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Clozdark

"Kuma chan \(≧◡≦)/ "「airhead」「nonsense speaker], Male
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Those who celebrate their birthday today
is smiling
Those who losing someone important today
is crying
Those who tied their life with loved one today
is in harmony
Those who ending someone soul today
is in madness

we live with many colorful events going around
but since what color we can see is limited
we started,we started to being indifferent about it
and giving up, and giving up our emotions

we neglecting our loved ones as we grown older
and laughing off how they died
shaming their name with the worst word we can mutter
and treated the joy they bring as a fiction

then whats the thing that we can called as a remnant?
then whats the word that we can said as a farewell?
we started,we started to being indifferent about it
and giving up, and giving up our lives

i don't want to say something like this
but this is today society i am living in
surrounded by people who laughing at dying memories
human can't be saved at this point right?

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    1. Emmyy Sep 20, 2018
      I started to read this before but I was in too sad of a mood already at the time to continue reading. I sometimes wonder where is people's humanity.. You are such a talented writer to evoke such feelings in me when I read your poems. I really hate feeling sad about people and the cruelties in life..
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    2. Tramsloof Sep 17, 2018
      The content or the idea is great. But the totally opposite is also true for this world, where people start realising the value of a person after they lose him. I myself have this experience first hand, and the memories you have with that person are adamant.

      Off course there are people who would rather not have or show empathy, there are plenty on the other extreme too.
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    3. Pandamonic Sep 17, 2018
      Loved the choice of words. Tho it hurts my eyes to see the tenses like that.
    4. SoulZer0 Sep 17, 2018
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    5. Lunnear Sep 17, 2018
      I know even know where to start
    6. yun yun yun Sep 17, 2018
      Uhh...
      Do I laugh at the grammar or towards the world?

      ....

      *sighs*

      Mmn~
      I'm laughing... Or maybe...
      I'm in between tears and laughter...
      And I won't elaborate further...
      The world's a mess... That, I know...
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