Short Story Solace

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Balthazzar, Dec 22, 2016.

  1. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    shh ill find a way to make you write a story staring me ~

    wait and see.

    MHauhuahuahuahuahua~
     
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  2. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    >.> they are 'short' stories..... though apparently im making the second one into a book/novel/thing
     
  3. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    the delusions people have...
    smh
     
  4. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    anywho since i have imprinted the subliminal message

    nice story cant wait for the tentacle monster ~
     
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  5. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    lol
     
  6. Zek

    Zek I write sins, not tragedies.

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    Well, there are short stories on novelupdates that are well over or slightly below 5000. So I expected yours would be too.
     
  7. Westeller

    Westeller Smokin' Sexy Style!! Staff Member

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    Is no one going to talk about that "thru?"

    Really?

    Well okay then.
     
  8. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    ill take that as a yes
     
  9. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    sorry but.. my short stories are short AF...
    they are stemmed from pure boredom and no actual drive to them unlike in AG where quests are a thing.......
    If there was a goal behind the story then it would be longer but it pure boredom so doubt it
     
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  10. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    thru is a word i can use....
    its just through simplified
     
  11. Westeller

    Westeller Smokin' Sexy Style!! Staff Member

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    Yeah....................................... about that...... No. No you can't. Stop that right now.
     
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  12. Zek

    Zek I write sins, not tragedies.

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    Well, Mcdonalds has drive thru. So why not?
     
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  13. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    As a broken-hearted alcoholic, this hurt a little bit..

    Well done. 7/10
     
  14. Linbe

    Linbe New member

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    *spits out water*...You can Write?!!!....wow...what's it gonna be next Trump becoming president...oh wait....
     
  15. AliceShiki

    AliceShiki 『Ms. Tree』『Magical Girl of Love and Justice』

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    Not bad Baldy-kun, not bad at all!

    If anything, I'd say the only thing I disliked was that the ending didn't really reach a conclusion... Like... I don't know if the father will use the drawing to vent himself and solve his problems, or if he'll continue hitting the daughter even though he started making the drawings... The lack of conclusion was a bit of a letdown for me.

    Aside from that, I liked the whole of it! \(^^)/
     
  16. Falhrus

    Falhrus Avoiding enemies is hard work y'know?

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    *sniffle* *tears come out* This is quite good... f*ck it. This is horrible. *cries even more*
     
  17. Negias

    Negias 『Average Smulenians』『Normal Passerby』『Chaos Lover』

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    now this is the template that I like!
    using this as a background story or prologue, you can make both father and daughter gain power from their imagination, then some bad guy bla bla bla and some good guy help them in using their power and bla bla bla behind the society, and finally the father found the step-mother (love interest or whatever), and boom...continue your imagination
    #JustMyOpinion
     
  18. Balthazzar

    Balthazzar 『Reformed Member of NuF Society』

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    huh.... didnt expect for it to hit home

    thx
    Yeah.... though, this (in my opinion) is the worst out of the three
    thx

    ending was rushed...... i wanted to sleep... you could say that the rest was up to the imagination of the reader
    >.> which is it?
    .........
    your opinion is too much work for me....
    I could continue it and have them reconcile their relationship and have the father meet someone but its up to my laziness