because, I'm madly in love with you. If you still wondering why I love you, then it's because, you are you. It's because, you are Sin It's because, you are the sinful angel, who stole my heart. Date Feb 20 2017 Link: Adventurers Guild Raid Thread Note: Better to see the original page Spoiler: Color of Red Then I see the red color of wine, the redness just like blood I can't stop myself, but be remind of you "Why red?" I asked to myself "Why red?" I wondered to myself For red is the color of love For red is the color of passion For red is the color of you Date:Mar 9 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: Find And Love You If I could go in the future I want to see you mature And see another part of your nature I found a red thread On a map I have want to read And go to where it lead Then hours count to three I found you under an evergreen tree Walking around ever so free The love, that I has to contain The love, that I cant never explain But you should know, my love for you, will always remain Date: Mar 13 2017 Link: ExitedDeviljho profile Spoiler: Birthsday The sun has raised The night is gone A new day A good day Today is special Today is different A day to laugh A day to celebrate For today is a birthsday A birthsday for @Carm Date: Mar 16 2017 Link: Carm profile Spoiler: Coffee Time Siostar: Beside your name I saw a cup A cup of coffee Warm and bitter A great aroma With a dark color That is your coffee I got a shock I got a surprise Such a bitter drink I will never drink If I ever drink coffee Then it's have to be A sweet latte Yes, a Caffè Latte If we was to take a break Then I guess, it's a coffee break So my friend, are you a coffee lover? Bielt: A cup was offered to me A cup full of black coffee~ A present it was Presented with friendly care. A simple thing But a thing I love. For I am a coffee lover. And as my sweet friend come. Why not offer her something too? A sweet caffe latte~ A drink we both can enjoy. Siostar: A friend offered a cup A cup of black coffee A cup for the lady of red I am also a friend of her However I wasn't the friend That offered the black coffee A sweet latte offered the lady The lady I think as red A friendly lady I want to talk A friendly lady that give hearts out Maybe there is a heart in my cup A cup I think is for friendship I drink the latte with warm The Caffè Latte was so sweet So sweet and gentle as my red friend Bielt: Giggling I talked Laughing we talked The cup of black coffee, May have been a present A present from a old friend A man with red hair. But the sweet lady is a important friend. A blue and gentle friend One which I want talk One I wish to see with a smile. As we drink the warm coffee together. As we spent time together. My day brighten My day becomes sweeter So sweet and bright as my blue friend Siostar: I don't know what a back coffee is I don't know who the red haired man is I only know the lady is nice Her latte is nice And her talk is nice The time go so fast For fun time go fast One hour, two hours And the time goes The time we enjoy The time we laugh The time we treasure A friend like a treasure That is my friend The lady of red The lady named @Bielt Bielt: As cool and beautiful, Like the snow she is. Gentle and sweet, Her Presence brings warmth. There is no need for complicated matters, For our friendship is what matters. Latte, cookies or chocolates, Are smalls snacks for our talk. Like seconds, Hours ran as we talk. But we proceed Without minding the time. As we are enjoying the time, As we are enjoying the talk, As we are enjoying laughs, As we enjoy each other company. The company of a friend, A friend that is like a jewel. That is my friend The lady of Blue The lady named @Siostar Date: Mar 16 1017 Link: Bielt profile Note: The poems here is wrote by Bielt and me in turns Spoiler: Name of Light Hikari, Hikari a name of light A person with power, to take a flight A name that reminds you of a guide Guide you in darkness side by side Fear and darkness that made me cold I search for a warmness, a hand to hold Guiding in the darkness, is a friend of hugs Things may go wrong, just like the computer bugs But you are here, my friend of loves so why don't we fly, just like the doves? Date: Mar 16 2017 Link: brasca123 profile Spoiler: Advance To You I see a wall, and I will smack I see a cliff, and I will climb I see a mountain, and I will hike Bit by bit Step by step Slowly but surely I get some process I'm getting closer Just to find you I advance the road Just to reach The distance you Date: Mar 24 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Spoiler: BlancFrost My Friend Siostar: @BlancFrost @BlancFrost, a name of white frost @BlancFrost @BlancFrost, a name on many poem post @BlancFrost @BlancFrost, a name I like to sing the most My friend of white, surrounded