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Slowly Felix opened his eyes, the first thing he saw was stalactites on ceiling.
Felix feels there's something wrong, he got up and looked around, there're glowing rocks scattered around.

'Ow shit, where's this? How can i wake up in the cave? Oh i know this is definitely a dream, right!' While pinching his cheeks.
Hope he comes out from this dream, but the result was disappointing him.

Felix didn't give up, next he slaps his cheeks repeatedly while muttering, 'This is just a dream!', finally he stopped slapping his cheeks because it looks like ass.

'This is a fucking dream, really gave me an ass in my face', while stroking his cheeks. In fact Felix was already aware of it if this isn't a dream. But his hopes if only it were just a dream.

'Humph, reality really hurts, WAIT! Why do my hands look small?' Felix just realized if his hands look like young boy hands. He panicked and immediately checked his whole body. Oh don't forget to check his lilbro out if still intact.

'Huuuh thank goodness my lilbro isn't lost, but why my body became like this' Felix was getting confused and try to recall how he could end up here.

As Felix tries to remember, he felt strong headache that seems to have tried to blow up his head. He holds his head trying to stifle the pain though it failed, so he fainted again.

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Please correct this shit!

What's story about that? Haha I don't know why i made it lol

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    1. Bitter Sweet Oct 10, 2018
      I might as well try editing.

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      Slowly Felix opened his eyes, and the first thing he saw was stalactites on a cavernous ceiling.
      Felix felt there was something wrong, so he got up and looked around to find glowing rocks scattered around.

      'Ow shit, where's this? How did I wake up in the cave? This is definitely a dream, right!' He said while pinching his cheeks.
      He had hoped that he would wake from this dream, but the result only disappointed him.

      Felix didn't give up yet though, next he slapped his cheeks repeatedly.
      'This is just a dream!' Until he finally stopped slapping his cheeks because it turned like ass.

      He stroked his chafe cheeks with regret.
      In fact Felix was already aware that this wasn't a dream, but he still held faint hope that this was just a dream.

      'Humph, reality really hurts... WAIT! Why do my hands look small?' Felix realized his hands looked like they belonged to a young boy's. He panicked and immediately checked his whole body. He didn't forget to check if his lilbro was still intact.

      'Huuuh— thank goodness it isn't lost, but why did my body become like this?' Felix became confused and try to recall how he ended up here.

      As Felix tried to remember, he felt a strong headache that seemed to have tried at blowing up his head. He held his head trying to stifle the pain. Although it failed, so he fainted again.
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    2. FalseGod Oct 10, 2018
      Oh my..... Really thanks for editing haha What do you think about story hehe
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