I can't think of where i should scold you brother, Jun's supposed to be a good person with a more noble-ish background!
And the captain, isn't he supposed to be a more serious character? It's the complete opposite!
My disappointment aside, it is your story, how you write it is your freedom i guess, just next time you're asking for ideas make sure you follow it to the end, at least i can know whether my idea is bad or not :(
Thanks, don't worry if i ask your opinion again i'll use it as it is...and i'm planning to fix it, though it's gonna be hard, as the background will be stuck...
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