Some Heartbroken-inspired Poems

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I go off from my usual rhyme-patterns this time ✌

The glance you gave in my direction
The moment that your glance froze in time
Is where I would like to remain forever.
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Though I was unable to express my feelings,
You were able to understand me.
Perhaps it was due to our connection
That brought us so close
But perhaps it was due to our bond
That ultimately pushed us away from each other.
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Loneliness and longing are two different things.
While the place of loneliness can be filled by someone else.
The feeling of longing cannot be filled without that person.
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To be obsessed with was the best time.
To be empathized meant they were giving up a bit by bit.
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How can you stand it?
In this war-like time
I couldn't leave you
Nor hold myself together
For even a minute.

~ Seola ☆

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Comments

    1. Seola Jan 8, 2022
      It's surprisingly hard to rhyme. It will come naturally to you, dw ":')
    2. Tech is life Jan 8, 2022
      No. I want rhyme but I can't..
    3. Seola Jan 8, 2022
      'Doesn't make out' - is that a good thing?
    4. Tech is life Jan 8, 2022
      I like your rhyme pattern. It doesn't make out for me