by melted ice Always so friendly and nice And hugging me, just like sticky rice All the poems, that you write Never had I seen, you write a trite And I hope you to be free, continue to be free like a kite BlancFrost: Thank you @Siostar for you poem, It is thoughtful and to the point. I am happy to receive, Such a wonderful gift. Smiling as I read, It is a nice, well earned treat. Siostar: A sweet treat But not something to eat When someone praise My happiness will raise When someone give a like I want to voice in a mike That you should never stop the likes For it's all better then hikes And my good friend, @BlancFrost Thanks for all your poem post! BlancFrost: Thanks is enough, It is all I need to continue. Inspiration may hit, At the most unexpected times. The results are never the same. You inspire me to write, Many different poems. Your cheerfulness in contagious, It is what motivates me to go on. Dear @Siostar , Thank you for being around. Siostar: What give you inspiration, isn't me alone For all people around you, just inside the phone They all give spark, a spark of great inspiration For we all have a bond, a bond of relation So don't give a thanks, for a single me For a thanks for everyone, it's how it should be BlancFrost: You are right on that account, I am thankful to know. So many wonderful people, who can inspire. Interaction leads to growing, just that bit closer. It's nothing but the truth, for all to hear. I say it proud and with cheer. Thank you all, for your inspiration, My imagination becomes boundless. Siostar: While you speak, I call people to see For the speech of thanks, I need to seek I seek for people, who need to see A lady of red, a lady with hearts, @Bielt A man of darkness, a man with blames, @shad12ow A girl of pitifulness, a girl with door's,@Carm A person of light, a person with breads, @ExitedDeviljho They was ones I, for I wasn't sure, who else to call BlancFrost: Thoughtful is the word, I relate to you. Always watching, Always seeing. Biel that chimes with sweetness. Shadow that is missed. Carm who is near yet far. Dev who shines brightly like a star. Sio knowing who to call, Even if they are not all. A little birdy who chirps happily. And one with wondrous luck. Are the ones missed. Siostar: I know of a bird, a silly bird A bird named @Pyoo, always so happy A lady with luck, a lady of luck, can it be @Lady Luck? BlancFrost: Yes you are correct dear Sio. Such a smart Sio, An attentive Sio. Who is warm and caring, And rather daring to those close. Date: Mar 24 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Note: The poems here is wrote by BlancFrost and me in turns Spoiler: A Poem Siostar: A poem is a art A poem is something from the heart A poem can give people joy A poem is something to enjoy A poem can be seen in different lights A poem can be seen in different sights And a poem is just a poem, in the every end BlancFrost: It is just words, Thoughts written down. Impression of those around me, And my surrounds. Perhaps I will see it one way, And others another. After all they are just words, Words written down on paper. Filled with meaning, Filled with thought. It was not all for naught. Siostar: Poems with different lines Lines with different words Words in different letters A paper full of writings A paper full of letters A paper full of words Words with meaning Words with thought Words with different kind of sign A poem written in a single poem Send or save to someone to see BlancFrost: Crumbled up paper, Fills the room. The scratching of pen is all one hears. Ripping and tearing, When nothing comes to mind. Frustrated cries before banging is heard. She had just left the room. The fresh air calms her down. But she was still let down, Please tell me why. Siostar: I can list thousands of why's I can guess thousands of reason But I know and you know Only you know the answer Only you can find the answer So I can only offer a help With my hands BlancFrost: Words of advice are received, Moving the mind. Inspiration comes, Like a chime. Gently and slowly it trickles in, Furiously I put pen to paper. Cries of success, Sighs of relief. Finally I am complete Date: Mar 24 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Note: The poems here is wrote by BlancFrost and me in turns Spoiler: Hellish Girl Deep down A hellish fire burn A shadow moving around A bat on one side, a knife on other A fearful scream A sound of smashing A sound of slashing A smell of iron A pool of red A blood strained girl.... "Welcome to hell" She said "w...wh..what are you....d..do..ing....? I ask "Perpare the lunch?" She answer I sigh "When... Please D..DON'T DESTROY THE PORK MEAT!!!" Date: Mar 30 2017 Link: brasca123 profile Spoiler: Bright Future Jusderpin~ Jusderpin~ Once again she hold a marriage First one like a storm Next one