Spoiler [BL] Straight Guy's Goddess System

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  1. jadelin

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    OMG, baby chick MLs and a village full of naked birdbrain flying spirits, LOL! :blobxd::blobxd::blobrofl: That's the first time I've ever read of that idea in a story~ I wish someone would translate this novel now. :sushi_dead:

    But with all your references to buns, dumplings, and chickens, now I'm hungry. :blobsweat: Thank you so much for the summaries, @Kailyria20 ! :sushi_thankyou:
     
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    Not too much of a difference, the bun just happens to be more bread like sometimes has fillings and the dumpling always has filling in it and the skin is thinner.
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    OK this is a very funny section so...be prepared. XD


    In the morning MC woke up to a lot of noise outside, so MC was worried that the 3 little monsters will wake up and murder the crowd and hurried out and saw MS totally annoyed at the crowd of male flying spirits outside in front of the courtyard in the street trying court them by singing, dancing and even bringing food. MC looked at the giant pile of lunch boxes with insects, worms and spiders and stared for a while.

    So SY's mate [just calling him jade, lazy...] came over to see them and said they had the elders go handle the crowd to keep them under control, MS complained to Jade that he didn't' like them and Jade said that one day MS has to eventually choose a mate and have some chicks, how can he stand to be alone, etc and told MC to persuade MS. MC sitting there thinking, he heard the words and understand the words, but why doesn't he understand what's going on...

    Jade expressed how envious of MC's chicks and MS told Jade how adorable they were and the Jade went on about how MS can have his own if he chose a mate and MS actually hesitated hearing this, meanwhile MC logic just cracked...what is this.... male, female, chicks.... MC felt horror for a moment then finally came to his sense and asked them what they meant by calling him female.... MC thinking to himself he's in his real body not the half female body so how can he be mistaken for a female flying spirit but then MS looked at him and laughed and explained why he was female...MC felt like murdering his good friend at that moment. MC cursed the author for coming up with this strange clan for a moment, no wonder the flying spirit clan home town was never mentioned!

    MS spoke a bit about how he doesn't want to join with a male and for a moment MC started to talk to MS about not getting conned into marrying them because he doesn't want this friend to go to that side but then MS said something about wing and no wing thing tbh i don't get it either but MC was a bit stunned. Anyway MS said that MC's 3 chicks are waking up.

    MC went to look and saw that the first to wake up was baby LYY woke up first. MC was worried they would wake up, accept they shrunk then go back to beating each other to death again and so he hurried in and saw baby LYY's gaze lock on him, baby LYY reached out to hold him and then tragedy struck, baby LYY didn't realize his arms were too short and body was too small, so he can't embrace MC like usual... and lost his balance, falling over on top of baby LY.

    MC was scared and ran over to pick up baby LYY, as for baby LY he just frowned then turned over to go back to sleep. MC looked down at baby LYY and noticed that he was stunned at sight of his own body, MC looked at the baby LYY in his arms and saw the shock and sadness and was started to comfort him, he said that it was a result of over exhausting their energy. Baby LYY body stiffen then left MC's arms and silently rolled up in a cloud into a corner.

    MC: ... *This scene is very familiar, just like baby LY's reaction.... aren't you all perverts [變態], what's up with being so sensitive bout it.

    Soon another one woke up, this time it was the little yellow chicken that clung to his clothes all night and currently rolling out of MC's clothes. A bright yellow feathery head popped out with blue eyes, for a moment MC felt his heart flutter and he saw sparkles. [:blobsmilehappyeyes:] He looked at MC silently then lowered his head and stiffened...MC cleared his throat to comfort him but then ZY little yellow chicken slowly shrunk back into his clothes and moved over to the bedside.

    So.... 2 in separate corners...

    MC: o(╯□╰)o

    [I can't...I'm laughing so hard right now..this might take me the longer than usual pft.]

    Something must have happened when we all landed, something changed them. [behavior change] After a while the last one also woke up. Baby LY slept the deepest, even when baby LYY fell on him, he didn't wake up, now he regained his sense and sat up and opened his eyes...those ruby eyes with thick lashes, so explosively cute. MC felt his eyes were blinded by the cuteness, the red hair, ruby eyes, and the white tender complexion just like a doll.

    Baby LY saw a bigger MC and looked down and saw himself small again...and got over it. He immediately smiled at MC, MC had no resistance against such a cutie and afraid baby LY would hurt himself so he quickly held baby LY and baby LY just nuzzled into his chest and reached out with his small hands intending on hugging MC's neck. MC bent his head down to listen, because he thought baby LY wanted to say something but baby LY held MC's face and kissed his mouth.

    MC: ...
    Baby LY after kissing, happily said: Baby, finally there's only us.

    If this voice wasn't soft and childish, it would've been very evilly charming feel to it but..

    Just as MC was going to spank baby LY, the other 2 made a sound and they both opened their cover/clothes and fixed their eyes on them. MC stiffened and baby LY was also stunned, he didn't expect there were 2 lumps there. All of them stared at each other and a red light, gold light, and black mist gathered....MC heart thumped...sure enough...they woke up and was ready to destroy...

    MC jumped up and was ready to go tell everyone to escape when suddenly the lights and mist dissipated and no fighting spirits appeared, it seems they are all in deep sleep and isn't responding. So their hosts end up in his present meng form.

