Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Anon Ymous

    Anon Ymous Well-Known Member

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    pyoo is a small birdy
    her song is lovely
    she rarely is cutely
    she often act lewdy
    i have no talent in poetry
     
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  2. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    should have ended with 'i have no talent in poetry' to rhyme~
    its cute~ thanks~
     
  3. Anon Ymous

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    done
     
  4. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    UPDATEEE YAAAYYYYY

    I realize it, I recognize it
    Yet I can’t do anything about it
    I overthink and overcomplicate
    My mind is always in a mess

    Apathetic eyes
    Hidden cries
    Emotions unwanted
    Pleas unvoiced

    Too used to silence
    Too comfortable with pain
    Tucked away so dearly
    Even if it struggles free
    It will remain hidden
    - - -
    Inspiration:
    Apathetic eyes hide silent cries.
    The heart beats pain, yet it's concealed inside.
    A strong jaw yet too afraid to open and vocalize.

    My mind goes all over the place
    At your simplest words
    I'm here losing sleep, worrying
    Closing my eyes, wishing and hoping

    But that’s just my mind talking
    What’s your real meaning
    Who knows what’s reality
    And what’s only my daydream

    Summer has ended
    But it will come again
    Where the days are long
    And the sun greets you warmly

    The season of excitement
    Of beach and travels
    Of holidays and hanging out
    Of fun

    Of summer

    Summer
    Season of fun
    As I dance alone
    Shining bright
    Under the sun

    Autumn
    Red leafs abound
    A scene of fire
    As the crimson dances
    Leaving behind you
    Under the trees of passion

    Winter
    The faint snow falling
    The white breaths
    The tranquil cold
    A familiar feeling
    As I’m held close to you

    Spring
    Season of joy
    As we dance together
    Flowers blooming
    In our hearts

    Intertwined
    And going stronger
    As the seasons go by

    (source)
    Is it not the sweetest thing to say you're my wind
    What is a bird without wind afterall~
    I may have my wings but you're the one who lifts me up
    And gives me life
    Life that is the air I breath in
    To life that is flight that defines me
    Life is what you are to me <3

    A blue bird sings a melody
    Waiting for summer to come
    Waiting for it to fly back
    To where you're waiting, back home

    A blue bird sings a melody
    Until its voice runs dry
    Hoping you'll find it
    Hoping you'll reach where it is

    Is flight not the greatest thing?
    To be free from everything
    But thats false~
    What is freedom? Freedom is in the mind
    To not be held back and not be held down
    To think what you do is your choice and what's your choice is available for you to do
    To not think anything is weighing you down
    Perception is but a mind game
    And reality is but what you perceived
    Illusion is real
    The matrix is real

    (source)
    A silent flame blazing alone
    Flickering in the dark, it shone

    My rhyme's all empty
    But this should be plenty
    - - -
    You sent me a challenge
    Without knowing my talent
    Or more like track record
    And the poems I have stored
    I lied, I have a secret unknown
    There's this site called rhymezone
    - - -
    We are kindred spirits
    To my place you should visit
    Where I post my poems and lyrics
    And enjoy each passing minute
    - - -
    I call it my poem pool
    Creations showing I'm a fool
    An amateur trying to be cool
    Writing things regardless of rule

    I do things freely
    some rhyme, some are freaky
    Unbound, I like to explore
    The different ways to say adore

    (source)
    Posted in a deleted thread?
    Must be the mods, they like to shred
    Dreams and create dread
    I dunno, I need to get the rhymes out of my head

    (source)
    I'm not bothering but showing love
    To Azu, the blessing form up above
    Tho she's from the down below
    At every instance, does she glow

    (source)
    Congratulations on your exam
    Forget all that and hug this lamb
    Those tests are in the past
    Now, show us some of your craft

    (source)
    context: Volx had an avatar that's a girl under the crescent moon
    - - -
    Is it a girl under the moonlight?
    Ever seen such a sight?
    Such a shame but neither have I
    how about the crescent moon on the sky
    - - -
    Do you gaze at the sky often?
    I don't get to see stars where I am, so for me that's uncommon
    - - -
    That's good if you feel delight
    Smile more, it'll make life light~
    - - -
    why the umm?
    is it not a story as nice as rum?