I forgot This one with a surprise Leave behind the man She chose a understanding lady And here am I present a flower Then I saying my congratulation And I wish A bright future await you two Date: Apr 1 2017 Link: Yuri Wedding Thread Note: Better to see the original page Spoiler: Flower of Hope Hurt Tired Lost A colorless world A warmless world It useless It meaningless So why do I fight? Why can't I give op? lt's lost It's gone A life is gone An empty home But not everything is lost A garden of white A flower of white The flowers from you Snowdrops Small, gentle and pure like you May the flower guide the rebirthed you May the flower guide me to the future you Until then, the flower will be my sign of hope A hope to live in this life A hope to meet you again in next life A hope to love you again in next life Date: Apr 1 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: My Unknow Feelings Never will I trust again Never will I be deceived again So don't smile at me So don't come closer to me So don't ever come again Always harsh, always cold I push every single one away from me Then why are you never afraid? Why are you not hurt? Why wouldn't you ever go? So many questions But afraid to ask You are so pure, so bright and so varm Too pure, too bright, too warm for me Unknowing, I begin to feel your warm Unknowing, I reached out for your hand Unknowing, you had grabbed my heart Unconscious.... I fall in love with you.... Date: Apr 3 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Spoiler: Lonely Tree Then the darknass come And the weightless rain falls The sound of falling water The sound of hitting leaves The sound of the crying winds All as one, was just a stage Under the grand lonely tree It was a true weeping tree A grand weeping mellow tree Date: Apr 3 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile ' Spoiler: Angry Water The source of life Is in many places, in many forms In the sea, in the skys On the land, under lands Reaching out theirs hands Greedy takes, never give Source of water can never forgive Angry water leave the creek Leave behind a town in ruin Oh angry water, how will you ever forgive? These greedy humans, who never give? Date: Apr 4 2017 Link: Bielt profile
Because it's better to see them from the original sites, there will only be links ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Linked poems from Blanc poem pool challenges Free Eagle (Apr 3 2017) Two Mountains (Apr 6 2017) My Doll (Apr 7 2017) My Dandelion (Apr 9 2017) Tiny Girl (Apr 13 2017) Mirror of Me (Apr 30 2017) Warming Hand (Mar 22 2017) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Linked poems from this site A Dreaming Bird, A Lost Bird (Apr 23 2017) I Blinded my Eyes (Jun 6 2019)
*throws confetti into the air* Finally Sio has her own poem pool. We just have to wait on @Bielt and then we are complete \o/ well we still have others... @Omnifarious is planning one too~ I will add the links to my post \o/
so im reading one called Find And Love You or whatever and it looks like there are some mistakes made in some sentences. Like "A" being used instead of "An" or "Cant never"--a double negative-- being used instead of a " Can't ever"
thanks for your comment, I edited that part you pointed out for my mistake. And I hope you will point out, more mistakes then you feel like it~
My bond with three. "Fund" and "font" should be found and front Dont Leave. There are a lot of mistakes here. like, "you are the one i care, my dear" could be "you are the only one i care for, my dear" or something else along those lines. Also " there are something i truly fear" should probably be "there is something i truly fear" and "im afraid you will have other then me, and say we was never meant to be" can be changed to "I'm afraid you will have other than me, and say we were never meant to be." Finally, for this poem, the word "sweet" in the first line sort of clashes with the "bittersweet" word in the next. Perhaps change "sweet" to "pastry"? Or be more specific with what kind of "sweet", like a tart or something. Next...um, actually, im just reading the rest and i have to say that a lot of things could be fixed. Like some of the word choice seems awkward, or can be exchanged with another to give either more impact or a better transition to the next part of the poem. Now, im no poem expert. I never make any myself unless i have to. But reading and writing were always my strong suits so i sort of think that all these can be brushed up a bit. Is english your first language, or the first language of the people who made them if not you? I mean dont want to impose or anything. I dont want to be...well, too pushy. So i dont know if i should say anything more here or give any advise. If you want me to then you can let me know, but otherwise i'll keep it all to myself.
