Short Story A Tale of NUF

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  1. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    Come on~ you've left me hanging for so long~~ just give me an answer~~~
     
    Das, Aug 14, 2016
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  2. Nom de Plume

    Nom de Plume [Shio’s Disciple] [True Villain] [Equip: Gunblade] Novel Updates Staff

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    Just between us... *whispers in Das' ear*

    ;)
     
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    Tony Moderator Staff Member

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    It's been awhile since I've said that, I think? I think I gave up

    No
     
    Tony, Aug 14, 2016
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  4. Nom de Plume

    Nom de Plume [Shio’s Disciple] [True Villain] [Equip: Gunblade] Novel Updates Staff

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    So tempted to edit this lol....

    *resists*
     
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  5. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    I KNEW IT!!!!!! YAY!!!!
     
    Das, Aug 14, 2016
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  6. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    Please do lol
     
    Das, Aug 14, 2016
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  7. Nom de Plume

    Nom de Plume [Shio’s Disciple] [True Villain] [Equip: Gunblade] Novel Updates Staff

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    Shhhh, call down. Can't give everything away! For the crowds it is still:
     
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    I'm not breaking any rules!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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  9. Nom de Plume

    Nom de Plume [Shio’s Disciple] [True Villain] [Equip: Gunblade] Novel Updates Staff

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    Then I would no longer be just the subconscious. The superego here has a point.
     
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  10. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    Alright alright, the mass of plebs don't need to know what goes on between us afterall~
     
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    Is this piece of literature a parody of DAL's short story, DAQuest?
     
    orang, Aug 15, 2016
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    anhrefn [NTR Sect Leader]       [True Ancestor]

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    to read or not to read
     
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  13. Falhrus

    Falhrus Avoiding enemies is hard work y'know?

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    A masterpiece @Ophious. I kinda wish that someone would make an entire novel out of this. With the characters coming from NUF. Like how Hero Parth trained and stuff.
     
    Falhrus, Oct 10, 2016
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  14. Ophious

    Ophious Pathfinder kinda fun

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    I'm planning to do something like that
    where I take people on NUF and put them in a academy
    but the thing is I don't know who to put in and I am not sure if I should write it in first person or third person
    if first person should I put it though mine or someone elses
     
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  15. Falhrus

    Falhrus Avoiding enemies is hard work y'know?

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    Hmmm. Try it on Third Person so that everyone will be included. First person is also good but that person will be the MC.
     
    Falhrus, Oct 10, 2016
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  16. Ophious

    Ophious Pathfinder kinda fun

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    Third person is hard which is why I am hesitant
    But creating a OC for the story seems weird since people react differently to others...
     
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  17. Falhrus

    Falhrus Avoiding enemies is hard work y'know?

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    Maaa~ You are the one who wrote it. Just let other people who are experienced this to assist you.
     
    Falhrus, Oct 10, 2016
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  18. Ophious

    Ophious Pathfinder kinda fun

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    Also who would want to be in the story is my question
    if the people I have in my head say no but others say yes I'll have to re work the story to fit the character in
     
    Ophious, Oct 10, 2016
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  19. Falhrus

    Falhrus Avoiding enemies is hard work y'know?

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    ... Hmm... maybe a thread needs to be made. Also I wanna help~! *eyes shining*
     
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    Help me think of how to start the story then
     
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