Random poem - Soul Tempering

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Tilgarial

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does your fire
burn with ire
does your heart
break apart

on the anvil of life!
with a good helping of strife
or do you hold together
like some good old leather?

is it a choice,
or just fate's voice?
different souls
have different goals

but all do feel
and all need to heal
time breaks
no matter how long it takes

when you're alone
you're just a drone
so keep 'em close
those you chose


...i was spamming somebody when this came out, so i naturally don't have a name for it
I'd be happy to take suggestions!

Edit: title chosen by @mir. Thank you!

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    1. Across Jun 16, 2020
      Wow you really didn't let me down, amazing works!!
    2. Emmyy Mar 5, 2020
      I can relate I feel I am a sacrifice on the anvil of life... haha
    3. Emmyy Mar 5, 2020
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    4. pHantomRJ Mar 4, 2020
      A good work
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    5. Sherrynity Mar 4, 2020
      Somehow I can seem to hear the epic guitar plays and the vocalist screaming this poem.
      Cynic Viper, Emmyy and Tilgarial like this.
    6. Cynic Viper Mar 3, 2020
      Under the shade of a verdant oak,
      You rest your head against the olden bark,
      And plant your blade on the ground,
      The Great Yang hides behind a cloud,
      The North Wind wets your armour,
      Why don't the larks follow your flute anymore?
      O Great General of Heaven!

      Maybe this is sort of random, but I felt like writing this. Although it's nothing special, these was what came to mind.
      mir, Across, Emmyy and 1 other person like this.
    7. mir Mar 3, 2020
      "Soul Tempering"
      Across, Emmyy, XxVioletxX and 2 others like this.