Zoan is already a good name in my eyes... and there is also John? It is warlokid. He just denies that fact. *enjoys the scene*
Sigh... @LysUltima Review Your story (finally read it) leaves much to be desired. First of all, fix the pacing. Secondly the transition between the scenes reminds me of Invisible Dragon... Thirdly a few grammatical errors, And to finish it of: It needs WORK! This is fine as a draft, but it's **** if it's the complete version. ****: Use your imagination Really liked the plot, but the reaction to her sister's death somewhat annoys me... Not because of her reaction truly, but because of how it's written I guess... The fighting was really cool and all, but the part also annoyed me to amazing levels... just rewrite a few parts (don't use Invisible Dragon style writing btw.) Comment All in all, your writing needs some improvement... but the ideas used in your novel are great.
Nee ~ When did I get such a gluttonous reputation for sweets? I eat anything delish. Cuteness is justice. Yummy Food is justice.
Maybe because 100% of the posts that I see you in has something to do with either macarons, some other sweet, tea, or a combination of said things...
I do admit giving sweets out alot but those sweets are perfect combo with tea ~ most can only be considered as a mini afternoon snacks fufu I only recall giving actual lunch for Angel kun and land of tea