A PLACE ONCE HER TOMB BECAME HER GARDEN (VER. 2)

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all of the beauty, hope, and love grew from the ground
layers of seasons and weather saw the two of us around

our hands soiled with the soft and tough earth
symphony of flowers budded and came to their birth

there were no more broken dreams sang by the anthem of the soil
on the flowerbed of wonder and delight that we worked so hard to toil

the seeds have finally blossomed, and it was all so divine
we finally entered the garden with our hands clasped and intertwined

from my broken roots, fast-growing weeds, and vines
where she once knew where everything would continue to wither and still dies

in the garden as it was once her tomb
was no longer her place of impending doom

everything was restored, and we began anew
with our grounding love, you tended to me and ceased the big blue

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    1. Stripedhatbecomesgay Aug 12, 2022
      Your welcome! I don't think I could ever make a poem and if I did it would probably suck
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    2. milkyfoxz Aug 12, 2022
      @Stripedhatbecomesgay I JUST START WITH A THEME OR WORDS/PHRASES/SENTENCES THAT COMES TO MIND AND THEN I INSTANTLY WRITE IT DOWN,, ITS STILL HARD FOR ME TOO,, IM STILL PRACTICING RN AND CREATING AS MUCH AS I CAN,,, HELLO AND THANK U HEHEHEHEHEHEHEH
    3. Stripedhatbecomesgay Aug 12, 2022
      How do you guys make poems so easily, it's difficult for me
      Also hi and noice poem
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    4. milkyfoxz Aug 12, 2022
      @Ahmya AHMYWAHWNAMYA THANK YO USO MUCHHHH AHMYYYYYYYY!! I LIKE THIS VERSION MORE TOO!! SINCE AFTER I FINISHED IT, MY HEART FELT SO FULFILLED AND COMPLETED, SO TA-DA~~~
      ALSO, THE PICTURE FOR THIS WAS A SHOT FROM THE 2020 MOVIE "THE SECRET GARDEN." IT'S A VERY BEAUTIFUL MOVIE TOO! I WANT TO HAVE THAT KIND OF PLACE NEAR MY HOME *CRIES*
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    5. milkyfoxz Aug 12, 2022
      @Avgust MY REACTION WAS: "SOMEBODY SAID MY POEM WAS PEACEFUL!!!!! PEACEFUL!! AND THEY SAID PRETTY TOO!!! PRETTYYYY!!!!!" *SHOUTS TO THE WHOLE HOUSE AND TO EVERY MEMBER OF MY FAM* Ouhhhh!!! Flow and intensity!! I want to try that too!!! THANK U FOR COMPLIMENTING MY POEM!!! I AM VERY HAPPY :>>>>
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    6. Ahmya Aug 12, 2022
      It sounds so beautiful!!╰(*´︶`*)╯♡
      I like this version more than the previous version... it feels much more completed~~
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    7. milkyfoxz Aug 12, 2022
      @Avgust YES ACTUALLY THE FIRST VERSION WAS FOR AN ACTIVITY FOR OUR CW CLASS TO MAKE A 5-LINE POEM,, BUT IT WAS A BIT HANGING FOR ME, SO I WANTED TO COMPLETE IT XD
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