It seems the one you had read is my old ones, I planed to revise many of my really old poems in the future. Then I write a poem, I just write how I feel sounds right, at that time. And also because they was made on sport to, only the peoples I know, they don't need to be an high quality poems for me. For the "sweet" and "bittersweet" it was just made for rhyming, and I don't really think too deep on the clash here. For love can both be sweet or a bittersweet thing English was always my third langue, and I had always more difficult to learn other langues, therefor you will always see a mistake or other somewhere then I write. At least, I in fact don't mind you point out mistakes there seem to be wrong, but in a way, I think any fault is also my own style. You are welcome to comment anytime, but I may worry too many fixing may change my poems style instead, but don't an advice or two. And thanks again for reading my poems
style huh? yeah that's what i thought. If i make any suggestions in the future it'd just be to point out an error or to maybe make a word change. I dont change entire phases. English is a language where you can substitute words without compromising the meaning or entire phasing of something. When i make suggestions of thing like this i'm always careful to preserve the author's meaning, since i would hate changing things too much. It's rude and i don't do that if i can help it. So maybe i'll point some things out, but as for your style...at least i wont want to ruin it. As I said, it's really just some grammar mistakes or awkward word choice at times. Nothing major. You're poems are fine overall, i liked them, there's not much to complain about as far as that goes.
I got a @Cupcake Ninja fan, maybe~ I can see you are only mean to help me for now~ And I will think over the advice, you will give me in future~
Random poems from Apr 10 2017 and after Spoiler: 10,000 Stars Once time A long time ago I meet you at a tree Though the window, there you sit And so, everyday I came to speak In that house of white In your world of white A room so lonely and wide And so, I speak everyday Share a tale of my day Talk of the shining stars And share a memory of the stars But day by day Your strength go, less by less Through I was young I know, your time may come And so, I lay my wish in the stars The one called Lucky Stars I count the stars, as I make them, one by one Set the numbers in a glass Send them, glass by glass Once a white and empty room Now is nothing but a star filled room I count the stars, one by one And I come with the 10,000th star It was then you made a weak smile And said thanks, in your last breath 60 years later, I come back to the same hospital A memory of old, a item so old A memory of happiness, a memory of sadness A gift to him, is now an item for here One by one, you find bottles of stars, the stars for him In a whisper, I said the same thing, 60 years ago "Did you know? 10,000 stars mean, Love you 10,000 years" A wish never fulfilled, but a meaning never forgotten Maybe, I will see him, as a star next time Date: Apr 10 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Spoiler: Once A Stick Once a beauty Now a stick Covered in nothing, but a dirtied mess In rain, a muddied mess Once a tool A human tool Now is nothing Forgotten Abandoned Alone And so, the times go And go, go and go Days, months and years goes by Someday, someone dig Dig, dig and dig it out! Once it's was in a lake The lake turn to a swamp, and a swamp turn to earth In the earth was a stick, a stick covered in mud and dirt And so, we clean, clean and clean the stick Once a beauty Once a tool A human tool A tool for war, a tool for death Now a old sword, a sword of many tales And now the sword will make new tales Date Apr 11 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: Ignorance Is A Sin Ignorance is a sin...... Ignorance is a sin...... They can see, but don't look They can hear, but don't listening For they don't want to know A truth of cruelty A world of madness It's a sin, I whisper..... It's a sin, I whisper..... In despair, I sceam In suffering, I fight In pain, I live To survive this world To