The way to manage smart and cunning characters is decide the amount the info they have. Give too much info to Ynevia will be a double-edge sword. Decide her action will be easier but you will lose a lot of option. Aside from that, I mean what the point to make her join in their family as (puts whatever role) and let her join the Academy if kill her instantly will be easy because she is in their territory.
Info, huh? As I've said before, the only person who would want to kill Heroine-chan is Ynevia, and she can't kill her or else Levian will kick her arse and all her plans will go for naught. Ynevia's main goal is to make Vya the Queen ('cause she's obsessed with the throne), and this was the reason why she made a deal with Levian. She'll pretend to be Vya's mom and act as Levian's wife, and in exchange she'll be allowed to raise Vya as she sees fit and not even Levian himself could say anything if her methods seem to be a bit 'extreme'.
I skip it, lol. Reclute Heroine is a good thing for both Levian and Ynevia then. But it will scare Vya. Maybe you can make Ynevia convince to Levian to reveal Heroine as her sister (without saying they are both adopted).
...Levian knows that Vya already knows they're adopted though...And Levian and Ynevia aren't on the same side (they're just allies at the moment since they have similar goals). Also, Ynevia doesn't care whether Vya is scared. She wants her to overcome her fear ala Spartan mom.
The point is don't make others know it to delay the prince from break his relationship with Vya. As long he believe they have the same blood (through they both aren't Roess) and as long there aren't some MC otome game bullshit charm power, ever he knowing the heroine truth identity, he will be more cautious. You just need make the heroine believe they are sisters (like make the heroine feels they are blood related) to make prince believe too.
No matter what happens, the Prince will break off the engagement. It's the world of an otome game, after all. He'll find some way or another to justify breaking up with his fiancee so he can be with the woman he loves. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Awesome! >w< If you're joining, kindly make an account at Nanowrimo.org and tell us all about your novel in this thread! \o/
Mine started not good, but now it's getting better, did some editing to make the parts I disliked better as well... I'm well behind the schedule though, and just remembered I have a 5 days trip coming up.. I will have to pick up the pace! I'll keep doing my best!
Wow I really wrote a lot during class today, almost done with chapter 1 which is still only around 2000 words but I'll strive to catch up. I always have some great inspiration for some reason, maybe I should write on paper so I get more inspiration, or it's just the environment? I always stop somehow on the computer and feel conflicted with my words. By the way what was the difference between the two threads already?
Man, I got sidetracked by that fanfic I attempted to write (Common Sense of a Fujoshi) so I couldn't write anything yesterday!! orz I'll try to make it up somehow today... lol I always get inspired at class too! (Rather than listening to the lectures lolololol) Try not to be so critical of what you write, since it's NaNoWriMo anyway! All first drafts are awful! >w< In the other one you sign up, and here you discuss about your novel.
*hugs* I wrote 1k words today... I'll try to leave NUF for another 1k... I want to get as many words as possible before friday.
At 9k... I'll try to write 4k per day to catch up... Hopefully I can do it... Or was it 7k... I already forgot... I need to find the will to do it... Tomorrow...