    (source)
    Because you're feeling dread
    From the lack of update
    You're here seeking fun
    It's quite normal, hun

    Context: I had to post 5 poems praising @Nom de Plume (who I call AgroPlum), formerly known as PastaLady
    - - -
    (source)
    Agricultural Plum is the best
    Eat fruits and veggies for good health
    They make you happy and healthy
    Agricultural Plum is mighty
    - - -
    (source)
    Little agro plum
    Growing against the odds
    Against the pests of nature
    It grows big and strong

    Little agro plum
    Growing nice and delicious
    A sweet gift from nature
    A juicy treat for all
    - - -
    (source)
    Nomnomnomnom
    Pasta is delicious
    Nomnomnomnom
    Plum is nutritious
    Nomnomnomnom
    This lady is not suspicious
    Nomnomnomnom
    This poem is repetitious
    - - -
    (source)
    Plum is tart
    She likes to eat pie :3
    Plum is juicy
    The hottest gossip, THE usurper
    Plum is sweet
    She's a dear I like very much
    Plum is agriculturally grown
    That's my lovely AgroPlum~
    - - -
    (source)
    "Lady Nom de Pasta"
    A lady, fair in appearance and conduct
    A nom, who likes to read 'magazines'
    A pasta, so delighful, her smiles brings smiles to all
    A plum, agriculturally grown, she inspires good in many

    This is my final praise poem
    But this won't be my last compliment
    My dear AgroPlum, my fair lady chum
    Continue to spread your laugh and smile <3

    (source)
    The humans who don't know of their demise
    Fooling themselves, thinking they're on a rise
    The fairy looks upon the looming haze
    Tears rolled down, as they count the days

    (source)
    For days a man walked
    Even if he is dazed and tired
    He went without rest
    Searching for his nest

    A harsh journey he went
    Until he's feeling faint
    Through harsh wind and terrain
    Against all odds and pain

    (source)
    The castle they deeply long
    Where they won't be judged wrong
    Away from the world so cruel
    From people who treated them like a fool

    (source)
    There was once a sheep
    Who likes to go meep
    One day went to the beep
    And ended up in the heap
    - - -
    Rhyme about me
    Or share your story
    Even if you only see
    It's fine, just be merry

    (source)
    In her room
    Alongside her groom
    Slowly falling into a swoon
    Under the full moon

    Hiding under cover
    Hoping the person wont hover
    Our bodies still touching close
    And my face blushed like a rose

    (source)
    I'm only eaten by one
    I would let none other run
    Dear kitten don't be sad
    Now you have Rika as your cat

    (source)
    A simple book and a cup of coffee
    Accompanying, your presence near
    A gentle smile to the soft music
    A peaceful serenity

    The silhouette of a perfect moment
    A thousand dream of our dance together
    The scenes past and to come
    A blessing, is meeting you

    (source)
    The moon shine forever
    Even after the song ended
    As does my love for you
    Waiting for the day we'll be back together

    The moon shine preserving
    Unobstructed by its surroundings
    Even behind you tears and darkness
    Those beautiful eyes still shine to me

    The moon shine unnerved
    Patiently it glowed over the night sky
    Watch the moon that's my love
    Patently I'll fight for our love

    (source)
    Surprisingly you weren't the first to welcome me
    Nor were you the first to like me
    But as the guardian of profile posts, we hit it off well
    I know always have you at my call for avis that's belle
    Godepi and Googvii is your name
    Dear Vivianne, know you're a friend

    (source)
    Like a fire burning
    Keeping me alive
    Giving me strength
    Hate, on my every step

    (source)
    Look at her run!
    Her tail waddling around
    Look at her jump!
    Cute little hops here and there
    Look at her cuteness!
    But don't underestimate her
    The leader of cute bunnies!
    She'll make you die from moe

    (source)
    Reply to Raneday:
    Hold my heart
    Dearly and tenderly
    I am yours
    Utterly and gladly
    So please love me
    - - -
    Reply to crimsonwolf8439:
    You who will always be with me
    You who truly cherish me
    You who would spend time with me
    You who is only in my head

    Us which is happily together
    Us which holds strong against it all
    Us which protects each other's back
    Us which I see only in my sleep

    (source)
    A fluttering dream
    Of your flickers over my eyes
    Illuminating my darkness
    My light I chased around

    A flittering reality
    Of my search of your phantom
    Hiding away in the shadows
    My light no longer found
    - - -
    Captivate me with your dance
    Your fireworks of light and color
    The joy across your face
    And your touch embracing my heart

    Hold you close as we dance
    Under the gentle moonlight
    Your smile etched to my memory
    As we grasp each other tenderly

    Let me woo you with this dance
    In our own little spotlight
    My spirit and life I'd gift to you
    Hand in hand together

    (source)
    Little birds and butterflies come near
    The stories of heroes and glory come hear
    Of men who came far to help us live free
    And men who fought to vanquish us for a fee

    Little birds and butterflies don't be scared
    Hear my words, none shall be spared
    The heroes seeking glory at our expenses
    With my songs I'll take away their senses

    I, your Queen, will make a pledge
    Even to those living at the land's edge
    The glory shall remain ours
    I'll keep you safe with all my powers

    (source)
    A deep red
    The color of our ties
    Thick blood flowing
    Warmth surround

    A blissful smile
    As I enwrap you with warmth
    Close your tired eyes
    Dye us in red

