Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    :/
    I won't accept this request ever! D:<


    Maybe when I'm bored
     
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  2. Nargol

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    That's sometimes true, and sometimes not. It depends on how much influence you have on the other party, really. And how stubborn both are. Her poetry clearly changed a lot in tone, though the style was still similar to what came before. I think it was a good change, though.

    Yeah, the average age is pretty low; I think most are in their early 20s at the oldest. I'm older than that, and being sick for a long time tends to make you talk like you're even older still :p but I think you two, or at least Autumn Wind, should be on the younger side of things.

    Well, I could be completely off though. It's just idle speculation. I'd check your profiles for the age, but I've never trusted that even if it is there. And it isn't really important anyway. I just like speculating.
     
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    That's true~ Hmm.. I'm not sensitive enough, so the change in tone, I can't quite pick up as much as you, but if so, then maybe it's good..

    Yea~ I'm pretty sure I'm older than what you think of me. I just tend to be more hyper here and I act younger :p But yes, Fu-chan seems like she's still at a malleable age~

    Speculating is fun. My age is not in my profile tho...
     
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    I don't really remember.. but pu-chan is in my mind all along.. hehe..
     
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  5. Nefasdetestasti

    Nefasdetestasti ❄️Wɪɴᴛᴇʀ's Sᴏɴɢ❄️ ||| [Schrödinger Pantsu]

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    So good...
     
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  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Thanks Winter's Song nee ♡ you're good too
     
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    Nefasdetestasti ❄️Wɪɴᴛᴇʀ's Sᴏɴɢ❄️ ||| [Schrödinger Pantsu]

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    I'm so bad at poem...
    my english also sucks..
     
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    You're language is fine, and some of the things you post are pretty~
     
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    Thank you, sis! :D
     
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    Well, seems like people perfer the thematic one, but it's easier for me to list it chronologically, So, I'll make the main list thematic, and use the first reserved post for the chronological order~
    I think I'll update this on the weekends..
     
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    The third update has been posted and can be seen in both the chronological and thematic posts!

    But after posting that, I realize the thematic one don't have enough themes to encompass the complexity of human emotions, so I dumped a lot of poems on merry & dark lol. Not sure what new category I should make tho, melancholic?
     
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    mm.. yeah, that might be good.

    I read through all your new stuff. it's funny how when I posted here first, most of your stuff was far lighter in tone. shows how mood influences you, eh?

    by the way, what happened to that poem you posted on discord? the "beaten down" one? did you abandon it?

    I'm sorry I'm such a dirty old man....... I corrupted your poem kami-sama :<
     
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    Hahaha guilty.
    I'm also more aggressive and hostile recently in chats and whatnot, pray that this will be over fast :p

    Sorry, i went with tears to dawn afterall. Yea, is it a shame?

    Hahhaha no worries. My nickname here is Lewd Bird anyway :p
     
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    I'm pleased with tears to dawn as well <3 well, it's probably better to be honest, even if you have to slant it to rhyme properly.

    I would make a period joke, but I'm afraid that would invoke divine punishment :D I think it's fine tbh. just do what you want, I think we can take it

    Who dares call the Divine One lewd? sounds like we need another witch hunt...
     
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    ... what do you mean honest, it's all fiction you know :9
    I dunno, a heart being beaten down didn't have the image i want of it, I guess.. the closest was the tears one. Tied down would have been fun, too bad I can't unsee the innuendo lol.

    Hahaha no worries if you wanna say it, i think i can take it :p

    .. a lot of people O.Q
    Lol
     
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    Damn, I didn't mean it's better "for you to be honest." I mean "it's probably better, tbh." like I was admitting I think it's better.

    I formulate myself weirdly sometimes so people misunderstand :X dunno why.

    I don't think I have to now :D

    and finally.. that's good! more people to BURN
     
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    I guess people like make bird joke so that why they can you lewd.
     
  18. Pyoo

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    Lololol. Yes. I now have more mission for you. Let the witch hunt begins! Muhahahahha!

    Okay, take care

    Hahaha its not even that.. but you wont hear it from me :x
     
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    That make me curious.
     
  20. Pyoo

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    Hahahahaa... keep on being curious :p
     
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