Question Could anyone help me translate this sentence?

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    Damshooter Well-Known Member

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    他咆哮一声，周声的气焰翻腾起来，紧接着化作无比火海，炙热之气疯狂的冲出，身体猛然冲向敌人。

    Thanks :D
     
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    He gave out a roar, Zhou Sheng's arrogance surged, immediately turning into a peerless sea of fire, and hot air rushed out crazily as his body suddenly charged towards the enemy.
     
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    Thank you :D
     
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    There is a wrong character."周声(zhou sheng)"should be "周身(zhou shen)" which means all over the body.
     
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    He roared. The flames surged around him and he immediately turned into a peerless sea of fire. And as he charged straight towards his opponent, hot air rushed out crazily from his body.
     
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    Yes,I think you are right.
     
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    (y)(y)(y)(y)
     
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    He roared. Flames surged around turning him into a peerless sea of fire. Hot air rushing out of his body as he charged straight towards his opponent.

    i feel it might sound better.
     
    Mitico, Mar 25, 2017
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