    (context)
    verver (ForumObserver) used to give me peeled seeds and be generally caring until someone called him out on it, then he goes out of his way to be NOT lol
    - - -
    (source)
    history now lost
    along with his care
    the heart that once was tender
    the hands that once caressed
    it now comes with a knife
    looking at me with bloodlust
    - - -
    (source)
    He called out to me with roughness in his tone
    The gentleness in my memories is now gone
    - - -
    (source)
    yet we hold on to the memory
    tho we know it will never come again
    his passion i'll bear, in agony
    for to be forgotten would bring more pain
    - - -
    (source)
    a pain of my heart deeper than flesh wound
    his eyes more than his knife felt like a world of doom
    a weep at the bitter taste of iron
    in hopes it'll quench his fire

    (source, his title was [Armoured Madman][Average Foot-Soldier])
    The soldier marched on
    Mad in his thirst for blood
    Mad in his hunger for glory
    Mad in his armour of steel
    The allusion of power it brings

    The soldier braved on
    Mad in his fight to death
    Mad in his marvel of murder
    Mad in his massacre of justice
    The illusion of righteousness it brings

    The soldier strove on
    Mad for higher kill counts
    Mad for more gold medals
    Mad for honor upon the battlefield
    The pull of insanity it brings

    The soldier struggled on
    Mad at his frenzied slaughter
    Mad at his wild crusade
    Mad at his self upon the battlefield
    The madness of war will never stop

    (source)
    Your closest companion
    I who's always near
    Even in the darkest hours
    In the quietest moments
    Taking your breath away

    (source)
    Heart thumping fast
    Running before its stop
    Afraid it'll be the last
    And what's left of it drop
    Lining up for the curtain call
    The red stage noisy with laugh
    Awaiting the gallant fall
    As the gun rings its last blast
    and went its unhindered path

    (source)
    Blowing cold wind
    Surrounded the huddled two
    Exchanging warm white breaths
    Locked in a passionate kiss
    Recollecting past memories
    Adorned by the white snow

    Blowing white breaths
    Surrounded by cold air
    Huddling to your jacket
    Accompanied by memories
    Remembering the warmth
    Reflected upon the white snow
    - - -
    Blowing cold wind
    Surrounded the huddled two
    Rubbing hands together
    Warmed by white breaths
    Touching nose
    Closed eyes
    Locking lips
    Past recollection

    (source)
    Glistening colourful scales
    Flying beyond the haze
    My pet dragon hunting
    Majestic in its bearing

    Coiling enthusiastically
    Nuzzling affectionately
    My pet dragon playing
    The cute glutton dancing

    (source)
    Two powers gathered to tie the knot
    The highnesses ruling over the lot
    A day of joy and jolly
    None shall commit any folly
    Or we shall see heads rolling
    By the rulers' calling
     
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  5. Lady Luck

    Lady Luck (˘❥˘)

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    I who wants a claim of the treasure
    I who can't be up to measure
    I who sees things from my eyes only
    I who can't feel what others feel, stony
    I who says pretty words yet empty
    I who can't possibly deserve plenty
    I who claims to be your friend against all odds
    I who really can't do anything truth be told


    I have never been that
    And will never be that
    Nothing will change that
    Not even me

    Send your wishes to the sky
    Glowing red as the sun falls
    The biggest falling star
    And it still won't fulfill my wish

    Seeking another star
    Hoping for another chance
    Yet there's no other but me
    The me that's not my wish
    For I'm nothing but me
    And I'll never be anything but me


    A presence who have withstood all
    A magnificence, unmoved
    Unaffected by the changing times
    The everpresent wise, the serene calm
    The attentive listener, the firm shelter
    The one who stood, overlooking all

    [​IMG]


    White crystals
    A giver of life
    The bloodline of trade
    The vitality of men
    The source of riches
    Of the high and the low
    The rich and the poor
    The winners
    And the salty losers


    Like a moon passing bye
    Silently shining, a passive beauty
    In sadness she flies
    Not realizing of her watchers
    Those who looks upon her in delight
    In wonder and in awe
    Those who seeks her gentle lights
    As she's the sun of those in the darkness


    Silent yet deadly
    Deep and dark
    Like the deep oceans
    And their violent waves
    Moving unnoticed
    Unsteady waves
    Seemingly retreating
    Still and calm
    Yet violent tides came
    Anger like ocean


    Bright, passionate eyes
    Cannot be hidden by soft smiles
    Quite, tender whispers
    Cannot hide its small whimpers
    Hesitant, careful prodes
    Scared of the effects it might cause
    Hopeful, purposeful pokes
    Prepare for the dominoes' fall

    An illusion of our own making
    A maze to trap ourselves within
    Captured in our own theater play
    And the permanent mask of smiles


    I trust you'll keep me save
    And hold my heart dear
    For I am yours wholly, love
    Even apart I'll wish for your smile
    For I wish to be your happiness, always


    I trust you'll keep me save
    A blank page
    Without ending
    Without meaning
    An incomplete story
    Left hanging
    Left behind
    An abandoned journey


    I've been fortunate
    Blessed with good looks
    But tis but decoration
    Pale, compared to your shine
    Like the sun, dazzling
    Inspiring life into its beholder


