The Universe (Poems)

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Jevanka926

Grumpy and Awkward <3, Female
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I hate the universe
For introducing us to each other
And let sparks happened

I hate the universe
For letting my feelings grow
Without control

I hate the universe
Because it let me hope for something more
Something that turns out,
only exist in my dreams

And when I woke up from my sleep
All of my hopes crumbled
And my heart shattered on the floor
Scattered with no way to piece them together

I passed my days like usual
And my nights with crying
Regretting my choices
Regretting my feelings

And now that time has somehow passed
I'm trying to pick up my heart
Piece by piece
One at a time
Trying to glue them with the empty days I spent without you

I hate the universe
But I also know
That I can't hate it forever

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Haven't been proofread


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    1. Agentt Jun 17, 2021
      @Jevanka926
      Just say you are cute, so it doesn't matter
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    2. SylviaViolet Jun 17, 2021
      Jevanka I've read a few poems already now and apart from very tiny things which you can fix easily, they're mostly perfect as they are.
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    3. Jevanka926 Jun 17, 2021
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    4. Agentt Jun 17, 2021
      You don't really need a proofreader
    5. SylviaViolet Jun 17, 2021
      "Trying to glue them with the empty days I spent without you"
      Loved this line. A very nice metaphor!
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