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Ahodesuga

°˖✧Aho desu ga, Nani ka?✧˖° 《Liking Fiend》, Female
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Beams groaned all around her as rubble and the dust of collapsing upper floors suffocated her. Ayane tried to yell out, to beg for assistance; to scream at the top of her lungs "I'm here!!! right here!! please, save me too!" but her feeble voice was drowned out by the screams of terror shaking the leaning building. The heroes were so near, yet so so far away.

In the span of a minute, Ayane found herself experiencing the five stages of grief. She was nearly manic with terror. Ayane did not want to die yet, she still had so much she wanted to do! She hasn't even graduated uni yet, or bought her tiny house, told her students they made her proud. She hadn't even written her novel yet. She was too young to die!!!

"Please" Cracked, bleeding, trembling lips uttered, "Please, sav...e me..." A quiet voice pleaded. Tears ran down her ashen, torn face as the last light source of her tomb too was sealed by debris.

"AH!" A woman sprang out of bed, terror colouring her fair face. Her head whipped from side to side, fright clinging to her eyes as she raised her shuddering hands to her face. Ayane could swear she was bleeding a few seconds ago. "It wasn't a dream! It wasn't! I felt the concrete crush my knees, I felt the tears sting my torn cheeks..." Ayane shook like a leaf in the wind. She resolutely concluded that today, she would die. Her dreams always came true despite the range being from small premonitions such as the day's weather to greater matters such as the declaration of wars.

The pale woman looked outside her window and was met with a beautiful sight, she admired the clear blue sky and the birds freely spreading their winds, singing with joy and feeling the warm wind on her skin. The trees swayed pleasantly, chuckling at the antics of the humans around them. She turned away in dismay, thinking 'what a beautiful day to die.'

The wall mirror hung familiarly in its place and it almost taunted her to look at it. 'Come now girlie, why so afraid?' The pitter-patter of feet on the uncarpeted floor sounded out and amplified in her ears, in these moments, Ayanefelt herself no different than a man heading to the execution platform to meet his unfortunate fate. Her eyes had a maddened glint to them as she rose them to her mirror.

Looking back at her was a torn, bloody face with its cheekbones exposed, tears leaking out from between her blood which drenched her white shirt's collar.

A breath passed, A racing heartbeat echoed and blood rushed to the woman's ears as a blood curling scream ripped through the air.



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Comments

    1. Qiu Qiu Jiu Ball Jun 16, 2021
      It's gonna be nice :blob_grin:
    2. Ahodesuga Jun 15, 2021
      Lurking likes this.
    3. Qiu Qiu Jiu Ball Jun 15, 2021
      Is there a chance that you will develop this piece of short story into a full story??? I think it's good!! :aww::aww:
      Aho likes this.
    4. Lurking Jun 15, 2021
      WEll, now she had the time to fulfill her regrest of things she didn't do
      Aho likes this.
    5. Agentt Jun 14, 2021
      *clap clap*
      Way to go nee chan!
      Aho likes this.
    6. Ahodesuga Jun 14, 2021
      @zetsuen_dark I dunno, i just wanted to write a cute short story about a girl with premonition powers but the story ran away with itself and had me write this *traumatised aho noises*

      @SylviaViolet I don't even understand how my cute lil short story turned into this...thing.... Thank you for appreciating my efforts, I personally think it's shit. :blob_teary::blob_teary::blob_teary::blob_teary:
    7. zetsuen_dark Jun 14, 2021
      *ren's brain.exe has stopped working*

      can someone walk me through what happened??
      Aho likes this.
    8. SylviaViolet Jun 14, 2021
      That turned from a natural disaster to prophetic to horror real quick.

      But well written. The beginning was amazing!
      Aho likes this.