Epic? I got you. [MEDIA] [SPOILER]
Wait, so you want to kick this guy out of his own house? And you're one of his wives? Okay, here's the thing. It sounds like you don't like that...
If the family member is staying at your place, make him pay rent and get his own food. If you want him out, just kick him out. It sounds like he...
I don't put a lot of romance in my stories, but here's some general tips. 1) Strain the relationship somehow, but not in an overly dramatic way....
I use conditioner when I remember to use it.
If you want a time travel/groundhog day setting, there's a Naruto fanfic called Time Braid that follows Sakura during the chunin exam.
It got a light chuckle in my theater.
Passive vs active voice isn't nearly as important as just keeping your sentences clear and interesting. Write what you think fits or sounds good...
Mother of Learning is a must read if you like time loops.
Everybody has their own way of enjoying a story. You might miss details, sure, but if you're still enjoying the story, I don't see the problem...
From what I read on reddit... Willem and Nephren live, Chtholly dies. They go to a dream world 500 years in the past where humanity is still...
2 years already? Wow, time flies. Happy second birthday, NU, and here's to hoping for a great third year!
How about a crafter of some kind? Like a smith or trinket maker. If the MC doesn't have much ability in that field, it would make sense for him to...
By now, I've just stopped reading anything not translated/edited with a sophomore-year-of-highschool understanding of the english language. Which...
Renegade Immortal
My disciple died yet again
A few notes Grammar. You did better than a lot of people in this regard, but you still need to improve a lot, especially with punctuation,...
Coiling Dragon, I guess. I liked how the later levels were tied to set things instead of just saying, "Dunno, comprehension lol".
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Thank you for the kind words, but at the moment, I can't continue to work on your story. By writing what I did, my only intention was to help you...
Separate names with a comma.