Poem Emo Poetry

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  1. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    T'was a cruel fate.
    Forced to roam the earth alone.
    Eroded by the darkness of the soul.
    Hopes and dreams fade into the past.
    And become a distant memory

    Pulled along by the strings of fate.
    The poor fool never stood chance.
    Slowly he fell into the abyss.
    And lost sight of the sky.

    Are we doomed from the start?
    Is it all just pointless?
    Should we fight against the current?
    Or embrace it?

    Embrace
    the misery,
    the anger,
    the hatred,
    the pain.

    Alas this choice an illusion
    In the end we will consumed by them.
    that is our fate.
    To be consumed by the world.


    I like to write poetry. But normally it is just depressing stuff that makes me even more sad ;_;

    So this topic might be a little edgy guys, and apologized for that.
     
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  2. qzty

    qzty From normal-fag to F5-er Jack of Spades

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    My paths divert at every corner
    My thoughts have their own corner

    Oh how I watch you from corner
    Oh how I watch you from corner

    For me my place became a corner
    As words became cornered
    How I try to stand out
    How I try to say it out loud

    But I have stayed in corner
    And will stay in corner


    On a side note I got a comfy corner so no problem.
    And if that does not sound like a poem.....well then it is not.
     
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  3. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    More emo poetry

    I strayed from the right path.
    Fell from grace, paradies lost.
    I lost my youth, and I don't know when.

    The days were bright and the sun was bright.
    Filled with anticipation and energy.
    I don't know when I lost myself.

    Something morphed, and my feelings became sinister.
    Filled with pain and hatred.
    The days were unending, and the night called to me.
    Only safe in the sweet embraceof sleep.

    I don't know when I gained this feeling of loathing.
    But it is all I feel now.
    I lost what made me whole,
    What made me joyful.

    With each passing day
    I feel less human
    This existence is suffering,
    And sometimes I wish it would end.


    Well that is it. I told this topic would be a bit edgy ;-;
     
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  4. Ryve16

    Ryve16 Working Hard and Hardly Working

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    I am
    Whatever you say i am
    If i wasnt, Then why would i say i am
    The paper the news everyday i am
    I dont know, its just the way i am

    Eminem
     
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  5. Star Collapse

    Star Collapse Well-Known Member

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    There is already a thread for this
     
  6. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    This is specifically emo. Also I didn't know that.

    Don't just shit on my day man ;_;
     
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  7. honglath

    honglath I miss my PC

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    I lack imagination
    therefore i cannot write.
    All that i make
    is stolen on sight.

    Call me a fraud,
    i do not mind.
    I'm not a poet,
    just a guy with a rhyme.
     
  8. Thunder Dragon

    Thunder Dragon [Supreme Being][Dragon of Thunder Bone Body]

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    here I am,
    reading poem,
    and writing some,
    in one corner,
    with steady beating of drum,
    irrigating my body like a pump,

    I live on and on,
    singing a lonely and desolate hum.


    short one
     
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  9. Star Collapse

    Star Collapse Well-Known Member

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    Sorry but I didn't see the point of two threads that are exactly the same
     
  10. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    lol
     
  11. qzty

    qzty From normal-fag to F5-er Jack of Spades

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    Rename emo poetry or sad poetry
     
  12. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    I didn't see it. And I don't see a search function for topics. ;_;
     
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    ReaderBot Android R-18 Series Winter Edition

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    I want to die
    end
     
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  14. The Darkness

    The Darkness 『False God』

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    I cri everteim
     
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    ReaderBot Android R-18 Series Winter Edition

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    good one line poem. I like it.
     
  16. Monkey D Luffy

    Monkey D Luffy I hope they serve beer in Hell..

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    Aster Anemone Well-Known Member

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    @The Darkness, very powerful poems, I loved the bold(courageous) and expressive nature of your poetry. Keep it up(y)(y)
     
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    This was made january 2016
     
  19. Contrast

    Contrast Tactical Espionage Expert

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    How light of you to express the dark.
    Like the difference between a dog's bite and bark
    And yet the listeners now must hark
    Your wrong.
     
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  20. Too Honest

    Too Honest Creature of Repressed Desires

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    I cut myself, so give me attention.
    Im not your favorite, but an honorable mention.
    I love your stares, so condescending.
    You care about me, so stop pretending.
    I see the worry, it gives me pleasure.
    There's no alternative, that could ever measure.
    I hurt myself, but im still your treasure.
    Oh im bleeding out, apply some pressure.
    Im in room 208, so come and visit.
    Every day at 3, i know who is it.
    When im discharged, we can start anew.
    You still love me, you know its true.
     
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