Haiku for my wife

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A haiku for my beautiful wife @samia zahin dare gives by @Naraina

You’re a alluring moon
Venus envies your hotness
Your beauty allures me

i suck at haikus

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    1. Bobasis Apr 14, 2021
      @Bad Storm they’re probably wrong but it’s the thought that counts right ..
    2. GREED444 Apr 13, 2021
      here in my summer i am already sweating buckets with haiku i will be soon dead from the hotness
    3. Zissel Apr 13, 2021
      Ohh... Sorry. Thought my second comment wasn't posted, so I wrote the same thing again:facepalm:
    4. Naraina Apr 13, 2021
      Okay okay, I get it. Now Stop -_-)
    5. KhayDesuu Apr 15, 2021
      Nice haiku, could be better! ~>_<~
      Napelynn likes this.
    6. Bad Storm Apr 13, 2021
      is it just me, or the counts are wrong?
      Coffea to Ell likes this.
    7. Zissel Apr 13, 2021
      I think its great!!!
      I love it!!
      Bobasis likes this.
    8. Bobasis Apr 13, 2021
      This haiku took me a hot year to think of
      samia zahin likes this.
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