    I'm but a bard
    Singing my praises
    Hoping for your attention
    My tunes reaching your ears
    Would simply be my greatest joy

    You're a princess
    Loved by the people
    Your kindness and care
    I'm addicted
    Yet I'm but a bard
    Your stories I'll sing
    In hopes of the people's love
    And your smile to stay

    You have been invited
    The honor of performing
    The king and queen as audience
    The royal stand as your honored stage

    Tales of your song have reached
    The castle eager of your singing
    Brimming with charms and radiance
    A bard that will last the age
     
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  6. EvilDevil

    EvilDevil Guardian Devil

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    I am no zhang ye!! Or good at literature..poem and stuff...so I can't understand the dao hidden in these poems...still most of em make me sad!!

    Why you jelly
    Just be friendly
    If you want to join the crew
    You can be a poet too

    Like this.

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Revenge is sweet?

    (source)
    Well, you've been had
    But, you've worked hard
    Maybe, act possessed
    so tomorrow they'll be at your behest
    Don't really understand... maybe I do...but not really

    Spoiler: Red

    Exhilaration
    As it rushes through my body
    Become my expression to the world
    Dyed in red

    Ecstacy
    As it rushes from my body
    Let's see how they see me now
    Died in red
    Died in red confused me....like the first part
    SPOILER:beauty
    The beauty in fragility
    Handle it softly, tenderly, carefully
    A light scratch and it'll be broken
    A single mark and it'll be zero
    Oh, the beauty of fragility
    Like it


    Pleasure-like it

    Don't love me but think of me
    Don't love me but miss me
    Don't love me but obsess over me
    Since obsession is stronger than love
    And I want you to be mine forever
    Gives me that yandere's feel
    Spoiler: Zombie Invasion

    (source)
    Zombie invasion
    Will fill your life with satisfaction
    Which side will you be
    Running with or fighting against zombie
    Good one.

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Nap Knight

    (source, poem for / about @Napknight)
    He's a knight
    A nap knight
    He sleeps
    When there's trouble
    Funny,like this

    Spoiler: Future

    (source)
    Chase after your future
    And let the past be your guide
    It will serve as lesson
    But don't let it be a burden
    Good.

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Do the haiku

    (source, haiku)
    You are doing it
    This thing people call "haiku"
    A clever usage

    I think you mean 'Haki'(from one piece)


    Cry your tears
    Until all is dry
    If that's what you need
    For your heart to be open
    Free from the burden
    Of the drowning sorrow
    I'm touched.

    Spoiler: Smoke

    A pack of hungry wolves
    Gobbling down your body
    A pack of cigarettes
    Creeping in with your death
    #antismokingcampaign

    My tainted black heart
    Eased by my tainted black lungs
    I'm already rotten to the core
    What use is keeping a mask
    #antismokingcampaign?

    Too bad I didn't read this before I had my first cigarette/before I stopped smoking...had only 2 till date.

    Spoiler: A Free Bird this is good

    A free spirited bird
    A self-constructed cage
    Why does it do so?
    Is it afraid of the outside?

    You speak of saving
    But what do you know
    A bird lived in a cage
    Freedom it never seeks

    Like the contrast.

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : My Crime

    (source)
    In front of me a laptop
    And the screen shows my crime
    My coworker doesn't stop
    Trying to look like they're at their prime

    You were watching porn right?!

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Procrastination

    (source)
    you avoid me like a plague
    and only remembers when it's too late
    regret always come at the end
    looking back at the time spent
    Procrastination is good.


    Always close by as your support
    I'll be there to protect you
    Why do you evade me so
    No matter, my love will still be true

    I hereby declare ownership of this poem!!

    Spoiler: My love

    When I'm beside you, my heart is alight
    Brimming with warmth, shining bright
    When I think of you, my voice burns
    To reach you, to convey my hope of your return
    When I'm beside you, my body's your cure
    A cool breeze to embrace you and keep you secure
    When I think of you, my love is like fire
    Full of life, as it warms you without tire

    Spoiler: Crazy

    Dangerous obsession
    Corrupting my mind
    Intense emotions
    Swallowing my thought
    Fervent clashes
    Hindering my rationality
    Audacious moves
    Promoting my insanity
    Foolish love
    Ensnaring in madness


    Spoiler: Hide

    Apathetic eyes
    Hidden cries
    Emotions unwanted
    Pleas unvoiced

    Too used to silence
    Too comfortable with pain
    Tucked away so dearly
    Even if it struggles free
    It will remain hidden

    Spoiler: Perfect Moment

    (source)
    A simple book and a cup of coffee
    Accompanying, your presence near
    A gentle smile to the soft music
    A peaceful serenity

    The silhouette of a perfect moment
    A thousand dream of our dance together
    The scenes past and to come
    A blessing, is meeting you

    All the above ones are goooood.
     
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    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    sorry >_<

    replies below~
    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Revenge is sweet?

