Novel Invisible Dragon 2

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  1. Invisible Dragon

    Invisible Dragon New Member

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    Everyone, I have decided to write again~
    why~
    Well, ii was about a fred and something something
    argh lets not think too much about it
    anyway enjoy~
    ---
    heres a prologue~
    because i felt that in the last story it was too sudden~
    enjoy~

    also, this is a mass release
    enjoy~

    enjoy~
    00
    the world was made out of boring stuff
    it was very mundane
    kpopoprea is glorious
    true korea is stopid
    africa is hungry
    rest in peece
    china eats dug
    young master dies
    america is america
    uk still has a moanarchy because ddey don't care
    russia is b
    japan is japan
    america is america
    did i already say that
    japan is japan
    the other country none cares
    our story starts in somewhere
    Continuu
    (i'm sorry, I forgot mongolia ;_;
    but too lat for that now)
    Continuu

    01
    Suddenly
    "Kua!"
    there was a yell which was very quiet but very very deadly
    in some place, some cells exploded
    it was within 999 kilometres
    but that wasn't it
    the mass was converted in energy
    creating a giant blast
    that fired into the sky
    north korea died
    rip
    and then...
    continuu

    02
    there was a dustcloud that stretched out 9999 kilokilometres
    spread to brazil
    anyway
    if you had super sonic hearing you could hear something
    it was very very very very quiet, but stron and manly
    “化!华!”
    It was invisible dragon
    yes he had survived
    "wait wha"
    he himself didn't even realise it
    until now
    continuu
    (btw, its chinese
    not japan
    just saying

    03
    "yes i am alive!"
    invisible dragon was happy and laughed
    dustcloud spread to antartica
    "i must have survived! i knew i was too powerful to die"
    invisble dragon was very happy and pride
    but then he remembered something
    "colbob...DUIKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
    he was very angry now
    he remembered how he nearly died
    he was so angry that the sea tides shifted
    japan was flooded
    its nuclear plant melted
    but invisble dragon didn't care
    he was busy with more important things
    "I will kill kill kill kill kill kill kill you you everyone in the ulttra super multi universe!"
    like plotting his revenge
    it was a great plot
    he would kill everyone
    "except for my waif shang'a"
    he had learnt that word during his 1 second here which was 8^90*2 years here
    he realised shang'a was his waifu
    Continuu
    (yea romance!!!0

    04
    but invisible dragon sighed
    dustcloud dispersed
    conspirarists started talking since the dust was gon from their longs
    that then died to dehydration
    invisble dragon look at himself
    "I'm only a cell..."
    yes
    he was correct
    he was only a cell
    "I only have 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999th power to 9999999999999999999999th power to 999999999999999999999999990th of my orginal power"
    yea he was very very very weak
    his eyes then glew in determination
    "I must train myself back to my former power!"
    his determination was so hot the sun died and ragarnok happened
    until a lord of the universe farted at everything was back to normal
    yea he was very very very weak
    but then suddenly...
    continuuu
    (invisble dragon will have to build strength back up again!
    its more cool
     
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  2. CharLok

    CharLok Well-Known Member

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    OH GOD, SAVE OUR READERS SOULS
    AND HAVE MERCY ON THIS KNAVE, KNAVE I SAY!!
     
  3. noobism

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    MY EYES BURN !!
     
  4. Nike

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    wtf did I just read...
     
  5. twkisanotaku

    twkisanotaku Booksloth

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    Dafuq...
    Looks like i need to reread the first volume to connect the dots again...i thought i was off cancer but i guess i was wrong
     
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    1st Tribulation Well-Known Member

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    I don't think it's as good as the prequal. It neds mor of tht Invisibli Dragon . U neds to revuu uor previlus work and git your motiviton bck
    ୧ ◉ ω ◉ ୨
     
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  7. Ranz

    Ranz 『Legend Death』『Necromancer』『Pokemon Master』

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    O.O Am I dreaming...? GOD!!! How could you abandon me?!? Why did you leave me on this planet where I see no hope for growth...
    Arg.. the pain... the misery... the screams for justice...
    I give up ;-;
    May my soul live in a better world the next life...*commits seppuku*
     
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    Rakiin Pokemon Slave Trader

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  9. MangoGuy

    MangoGuy Rambling Mango

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    Help me
     
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    what the fudge finally it's a masterpiece
    @Shem @Neutrality

    @OverlyFriendly would be overly overjoyed to see her favourite novel again having a sequel!
     
  11. Loriel

    Loriel [Aspiring Editor][Lover of BL][Pinata Smasher]

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    The cancer that rots our eyes is back
    It's so bad for you but so good~
     
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  12. Way

    Way Crimeless Raubritter

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    Admit it, you guys secretly love it.
    The rejection of something like this is purely a bio-
    actually, I'll save out time.
    Aliens.
    The aliens are forcing you to not like it.
    FITE AGAINST DA POWER.
     
  13. Dat_Karma

    Dat_Karma Still Here

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    YESSSS YESSSSSS YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
     
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    Where have you been for so long sensei~~?
    I missed your hard work and novels...
     
  15. 1st Tribulation

    1st Tribulation Well-Known Member

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    Nesd maor Inviaible Dragon it was awshoms beforw. But now its got super short and not col enuf Invisible dtragon need to become strongh agin and beat everyone like poof kaboom yeah itwould be awesome
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    it lost its past super duper glorious moments *sigh...*
    I think the author is fake or has become senile *sulks*
    *gives more powah to da dragon kun*
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  17. Way

    Way Crimeless Raubritter

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    Holy shit, it even has better romance than last time ;_; *tears of joy*
    I thought it couldn't get any hotter......
     
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    Moar powah morw awaesome and he neds mire harem cus hes so cool sorry for bad grammar im so excited jm typinnh rlly fast
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  19. Smaky

    Smaky [A bullied Bunny] [Stalked By LoT(seriously)]

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    Never read Invisible Dragon. It looks good. I should try it out.
     
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    you and @Diabeetus have what it takes to cooperate with @Invisible Dragon
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    totally yes
     
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