Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

    12 vote(s)
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  2. Thematic

    10 vote(s)
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  1. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    btw pyoo pyoo make some food poem~
     
  2. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Food poems are hard cause the inspiration can't be vague....
    Actually what food can be a good inspiration?

    I cooked our special food.
    For our special day.
    The soup is getting cold.
    And you're not coming home.
     
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    Raneday Not Rane

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    fried chocobo jk
    your comfort food?
     
  4. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    ....

    It's saturday
    And i got no date
    Welp back to home
    With a bag of popcorn

    Like so?
     
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    Raneday Not Rane

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    pats @pukupyoo
     
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  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Lol.
    No, i went out
    With family O.Q
     
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  7. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    *looks at poems
    *looks at @pukupyoo
    Says: Looks like you've been through many things
    *pats back
     
  8. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    @Nargol an acolyte from your cult of puku?
     
  9. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    i like the chronological order more
    it's like reading someone story
    well it is though..
     
  10. OverlyFriendly

    OverlyFriendly I should do something about

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    I thought that since this thread was alive there were more poems... guess I was wrong....
     
  11. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    Not yet.... maybe I should recruit him, though. A knight for her naps. *ponders*
     
  12. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    !?
    how did you get that from the poems, there was no life struggle going on there~
    And yea, I like the chronological more cause I keep updating it.
    The thematic is only useful if you read it all in one go (and never read it again). But it was requested by popular demand, so I tried making it. But making themes is hard, cause they don't always follow certain themes or such or such.
    Also, what is dark for me might not be dark for someone else, so saying it's a dark poem feels unfair...
    I can't decide a better thematic distinction lol

    Thanks for reading tho~

    nay, he's one of 'em community games addict :3 lol

    there are more in the first page. I'm updating it all in the second post
     
  13. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    go to the first page oly pyoo pyoo usually post her poems there that she made everywhere
     
  14. OverlyFriendly

    OverlyFriendly I should do something about

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    Oh kay~
    Also make a poem on imagination and nonono please~!
     
  15. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    Make's some NAP Poem I say !
     
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  16. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    ........
    the nonono one would be like:
    no
    nonono
    nonononononono
    nonononononononononononono


    OR
    .no..........no
    ...no.....no
    .....nono
    ...no.....no
    .no..........no



    lol


    Imagination
    Oly has an imaginary friend
    but the imaginary friend rejected her
    so she sad
    then she just rapped
    nonononononononononononononononononono


    he's a knight
    a nap knight
    he sleeps
    when there's trouble



    Seriously guys,
    I'm not a poet for hire
    Go take your requests elsewhere >.>


    [Editted for formating on the nonono poems]
     
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  17. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    Have not read it yet just look at the title It'll be a long read after all Maybe later..

    And no I'm not a Game addict!
     
  18. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    hahaha, I love the last two though
     
  19. OverlyFriendly

    OverlyFriendly I should do something about

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    >.>
    <.<
    >.<
     
  20. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    The Nap poem is good by the way
    *convinces self
    yeah it's good
    you don't have to do it if don't want to ...