    (source)
    Well, you've been had
    But, you've worked hard
    Maybe, act possessed
    so tomorrow they'll be at your behest
    Don't really understand... maybe I do...but not really
    Pyoo: welp this one is kinda weird...

    Spoiler: Red

    Exhilaration
    As it rushes through my body
    Become my expression to the world
    Dyed in red

    Ecstacy
    As it rushes from my body
    Let's see how they see me now
    Died in red
    Died in red confused me....like the first part
    Pyoo: It was inspired from... self mutilation.... i'm so sorry...

    SPOILER:beauty
    The beauty in fragility
    Handle it softly, tenderly, carefully
    A light scratch and it'll be broken
    A single mark and it'll be zero
    Oh, the beauty of fragility
    Like it
    Pyoo: ooooh for some reason i didn't expect this~

    Pleasure-like it
    Pyoo: man~ i dont even know i had a poem called Pleasure~!

    Don't love me but think of me
    Don't love me but miss me
    Don't love me but obsess over me
    Since obsession is stronger than love
    And I want you to be mine forever
    Gives me that yandere's feel
    Pyoo: Aye >w< I like the theme hahahaha~

    Spoiler: Zombie Invasion

    (source)
    Zombie invasion
    Will fill your life with satisfaction
    Which side will you be
    Running with or fighting against zombie
    Good one.
    Pyoo: *thumbs up*

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Nap Knight

    (source, poem for / about @Napknight)
    He's a knight
    A nap knight
    He sleeps
    When there's trouble
    Funny,like this
    Pyoo: some of the funny ones i'm super proud of haha, but its usually context specific, so, just showing the poem doesnt convey how i think its funny~!

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Do the haiku

    (source, haiku)
    You are doing it
    This thing people call "haiku"
    A clever usage

    I think you mean 'Haki'(from one piece)
    Pyoo: nope i meant Haiku, a poem style from japan... in context, the person i was replying to made a Haiku saying they can't make Haikus~

    Cry your tears
    Until all is dry
    If that's what you need
    For your heart to be open
    Free from the burden
    Of the drowning sorrow
    I'm touched.
    Pyoo: <3

    Spoiler: Smoke

    A pack of hungry wolves
    Gobbling down your body
    A pack of cigarettes
    Creeping in with your death
    #antismokingcampaign

    My tainted black heart
    Eased by my tainted black lungs
    I'm already rotten to the core
    What use is keeping a mask
    #antismokingcampaign?

    Too bad I didn't read this before I had my first cigarette/before I stopped smoking...had only 2 till date.
    Pyoo: only 2? thats.. rare, i think... i dont think the poem is very... impactful tho, as a poem, or even as an antismoking campaign, its not very thought or emotion provoking~

    Spoiler: A Free Bird this is good

    A free spirited bird
    A self-constructed cage
    Why does it do so?
    Is it afraid of the outside?

    You speak of saving
    But what do you know
    A bird lived in a cage
    Freedom it never seeks

    Like the contrast.
    Pyoo: i like this theme too~!!! i think i brought up freedom several times~

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : My Crime

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    In front of me a laptop
    And the screen shows my crime
    My coworker doesn't stop
    Trying to look like they're at their prime

    You were watching porn right?!
    Pyoo: Nooooo I was nuffing hahahahahhaa~ the persons I showed it to also said that XD

    Spoiler: Ridiculous : Procrastination

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    you avoid me like a plague
    and only remembers when it's too late
    regret always come at the end
    looking back at the time spent
    Procrastination is good.

    Pyoo: welp

    Always close by as your support
    I'll be there to protect you
    Why do you evade me so
    No matter, my love will still be true

    I hereby declare ownership of this poem!!
    Pyoo: WHOA he took ownership! why this poem btw~?

    Spoiler: My love

    When I'm beside you, my heart is alight
    Brimming with warmth, shining bright
    When I think of you, my voice burns
    To reach you, to convey my hope of your return
    When I'm beside you, my body's your cure
    A cool breeze to embrace you and keep you secure
    When I think of you, my love is like fire
    Full of life, as it warms you without tire

    Pyoo: <3

    Spoiler: Crazy

    Dangerous obsession
    Corrupting my mind
    Intense emotions
    Swallowing my thought
    Fervent clashes
    Hindering my rationality
    Audacious moves
    Promoting my insanity
    Foolish love
    Ensnaring in madness
    Pyoo: I've always liked these crazy ones, irrational emotions and such~

    Spoiler: Hide

    Apathetic eyes
    Hidden cries
    Emotions unwanted
    Pleas unvoiced

    Too used to silence
    Too comfortable with pain
    Tucked away so dearly
    Even if it struggles free
    It will remain hidden
    Pyoo: im also kinda surprised you like this so much~!

