My World My world is like a rusty car It is like a small jar My world is dark and grey Where life hunts me like prey Still I like my small dark world Whether its hot or its cold I still like to live in it And enjoy it like I never did I will live in this world till I die I may smile or I may cry My world is just like that Believe or not I still like it. Read this @Shem , @Koalala ,@Smakemdown , @HavekZero , @PKitty ,@Accidentally ,@Baron Carpi @Endofdays42 @briose @Shizukani
I find this relatable with my life. I don't know much regarding poetry (I have no poetry sense xD) but I love this poem. A beautiful poem. <3
I may smile, laugh or even cry This has a better rhythm, I guess The tempo is off after the first couple of lines.
I don't do poetry, but it's nice. Like life is not all that great, but you'll still keep living and trying.
Naiso *-* did the poem/rhyme yesternight got you? XD I was about to think a poem too but my brain is drained by that XD
in poetry the really good poems have a lot of symbolism inserted in them. But I love it, I have no talent in making poems so it's great that my kouhai can ahahahaha