    Baby LY at first thought he was alone with MC but didn't think there were 2 other lumps, he was fired up to kill them when he realized there was no power to use but ofc he also know that since he's like this then the other 2 must be the same...and so he took advantage of the moment that baby LYY and little yellow chicken were stunned and made a cold baby hum and rushed towards them bare handed.

    MC: ... *No words can describe his feelings at this moment*

    Two baby dolls and a little chicken, rolled up together into a ball to fight, this scene has an animation feel to it? MC just stared and MS finally came in to see this scene and was stunned for a moment before he excitedly spoke to MC,

    MS: Your chicks are so lively! So cute! They have a great relationship. Very good!
    MC mouth twitched: Ah, heh heh.

    [Fell out of the chair laughing - well almost xD]

    So MS was so excited he tripped and MC caught him but in that instant everything was silent and MC stiffy turned his head around to see 3 pairs of beautiful big different color eyes staring at them. To be precise, at the spot where MS and MC's body touched, MC broke out sweat and MS just turned around to introduce himself as their uncle. The 3 didn't respond, MC quickly moved away from MS and smiled...this calmed them down a bit so the 2 babies and little chicken expression became mild...don't ask about the little chicken's expression. MC pushed MS out and said he will tidy up the babies, fearing that MS will get killed the next moment, MS offered to help but MC quickly reject him and so MS left MC to it.

    MS left the room and went to talk to Jade, they both wanted to help MC with the babies but decided to wait. MS described to Jade how the chicks just woke up and started playing together, so explosively cute. Jade was excited and envious and commented that MC was really blessed to have 3 babies and even have female and male as well. [:blobrofl:]

    Meanwhile MC turned to the 3 and said they need to calm down and talk about the situation they are in.
    Finally they stopped fighting and each sat on the edge of the bed, well the little yellow chicken was standing actually...still imposing! *not really* MC looked at ZY, and said they landed in the flying spirit clan and asked him how they can leave....MC thought to himself that even though ZY is now a little yellow chicken but he still has to show respect. Baby LYY eyes narrowed and baby LY just snorted, while the little yellow chicken is calm but when he spoke, MC wasn't calm anymore.

    Ahhh....that voice, so cute..as for what he said...who cares about that...wait focus ...MC has to care...must care...what did he say again. [:facepalm::blobrofl:]

    ZY said that the spirit flying clan is located in a special place where fighting spirits are powerless and there's no spirit energy to absorb.... It's an isolated place where it's difficult to find and get to, but once there, the fighting spirits are forced into slumber and there's no spirit energy to absorb to wake them up.

    So there's info about how the spirit flying clan that was rumored to be powerful is a bit distorted, they are very powerfully physically but otherwise fighting spirits and such, they don't have it because of where they are...so long as they don't leave their homeland they are indeed the most powerful compared to anyone else that happens to stumble upon them. They also have a problem of facing extinction as well due to low fertility and 95% of the children being male, therefore females are greatly cherished.

    MC then asks how ZY came to be so powerful, but then ZY said he never said he was part of the flying spirit clan..he then asked MC if LYY was born a demon clansman just because he has the demon clan's holy and demonic spirit. MC still wonders about ZY's current form tho...but stopped asking. ZY then said there's only one way to leave this place and that is to destroy the heart of the cloud's land and it will fall into the abyssal sea but the residence will probably lose their home however MC and the others will live, but MC wasn't willing to be so selfish as to destroy everything just to leave.

    MC was worried that all 3 of them will do something and felt regret that he even brought up this topic so to change the subject he picked them all up and said loudly that they must be hungry now so its time to eat and walked out to meet with MS and Jade. Jade ran out to get some food and came back with some color soft round cotton candy like things. Jade called it 'warm' [暖暖] and its made specifically for chicks to eat, tastes good, easy to digest, and great nutrition so the chicks will grow up strong and not get sick.

    So MC put them all down and picked up a blue one and thought just a moment and turned to give it to baby LYY first. Because there are other people the 3 were well behaved, quiet, cute, cough....ok anyway MC chose baby LYY first because out of the 3 he's usually would have the most mild reaction but the 3 saw this as favoritism. Baby LYY didn't say anything but his big black eyes brighten and he smiled a little...as for red hair red eyes baby LY raised his brow in rage, but he doesn't look the least bit intimidating, if anything, as a result of his anger, his face became rosy reddish and even more cute. As for the little yellow chicken...well..no idea...it's hard to see the emotions of a chicken.... [:blobrofl:]

    MC was held the blue warm down towards baby LYY's mouth and suddenly baby LY rushed forward in front of baby LYY and opened his mouth, took the blue warm and even provocatively bit MC's finger. MC, MS and Jade were stunned and the next moment they felt a black aura rise and all looked at baby LYY and his big black eyes darken and his rosy mouth tighten and then he raised his little fist and punched baby LY sent him flying. Baby LY ofc manage to stop himself from completely falling and then ran back with his little fists raised and so black and red baby dolls rolled into a ball fighting.

    All 3 adults stood there and blinked.
    MS: Ah, they are very close.
    Jade: Ah so lively~!
    MC: Ah..heh heh.

    As for the little yellow chicken, he calmly walked in front of MC and raised his chin with expectation. MC mouth twitched and got the hint and picked a red warm and fed it to his mouth, and so our little yellow chicken elegantly ate the warm....but just as he finished, the other 2 babies came to their sense, knife like gaze shot over and targeted the little yellow chicken. MC felt his hand shake when he noticed their gaze and in the next moment the 2 buns rushed over and pulled the little yellow chicken by the wings.

    MC felt he was going to die laughing in that moment.

