Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    *hugs* hehehe
    poem battles are great \o/
    but you do them regularly!

    aye aye such a massive thing is fun >w<
    oh LOL~
    \o/ yay!
    you can like them now :p
    o7
    LOL i make so many about kids / being a kid
    \o/ yays!

    Each only a tiny piece
    One by one they come
    Like the drops of snow
    Slowly covering the land
    Steadily come and gather
    Creating a sheet of white
    A canvas for more ink
    A playground for writers
    A pool filled with rhymes

    *hugs* me too (tho the streak might end soon cause im gonna get busier at work)

    >w<
    A little birdie will always sing
    Hoping for dear friends to swing
    When they see a poem that ring
    And that it won't be only a fling
    So that we can become a thing
     
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  2. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    hehe~
    they are great~

    nya~ >w<)
    but I almost never had them with you~
    muu~
    *hug*

    its fun to have them with everyone~
    *snuggles*
    I like to see the poems going to unexpected ways~
     
  3. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    Ayee cause I dont do them these days~
    Well theres also the one on your profile >w<
    (and actually I have a draft for the princess & bard thing but havent finished)
    *hugshugs*
    ayee~
    XD like the grim thingy? XD
    A bird sang to the wind
    Merrily sang on its tree
    But as winds are it came and left
    But as trees are it only stands quietly
    And the bird was left on its own

    The small chick continues singing
    Hoping for more people to come
    An old man came by for some shade
    Excited, the little feathers sang louder
    Until the park sparked with colour

    More people came, more people left
    Some joined with their own tunes
    Creating a song much better
    Than when she was on her own
    Blooming a park teeming with life

    A bird sings to the wind
    Letting it carry over her tunes
    To the people who come and go
    To the presences who bring warmth
    And to the reason for her singing
     
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  4. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    <Palm>
    Sand flew across the desert
    Travelling along dry air
    The heatwaves danced
    Swaying left and right
    A land without humidity
    Where hot air radiated
    An arid expanse
    A barren land
    Amidst it all
    Promise of fruit
    Sweetness in each bite
    A treat for the tired
    For the hungry and thirsty
    A reward for holding on despite hardships
    For the ones who have endured the sun
    A breath of life among the dreary
    A color between the bleak
    Green in the desert

    Inspired by @Siostar, a picture format, a date palm (read from below):
    Green _______ in the desert ___
    A color __ between the bleak
    \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\/////////////////////////////////
    A breath of life among the dreary
    For the ones who have endured the sun
    ////////////////___///////////////\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\___\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

    A reward ___ for holding on despite ___ hardships
    For the
    hungry and thirsty
    A
    treat for the tired
    00000000\/\/\/000000
    Sweetness in each bite
    Promise of fruit
    Amidst it all
    /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
    A barren land
    An arid expanse
    /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
    Where hot air radiated
    A land without humidity
    /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
    Swaying left and right
    The heatwaves danced
    /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
    Travelling along dry air
    Sand flew across the desert
     
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  5. yuzuki

    yuzuki [akki's shrine maiden] [forever] [Psyx's twin]

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    I like how well it reads both forwards and backwards!
     
  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    Ugh the spacing (?) changed after posting (as opposed to in draft/while typing T^T I dun wanna deal with it anymore, it doesn't look like a palm T^T

    I didn't dare to say it cause I'm super bothered by the 'amidst it all' which I think only works in one direction
    But if it works like so then I'm happy >w<

    also yay my thread is alive!
     
  7. lexlangel

    lexlangel * Shem's butler* *Lhie's hubby* *Fallen's dad*

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    Congrats~ i would participate but my poetry is.....
     
  8. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    xD
    why not try, I too started poeming as someone curious in an anonymous forum xD
     
  9. Carm

    Carm My star shines, but not in my direction

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    *hugs the returning birdie*
    Now I'm expecting my 4 things that have been promised but haven't been delivered.
     
  10. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    returning eh~

    Isnt it only 2!?
     
  11. Carm

    Carm My star shines, but not in my direction

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    forgetful bird is forgetful
    Birdbrain really suits you right now.
     
  12. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀Summer Melody☀

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    -3- im a bird not a brain~
     
  13. Carm

    Carm My star shines, but not in my direction

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    You're right, how can I be so dense.
    You don't have a brain.