Just wanted thoughts on premise

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  1. Dawnsrisen

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    Dawnsrisen, Jan 16, 2017
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    Wujigege *Christian*SIMP*Comedian

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    Added to my reading list
     
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    Yunchii Best Waifu - Tamamo-no-Mae

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    What's this? Some sort of peom? Quite good actually...
     
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    Lazriser Well-Known Member

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    It awfully sounds like a visual novel, which I like! Make it bittersweet then pour a grain of salt and lastly, finish it with spiciness and sourness.
    Oh, and does it have tragedy? Almost forgot, are you including rape, murder, betrayal, slice of life, action, thriller or mystery with a little romance in it as well?
     
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    Thank you :D
     
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    RickyTheKind 『Isekai Pending』

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    wow that kind of story is this ? Physiological . .. This is my cup of tea XD
     
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    Ty ^^
     
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