I just hope that I can find all the things that I posted here.. I'm still new so please sorry and nice to meet you here.. and this might not all of my poem since some are spread on profile post.. but i try my best to gather them.. and my grammar is not the best so please pardon me.. also this is dedicated for my partner in rhyme @pukupyoo Spoiler: Catching Wind You can't catch the wind and the leaves will always falling.. Only you can decide to enjoy the weather or curse at the wind.. Spoiler: Reunion lost in my compassion... seeking for one true direction... even in my dejection... I longed for our reunion... Spoiler: Willow Thank you my dear willow.. eyes full of sorrow.. looking out the window.. a glimpse of fleeting shadow.. Spoiler: fleeting wind the fleeting wind.. unfriendly smiles.. feelings within.. died many times.. Spoiler: depth of heart no one can know the depth of heart.. no one can guess what is inside.. when the dark used to be light.. nothing can stays beside.. Spoiler: cry gazing at the endless sea.. where everything hidden deep.. maybe one day I can see.. the reason you cry in your sleep.. Spoiler: erasing smile the road is filled with trash.. the people has turned senile.. the memories turned to ash.. erasing all reason to smile.. Spoiler: at your side what do we seek in the path we walks? your heart is warm but now has turned colds.. hiding a crack in your deepest part.. is there a way to heal your heart? for mistakes are made in the past and times always gone so fast.. all the regret that you tried hide.. embrace them with you as I'll stay by your side.. Spoiler: mirror when looking at the mirror.. which reflection did you see.. all things that you think as horror.. will be accepted by me.. Spoiler: accepting past I will bear the burden she said while crying.. even if it will ends with me dying.. for all of this I am willing.. accepting your past and smiling.. Spoiler: you and I rhyming love words like a lullaby.. we never knows when we have to say goodbye.. will we be able to see each other eye to eye.. no lies and secret only you and I... Spoiler: your sound Morning dew on top of the leaf.. Slowly dripped towards the ground.. Even if one day you have to leave.. I'm still able to hear your sound. Spoiler: practice your mind is blown away when you realized it's a butterfly effect.. don't let your heart sway since practice makes perfect.. Spoiler: love what you do They said do something you love.. But I said love something you do.. Spoiler: your call Autumn is the season where leaves fall.. I am still waiting for your call.. Winter, spring and summer.. I'll wait even if the cycle continues forever.. Spoiler: thoughts what is word without action.. and what is action without affection.. for the thoughts alone are enough to be my salvation.. Spoiler: same sky as the night turn to day I can fell my heart sway.. because maybe someday I can tell you good day.. For we are separated by great distance.. can only be together for an instance.. but no matter how far you are.. we are still under the same sky.. Spoiler: love and life what is life without a love.. and what is love without a life? Spoiler: till the end admiration is a form of affection.. looking deep at your deepest delusion.. it's fine for you to stay at my side.. as long as you don't break my heart.. what I want isn't a fake relation.. just someone to be my companion.. a friend without lover or a lover without friend? the most important thing is you're willing to stay till the very end.. Spoiler: blessings It was almost noon, a squirrel played on a tree.. I prayed upon the moon.. asking for sincere blessings to thee.. Spoiler: greatest sin, inspired by IRAS The greatest sin is not when you guys are together.. The greatest sin is when you guys are together but not thinking of each other.. The greatest sin is not when you guys are not thinking of each other.. The greatest sin is when you guys are thinking of each other but can't show it to the other.. The greatest sin is not when you guys can't show it to the other.. The greatest sin is when you show it to the other but cares too much about the words of another.. The greatest sin is not when you cares too much about the words of another.. The greatest sin is not realizing in the end, love is a simple relation between two.. No matter what people say, what really matters is what your beloved say.. Not by showing it to the others, but proof it one another.. Thinking of each other, staying together, love shall prevail even when the words fail.. Spoiler: life carriage, request from moonlight dew The moonlight is solemn.. Along with a lonely requiem.. Gathered is a drop of