Novel (has been rewriting) After God's Twists

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  1. You Soar Shine

    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    (2017.10.27 Update: The arrangement is full revised, and now it is much easier to read)




    【Synopsis】
    The Super-Aging-and-Low-Birth-Rate Age has come. However, thanks to business offshoring and the expansion of automation, young adults and the middle-aged are now enjoying higher unemployment rates instead of lower ones, and their incomes decline year after year;
    Government bonds, old age pension funds and long-term care insurance are on the verge of collapse, so a whole lot of the old vote to promote legislation so that the young will be punished if refusing to care for their elder relatives, and extremists begin to murder the aged, the migrants of the hostile religion and their offsprings, whose population rates are all increasing in jumps year by year.
    Just when White people are faced with the fateful crossroads of chronic suicide and bearing the pain of amputation—

    “Rest assured that we're anti-death penalty. We won't kill you, let alone commit genocide—you have to visit our TRIUMPHUS, and all future generations of your race must praise our VICTORY forever.”
    SHE comes and says.



    (The picture bellow is the gif for publicity, and you can feel free to use it to publicize this series; if you see it motionless here, please change to the illustration site DeviantArt and search "After God's Twists 1-1-0 image 28 (GIF)" thereto see it)
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    1-1-0 to 1-1-10
    (Sorry, it has been rewriting since 2017.10.30)

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    No matter whether you abandon this series, thank you very much for reading it to here. However, even though you don't want to follow the update, please let me ask you a favor again:
    please at least tell me what parts give you bad reading experience so that I can revise them;
    And, if you like my work, you're welcome to share it. Thank you!



    【Table of Contents】
        Volume 1: Get Pregnant Now

      Episode 1: Muslim vs. Zombies

    / Main Theme / Selection of Illustrations / Where the Creator Posts His Works in Person / About the Author /

     
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  2. TotesMyGoats

    TotesMyGoats yeetle the teetle

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    What the fuck is happening
     
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    Setra Well-Known Member

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    Triumph, white people! :LOL:
     
  4. You Soar Shine

    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    Safety and peace, my friend.

    Triumph, Mei!:D
     
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    AMissingLinguist [Not Here][Blank Sect][Nuffian #N]

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    I liked the video, but I'm not sure if liking your comment means I hate the thread.

    I'm also not sure if this is an advertisement for a novel or advertisement for an illustrator. Maybe both?
     
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    Kaminomi Well-Known Member

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    This is an advertisement,ugh
     
  8. You Soar Shine

    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    1. I'm a Chinese and I couldn't understand what did #6 imply with the word "Gay". I guess it's not just saying homosexuality. Is it right or not?

    2. I'll serialize this series here. I don't know if this will be still seen as advertisement.

    I'll serialize this series here. I don't know if this will be still seen as advertisement.
     
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  9. You Soar Shine

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    【Main Theme of the Whole Series】

    (I can understand your mood if you feel displeased when seeing the title of the song. However, please suspend your boo because it's impossible for the lyricist, who is an East Asian and has a normal character, to stand for white supremacy or discriminate against White people. Setting such a title was to match up the follow-up story, so please be tolerant of it first. Thank you!)
    (You're welcome to download or share it. If you're worried about being mistaken for a white supremacist, just add a sentence like "What the hell is this?")



    Triumph,White People!



    Words, Music, Illustration and English Translation by You Soar Shine



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    juniorjawz Well-Known Member

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    Haha. My 1st impression/reaction after seeing this thread was... "This looks gay..."

    I blame iDubbbz meme for making me think as such :blobpopcorn:
     
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  11. JackStone

    JackStone Wow. How nice. Good job.

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    So much things in a small amount of time...
     
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    Vyren Version 3.33

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    Really? My first though was “Is this a high quality shitpost?”
     
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    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    Hi friend, would you please tell me why do you think my work is a shitpost? In fact this is my first time to post my original work on the internet, and I hope I can improve it with your opinion. Thank you for reading:).
     
  14. RR Vocaloid

    RR Vocaloid RoyalRoad.com Slepragt

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    Just because it's an actual story doesn't mean it's not a shitpost. I've seen many a story like this popping up on RRL. Many of them rejected just like this one would be for being way too damn controversial.
     
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    RR Vocaloid RoyalRoad.com Slepragt

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    The random artwork, the swastikas, and well everything about the story. You're mentioning white supremacists and muslims quite a bit. Not even sure if the mods will here will let this pass.
     
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    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    Thank you for reply.

    However, that's Buddhist 卍, not Nazi's 卐. Moreover, she presses her palms together and has super big earlobes and many arms behind, so it's a clear homage to Thousand-Hand Guanyin, the Buddhist Goddess of Mercy, and has nothing to do with Nazi.
     
  17. Sharudeis

    Sharudeis Semi-narcoleptic

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    The issue here with your work would be the rather controversial undertones. I'm quite sure that NUF bans religion and politics-related threads to keep the community slightly more peaceful.
    As long as it isn't offensive (highly doubtful since there're many opinions around), it may be okay...?
    Though it's a lot of effort that went into your work, so 加油!
     
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    RR Vocaloid RoyalRoad.com Slepragt

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    "Triumph, White People" isn't helping your case in saying that's a buddhist swastika very much.
     
  19. You Soar Shine

    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    Thank you ;D

    Yes, my work "looks" controversial, but suppose Schindler's List, The Wave (2008 film), Imperium (2016 film) and so on had been only looked at the partial exterior (e.g. the collection of massacre or movement scenes), they would have been also thought controversial by the people.
     
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    You Soar Shine Active Member

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    I can realize your mistrust.

    Actully, my work "looks" controversial, but suppose Schindler's List, The Wave (2008 film), Imperium (2016 film) and so on had been only looked at the partial exterior (e.g. the collection of massacre or movement scenes), they would have been also thought controversial by the people.

    So, if you have time, please read 1-1-0 and its Analects, and I hope they can answer you.
     
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