Well, there are short stories on novelupdates that are well over or slightly below 5000. So I expected yours would be too.
sorry but.. my short stories are short AF... they are stemmed from pure boredom and no actual drive to them unlike in AG where quests are a thing....... If there was a goal behind the story then it would be longer but it pure boredom so doubt it
*spits out water*...You can Write?!!!....wow...what's it gonna be next Trump becoming president...oh wait....
Not bad Baldy-kun, not bad at all! If anything, I'd say the only thing I disliked was that the ending didn't really reach a conclusion... Like... I don't know if the father will use the drawing to vent himself and solve his problems, or if he'll continue hitting the daughter even though he started making the drawings... The lack of conclusion was a bit of a letdown for me. Aside from that, I liked the whole of it! \(^^)/
now this is the template that I like! using this as a background story or prologue, you can make both father and daughter gain power from their imagination, then some bad guy bla bla bla and some good guy help them in using their power and bla bla bla behind the society, and finally the father found the step-mother (love interest or whatever), and boom...continue your imagination #JustMyOpinion
huh.... didnt expect for it to hit home thx Yeah.... though, this (in my opinion) is the worst out of the three thx ending was rushed...... i wanted to sleep... you could say that the rest was up to the imagination of the reader >.> which is it? ......... your opinion is too much work for me.... I could continue it and have them reconcile their relationship and have the father meet someone but its up to my laziness