    Spoiler: Perfect Moment

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    A simple book and a cup of coffee
    Accompanying, your presence near
    A gentle smile to the soft music
    A peaceful serenity

    The silhouette of a perfect moment
    A thousand dream of our dance together
    The scenes past and to come
    A blessing, is meeting you
    Pyoo: this is uber sweet~

    All the above ones are goooood.
     
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    Lady Luck (˘❥˘)

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    So me and @Carm has been having poem challenges with each other where he gives me a theme and I give him a theme. Tho it started as just Carm sending me poems.
    Lucky Charm
    Gently, softly, time will ever flow.
    Wind comes, and wind goes.
    Love is uncertain, and weird.
    Constantly changing, constantly dying.
    I do not know where we will be in the future.
    But I do know now, I'll be besides you.
    My good Luck charm.
    Floating Cloud
    Flowing,
    Flying,
    Through the sky,
    Casting a cooling shadow,
    Above all worries,
    Nonchalant in it's gait,
    A gentle floating cloud.
    Elves
    Singing in the forest,
    Bathed in the moonlight glow,
    Soft and gentle in their touch,
    Alluring voices in the ancient groves,
    With nature in their path,
    Walking onward,
    The woodland elves.
    Sunrise
    Ascending in the east,
    Cascading it's glow,
    It's rays reaching the night's shadows,
    With a hue of orange,
    Gently warming the land,
    Till it reaches the apex of the sky,
    A sunrise.
    Sunrise
    Ascending in the east,
    Lighting up the world,
    Waking the worlds from their slumber,
    Warming up the hearts,
    Welcoming me from the darkness,
    Embracing me in brilliance,
    You are my sunrise
    Snow
    A frozen drop of rain,
    Floating in the sky,
    Each unique in their own way,
    Glistening and gleaming,
    Accumulating on the ground,
    Bringing pure white to the world,
    A snowflake.
    Bear Hug
    Rough,
    Tight,
    Crushing,
    Embrace,
    Out of love,
    Or friendship,
    A bear hug.
    Tree
    A lone tree grew
    Majestic as it stood tall
    As its presence fills the land
    As it gently shelters the small critters

    Rustling leaves fills the air
    As the wind blows past
    I lay down to the calm scenery
    And a soft hum passes through
    Night
    Soft hums of the crickets are heard,
    A luminescent moon overhead,
    Lulling sweet dreams,
    To those bellow,
    Wrapped in blankets,
    Warm and drowsy,
    Sweet dreams little one,
    And good night.
    Tempest
    Gritting teeth, standing strong
    Amidst the tempest all around
    For the chaos is my friend
    Come at me, I'm not afraid

    Braving though the storm
    As if its but the norm
    Despite the turmoil within
    Put on a smile and my best skin
    Missing
    Lost in time,
    Lost in name,
    Gone from view,
    No longer in grasp,
    Misplaced,
    Or forgotten,
    Missing.
    Rain
    Slowly tricking down
    Falling from the sky
    As if the clouds are crying
    Washing away the dirt
    Cleansing the land
    Giving life to those under
    A blessing to the earth

    Droplets of water fall
    A grief too big to bear
    Embrace the cries of the sky
    Let it wash away the pain
    Struggle
    Struggling to hold on,
    Failing to grasp what is at hand,
    Pain engraved in oneself,
    Trying to break free of one's restraints,
    Ending in a fruitless,
    Meaningless,
    Struggle.
    Age
    White hair and grey beard
    A wrinkled smile streaked across
    Watching the children run and laugh
    Content of the life gone past
    Calm
    A peaceful breeze overhead,
    Gentle ripples in the pond,
    Soft sounds of a flowing creek can be heard,
    A quaint stillness is in the atmosphere,
    Birds chirping to one and another,
    A calm moment in time.
    Luck
    Roll a dice and place a bet
    Is the Lady Luck smiling today?
    Take a risk and make the leap
    Have faith, for I'm watching over

    Lady Luck is ever smiling
    Giving blessings all around
    Hoping for your success
    As you take up the world
    Carm
    Living every moment in pain,
    In constant regret,
    Each moment an eternity,
    Watching as time slowly chips away,
    Thoughts slipping,
    Memory dimming,
    A solemn brightness that is no more,
    Lost in thoughts,
    With endless blight,
    A quaint fellow,
    A solemn fellow,
    A sad fellow.
    Flowers of Spring
    The jives of joy
    The waft of wonders
    The bloom of bliss
    The scent of spring

    The flowers say their hellos
    As the spring finally arrive
    Come chill and be mellow
    Just be careful of the hives
    Sleepless Nights
    Tossing and turning,
    Idle and awake,
    Minutes,
    Hours pass by,
    Eyes wide open,
    Wrapped in blankets,
    Filled with warmth,
    A sleepless night.
    Chocolate
    Sweet and smooth
    As it plays in my mouth
    Pleasuring the tongue
    Pleasing the stomach

