LCD Doomsday Wonderland

Discussion in 'Latest Chapter Discussion' started by strixflash, Apr 16, 2017.

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  1. Sosseres

    Sosseres Well-Known Member

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    Think this could really do with a re-editing of first two chapters. I was close to dropping it at that point but then the translation/editing quality picked up.

    Like the idea a lot. Also interesting initial encounters but too early to tell yet.

    Edit. Can she make cards of living things and are they still living after being removed from being a card? In that case, can't she bring people along with her as cards after 14 months?
     
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    Sosseres, May 2, 2017
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  2. shijiemori

    shijiemori Well-Known Member

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    What were the mistakes that you spotted in chapter 1 and 2?
     
    shijiemori, May 3, 2017
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  3. Sosseres

    Sosseres Well-Known Member

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    Replied in separate conversation regarding chapter 2. Continue it there if any questions more. :)
     
    Sosseres, May 3, 2017
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  4. IcedBaby

    IcedBaby The Baby that wanted ETERNITY

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    Luther die?
     
    IcedBaby, May 7, 2017
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  5. Drake98

    Drake98 Concerned Fan

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    Didnt everyone died?
     
    Drake98, May 7, 2017
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  6. IcedBaby

    IcedBaby The Baby that wanted ETERNITY

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    Mc wouldn't die I mean she's THE MC
    plot armour seems to be missing?
     
    IcedBaby, May 7, 2017
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  7. ongoingwhy

    ongoingwhy Meat Pie Lover

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    "First round: it was a complete wipeout."

    It sounds like either one of them has a power to "rewind time" or they're stuck in an area that loops.
     
    ongoingwhy, May 7, 2017
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  8. Drake98

    Drake98 Concerned Fan

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    Could it possibly Liu Sanjiu boyfriend? The corpse? Because the corpse has some use, the author brought him.
    Or maybe its the visa :D
     
    Drake98, May 7, 2017
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  9. ongoingwhy

    ongoingwhy Meat Pie Lover

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    Hmm, if it's the visa or Ren Nan's ability, then he would've resurrected as well, right?
     
    ongoingwhy, May 7, 2017
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  10. kay.lenson

    kay.lenson Deus ex machina

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    Bingo..
    It's Final Destination route...
     
    kay.lenson, May 8, 2017
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  11. Tetsuki

    Tetsuki Active Member

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    I think either it's the new guy. His story of how he survived is a little fishy and how handling being killed once makes him even more supicious.
     
    Tetsuki, May 8, 2017
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  12. shijiemori

    shijiemori Well-Known Member

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    To be revealed in the next chapter!
     
    shijiemori, May 9, 2017
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  13. Tetsuki

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    This is a discussion not fortune telling.
     
    Tetsuki, May 9, 2017
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  14. Drake98

    Drake98 Concerned Fan

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    Oh wow. Are they actually being targeted? They are dying once again.
     
    Drake98, May 10, 2017
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  15. Tetsuki

    Tetsuki Active Member

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    This new choker is really op if the person waering it has a high enough groth potential.
     
    Tetsuki, Jun 13, 2017
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  16. Magicwafflez

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    I think they can only use a power once though... Which is sad D:

    On another note, Septimus is really a turn coat. It would be good if he hurries and gets his own body so they can never call on him
     
    Magicwafflez, Jun 18, 2017
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  17. Drake98

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    hatoful Xiao Yu...
     
    Drake98, Jul 11, 2017
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    12 is everything that is wrong with the murder hobo protagonists who think torturing their ways and killing people off is the optimal play.
     
    Arkeus, Jul 30, 2017
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  19. shijiemori

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    Agh trying to keep up with the weekly pace but I am still behind! WHY!!!!
     
    shijiemori, Jul 31, 2017
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  20. ZhaWarudo

    ZhaWarudo TOKI WO TOMARE!!!

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    Wtf is with that thinking humans were rearing duuluozhongs (ffs that name), it was obvious from the start it is duos rearing humans, sometimes characters are horror movie stupid.
     
    ZhaWarudo, Aug 5, 2017
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