    [Dying......:blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl::blobrofl: my 8mo stared at me and smiled with her 2 teeth and my 3yo asked if i was ok and said 'bless you' pfft and set me off again]

    ZY for a lifetime never tasted defeat, he thought they were too weak and so disdain to bother with them but at this moment he was attacked so he kicked out his legs towards the 2 small hands. The 3 chicks rolled together into another ball of battle and MC finally couldn't hold it in.

    Ok, more to come, i just felt like posting up this part, it took me a while because i spent most of it laughing. :blobxd: Gunna go feed baby and the 3yo and be back.
     
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  3. Rilise

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    Aw my stomach
    It's midnight here and I'm rolling while laughing like crazy
    This part is too cute it should be illegal coz it can cause death by too much laughing
     
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    This is so cute and funny. It's amazing that the author created the scene and not make it crack.
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    Awww~ they are so cute and jealous of each other. Now I really want to see what they’ll do when they know that other bird-man are courting the MC.
     
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    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    So a month went by, MC didn't think he would be able to live somewhat peacefully with these 3 for a month here...everyone is very friendly and it was relaxing...if only they can stop courting him and then it would be perfect. Most of the time MC spent it on monitoring the 3 chicks, that is from morning til night, if there was a lapse in attention there may be bloodshed. Baby LY is the most violent, but the one that needed the most attention was baby LYY and the only one that was trustworthy was the little yellow ...ah ZY.

    Baby LY would day and night think of a way to pick at the other 2, but fortunately he's only 80cm tall, even his nails are trimmed so there's no danger. Baby LYY is usually quiet and not prone to outbursts so for the first few days MC was lull into relaxing but then one day when the little yellow chicken as sitting at the window looking out, baby LYY came up softly and snuck close enough then violently pushed him... ZY jumped at the last moment and was safe a sound....MC happen to see this and he was surprised and scolded himself for being negligent..how can he forget about the blood vengeance between these 2.

    MC was reluctant to talk to baby LYY about it but also didn't want to leave the little yellow chicken alone....but baby LYY still came up with numerous ways to assassinate the little yellow chicken. Secretly replacing the bath water with boiled water, sprinkle things to make the little yellow chicken slip, roll into a ball, then touch the stone on the door [?], or attempt to suffocate him with a blanket at night....

    Not only that during the day MC and MS has to deal with the many males that come over to court them everyday.... no matter how to explain it no one would listen...here for thousands of years, it was very rare for wingless flying spirit to be born....so going by their logic to have 2 females appear at the same time, even widowed is really exciting..... fortunately the elders got them in line and lectured them for 3 days and 3 nights which calmed them down a bit....after a while it was calm at the house for a few days....then another crowd showed up this time....it was the parents.

    They all came over hoping to engage their male chicks to MC's female chicks [pfft]....baby LYY and baby LY were mistaken for female chicks.... and so the parents of young male chicks determined to find a mate for them as early as possible. MC felt that he should quickly solve this misunderstanding otherwise baby LY and baby LYY will likely slaughter this town when they recover. Fortunately baby LYY and baby LY were too occupied with their battles against each other to pay attention to the other people atm. MC tried to keep a firm attitude about not setting an engagement but they decided to bring their fluffy little male chicks along the next day. MC was overwhelmed by the meng and end up giving in letting them meet with baby LY and baby LYY. MC was nervous but it end up working out in the end.

    Um..i think ...Baby LY and baby LYY finally noticed the problem and each chose a male chick to kiss[?] and supposedly the engagement is set so no one else came to bother them.

    Well one night meteors fell and MC was holding the group of cuties to sleep when he heard a bang next door in MS's room and heard him cry out. He jumped up to see what's wrong and MS rushed up to MC and excited told him he had a chick.... MC was frightened for a moment...but they both ran back to go check his room and the next moment Jade head over sleepily to ask what happened because he was worried about MC's chicks.

    So MS stuttered out excitedly to Jade that he gave birth to a chick and Jade was excited too and so MC tried to calm them both down while thinking to himself that MS needs to realize he's a man he can't give birth to chicks and even if he can, he can't spontaneously give birth w/o a partner...this thought came up and suddenly MC wondered if one of those male courting them actually got to MS and impregnated MS while he wasn't paying attention and was stunned. MS and Jade ran into the room and MC was stunned because there really was a baby in there, along with a hole in the roof and sitting on the cloud blanket was a small figure in white, with dewy white skin, silver hair long hair spread on the bed covering the body... oh a pretty little girl.

    Even MC was convinced that MS gave birth to a little girl. Then the 'little girl' turned around and MC's heart thumped, silver eyes, beautiful features, even if it was shrunk by alot, but that out of world aura... master...

    SDY smiled: You're not hurt, that's a relief.

    These words if said while he was in his adult form would be very moving and men and women would feel as if a deer was running around in their hearts but at this moment...from this small voice...everyone was silent. MS and Jade suddenly burst with motherly feelings and eyes brightened.

    MS+Jade: Ah! my/your chick is so beautiful and soft!

    MC was silent for 3 seconds then pulled MS to the side and started to talk to him and told him that wasn't his baby, so MS went from surprise, to lost, then quietly relieved, even though he was excited over the chick but after he came back to his sense he was a bit scared..he wasn't ready to be a parent!

    So Jade was listening and then surprised asked MC if that chick was his....MC can only answer yes. MC can already see what Jade was thinking, wow can give birth, good can give birth, can give birth...birth... [你好能生,好能生,能生,生....]

