An unhappy first love.

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In a blink of an eye,
You stole my heart.
Like a gust of wind
You took my breath.

I chased after you
To get it back.
I ran and ran and fell.
And scraped my knees falling for you.

You have my heart and my breath,
And as selfish as you were,
You took my kiss and whole of me
Tugging the delicate threads of my heartstrings
In your bed.

You were so bright like a sun
And my star on deep dark nights.
Sometimes I used to wonder,
Whether you were an artist
'cause you were so good drawing me in.

We should've been happy together,
But no, you were so selfish
You wanted more and more from me.

In an abandoned dark alley
You took my eyes and my lips.
You clasped my hands
As if they were just for you.

But then that happened.
The cruel play of fate,
Cutting the red threads
Under the bright street lights .

So cold were the once warm you,
Your lovely face changed from white to grey.
And, you still have my heart,
Taken with you in land of unknown.

What will I do now?
What should I do?
Chilly raindrops wantonly splattered on my face,
Warm teardrops mixed together with the frigid rain.



Call me a Heartbreaker. So many hearts I have broken. :blobcheeky: from
https://forum.novelupdates.com/blogs/a-hopeless-wish.5371/
This , to these
https://forum.novelupdates.com/blogs/broken-heart.5482/
https://forum.novelupdates.com/blogs/gimme-a-chance.5595/

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    1. Tech is life Oct 15, 2021
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    2. Bad Storm Oct 15, 2021
      Just a random thought

      I would probably reverse how they were ordered to:
      In a blink of an eye,
      You stole my heart.
      Like a gust of wind,
      You took my breath.
      As for this one:
      The first two could be reversed but since the last 2 lines doesn't seem nice when reversed, I'll probably let the stanza be.


      It was a good poem, couldn't help but comment on it :blobrofl::blobpats:
      Tech is life likes this.