I do use a lot of imagery in my poems as inspiration pretty much comes to be that way. By picturing the scene everything just flows out~ Thank you for reading my poems uwu I really do appreciate it~ <3 Fluffy butts are the best when they are like pillows \o/ It's a nice poem cliche or no cliche. Something that just brings a smile to the face without you realising it. But I understand that when we write something one too many times with the same sort of descriptions/techniques/wordings you get unsatisfied with your own works. That happens to me too, so it would take longer for me to write something...well 'different' in a sense. As I mentioned before, my poems mainly come from inspiration. So if no inspiration comes I just can't write ^_^: I got it without the explanation. But being able to critique your own poems does push oneself to want to improve and do better. We are our worst critiques after all~ Stall punned? In what way? Feeling embarrassed, she quickly escapes Washing hands and making haste Out the door, down the hall Hoping to not meet That door opening creep. Yay *throws confetti into the air* Alright I've added you to the list on the first page. Hmm no set schedule, we create a new theme once a certain amount of poems are posted up for that theme. After that the next theme is 'unlocked' and it will be posted up. So maybe every couple of days/weeks~ But feel free to do poems with the other themes if you want
Theme: Forgotten Covered up and left alone Sweeping dust when no one is home Silence rings with just a sigh They left me behind Together we were strong Together we were fierce Taking down enemies With no fear Used for my strength Not noticing their stares Used for my courage If only they had theirs Too reliant on others Too scared to make a sound Silently accepting their broken promises Each one falling to the ground If only I held on If only I spoke up We would not be so alone Rotting in the dust Let this be a lesson for those who come by To stare at the one girl Who was left behind To cry Speak up with your thoughts Do not hold back They are not mind readers They just lack tack If you are in pain Do not feel shame Pour out your feelings As they are not the only ones to blame When you are forgotten Even on sunny days
Hmmm this randomly came to me while listening a song... It is abit crude so plz bare with it.. Theme : Flower Blossoms Title : RED TEARS Spoiler Red Tears White Taints Tsukiyumi's Desire Unhealable Unforgettable Protect It... Bud of Innocence Shelter It ... Away from the rain There is no value It is worth for a humble Humble? Beastly? Does it matter? Invaluable to us... It is Lost... Eternity... Invaluable? Life is invaluable... It is above all... Life? Without purpose... Will you live? Can you? In this cruel world? If its worth... A fair exchange... Maybe for Love.. Or... For my desire? But... Why does my Heart... It is Freezing... You are crying... There is no tears... Look at your feet... They are Red and Drenched... The Flower Blossoms It is raining... It is raining... The rain has touched the bud... The BUD... It Blossoms I feel cold... Incomplete... Tainted... The COLOR... Is it Blue? Is it Pink? Or...Maybe... Black? It is yellow A pale yellow It is ugly... Maybe... A different rain? Will it change? When it Blossoms... Only the Withering Awaits... It is once in eternity? It is ONCE... When I close my eyes... It is all I see... It will mark you... Your Soul... Branded... Forever... Tainted... *When the Red Tears Falls It Blossoms... Regardless of any rain... The Red Tear Blossoms... And its color Etched in our Souls... For an Eternal... Till End... The Red Tear ... Treasure It ... For ... Only Once ... Does it Blossoms...* Some of the meaning if you dun under stand Spoiler The colors Blue : it represent nobility - Self sacrifice for the greater good. Pink : it represent curiosity and ignorance Black : I guess you guys should know Spoiler Seriously?! >.> it represent veil and evil For the pale yellow it represent money and wealth ... Yes green paper can represent it as well but pale yellow is more general esp its relation with gold.
Theme : Freedom Spoiler Hey... Can you tell me... How many colors are there... Outside... of this cage?... There are many Uncountable I wish to see them It is not worth Then... Are there beautiful people? There are some Few Like Goddesses I wish to see them It is not worth Then Are there wise people? There are some Rather Knowledge That Gods themselves Greed for it. I wish to learn them. It is not worth. But I do not wish to be caged... I wish to be unbounded... Free of chains... Wander Like a free bird... If it is your wish. Then you are free... Free from the chains... Chains that bounded the reality... I wished to be caged... Bounded by the chains... No longer free... A simple life... Tell me... If there are uncountable colors... Why is everything... So grey... Tell me... The people... Beautiful as a goddess... Why are they no different than slaves... Tell me... The knowledge... That gods greed... It made me confuse... What is my purpose? What am I... Is this freedom? No... You are bounded... You are chained... To the reality... Then unchained me... Severed me from reality... Take away my memories... Cage me... Away from the reality... Then sleep... It will all be a dream... Tell me... Outside of this cage... ... Freedom... Is it an answer? Or a question? Will it be realized... With experience? Or only in ignorance... There is true freedom? When will you escaped From the CHAINS...
Hmm well with my interpretation I think it is the bloody tears that fall down from the flower as it sheds its petals. *literal meaning* Or it could be the redness of the love shared once and when it is lost, it is lost for all eternity. Once you lose that love you won't find the same kind again. *hue* Wow another poem~ With the changing font is shows a different way to read the poem uwu Chained by freedom. Or freedom is what chains us? We really don't know the boundaries, so testing them is the only way to go.
Well Red Tears Literally Means Losing a virginity as a girl... Thats why it took me a lot to write it.. D:
You make me feel so old... I still remember.. there was a time when literally only mean literally.... *fire gun in to the air* I salute you bygone era...
Well then. Everyone interprets poems differently Glad I don't see what you see~ hue Ahahaha well you can just write it all out and then change the font. Unless that is what you did right? Or was it trying to match the tone that makes it longer to write out?
Well.. You should know that Tsukiyomi is a Japanese moon goddess... You can read that legend.. I am feeling some averting gazes... >.> I am pretty sure some can relate to my poem...
>.> <.< >.< I don't know what you mean! Mm some can relate and others may see it differently. There are a lot of people out there after all. I see. *thumbs up*
*sigh* the world have made its choice. if the world want "literally" to mean the opposite of literally there is nothing we can do... However. If the world take irony from me as well.... I'll literally shoot myself in the head. No. I don't mean literally, I mean literally. I'll literally go to a gun store, literally buy a gun. Point the gun literally at my literal head and pull the literal trigger! Literally!!!
I hope your flower is RED.... Spoiler Red : Usually in Chinese custom are used in wedding, in western red roses represent love, so it should represent deep love or pure love, the only color where one wont regret
♫~ Irony~~it's such a lonely word~~~ Everyone is so confused ~~ Irony~~~is hardly ever heard it used correctly by dudes~ ♫~