    MC: o(╯□╰)o

    MC finally convinced MS and Jade and hurried to look at SDY....but then he saw his master's shocked face, this master of conspiracies pit digging master lowered his head to see his small body and after staring a bit quietly got up and sat in the corner...

    Yep, sitting in a corner #3.

    MC looked to heaven and felt like throwing a plate!....why are they so common to the point where they even have the same reaction to their physical change! It seems this is a common reaction among people with twisted thoughts huh. MC calmed down and whispered to SDY about where they were and told him that it was because the spirit is forced to sleep so his body became smaller. SDY didn't blink and there seems to be a hint of hesitation in them...MC heart soften and comfort in a gentle voice, he said once they leave they would recover. SDY looked at MC and MC looked at SDY trying to soothe him and so SDY took his hand and said that everything is ok, with MC here, he feels relieved.

    MC was startled, why does he feel as if his black hearted master has some other meaning to his action with him..or maybe he's just being too self-important... SDY finally cheered up and MC was relieved and so he was leading SDY to his fellow companions but then SDY said that once he adapts, he should be able to take him back. MC eyes brightened since he was confident that SDY would have a way out. MC happily cuddled baby SDY and walked off, SDY stiffened for a moment then smiled and embraced him back like a child. While walking MC asked what happened and SDY said explained in a soft cute voice also with SDY's normal gently way of talking was completely enjoyable to MC's ear.

    So basically what happened was SDY had supported the exit for as long as possible to let MC escape and then he relocked on the destination and took a while to recover his energy then finally showed up there late. MC felt his heart warm as he listened. SDY meant to exit out with MC but there was a strong aura the excluded him and since he can't tell who was who, he didn't dare do anything that would endanger MC so he can only be trapped in the space rift until he recovered and opened the same exit again. As soon as baby SDY saw the other 2 babies and a little chicken, he realized what had happened and his face darkened, well MC didn't introduce him, everyone knows each other anyway.

    So MC's place is a lot more lively now, the village elders found out MC had another chick so everyone worked together to build a new bed for all of them to sleep in...its big enough to fit a football team apparently.....they figured MC was here for a month and had another chick so each month he would have another chick so they figured they should build the bed very big in advance [:facepalm::blobsweat_2::blobrofl::blobrofl:] and then they started on expanding the house i think.

    Alright baby feeding time, I think the next one will be the last one...near the end...and the height of the dog blood drama~
     
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    That reaction is a soul ingrained one :blobrofl:
    It'll be a sight to see them occupy all 4 corners :blob_grin::blob_grin:
     
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    So there's something that happens every year, the elders with the other males [i think] would hold up the cloud land and let the heat of the cloud land rest so that the land can continue to float in this abyss. It just so happens that an abyssal storm is surging, that happens only once every thousand years [?] and so parts of the cloud island is getting torn away and breaking apart because of the storm heart of the cloud land is escaping out of the island.

    MC ran back to the house to see that baby LYY is trying to assassinate ZY again but this time he has accomplices...

    Master don't think i didn't see your little gesture just now!

    SDY was the first to see MC come in and hid his look of regret just then, MC immediately told them about the heart of cloud land resting and such and SDY was stunned and ZY looked up at MC...suddenly felt the ground move and MC fell over almost on top of baby LY. SY ran over to tell them to quickly follow him because the heart of the cloud land is coming out right now. MC quickly gathered everyone up, one on the left, one on the right, one on shoulders and chest and go. [:blob_grin:]

    MC thought back to SDY's expression and wondered if there was a connection to his master that the heart of cloud land was coming out. They went out and saw a scene of the clouds dissolving the buildings, roads, and such are slowly disappearing, the males can fly but the females and chicks cannot...so seeing this MC was really worried... MC told SY to go on ahead and he'll catch up... as they followed up, someone told MC that MS was already taken away ahead of them so not to worry and focus on catching up.

    MC saw a couple kissing and felt a bit uncomfortable at the display of public affection ...especially what looks to be 2 men to him but then suddenly felt a hot kiss on his lips and looked to see a pair of big ruby eyes looking at him. Baby LY smiled and softly said that, baby don't be envious of them, when i recover i'll kiss you even better...the next moment there was a cold aura emerging. Before the others can take action, MC quickly rubbed baby LY's hair and told him to be good...baby LY just bit MC's fingers and got a bit of blood and calm down. MC coughed and pull his fingers back after a little while, he doesn't mind baby LY drinking his blood but he's afraid the others will be upset...

    Eventually they got to the safe location and MC was going to leave the 4 with the others and go help but he was told that he should focus on his 4 chicks and MC felt they were adults but then turned around to go back to them but at that moment as he was going back to them... then the land cracked between MC and the 4 and all he can see is the abyss down below. MC panicked and determined to get to their side, he backed up a bit then ran forward and jumped to them and the others weren't able to stop him in time, they wanted to tell him they can get the males to go grab the babies but they also understood that any parent wouldn't bear to do nothing either.

    At this moment the 4 stood there quietly and their eyes pinned on MC, they all had the same thought, that if MC fell into the abyss then they will go with him. MC only had the thought that regardless of life or death he can't leave them...and he made it to them and held them tightly to himself and felt his heart calm down a little. At this moment they saw the heart of cloud land come out and MC quickly told the flying spirit males to go tell the elders what's going on and he told them he should be ok for a bit when they wanted to go over and rescue MC and the 4.

