Eight Days

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EIGHT DAYS
Day eight. Young me bade you farewell last.
Day seven. Young me wore down blades of grass.
Day six. Young me stayed still as all else prance.
Day five. Young me stared as candle lights dance.
Day four. Young me saw old friends sob and laugh.
Day three. Young me noticed people dress rough.
Day two. Young me peered through glass as you lie.
Day one. Young me cried as I watched you die.

(A16.18)
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Day zero. Young me gazed at the solemn sky.
It seems like it will rain tomorrow.​

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    1. Bad Storm Aug 17, 2018
      @Emmyy, not really. It's just an easy theme to work with. And this actually came out of nowhere so I don't know, too
    2. Emmyy Aug 17, 2018
      Do you think about death alot? This one reminds me of the poem about your funeral -theme wise
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    3. yun yun yun Aug 17, 2018
      Panda-coon.??? Dunno... Kept thinking it's a crossbreed between a panda and a raccoon...
      *yawns*

      As they say... English is dynamic...
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    4. Pandamonic Aug 17, 2018
      @Bad Storm no you can't crush my shoulder to ground. I'm a big lazy panda while your just uh- A dog? or something. Well maybe my self confidence maybe crushed but not physically.
    5. Bad Storm Aug 17, 2018
      @Pandamonic haha. Playing with words is fun so I'll accept your "slumper".

      *drapes myself all over your shoulder and crushes you to the ground*
      *laughs evilly*
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    6. Pandamonic Aug 17, 2018
      @Bad Storm *shoulder slumper than ever* (I don't think slumper is a word but you get it)
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    7. Bad Storm Aug 17, 2018
      @Pandamonic not really. I just liked the misleading count down.

      And it's okay, buddy. *pats shoulder*
      I didn't put much effort to this one, too. :blobpeek: (It's an impromptu)
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    8. Pandamonic Aug 17, 2018
      @Bad Storm so its a reverse poetry? I'm really not in the condition today. *shoulder slumps*
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