dew.. only remembered by a few.. found each other by chance.. and entered a trance.. for love is gender-less and love is form-less.. those who found it will be grateful.. those who appreciate it will be faithful.. bounded together in a marriage.. exploring the world called life in a carriage.. may both of you stay together, through the hardship and joy forever.. Spoiler: happy or sad to be happy or to be sad.. free to choose as long as it doesn't makes you feel bad.. for a smile can be easily faked.. but the heart will be put at stake. cry in times of joy.. smile in times of hardship.. smile in times of joy.. cry in times of hardship.. it was possible even if the two was supposed to be the other way around.. as long as you do what your heart is telling you to do.. you will be fine.. wish thee embraced in happiness all the time.. Spoiler: frame just stay at my side and never leave.. like when the night comes the darkness weave.. the road ahead, no one knows where it lead.. even though it's clear like a crystal bead.. for feelings may swayed and changed.. just stay with me as long as we're in the same frame.. Spoiler: Bird and wind My little bird will always fly.. Without restraints in the sky so high.. As the wind will play with you.. Blowing gently dancing with you.. The wind and the bird will not always be together.. But those who see remembered it forever.. for the two deeply in love with each other.. but when separated they don't depends on another.. The bird can fly on its own.. the wind will keep blowing alone.. The bird sing a lonely tune.. the wind accompanied with a hum.. We meet, enjoyed each other company.. we part ways, missing each other deeply.. forever and ever you will be my little bird and forever and ever I will be your little wind..
Part part plain on grass One year one wither flourish Prairie fire burn not destroy Spring wind blow again life Distant fragrance invade old path Clear emerald meet ruined town Again see off noble friend go Crowded full parting feeling
Let me post mine here too.. hehe.. Spoiler: snow's In a dark meadow A figure standing near the window Standing at the end of line Where he could feel fine Looked at the distance Where memory is a reminiscence He feels full of sorrow Alone in the dark meadow Even the world most beauty Couldn't erase his tragedy All because his love Has been burned at the stove A lonely solitude At his life lowest altitude The world will keep moving on Whether he stayed or move on Only a question remained unanswered Is there a point to be remembered Because when tomorrow comes The man will be gone What he will becomes No one ever known The beauty of love Is like a white dove When it's tainted It will be ended The man said sorry But he still worry For the love that he once had Now has gone bad If only time can return He won't crashed at the same turn For forgiveness now he is waiting But his loved ones has stopped caring His heart couldn't contain the feelings In the middle of silence he is crying With all of his heart he is praying So his loved one can still smiling In the end the man said his goodbye Because the more he talk the more it seemed like a lie Looked at the distance at his loved ones direction The man waved his hands with full of affection....
*pats* don't be sad.. Whatever happened in the past.. memories replayed so fast.. the world is still so vast.. prepare your line and throw your cast..
You must be teacher Zhang ye disciples. Even though I'm not hur hur sect member but I have to say it. Hur hur
Haven't get the Feels strike for a while....and After reading those poems...Here comes The Feels *Cries in spanish*
Let me share my poem then Spoiler Stupidity is not inborn Stupidity is a virtue A virtue for idiots it is The End
I read through them all to give some of my thoughts, I hope you don't mind. I like Bird and wind; it's very sweet. Love what you do gave me a smile as well. The first couple are pretty sad, and most of them are.. desperate, for lack of a better word. I don't mean that in a bad way, I hope you understand what I mean. Maybe searching is a better word? I usually only read male poetry, while my mother is the opposite. yours remind me a lot of the type she enjoys reciting. I quite enjoyed reading them; thank you for sharing.
It wasn't a criticism, actually. I only meant they sounded sad, and like you're looking for something. It's somewhat similar in tone to what my brother wrote when he was in his teens. I don't really express myself well lol. it's why I'm not a poet.
ah, I understand now.. I was waiting for an answer when I was writing that.. but I'm fine now.. the bird and wind is my resolution.. hehe..