    So now there's a storm and MC wanted to save the flying spirit clan so SDY said there's a way to save them but MC has to convince the elders to let the heart of cloud to rest so they can wake their fighting spirit to deal with the storm...SDY said there's a price to pay...there will be no deaths but perhaps heavy injuries. MC hesitated, he didn't want them to get injured to the point where the demonic spirits would wake up but he can't bear to watch the flying spirit clan get destroyed.

    Suddenly baby LYY held MC's hand and said he will do it if its MC's wish he will grant it...then baby LY not to be outdone pulled MC's other hand and bit his finger and said that he was tired of this place and wanted to leave anyway..and MC shoved his finger in baby LY's mouth to stop any further arrogant words so now he just look adorable. SDY quietly watched this turned to look at ZY and ZY looked at him for a moment then turned away. ZY told MC to hurry up and convince the elders because he doesn't want to stay in this little yellow bird form anymore. So MC got the consent from all 4 and felt really happy.

    MC finally convinced the elders to put away the heart of cloud land for the duration and as soon as they did, LYY, LY, SDY, and ZY returned back to their original forms, but ZY's form with 6 golden wings had the flying spirit clansmen calling him their god. LYY, LY, ZY, and SDY all flew down into the cave? and just as MC was going to follow, MS seems to have regained his memory and asked if MC was leaving. MS understood he can't go with MC at this time, MC told him to stay here for now because its too dangerous and later he will return to get MS. MS told MC that he has to live and they parted.

    So LYY and ZY handled attacking to weakened the storm while SDY focused on their defense, LY focused on defense of the flying clansman cloud island and MC supports them all by feeding them with spirit energy. I think roughly 10-11 days[?] pass and SDY noticed MC getting tired, he told MC to rest a bit but MC said he's fine, so SDY signaled to LY, LY came over to hold MC and forced him to stop. The storm was about to stop soon so its about time they were leaving. LY sent over a blood summon to let the elders know they can release the heart of cloud land back in...but the elders were worried about what would happen if they did that since they knew it had a sealing effect on them but MS reassured them that MC and the 4 knew what they were doing and they won't die.

    After the the land was restored back to normal they all witness MC and the others seem to be falling into the corrosive sea but MS reassured them so they could only blindly believe it.

    MC turned to look at SDY but SDY told him that he was sorry and he can't open the space rift...and soon he seem to have run out of energy and started to rapidly fall towards that terrifying water below. MC was surprised and tried to reach out to catch SDY but LY held him tightly. MC was desperately trying to break free to get to SDY but LY wouldn't let go and MC told LY to let go so he can save SDY and MC felt fear, anxiety and felt like he would suffocate..but then LYY decided to get into a fight with LY at that moment and MC was worried about SDY so he released the entangling love flower which entranced them and then summoned the ice flower to go after SDY. MC reached out his hand but only manage to catch SDY's sleeve and helplessly watched as SDY fell into the sea and felt like a needle pierce his heart.

    MC felt ZY grab him around the waist and then a moment soon after, there was an attack, ZY quickly parried and then MC was snatched away by LYY....did LYY get rid of the trance....but then MC felt something was out of place...he suddenly turned to look at LYY and told him to look at him but then he saw his lips smile strangely and say too late..MC realized the demon king sliver of conscious woke and took over.

    The demon king released a huge amount of energy but clung to MC and shouted that LYY swallowed him, he was defeated by a mere human....at this point it seems the demon king just wants LYY to completely die with him... Then he crazily shouted again that LYY wanted to live but he won't let him live and then started diving towards the sea, MC heart jumped, master was already swallowed, he can't let LYY fall again...so he clung tightly to LYY and tried to pull him upward, but the demon king clung to MC also pulling him downward and screamed that that he also has to die because MC helped LYY devour the demon king.

    MC felt the pain of his flesh and blood corroding and the next moment he passed out, the entangling love flower effects suddenly stopped and ZY and LY started to regain their sense.... ZY looked at the sea and frowned and didn't hesitate to dive in.

    LY was the last to wake and looked at his empty arms, his eyes blood red with tears, he looked down at the sea and let himself fall into the sea.

    Ok one more part or 2, its getting super long and i'm afraid of losing progress lol
     
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    MC died, LYY tried to protect him as best as he could at that last moment of struggle but MC's body had corroded to the point where the it cannot function enough to live....suddenly the system that was silent for a long time spoke...

    Body is severely damaged, will begin mandatory recovery!

    MC was stunned, then shocked, and thought..Am i immortal? Damaged to that extent still can be recovered?

    The system actually replied, Damage less than 90% can be repaired, but the gold consumed must meet requirements ...if there's not enough gold then the recovery will be suspended.

    MC's mouth twitched and felt irritated, lack of gold, but i have no body to go earn then what!

    System calmly answered: During body recovery, host will enter a life body[?] and so you can still start and finish tasks and receive rewards.

    MC thought to himself that the system had this set up in order to squeeze more work out of him but then was worried about the others so its better to live than to be dead, the then asked when he can enter the body, the system said anytime...MC was really worried about LYY and said he wanted to wake up immediately but then the system said tat according to the target's preferences, you have a new type of body to choose from.

