What's that! #0.1

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Then flashes back to the scene before the protagonist wakes up in the mysterious cave. October 13, 2018. The protagonist's name is Joe Felix, he is 20 years old. An average senior college student that you guys can find anywhere. In this day of age, never even thought of him that he would suffer death experience.

That fateful morning, Joe Felix was in front of an antiques shop that recently opened near his apartment building. He is curious and plan to have a look at the course.

The name of this antiques shop is Bankokuya. This shopkeeper is an old man who has a lot of scars on his face, so he looks fierce. It is unfortunate the contents of the antiques shop almost empty, and there's only stuff that looks common. Well, maybe because it was just opened today.

As Joe Felix was about to step out, he was stopped in cluttered shelf. Joe Felix finds an item that made him interested. It's kind of like flower buds that crystallize without color, he took the crystal flower buds and examine it. Somehow Joe Felix has a desire to buy the crystal flower buds, so he headed to the shopkeeper is being rolling a joint for asking crystal flower buds price.

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Please correct this shit. Give me your ideas or anything, no problemo
Well, This is a continuation of the story's 'what's that!'
Just wanted to remind it if this hasn't fix title. Sorry for short cause i'm not in the mood haha

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    1. Bitter Sweet Oct 13, 2018
      If you meant "How do you get interesting plot ideas?" then my answer is: Take something random and weave it into the story in the most sensible way possible.

      If you meant "What's your opinion on interesting plot ideas?" then my answer is: They're a breath of quirky air that gets one thinking about even more interesting things.

      Btw thanks for the compliment! :blobsmilehappyeyes:
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    2. FalseGod Oct 13, 2018
      Oh my... Love you alot, your description huh.... So good, thanks alot for helping (y)(y):blobnosebleed:
      @Bitter Sweet what do you think about interesting plot ideas?
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    3. Bitter Sweet Oct 12, 2018
      My edit with some embellishment:

      ~Flash Back~
      October 13, 2018. Joe Felix is 20 years old.
      An average senior college student that can be found anywhere. In this day and era, he never even considered that he would suffer death at the age of 20. Not that death would wait for him to do so.

      One unassuming morning, Joe Felix was in front of an antique shop that recently opened near his apartment complex. He had seen some of these before in his home town. Most of them being unique with an assortment of knickknacks and paintings. However, this one seemed different. It was strange with how normal it felt whenever he past by, as if it was always there. Just hidden under a guise.
      Of course he was curious about visiting; these places always seemed to have something strange in stock. This one also seemed particularly special with how dark magenta drapes were hanging in the windows, hiding what secrets it might've held.

      The name of this antique shop was Bankokuya and it's shopkeeper was an old man who had lots of scars crossing his face, giving a fierce appearance. Surprisingly, the contents of the antique shop was quite sparse, with only common things like playing cards and simple furnitures. In fact the only interesting thing there seemed to be the shopkeeper.
      Well, maybe this was just because it opened today and some time would be needed before it's shelves were stocked brim.

      As Joe was about to step out, he stopped in front of a cluttered shelf that was next to the entrance.
      An item had finally caught his interest.

      It looked like crystallized flower buds, devoid of any color. Curious, he reached towards the crystal flower buds and swept his gaze more closely over it. Somehow Joe had a desire to buy them, although no particular reason surfaced in his mind as for why. Perhaps it was a whim he had thought at the time.
      Unaware of what would soon ensue, he headed to the shopkeeper to ask for the crystal flower bud's price.
      As the shopkeeper saw what he held in his palm, a grin spread on his scarred face.
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