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CANDY

Wearing my nice guy hat
I smile lazily at you
My eyes held hunger
And lots of craving, too

Your every layer's enticing me
Wanting me to ravage you badly
But, I clenched my hands in fists
I'll see you later, my dessert, my feast

I run my tongue along my teeth
Pursed my lips to act as sheath
All muscles as tensed as hell
I'm such a wolf, can't you tell?

I want to touch that creamy skin
And kiss that luscious lips
But not yet, it's such a sin
So I content myself with tiny sips

Taking a bold step forward
To feel infinitely closer
Caressed your cheeks with my fingers
With a gulp, I still, I ponder

Why tempt me like this
I feel intoxicated already
You glide those sweet hands across my chest
Oh, dear Lord, please save me

I stared at your face
You stared at mine
As if in sync we kiss
Ahh, what sweetness? So divine
(J29.28)​


@Cian-Chan ....umm so I was looking for a cringy and cheesy love poem in my phone to help you, but this is the best I could find in a short notice. It seems like I'm not good with good love poems where there is a good ending since most I saw were unrequited love and stuff...orz.

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    1. Bad Storm Aug 9, 2018
    2. Bad Storm Aug 9, 2018
      @Cian-Chan Oh, I see. Then finish it at your own leisure.
      ... I think it better be amilhs cause I'm afraid I might come up with a weirder nuffian name. Hehe hehe
    3. Cian-Chan Aug 9, 2018
      But I always viewed amilhs as a trap.(I even have an anime image of it in my mind). I can't help but think that it's too funny that the poem may come out weird. Anyway, maybe I can do something with this...
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    4. Emmyy Aug 8, 2018
      I want some candy too.. Haha..one time my chef at work told me I was his sweet vanilla creamy muse.. I said dont you mean mousse ? I think love statements are hard to achieve without sounding cheezy.. Haha
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    5. Bad Storm Aug 9, 2018
      @Pandamonic lol, thanks. It's probably the autocorrect or how lazy I am to double check things haha.

      @Emmyy I suddenly remembered a cheesy quote...
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    6. Pandamonic Aug 8, 2018
      Ehem You're should be your. Don't worry I also confuse them myself. @Bad Storm
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    7. Emmyy Aug 8, 2018
      @Tramsloof 'A sky full of stars and he was staring at her' atticus the poet
      To me that is a romantic thought.. find a poem you think is romantic.. Challenge ! haha
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    8. Emmyy Aug 8, 2018
      @Tramsloof that is the original cheezy love poem..
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