    MC was startled, so does this mean he can avoid that half female body, he has a choice now? He nodded and then saw the 2 options, 1 was the half-female goddess and the other well his male body copy....everything is exactly the same as his main body...so everyone wants to see is his male self....but why nude, his clothes was it eaten by a dog!? The goddess body has clothes by why is it his own look-a-like has none! ...According to the target's preference.... so you all rather i have no clothes....
    (╯')-╯┻━┻

    MC was frustrated looking at these 2 options full of traps, so the goddess has clothes and the pure man is naked.... he decided to stick with the pure man since he has 3 sets of spare clothes anyway...it would be strange to go back to the female body since everyone seen his male body and he doesn't want to be thought of as strange for wanting rabbits.

    MC opened his eyes and looked around and concluded they were at the seabed, above there's the sea but they seem to be separated from it and it looks hazy above and on the ground there's a lot of crystals of all sorts of colors glowing...there's no moon or sun but these countless crystals on the ground altogether makes it bright enough to see clearly...eventually MC saw LYY on the ground and felt his heart go cold.

    LYY was curled up as if trying his hardest to protect the body in his arms and was still holding on tightly even tho that body is no longer there. MC felt pain and his eyes burned a bit with tears, he knew LYY was trying to protect him.....fighting with his all with his body to protect him, even so, MC's body had corroded too much to survive, if the system wasn't present then all that would be in LYY's arms would be a mutilated corpse...LYY woke up only to see a corpse in his arms....no matter how powerful LYY would be when the demon king came out he wouldn't have been able to save him... MC shook these thoughts away, he quickly checked over LYY and cautious in case the demon king was still lingering...it seems LYY is injured enough that the demon king is probably out also. [?] MC thinks the only reason LYY is still alive is because his physical body was already gone and he's just mainly a spirit body[?] but he still needs to recover.

    MC tried to absorb spirit energy and found nothing, he start to panic, LYY might worsen at this rate, but then he decided to use E.H., MC felt a bit nervous, last time he used this on LYY he responded but this time there was no response at all. The spirit energy keeps flowing but its like flowing into an endless abyss. Finally MC had to stop when he got the alarm warning him of his low energy... MC realized he was so worried he forgot to get dressed so he put on some clothes and found a lot of food in his bag, all of this was what his master prepared for him, food with rich spiritual energy. SDY extremely spoiled MC as he filled his bag with so much spiritual food enough to support several full E.H. uses.

    After a while MC noticed that some of the spiritual energy in the food was weakening and found that these colorful crystals on the ground was absorbing it somehow... he decided to break a small one and got ready for battle in case and as he thought as soon as he broke off one a it turned into a large ferocious beast and as soon as he defeat it it turned back into crystals again. MC picked it up and broke it and a rich spirit energy was released and MC quickly absorbed it. Each color seems to correspond to the elements and so he gathered a lot of red crystals to help LYY recover..however although all his wounds are healing, LYY still remains in a coma....but as he was going ton continue with crystal hunting he got a system notification...

    Purple target danger factor is too high, please quickly go rescue.

    MC was surprised, he quickly opened the system panel and saw there were 2 tasks.

    Save the red target: 60%
    Save the purple target: 3%

    He was confused for a moment then saw on the quest column the list of names, LYY is red, LY is purple...so that means LY is severely injuries and MC noticed it dropped to 2%....he select the option to rescue and saw the choice to select between teh goddess or male body again and was a bit frustrated the system didn't understand the crisis at hand and quickly picked the male body and quickly found LY's body but checked himself first then dressed and looked over LY. MC didn't know why LY would fall into the sea but his condition was much worse than LYY, MC was worried about the blood crystal flower breaking out but found that it was sleeping due to exhaustion as well.

    LY's body was a bloody mess, but he has an immortal body which can recover even with a drop of blood but the problem is that this place is devoid of energy so LY would truly die this time around and so MC gathered some crystals and started to feed spirit energy into LY...but while he was doing so he realized he felt LYY move...so he looked at the system and found part of the interface that was like empty boxes before now have a 3d active image and LYY and LY are shown in their respective frames. MC discovered he can switch between his bodies as long as he interacts with the respective image of either LYY or LY and so now he can monitor their health easily.

    While checking on LYY MC saw LYY moved as if trying to contain something in his empty arms and he seems to be frowning even in a coma he had a nervous look. MC startled felt his heart hurt a little and broke another fire crystal intending to feed him more energy, but LYY felt his touch and as if awakening from a nightmare grabbed his hand tightly. MC thought LYY woke up and asked him if he was feeling ok, but other than gripping his hand, LYY was still in his coma and MC just let LYY hold onto his hand.

    Back to LY, even thought he has non-stop giving LY spirit energy via robe spirit but the progress of recovery got to 50% then stopped....he doesn't know how long it will take for them to wake up and so he continue to hunt crystals and the monster's difficulty increases with he size of the crystal. Sometimes alot of them would pop out, after a few days of gathering he went back to LY, he was still at 50%....then MC realized he needed to use blood....LY is not a spirit body like LYY and so he used E.H. Finally LY reached 60% and the system notified him that his E.H. upgraded to intermediate heal [I.H.]...MC was relieved but then he got another notification.

    New task appear please be prepared.

    MC frowned, then found out there was another task target.

    Save the blue target: 30%


    MC wonders how ZY also fell into the sea and MC got anxious and wonders about his master...his master fell in first and he found everyone else...he wonders if master will be able to hold out but thought that he should trust the system, the system hasn't done anything to harm any of them if anything its has guide MC to save them and so he chose the male body again and appeared near ZY and put on his last set of clothes, following this pattern...then there will be a 4th body therefore...would that mean he would be totally naked in front of his master? If he goes like that something big might happen, ...uh maybe he can just take clothes off of one of the bodies with coma patient and switch to the body that will see master. Uh forget it for now maybe he can get the goddess' clothes and dress his male body.

