This is the General Discussion thread for the for my original novel posted here on the fourms (and RRL soon), Rekindle (click on link). "But Osa!" you might say, "you only have [@insertcurrentchapter#here] Chapters out, why do you need a Discussion thread?!". Good question my friend. Well, to put it simply, I don't like the look of constant gaps in the main thread between chapters. If I to ask for feedback or suggestions, or you have comments and ideas about the story, then I'd rather they be here, and have everything neat and tidy. Granted you are free to do as you like, this is simply a personal request of mine. (If this is in the wrong section or such, feel free to move it, this is just here to try and keep things neat and tidy).
The prologue and Chapter 1 have been Proofread and Edited. Tell me what you think! the others will be up soon, and Chapter 4 will be posted later tomorrow.
Chapter 4, Answers birthing Questions, is up. I wanted to wait for a full edit since I've been trying to fix my overly passive style, but this chapter is a major world building one so I wanted to get it out there. remember to leave comments, questions and suggestions!
like the new chapter good work Though I'm not good at grammer I can't help with but I did notice 2 spelling mistakes you wrote wether as wither twice
Interlude 1 is up. For those who do not like these kinds of chapters, you can skip this one without missing much of the story, but I still highly recommend it, as it gives a large amount of Information.
Chapter 15 is up! I tried a little bit of a different writing style this time, so please tell me how you think it compares!
Want to first thank all of the people who have been reading up to this point for your suggestions and feedback! really helped to develop the story in a more natural way and improve the writing, High-Five to you all! Unfortunately, I have to say, No new chapter yet, sorry. I've not dropped it by any means, but My brain is being fried with Math stuff right now, getting ready to test into Pre-Calculus. I'm slowly working on the next chapter, and building the plot to the end of the Volume, but no guarantee when it'll be up. Could be 2 days, could be 2 weeks, depending on how quickly I can get all of this done with the class. Once I DO get it finished though, I'll be wrapping up the volume pretty quick and getting the last few chapters out pretty fast, so stay tuned and keep watch!