Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool

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  1. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Ahhh!?
    *fall to the floor, from the sudden hug attack*
    Och... Why does everyone love to hug others?
     
  2. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Allow this humble self to join in
    Theme : Fear
    The Beating Heart
    Intoxication
    Floating in the ninth heaven
    "Love, a feeling I will treasure forever.."
    In obsession,
    a second of separation
    Heart shivers in coldness.
    Intoxication turns numbness.
    The agony of emptiness.
    "Love, is what I long for ...
    But, is it worth the pain?"
     
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  3. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Allow this humble self to join in
    Theme : Fear
    The Beating Heart
    Intoxication
    Floating in the ninth heaven
    "Love, a feeling I will treasure forever.."
    In obsession,
    a second of separation
    Heart shivers in coldness.
    Intoxication turns numbness.
    The agony of emptiness.
    "Love, is what I long for ...
    But, is it worth the pain?"
     
  4. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Allow this humble self to join in
    Theme : Fear
    The Beating Heart
    Intoxication
    Floating in the ninth heaven
    "Love, a feeling I will treasure forever.."
    In obsession,
    a second of separation
    Heart shivers in coldness.
    Intoxication turns numbness.
    The agony of emptiness.
    "Love, is what I long for ...
    But, is it worth the pain?"
     
  5. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Lol triple post of pain
     
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  6. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    No why~ Just because~! Hmm I'll put up the new theme in a few then~
    Love is painful when you give your all~

    But posting it three times? Three times the pain D:
     
  7. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    As long you don't love the pain
     
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  8. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Internet delays......
     
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  9. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Poem Challenges

    Playing with Poems Seventh Theme (Unlocked)

    A challenge for those who want to do it. Themed poems to enjoy and share, among those who dare:
    Pounding on the glass, to no response.
    Eyes glide over, as they are not seen.
    Shouts echo through the chamber
    Heard by no one.

    Shivering as they wait
    For the presence of another.
    Anyone.
    Anything.
    Please come.

    Remember me.


    Left behind, living in the dust. Afraid to approach, afraid to cease existing. Hence our next theme will be [Forgotten].

    General Rules for housekeeping:
    1. All the previous Themes are still up for anyone who wishes to participate, we are only going to add more themes as time goes on.
    2. Please remember to tag the post of the theme you are writing, and also mention it on the post.
    3. Remember to have lots of fun~ :X3:

    Themes to date:
    "Freedom" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Distance" by Bielt ♡
    "Doll/Puppet" by Siostar ☆
    "Flowers/Blossoms" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Discovering" by Siostar ☆
    "Fear" by Bielt ♡
    "Forgotten" by BlancFrost ❅
    "Fate" by Siostar ☆

    Calling those who have shared poems with me, just a small challenge nothing big. You don't have to do it~ There is no time limit.

    Participants
    Arcadia Blade
    hatoyin97
    LittleFox21
    Siostar
    Action
    BlancFrost
    kirvy
    udonsage
     
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  10. Aster Anemone

    Aster Anemone Well-Known Member

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    Hi, my first one on Freedom...

    FREEDOM

    A tiny breath
    that harm no one
    still fight a war
    of fear and pain
    to come through out
    and give me a shimmer
    of joyous hope

    I heard there are
    some people blessed
    takes in and out
    as much as they wish
    inhale exhale
    inhale exhale

    Without a doubt
    or fear or pain
    not fearing rain
    nor thunder storm

    I wish one day
    I could too meet
    that what they call
    On cloudless day
    the one named
    Freedom...
     
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  11. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Theme: Forgotten
    Title: Your Friend​

    Are you my friend?
    Yes i am.
    Would you stay with me forever?
    I would be glad to.
    Those simple, yet, forgotten promises.
    Such a fragile words are voices of lies.

    Do you remember me?
    Who are you?
    I am your friend.
    You are not my friend.
    Forgotten, i am always beside you.
    Ignorance, such sin made by you.