    MC found ZY easily due to his bright golden wings and he saw that ZY wrapped the wings around himself but his back was unprotected and so it was bloody. So MC just now mentioned that every single ML thus far are naked because their clothes were corroded away....lol. ...Because for LYY and LY they were mostly covered in wounds so he didn't really think about the lack of clothes where as ZY's the front of his body is completely unharmed so... then turned around quickly and wondered just when did he turned into a pervert to stare at a pure man's naked body with a red heart...this disease, must treat it!
    MC hurried away to go collect crystals.

    http://www.danmeila.com/book/20150210/16762.html [Near the end of the page and into the next page]

    After feeding ZY spirit energy via the robe spirit til he reached 50% then decided to use I.H. because ZY is not a spirit body like LYY so to progress he will need to use it..he's a bit worried about how I.H. will work but then felt his body lean forward suddenly touching ZY and lined up lip to lip, nose to nose, and eye to eye.

    Wait! Eye to eye, ZY woke up?!

    MC panicked and wanted to get up but his body was under the skill's control and didn't move and even started to deeply kiss ZY and ZY suddenly grabbed him and MC regained his sense and hurried open the system panel but he didn't get to the skill column when ZY forced him closer with his wings enfolding them and then he changed their posture and deepened the kiss. MC felt like he his brain was being electrified and was entranced and forgot where the skill column was. Although ZY just woke he was eagerly kissing MC with those blue eyes sparkling as he stared at MC. MC felt his body getting hot..but remembered that ZY was injured and so he got to the skill column and started spamming at it to stop but then realized that he can't stop it. MC was distracted by that surprise and ZY seems dissatisfied and held his chin to angle to kiss him fiercely....well it can't be stopped so just let it go...anyway its healing ....except it didn't just consist of merely kissing...this skill actually made his body reach out to ZY seductively stroked him.

    MC understood this sentence, if we do not do then we will not die...but its just that he was framed by the system..he actually wasn't trying to go to his own death. I.H. was beyond his expectation....once started it cannot be stopped and the area of transferring heal is larger than before..before it was just kissing and tongue but now as long as their body is touching it will the healing energy will surge over. So ..the skill induces the host to constantly expand body contact..not only the tongue but other places as well....

    MC in his heart was trying his best to be a healer but in the eyes of others he seems to be very hungry. [:facepalm::blob_grin::blobjoy::blobrofl:]

    Kisses, touches, and his body seems as if eager to cling to the other person, and so MC's one side is cursing while the other is entranced. MC tried to focus on control but after a while he became confused and ZY was very satisfied when MC responded obediently. After thousands of years, he was always chasing after the peak of martial arts but now he feels the urge to possess, monopolize and completely own this person. His appearance, sensitivity, and well behaved personality suits his taste and not mention his rare fighting spirit and rare spirit body. If he belonged to him, he can enjoy always enjoy this sweetness and get the healing and comfort after battle [?] He's always been alone for a long time, but it feels wonderful to finally have such a person to accompany him. There is also the 3rd technique of the binding spirit immortal robe, just thinking of it made his blood surge. Life is so boring, but now that he met him, it will never be boring again. ZY smiled, he looked at MC in his arms who seems to be very confused and landed a kiss on his lips.

    Softly, detailed, and full of explicit affection. When MC finally came to his sense, the I.H. finally finished and he is totally filled with shame... MC was filled with confusion he tried to think of why he wasn't disgusted and even liked it and realized he was completely bent. MC was stunned and ZY kissed his forehead:

    For now, wait til you get to integration stage and i'll certainly satisfy you.

    MC: (O_O)

    ZY explains that he's a spirit body and if he has intercourse with MC then he will end up taking over his spirit due to his lower cultivation so he can't resist him, therefore once MC gets to integration stage, MC will 'integrate' with his spirit and then will not be effected then. ZY was sitting there earnestly explaining to him why they didn't go all the way but actually MC didn't want to know! Then he thinks about why the explanation came about and remembered how the skill made him react in such a desperately hungry way; even he wouldn't believe otherwise!

    ...Forget it, dare to do it so accept it, even tho it was because of the system but he really cool[?], will get tangled again saying otherwise will be hypocritical. Then he suddenly remember ZY said he was a spirit body just now...if he knew earlier he wouldn't have used I.H. MC felt hate, thought himself so smart, so assume that ZY was a flesh and blood body so when it hit 50% he didn't try to continue and end up using I.H. thus entrapping himself.
    Well no point in thinking about it, how would he even guess that ZY was a spirit body.... there were some small clues, because the blue summon rune was able to call him...and then the system calling him the blue target...

    MC told ZY he was there to help heal him because ZY is still at 50%....ZY knows he can heal himself with the gold crystals because he can feel the energy in them but since MC wants to help heal him then he is willing to let him, he never had a companion before but he vaguely remember that he should treat his partner with tolerance and spoil them...so he'll just do as MC wants. MC just wanted to avoid being awkward so he has no idea about ZY's thoughts.

    So MC and ZY goes and hunt crystals and MC saw how easily ZY took down a large crowd of them and felt a bit down for a bit then ZY tells MC to hurry and absorb the energy and kissed his lips, he wants MC to hurry to integration phase so they can... MC immediately changed the topic and said he wants to heal ZY first and immediately used the robe spirit to transfer spirit energy.

