If you're wondering what I forgot. It basically boils down to the 'middle' part of the story I was writing named Battlefield Restart. I remember the journey I was about to write but forgot how I was going portray some of the characters, which left me a little confused on how to continue. If you're wondering why I forgot something as important as this then my only answer is that I binge read Martial World and Desolate Era all up to their current chapters. Since most people who are reading this haven't read my story, I'll shorten it so everyone can understand. The MC is a reincarnated retired soldier who's OP in close combat but sucks at long range attacks. He's a butler for an even more OP Noble girl who both not a reincarnated individual nor Tsundere. She's very outspoken and straightforward, similar to the MC who never even consideres hiding his abilities. Spoiler: Spoilers The first Arc was supposed to be about how they fight against an evil terrorist organisation of Magicians that kidnap them and try to brainwash them into becoming one of their members. The organisation is called Serpents Eye and it kinda like a cult that hates the Gods that created the Human and Beast Race. The power system goes like this: Spoiler: Power System Everyone knows this Aura Manifestation technique and uses skills that overlay on top of it. The paths of progressing their own skills relies on either adding more controlled Mana to their skills or increasing the quality of them. The first level of the technique augments the flesh and allows the user to gain more Mana Resistance. The second level allows the user to manifest their Aura's outside their body into Magical Spells or allows them to conjure more complex skills. The ones that focus on the first level are called Warriors whilst the ones that increase the level of the second ones are called Magicians. Both classes have levels that go from one to five and considerably strong The third level of Aura Manifestation is called Skill Root and it allows the user to create a foundation for their future unique abilities. Ones talent usually decides if they are able to reach this level or not, but some (like the MC) are exceptions that are able to reach this level by increasing the quality of their techniques. Once reaching this level and becoming a Combatant, ones talent at birth doesn't really matter, all that matters is the ability gained from it since those with Skill Roots are unable to master the first and second levels of Aura Manifestation. The MC himself is special because he has five Skill Roots instead of one. However, he's still not as overpowered as you'd expect. I really admire any patient person who was even able to read through all of that, but either way, there are two more levels of Aura Manifestation that is going to be expanded upon in the later Arcs. If anyone has any suggestions on how they would want the direction the story should take, feel free to comment whatever you feel. I won't be dropping this anytime soon.
You dont forget how to write a story and if you do 'forget' continue and weave the story to how you like it gl
You can just title side story to write what you want and say from what chapter it is supposed to be from. Maybe say something like "you need to read this to understand the story later on".
Don't worry, he will lose sometimes, because it's not like he can take on more than four guys at once. And yes, four guys are his limit if they are on the same level as him, this is excluding if they are Combatants.
I guess he's more darker and serious than Hayate. Now that I think about it, that beginning was quite smart, especially how they portrayed his inability to understand right from wrong as he was thinking of kidnapping for money.
But with less guns, since I'm going to make a separate book for that after this. There's only going to be an ability near the end that is reminiscent of Guns.
A big no-no for me is making him follow everything the girl says. He should disobey her orders from time to time, even if it makes her mad.
They have extremely contrasting personalities so getting them to work together is really hard. Especially since one of them is an optimist whilst the other one is a pessimist that seems to only be able to see the world in a greyish perspective.
Kill him with kindness. Have him fight against someone like hate who is a downtrodden guy who's dream he is crushing but has to because of reasons. So build up a hate character then have MC betray him since MCs never really betray people in stories