live another day Unforgivable...... Day after day, I watch them Day after day, I curse them A fire of anger, a flame of insanity Burning stronger, day after day Until, someday it's suddenly stop It's....a sin..... A child I found, a cheerful one Innocent he is, a treasure he is Fear of change, I come to wish Unstained he remain, unknowing he remain If ignorance is a sin, then I carry his sin And then, I come to know Ignorance is a bless Date: Apr 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: My Sweet So cold and sweet With a touch, you melt So smooth and white A vanilla fragrance Can't stop myself I lick and lick So tasty, so tasty Can't stop to eat Eat and lick Every spot, every place My tasty sweet An ice cream sweet It's what you is Date: Apr 28 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: A Windy Tale Long Ago Upon a tree, so wide and tall A bird standing proud, of it's tail Above the bird, someone sing, a lonely tale A tale so long, long time ago A boy so young, a lady of wind Together they are, together they sing Grow in time, grow in feelings Before she know, the boy was a man Never does she age, never does she changes, only emotion that can ever change In time they fall, in love they fall In love they live, in happiness they smile Until the man die of old Never age, never change, for she was a spirit of wind Living in time, so long ago She sing in a place, they met, so long ago Date: Mar 9 2017 Link: BlancFrost profile Spoiler: You The Demon King, I The Hero You are the demon king, and I am the hero I kill the demons, and you kill the humans I save the humans, and you rule the demons A hero of light, a demon of dark A good side, and an evil side That should be our roles, that we can never escape Yet I can't see you as evil, wicked or cruel You are just an another being, another person, with a shell of a demon I am the hero, meant to save, yet here am I, ready to kill Covered in blood, and sink in sins, of the bloody war Tired of fighting, tired of kill I seek the demons, to stop the war Promised of peace, wish of a war-free future Yet a king, still seek of war Smell of evil, wicked and cruelty Was no other, but the king of humans The man of evil, who hide his darkness within A man more evil, then the devil itself To save the people, to save the world I killed that king, who love the war Like a traitor, who should be his aid I control his country, and become the queen And seek a love, with the demon king Date: Mar 10 2017 Link: Bielt profile Spoiler: My Ideal Makeup, dresses and jewels Beauty, money and power Get what she want Use any she want But never have it, enough She aim for me, through But never, will she get my love Another I love, so sweet, so sweet A kindness of sweets A smile to heal No makeup, dresses or jewels Only need, the best smile My ideal, my love How I wish, I wasn't a prince How I wish, I wasn't engaged How I wish, I could change a rule How I wish, 'he' is a 'she' Date: Mar 22 2017 Link: Bielt profile
Title: A Dreaming Bird, A Lost Bird Cared for, but caged Loved, but captured Warming, but dreamless Still it dream Still it wish Still it yearn The blue sky The gentle wind The true freedom A dream so far, yet so close One day, two days and so it goes Another day, the same routine And then, it's change They open the cage They take it out They set it free Truly free Joy, happiness and excitement Many feelings, indescribably The dream, wish and yearning fulfilled Many adventures, many tales However, it yearn again Yearning to it's home again Free, but lonely Eventful, but unsafe Exciting, but fearful It miss It longs It yearn The warming home The gentle smiles The loving family A treasure it had, a treasure lost Caged and loved or free and lonely How could it know? How could it chose? It was just curious bird, now it's just a lost bird Oh! How it miss them, how it miss them, the lonely bird
You have done a great job. I also like to write the poems but I don't have yet a courage to post them. Also like this one.. At first, I don't really read all of your poems above. I just notice it. I like this phrase -> *for red is the color of you* remind me of someone