    Growing up, i stay by your side.
    Falling in love, i am your aide.
    Brokenhearted, i always comfort.
    Graduate, may you move foreward.
    As you mature, i will bid goodbye
    Your friend, your immaginary friend.
     
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  12. Hotato

    Hotato Eternally Confused

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    What soon to devour me,
    Is not decay nor unknown.
    What soon to entrap me,
    Is the lost of love.
    Not at the angst of heartbreak,
    Nor the dread of betrays.
    But the departure of familial love,
    That cross the river of time.
    At last, I have forgotten
    Those I have not treasure
    Those I have taken for granted.
    Someday, will be turn to dust
    Bygone with time.
    Regrets rushing, memories flowing,
    At those joyful days.
    O, the wonder of woes
    How so I didn't learn in my youth.
     
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  13. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Oh I forgot to ask~ Do you want to be added to the calling list? It's just so people can know when a new theme is up. You don't have to ^_^ I don't mind people joining in whatever theme they want.
    Hotato \o/ Same question to you~ Do you want to be on the calling list or just drop by whenever you want to do a theme?
     
  14. Hotato

    Hotato Eternally Confused

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    Drop by whenever I do a theme~
     
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  15. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Theme : Forgotten

    Indifference

    A selfless man,
    A glorious feat,
    Revolutionary of an era.

    In endless flow,
    ashes to dust,
    dust to earth.

    In bask of time,
    Records rotten,
    Dynasties falls.

    The new origin?
    The first sprout?
    Whom decides?

    All existence
    In eventual
    Forgotten by the world.
     
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  16. LittleFox21

    LittleFox21 The Soon-to-be famous Nyatsune

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    theme: forgotten

    Title: I Forgot

    Hey, you
    Yes, you
    Who are you?
    Do I know you?

    Pardon me if I'm rude
    Just like everyone would
    Instantly forgive me
    So, can you tell me?

    Somewhere in memories
    Clouded by miseries
    Created disrepancies
    It's nothing of a bliss

    Tell me
    Remind me
    Who you are
    Who am I

    Because
    I know you are important to me
     
  17. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    I need stimulies for my brain anyway, pm would be the best way though.
     
  18. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    PM? Well I added you to the calling list on the first page. Feel free to try the other themes out if inspiration hits you.
     
  19. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Ok....
    away to lurk on NUF
     
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  20. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Theme: Forgotten
    Title: Her Unheard Call

    There she stand, watching, listen and laughing with them
    Always watching, always hearing, always together
    The people she love, the people she care
    In the place she love, the place they share
    Here she stay

    Unseen
    Unheard
    Unreachable

    Long ago, they cry in sadness, they cry of loss
    The loss of her, they love so much
    A hole opened, deep inside
    They call and speak of her name
    Knowing that, she is no more

    She called out, yelled and screamed
    No one heard, no one see
    Her words unheard, like the silent wind
    The heart was crying, with no tears
    For the body she has, was no more

    Years go by, bit by bit
    Never stopping, always running
    The pain forgotten, bit by bit
    The wound healed, but the scar stay
    Scared of forgetting, cling to the past
    They refuse to accept, another like her

    The wounds open, once again
    Bringing the pain, by themselves
    Confused and lost, they seek a place
    A place she love, so long ago
    Under the tree, they loved in past
    They ask her again, if it fine to forget

    Forget the past
    Forget the pain
    Forget the sadness
    Forget her, once again
    "Was it fine? Was it really fine?" They ask themselves

    Theirs words reached her, in this place she love
    Through her words, will go unheard, she still want to speak
    Talk to the people, she love so much
    Answer the people, they want to know
    She whisper the words, she want to tell

    "Through it's sad, to be forgotten. It's fine to forget, if it less the pain, for it hurts more, to see you hurt."

    Under the tree, her voice sound out
    So unreal, so dreamlike, like an illusion
    And it sound so lonely, so painful and very sad
    Without knowing, they finally heard her voice
     
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