Candy

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Bad Storm

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CANDY

Wearing my nice guy hat
I smile lazily at you
My eyes held hunger
And lots of craving, too

Your every layer's enticing me
Wanting me to ravage you badly
But, I clenched my hands in fists
I'll see you later, my dessert, my feast

I run my tongue along my teeth
Pursed my lips to act as sheath
All muscles as tensed as hell
I'm such a wolf, can't you tell?

I want to touch that creamy skin
And kiss that luscious lips
But not yet, it's such a sin
So I content myself with tiny sips

Taking a bold step forward
To feel infinitely closer
Caressed your cheeks with my fingers
With a gulp, I still, I ponder

Why tempt me like this
I feel intoxicated already
You glide those sweet hands across my chest
Oh, dear Lord, please save me

I stared at your face
You stared at mine
As if in sync we kiss
Ahh, what sweetness? So divine
(J29.28)​


@Cian-Chan ....umm so I was looking for a cringy and cheesy love poem in my phone to help you, but this is the best I could find in a short notice. It seems like I'm not good with good love poems where there is a good ending since most I saw were unrequited love and stuff...orz.

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    1. Emmyy Aug 8, 2018
      @Tramsloof that is the original cheezy love poem..
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    2. Tramsloof Aug 8, 2018
      @Emmyy how about this as an example of not cheesy love statement,

      'Roses are red
      Violets are blue
      And I love you '
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    3. Emmyy Aug 8, 2018
      I want some candy too.. Haha..one time my chef at work told me I was his sweet vanilla creamy muse.. I said dont you mean mousse ? I think love statements are hard to achieve without sounding cheezy.. Haha
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