Poem thread post you own.

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by AkrimNecronum, Dec 4, 2015.

  1. Risus

    Risus ✵ Enigmatic Poet ✵ Tiger ✵ Reese's ✵

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    you guys are really good...
     
  2. Hahhaa

    Hahhaa hereby irrevocably & perpetually waives all moral

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    Somehow, I'm hearing Morgan Freeman reciting that "The Theory of The Self"
    His cultivation in breaking fourth wall is really impressive.
     
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  3. taba1212

    taba1212 Unemployed

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    On That Day

    Remember the night I said Hi?
    Talked to you even I felt shy.
    Looking for some words in the sky,
    Till I found : “Just give it a try.”

    Ten or fifteen years it has been,
    How long since the day we’ve last seen?
    In my fantasy I can’t lean,
    It’s hard when I just imagine.

    Love was the topic of that night,
    I listened to make you feel light.
    I answered things with all my might,
    Hoping somehow you feel alright.

    Hearing you cry breaks me inside.
    I hate I can’t be at your side.
    Stay until those heart pain subside,
    Wipe your tears whenever you cried.

    Please don’t let those looks bothers you,
    Cause `love’ don’t care about that too.
    I’ll be here till you make it through,
    Until you see the perfect you.

    Who say’s you are not beautiful?
    Him, who makes your love like a tool?
    I don’t have rights to say this whole.
    It’s okay if you call me fool.

    If I can whisper to “cupid”.
    I will tell to shot you indeed.
    In my life you’re all that I need.
    The one whom I want to be with.

    I don’t care if I don’t have chance,
    I will be just one of your fans.
    As long as your smiles never runs,
    I will be happy with your glance.

    I want to make her a letter,
    And read while I'm holding her there.
    In place I want to be with her,
    Under this sweet Eiffel Tower.

    I love you in your simplest way,
    See those nice smiles that makes me stay,
    I hope that, when time was okay.
    Face me and say yes "On That Day"
     
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  4. Rreelentless

    Rreelentless Captain Sheriff Admiral Colonel Major General

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    The Man in the Glass When you get what you want in your struggle for self And the world makes you king for a day, Just go to the mirror and look at yourself,
    And see what that man has to say.
    For it isn't your father or mother or wife, Who judgment upon you must pass;
    The fellow whose verdict counts most in your life Is the one starring back from the glass.
    He's the fellow to please, never mind all the rest. For he's with you clear up to the end,
    And you've passed the most dangerous, difficult test If the man in the glass is your friend. You may be like Jack Horner and "chisel" a plum, And think you're a wonderful guy,
    But the man in the glass says you're only a bum If you can't look him straight in the eye.
    You may fool the whole world down the pathway of years. And get pats on the back as you pass,
    But your final reward will be the heartaches and tears If you've cheated the man in the glass.
     
  5. taba1212

    taba1212 Unemployed

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    More Than Love

    You came every night in my dreams.
    And because of your presence,
    I forgot what loneliness is.
    It's nice that we're in my dreams.

    Today, I'll get some flowers for you,
    Be my jasmine, as sacred as my love for you.
    It's color is as clean as my heart,
    I've been loving you from the start.

    I have no doubt,
    You healed my wounds,
    You help me to see the light,
    And bring my life back.

    I wished that we were together,
    I don't know how to live without her.
    She's been the greatest gift ever,
    A gift that I will treasure forever.

    Don't worry about me,
    I love you and it always be.
    My love for you will always be true,
    Because you deserve more than I love you.
     
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  6. zolro

    zolro Active Member

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    A SILLY LOVE POEM
    I love you as much as the stars would love the beauty of space,
    for they had chose to linger and orbit at a stellar pace.
    I love you as much as leaves would love a tree,
    for they would rot when they are shaken free.
    I love you as much as my butt loves my couch,
    Chase me off it and I am sure to be a grouch!

    But of all the metaphors and silly phrases,
    it is nothing compared to the way your smile amazes.
    For I am utterly and definitely in love,
    its like you fit me like a glove!
    Oops I did it again, it wasn’t intentional.
    Blame yourself, darlin’, you’re dimensional!

    CONNIVANCE
    I fear the darkness
    of my mind, the sins
    he plots.
    Instinct restricts
    further actions but
    Inadequately
    as my desires and thoughts
    strive and emerge
    in nightmares.
     
