The Red Rose's Dance

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THE RED ROSE'S DANCE
One stormy day,
A tiny red rose
Was torn apart.
Savagely, I might add.
It's crimson petals
Scattered into tiny pieces,
And madly danced
With the mad wind.
Dance and dance
And dance it goes,
Dance and dance
Into highs and lows.
Each tiny broken pieces
Gained life of their own,
And each danced
To its own tune,
To its own song.

But one lonely speck of red
Fell into a snow-white heaven
That turned out to be
My grandma's white rose garden,
And there, I watched it,
Striking as it should be,
Dance to its own melody.
Dance and dance
And dance so madly.

(A16.18)​

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    1. Bad Storm Aug 19, 2018
      @Osamaru the ones from the poem pool were good. :blobsalute:

      Hmm... I'll consider your suggestion. Though for now, I'm fine with posting my poems here. Less traffic haha.
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    2. Osamaru Aug 19, 2018
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    3. Osamaru Aug 19, 2018
      /o/ Nice!
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    4. Emmyy Aug 17, 2018
      I absolutely love this one! I could totally
      picture the scene in my mind.. Really good imagery!
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    5. Bad Storm Aug 16, 2018
      @Pandamonic because this poem has certain pauses inside my head. Just wanted to convey as much as I could.
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    6. Pandamonic Aug 16, 2018
      Wow, you used punctuations! can't help but notice.
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