Randomly inspired poem - Time passes fast

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out the humans cry,
as time flies by
none can stop it
time wont drop it

on and on they go
always with the flow
the future is now,
the future is wow

to see so many a wonder
with not enough time to blunder
how shall we tread
through time ahead

choices to make
and no break to take
on we proceed
with ever-going greed

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    1. Coffea to Ell May 7, 2020
      :coffee:❤️
    2. Loni4ever May 6, 2020
      Oooh I like it owo *gives cookie*
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    3. Tilgarial May 6, 2020
      @SquadCammander354 true, kinda forgot about capitalization. I'll keep an eye out for it next time

      @pass1478 you, pay me sometjing before you ask for a refund!
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    4. pass1478 May 6, 2020
      Not inspired. I demand a refund.

      @SquadCammander354
      "But still capitalising would be neat."
      Shouldn't there be a comma after "still," since there's a pause after it? Not an actual grammar rule or something, but just proper punctuation.
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    5. SquadCammander354 May 6, 2020
      It's kind of meh, also remember to capitalise some of the first letters in a sentence. Maybe not every other sentence, but still capitalising would be neat.
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