My Love, Enlighten Me Translation

Hello! Since I haven't seen an available and a decent (I have only seen machine translated ones and they're so difficult to comprehend) English translation for the Chinese webnovel based drama series "My Love, Enlighten Me", I gave it a try to translate the novel.

I have only translated the first chapter, and it is divided into two parts. I want to ask for some feedback for the translations, so if you're interested and have some time to spare to check it out, I would be very grateful. Let me know if there are some things that still needs editing or improvement, and any sort of feedbacks and criticisms is highly appreciated. Thank you!

[I also have tried to add my translations here in NU and it is now currently pending]

PS. Let me know if this type of blogs isn't allowed, I am willing to take down this blog post immediately.

Here's the link:

https://yzatranslations.wordpress.com/