    Chocolate~
    A girl's real bestfriend
    Who's always there when needed
    Through thick and thin
    Happiness and sadness
    Always there to sweeten the day
    Green
    The hue of leaves in summer,
    The hair of a lucky girl,
    A color known by many,
    Donning the plants of spring,
    A serene color,
    Fluttering in the wind.
    Carm (1, 2)
    Sitting by himself quietly
    Staring at the windows
    Longing for the calm breeze
    And the trees as they dance

    Looking through the window
    He sings his gentle tunes
    Unaware of the birds flying close
    Enjoying a lovely afternoon
    A Bouquet
    Iris,
    Lily,
    Yellow Cress,
    Includes some of the flowers that a don me,
    Like a sign of passion,
    Yearned as a sign of love,
    A sign of caring,
    Lovingly,
    A bouquet from the heart.
    Lake
    Still and calm surface
    Reflecting the world above
    Magnifying their beauty
    While hiding its own

    Amidst the surreal view
    Ripples breaking the mirror
    As children came with a splash
    Truly enjoying the lake

    The beautiful image is gone
    But the joyful scene stays
    Of the lake and its smiles
    And its beauty in full display
    Forest
    Gentle hymns of the groves resound,
    Chirps from bird to bird as they flew in the tree tops,
    Wind flowing past leaves,
    Leaving serene rustles,
    Towering giants standing tall,
    All is calm in the forest,
    All is calm in the forest.
    Ocean
    @selkie goes swish swish
    @BlancFrost goes splash splash
    In the ocean they swim
    Among the reefs they play
    Chasing fishes and bubbles
    Laughing like the angels they are
    Jellyfish
    Swimming in the ocean,
    Swishing by,
    Poisonous by touch,
    Quite delectable by nature,
    Like a firework,
    Fluorescent in color,
    A jellyfish.
    Fireworks
    A shooting star flying from the earth
    Blooms of colors beyond compare
    Forcefully taking over the night sky
    Capturing all eyes without exception
    A single flower dancing upon the darkness
    Dance
    Under the moonlight,
    To the beat of a sonata,
    Back and forth,
    To and fro,
    Spinning and twirling,
    Hand in hand with a trusted partner,
    Dancing the night away.
    Lemons
    Scrapped
    Branded as failure
    Piled with trash
    Waiting to be crumpled
    As fodder for the elites

    Life as a lemon
    Made with care
    Yet thrown without any
    Waiting to be forgotten
    Just one of many others
    The ones forgotten
    Put aside to the recesses of the mind,
    Lost,
    And not remembered,
    Those who are there,
    Those who are not,
    Those who are forgotten,
    The forgotten ones.
    Nobleness
    A gallant knight strode past
    Bearing his sword for his little village
    A marquis walked across the road
    Carrying the luggage of a old lady
    A noble of their bearing
    A noble in their bearing
    Knight
    Clad in armor,
    Weapon in hand,
    Off to slay the monster,
    That plagued the land,
    A gallant person,
    Full of virtue,
    Loyal in nature,
    The noble Knight.
    The Exiles
    Separated from his clan
    Barricaded from his homeland
    Divided from everything he's ever known
    In isolation, a man stood alone

    Too bitter for tears
    At the made-true fears
    The loved ones have betrayed
    He strayed with steps so weighed

    No destination, nothing to hold
    Without any company but the cold
    Barricaded from everything he has loved
    Separated from the future he hoped
    Life gives you lemons
    A sour yellow,
    A punch in the face,
    For those not too mellow,
    A decision to make,
    A path to choose,
    When Life gives you Lemons,
    What do you do?
    Light
    Piercing light breaks the clouds
    Welcomed by screams of agony
    For a creature of darkness
    The worst torture is kindness

    Piercing light breaks the clouds
    Greeted with cheers of harmony
    For a creature long trapped in darkness
    A little hope is all it takes for happiness
    Shrouded by clouds
    There which the light can't reach,
    Covered by turmoil and despair,
    The drops of sun desperately try to part the miasma,
    To uncover the land,
    To free the land,
    Shrouded by the clouds.
    Fairytale
    Our fairytale
    Our first meeting
    Our family feud
    Our furtive get aways
    Our foolies of youth
    Our fiddling fights
    Our fitful nights
    Our forever in love
    Our final farewell
    Tears
    Cascading down her cheek,
    A drop of sadness flowed,
    For the inevitable was to come,
    For our time is to end,
    So wait for me,
    Wait for me,
    Wait for me,
    So I can wipe away your tears.
    Pettiness
    The slightest crook of your tie
    The lone stray strand of hair
    That gap in your title
    Please fix them

    You always put the cups wrong
    You should stop using that eyeshadow
    Your buttons aren't aligned
    They're annoying

