Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Pyoo, Jun 21, 2016.

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    ... you're one of those I always find in community games. don't deny it

    I fixed the second nonono poem. It's supposed to be an X.
    But yea, I liked the ridiculous ones lol

    you're seriously requesting one?
    Hmm.. maybe I'll get inspired, I'll tag you then lol

    I DID end up making food poems as @Raneday requested afterall lol
     
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  2. OverlyFriendly

    OverlyFriendly I should do something about

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    It was funny.... I hope no one makes connections between the poem and what happened on discord
     
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  3. ForumObserver

    ForumObserver [Clumsy Member] [Verver] [Table Flipper]

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    Hmmmm.... interesting
     
  4. Napknight

    Napknight 『Knight of Naps』『Never Ending Loop』

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    Oh NO!
    this is terrible i'm slowly becoming one of them :eek:
     
  5. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    Just came across this page, mind if I wrote a bit of a response to your confession poems and post it here?
     
  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Sureee! I love getting poem replies and trying to reply to them back!
     
  7. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    Admirer or lover just stay by my side and let me drown in this feeling
    Let me slip deeper like a lost prisoner because you've entrapped me
    So lover or admirer just stay with me
    Because the day I saw you it became to late for me
     
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  8. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    On my own
    In glee from your glance
    Drunk from love
    My own illusion
    - - -
    I am yours
    Bewitched beyond help
    I'd dedicate my life
    So I won't be without you
     
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  9. HotnCold

    HotnCold [Hail Hydrate][BlacknWhite][TrojanWorm]

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    I'll always be here
    Shedding my tears
    Waiting just for you
    Because I love you

    Because you are my life
    Someone who is my wife
    And I'll never leave you
    Because I need you

    okay don't give any meaning here just want to make some poem that correspond to the one you made I already have the cute bear @pocketbear
     
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  10. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    lol. no worries. every now and then I post poems on my profile, sometimes people join in and reply whatever they want, then I reply whatever I want.
    I used to have "Poem Battles" with several NUF Poets like @Autumn Wind @J-Mitch @Ophious @Risus (maybe)

    Why do you wait
    With tears in your eyes
    I don't wish to be your pain
    If I leave, would you smile then?

    You'd never leave
    But you'd always heaved
    The stress and burden
    I don't wish to be
     
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  11. HotnCold

    HotnCold [Hail Hydrate][BlacknWhite][TrojanWorm]

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    I wait for that's what I want to be
    I cry to reminds myself I am me
    Indeed you're not my pain but my joy
    If that's what you want it shall be

    I'll never leave for this is my place
    A place where I remember your face
    It's fine 'cause you're my joy and sorrow
    I respect it hiding my feelings in the morrow
     
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  12. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    Tears are but illusion
    You say I cry in waiting
    You wonder if I'll stop in you leaving
    But I will not stop.

    These tears are precious,
    like the rivers that brings life to the land
    They flow for the day that you do come
    But if you do leave, these tears will dry,
    and the heart will break.

    I'll sleep smelling you on the sheets,
    Only to wake and find myself alone;
    I'll walk, the sun shining upon me, thinking of you at my side,
    Only to open my eyes and see you gone;
    I'll run on the beach, the tide lapping by my feet,
    But as I look back, only one set of footprints seep into the sand;

    You are the wings that takes me to the sky;
    You are the wind that comforts me along the way;
    You are the sight I look to.

    And I am the rock beneath your feet;
    I am the foundation you will call home;
    The solace in darkest times.

    But if you leave, this rock will break;
    The river will dry;
    The soul gone.

    Only, if that is your wish,
    If you truly desire to leave,
    I will not stop you.
     
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  13. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    Where are you tonight?
    You lay beside me but your heart is not with me
    It flutters as your mind wonders, but I can tell it strays from me
    So where are you tonight?
    In your heart do you long for them
    In your mind so you kiss them
    In your dreams do you hold them
    Is it beside me that you loathe then
    Where are you tonight?
    You lay beside me, but apart from me
    As I drown in memories that were like dreams just lost to me
    Within my touch but yet so far from me
    Your vision no longer lands on me
    So let me free you so you can go to them
    Where are you tonight?
    I have lost you
    but every night I search until I can hold you once more
    In my dreams where you will always be.
     
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  14. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    btw @pukupyoo when did your thread become a battle of poem?
    I'm just right beside you always waiting
    Standing here till our very own next meeting
    But in this very cold sleepless night
    My hope can't help by dim like a flickering light

    For I'm also a human with emotions
    Who wants to feel the warmth of relations
    But my you had become my very reason
    Loving you is my ultimate mission
    ......
    okay I quit I'll just leave the poem making to the experts
     
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  15. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    don't quit :< I like it

    also I dont think there are any experts here
     
  16. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Since today apparently
    Don't quit. you're quite good at poem writing!
     
  17. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    Make a poem I can't make one without a topic
     
  18. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    Poetry is easy, just remember what you felt when you experienced something and put it in words, like for example.

    In my solace I sought redemption, preying to the gods for adsolution, but in my heart the storm still raged on, the unyielding war so sung in the verses of lost songs.

    In my youth I sought the sky, in a race to kiss my childish ways goodbye, but in my heart I still felt fear, because I knew down my path I would lose everything dear.

    In her eyes I saw much love, so innocent and pure like wings grown on a dove, but in my heart I kepy her far, because I knew her beautiful innocence I would mar.

    She gave me the best gift I could ever ask for, a new born life which in my heart caused these feelings to soar, in this little ones eyes I see now so much more, like my vision was clouded no more, In my heart I cried, because I knew my jounry had come to an end, but on my face the tears streamed down because in his eyes I saw the journy start again.
     
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  19. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    In my darkest day you've become my guiding light
    In my brightest day you've become like my own shadow
    For from the beginning you're always within my sight
    And I'm now sure that your feelings was never shallow
     
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  20. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    OMG This place is suddenly filled with legit poems. What do I do, I always only post short 1 paragraph ones D:
    I feel so out of place here lol

    you hide yours feelings
    and put yourself in the shadow
    blinding, the light on me
    blinding, your love of me

    if the tears bring you joy, i'll be here
    if the pain makes you alive, you'll stay here
    but the shadows are looming over you
    and your heart is too chained to beat

    OMG It's been so looonngg since I last saw your poem.
    BEAUTIFUL <3<3<3

    Tears, the water of life
    This pain tells me you're here
    That you're smiling, making my heart beat
    That you're beside me, making my heart bleed

    Blood, the water of life
    Your existence keeping me alive
    Surrounding me with warmth
    Shining on me like the sun

    You are my spring of life
    Filling it with rainbows
    So, I'd ask of you,
    Don't let my days be gray

    <<the rest is to be continued>>
     
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