  7. ReaderBot

    ReaderBot Android R-18 Series Winter Edition

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    Simple Happiness

    It was sudden and unexpected
    Not like other who only bring hatred
    Like a blooming flower at spring
    Like a star on a clear night twinkling

    Rolling back and forth with a flustered look
    Hiding behind a fantasy book
    Gathering the whisper of the wind
    Flash of light catching memories in

    One step, two steps, three steps
    Matching the rhymes it couldn’t be helped
    As long as the sun bring light to the world
    No need to say a single word
    this time it's about stalking. LoL.
     
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  8. Zeph

    Zeph 'Popcorn Missing' - Reward if Returned

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    It was really quiet in chat, so I decided to kill chat even further by making a poem on the spot :3 Here it is:
    [Negligible]
    A lone cricket in the field,
    Birds making noise in the sky,
    Random car honking down the street,
    Dim lights,
    -Stop-
    A distant cry for help,
    Sound falters,
    The cry comes to a halt,
    Silence once again takes over...
    -Resume-
    Life has begun again,
    Everything continues,
    Only, one has been lost,
    Negligible...
     
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  9. Cien

    Cien 『Omnivore Reader』Inactive

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    I remember when I was like in grade 4-5, I wrote a poem that ended with:

    "Even if you fart, you'll always be in my heart"

    I forgot the rest..
     
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  10. Thunder Dragon

    Thunder Dragon [Supreme Being][Dragon of Thunder Bone Body]

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    A romantic one from this dragon:

    A New Feeling:

    A summer breeze,
    Swaying hair,
    A sweet fragrance,
    In the air.

    Red,
    The setting Sun,
    A beautiful face,
    My heart undone.

    Descending night,
    Those bright sparkling eyes,
    Attacking my heart,
    Gives a unique wave, a rise.

    Rosy lips,
    Dazzling cute smile,
    This new feeling,
    Never had it in erstwhile.
     
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  11. ReaderBot

    ReaderBot Android R-18 Series Winter Edition

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    Black Butterfly

    The sun shines and the dew drips
    Waking me up from my deep sleep
    From the corner of my eyes
    Searching where the angel lies

    Sweet whisper into my ears
    Try to remember everything for you dear
    With the hand that give a gentle carress
    A day has passed with no time to rest

    Thinking of how to surprise you
    But for you, seems like it’s nothing new
    Mumbling in a low sound
    Just what is it that supposed to be found

    Wilted flower in an abandoned shack
    Broken door with a lot of cracks
    The Mesmerizing Black Butterfly
    Singing on the grave of the firefly

    Torture
     
  12. CloudySkySadMoon

    CloudySkySadMoon Bald and Beautiful

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    Drip drop drip....
    Drip drop drip....
    Rain is falling.
    Slowly and slowly,
    A storm is brewing.
    Come back o little one,
    Come back to the shore.

    Crackle! Crackle!
    Do you hear the thunder?
    Do you see?
    Come back o little one,
    Don't make a blunder.
    Row your little boat back from the sea~!

    Can you hear?
    The rain is maddening!
    A storm is brewing!
    Thunder is howling!
    So come back o little one...
    Back from the sea.....

    I wonder if this sounds like a poem.
     
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  13. Kisuru

    Kisuru Well-Known Member

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    In my dreams
    A warm light gleams
    Into that light
    I walk with all my might
    to a world of divine beauty
    where creation is my duty
    within all its buildings i see
    a home that is made for me
    with every setting unfolding
    a new future is molding
    using a captivating insight
    another story is born tonight

    I just kind of left out any punctuation marks.
     
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  14. Yukkuri Oniisan

    Yukkuri Oniisan 『Procrastinator Archwizard Translator and Writer』

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    Since it is a lie
    Empyrean Overlord
    Goodbye from N-U

    A haiku...
     
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  15. BlueBrute

    BlueBrute Well-Known Member

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    Maybe...
    Thump
    If my heart beat faster

    Thump
    You wouldn't run away
     
  16. BlueBrute

    BlueBrute Well-Known Member

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    I read in his voice because of your commentary (y)
     
  17. Kisuru

    Kisuru Well-Known Member

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    Exhausting pain
    Pouring rain
    Alone again
    Faking sane

    Tahdah~
     
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  18. kakuna7

    kakuna7 Well-Known Member

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    This is for my EX:
    *ahem
    My spilled blood is red
    My bruises are blue
    You left me for dead
    So F#CK YOU!

    So does this sound like a poem?
     
  19. Kisuru

    Kisuru Well-Known Member

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    If it fits it ships.
     
  20. a101011

    a101011 [Hero Martial Porcupine]

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    It is not simple
    To write a haiku like this.
    Since it is random.