    But you never let it bother you
    But you always put up with me
    Despite that, you'd always be with me
    Sorry I can't help but notice
    Every little thing about you
    Anger like the oceans
    Raging,
    Shouting,
    Full of wrath,
    Lashing out at all,
    Hatred,
    Anger like the Oceans.
    Forgetfulness
    A greeting from a friend
    That's a stranger
    A paper on my desk
    On an unknown subject
    A project I'm organizing
    Without any idea how it started
    A reflection on the mirror
    That I don't recognize
    Memories not of my own
    Am I even still considered me?
    Lazy
    Getting out of bed,
    Slothily,
    Streching my arms and yawning,
    Exhaustingly
    Wiping the tears from my eyes,
    Tiredly,
    Looking at the time,
    Sluggishly,
    Falling back into bed,
    Idly,
    Having a lazy day.
    Questions
    Questions in my head that won't get out
    Questions in my head without answers
    Questions in my head keeps me awake
    Taking control of me, my thoughts, my life

    These questions in my head keep popping out
    These questions in my head always second guess
    These questions in my head trust no one
    These questions in my head has become me
    Song
    Drowning in beats,
    Notes flying rhythmically,
    A melody of music,
    Resounding through my ears,
    Like a cascade of beautiful tones,
    A song sang by you.
    Contemplation
    Sit down alone in the quiet
    Surrounded by noisy thoughts
    Deep in passionate discussions
    The undying quest for answers

    Ripples among the quiet
    Arguments inside the head
    Fights broken out of talks
    The unending quest to understand
    The uncertainties of the self
    Glass
    Separated by a mirror,
    What do you see,
    A whole nother world,
    Just waiting to be set free,
    Transparent,
    Translucent,
    A statement,
    To the unknown,
    Separated by a mirror,
    What do you see,
    Through the looking glass that is me.
    Mirror
    Separated by a mirror
    You're all I see
    My whole world
    Although we are divided
    Invisible
    Unseen
    Yet it's there
    Determined to keep us apart
    Separated by a mirror
    Love, it is a torture
    Seeing you from afar
    Shadows
    Waiting in the shadows
    For a signal to come
    Wishing for someone to pass
    To reach out and give a hand

    Wondering when someone will come
    From the light to bring me there
    Worrying that I won't every be in light
    As I am a creature of the shadows

    Wasting away the self
    Under the shield of the darkness
    Wallowing in unrestrained self-pity
    Amid the shadows, hidden

    Wailing in desperation
    At the nonexistant help
    Washing the face with tears
    Over the regrets and the chains

    Walking away from the dark past
    Beyond the border to the world alight
    Farewell
    Goodbye,
    Farewell,
    Till we meet again,
    Something precious will be missing,
    Lost in the time spent,
    Without knowing what is to come,
    Or when we'll meet once more,

    Goodbye,
    Farewell,
    Till we meet again,
    We'll laugh and sing,
    Once more under the stars,
    So don't be lonesome,

    Goodbye,
    Farewell,
    Till we meet again,
    I'll wait for you at this spot,
    Waiting for your return,
    So don't say good riddance,

    Goodbye,
    Farewell,
    Till we meet again,
    I'll miss your presence,
    I hope you'll miss mine,
    So laugh with me while you can,

    Goodbye,
    Farewell,
    Till we meet again.
     
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  10. Carm

    Carm Drip drop, when will time stop

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    You only included your poems....
     
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    Lady Luck (˘❥˘)

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    of course. You should post yours. If I posted yours, made it sound like i took ownership of them lol.
    Want me to just ut them in the same post?
     
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    Carm Drip drop, when will time stop

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    I'm lazy.... so of course
     
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    Lady Luck (˘❥˘)

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    @Carm there. from the beginning.
     
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    Obsidian Well-Known Member

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    is dis ded desu?
     
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    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    hello, does poetry interest you? Why the question?

    To answer, no this isnt dead. But i also dont do post updates. If i have any updates, i update the 2nd and 3rd ppst of the thread without notification

    Good luck on your 100 messages. Btw whos your main?
     
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    Obsidian Well-Known Member

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    Nani? I only hav 1 account desu~
     
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    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    (Change themes to read other half, or select all for full)

    "Hope in" Words "of Despair"

    Come and see how the sun shines
    Take a deep look as the light won't ever touch you
    Sense the warmth that exists in the world
    As the coldness involves you
    See the many people out there
    Because you are alone
    They are here as you are,
    They won't reach you
    Join in as they laugh
    And People will laugh at you
    Find their friendship
    See how they will stab you
    Hear their words of gentleness and kindness
    As your words, your pleas are ignored
    If you work hard
    It won't really matter how much you try
    Your efforts will bear fruits
    Fruits of despair is everything it will bear
    The world is beautiful
    The world is cruel
    The world is full of hope
    The world is full of Injustice
    As your heart is
    Full of Despair
    Embrace the hopeless
    In your Bright Heart full of blackness
     
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    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    I sucks at giving title lol
    Just published a bunch of 'drafts' since September too
     
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    Lucky Charm Well-Known Member

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    Hey!
    The first poem is about me!
    Cool!
     
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    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Lol did you read them all?
    I like reading other peoples poems, as everyone has so many different styles. It is interesting to see their thought process and how they go about writing poems.