Random Poem - Blurred Path

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Tilgarial

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whence Fate came upon a soul
with it's ever endless howl
knowing not where to proceed
only for a future it plead

this soul see naught but the physical
Leaving even logic far beyond quizzical
filled with worry and doubt
As Fate looks down upon this sprout

Fate hath only one desire
irregardless of the aftermath
for some, that might be dire
as it is a future path

doubt and worry
cloud more than mind
as they leave the future blurry
and Fate just so, so blind

desire and will
must be driven ahead
so Fate cannot fill
all else with dread

thus it is told
thou shall not fold
in face of future scold
and be forever bold

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Comments

    1. Tilgarial Jun 15, 2020
      @mir ohhh, I like that one!
      I'll gracefully take it, thank you :'p
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    2. mir Jun 15, 2020
      I see that it's yet to be named. I don't know if it's any good, it doesn't feel like it describes your poem's feeling well enough at all, but how about "Blurred Path"?
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