    MC was switching between his 3 bodies as he focused on helping them recover and felt that this was a great way to interact with them since it will keep them apart therefore they can't kill each other. After 7 days or so ZY finally got to 80% and MC was worried about his master since the system didn't notify him at all and so he thought about going to search for his master on his own. ZY end up asking their relationship and MC fully trusts ZY at this point since ZY helped him a lot and he feels that he likes ZY a great deal for it. ZY wants to confirm his guess since he saw them in the flying spirit island and so MC told him that SDY was his master and MC is his only personal disciple. ZY asked if they had a master and disciple blood bond and MC said they did and ZY thought to himself that the blood that MC was given is the same as SDY's life, so if MC doesn't feel anything then his master should be fine [not sure].

    ZY then asked MC to clarify his relation with LYY, MC was startled and ZY asked how MC felt about LYY, since its obvious that LYY likes MC but then MC started to stuttering and ZY stopped him, he doesn't need to say anything. MC felt chaotic in his mind as he the signs he deliberately ignored started to become clearer...he didn't want to face it but he has to face it at some point.

    ZY mentioned that LYY's vengeance was all started by SDY and ofc MC knows the story behind it...at some point SDY would gain LYY's trust until LYY found out that LX was directed by SDY then from then on LYY just wanted to world to taste how it was like to lose everything and everyone...but because of MC the story kinda derailed....SDY didn't get to manipulate everything completely and LYY was not pushed to that extreme...but then ZY mentioned that MC and LYY in an intimate relationship and LYY will eventually have an enmity with SDY, then as SDY's personal disciple, how will MC deal with it? MC felt panic....he forgot about this and he was trying to not let LYY blacken but he forgot that SDY can try to use him and then how will LYY feel about it then, he would be caught between the two and he doesn't know how he will face LYY if LYY thinks that MC was just doing everything in order to deceive him.

    ZY observed MC and realize that he's very concerned with LYY, if the affection wasn't deep then would he be this distressed....ZY gripped MC's hands and made him come back to his sense, he just gently told MC not to worry about it, just tell LYY clearly and if he doesn't believe MC then there's nothing he can do then he can only part....and so MC heard this and relaxed.

    MC then asked ZY [calls him senior btw] to help look for SDY...he doesn't know what SDY was planning but SDY has always spoiled him and treat him well so he's clear about his good points. ZY wanted to ask MC one more question...ZY gently held his cheek and pulled him closer so their forehead is aligned and looked at his eyes, this made MC tremble due to nervousness at this intimate position, ZY smiled and slowly asked MC:

    What am I to you?

    MC's eyes widen and full of shock, ZY stared at him and didn't miss a single thing then chuckled and kissed those trembling lips, the lips didn't move but they were so close together that they can feel hearts pounding. MC felt something is not right, but he couldn't pinpoint what exactly was wrong. ZY with his sexy voice softly told MC to close his eyes.
    MC was confused and closed his eyes and the next moment felt a stormy hot kiss, his neck was stroked by a hot hand, his waist was pulled closely and he was held up to ZY's body like a sacrifice, as if sending himself up.

    ZY kissed him for a long while, until MC's body being to instinctively push against him but ZY wasn't willing to let go and his eyes was fiery as he wasn't satisfied yet, he wants more, much more...however he has to wait. He's willing to wait patiently, now he could wait slowly for his heart, always keep him near in his arms, until integration stage, then he can have him, he doesn't lack time, with his infinite life he will slowly let him completely belong to him.

    Um...yea... 1 more... i think definitely just 1 more...its sooo .....i can't help but be detailed so many kyaa moments :blobsweat:
     
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    Ahhhhh my nose, my nose.....blood everywhere.... Master Kailyria20 my greatest thanks for the summary. Forgive this disciple for the rude request of the :blobnosebleed: chapter if you know it. Ahhhhh life's good.....
     
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    We don't mind if if your descriptions are lengthy and more detailed~ :sushi_thankyou: This is one of the most epic System endings ever, thank you so much! I really hope a translator-sama will pick up this story after your wonderful summaries! :blobmelt:
     
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    OK I'll pop it on the right spot of the spoiler

    Apart from that strange kiss, MC didn't notice anything strange again. ZY would help him search the seabed and constantly hunt down the crystals for cultivating. After a full month he didn't find any traces of his master, but his cultivation has been rising rapidly and is at the peak of spirit boundary on the verge of integration stage. This place is unique throughout the world for the spirit energy crystals and then with his robe spirit his cultivation soared.

    The entangle love flower completely obediently since it figured out that if it listens to MC and not do things on its own then it will get as much spiritual energy as it wants. MC looked over its skills, 'Seduction' ....i don't want to seduce anyone! The flower shrunk back a bit, it quickly told MC that if the host doesn't want to use it then just level it up more and there will be other skills more viable. Finally the entangling love flower made it to transformation phase and the next skill it has is puppet manipulation, that is MC can control people with lower cultivation than himself with 100% rate of success, there's a rate of failure for those at his cultivation and higher.

    It was also thanks to the entangling love flower that he was able to break through to Integration stage..., during the month besides cultivating, LY and LLY recovery went up to 75% but they were still in a coma and still no trace of master. The seabed seems to be nearly endless, if it wasn't for the system there was no way he could've found LY or ZY.
    MC reached the bottleneck to break through to integration stage, ZY carefully guide him and can enter MC's spirit space and help him cultivate and expand it but he can't help him through break through to integration stage.

    The key to integration stage is the melding of the spirit body and the host body, the spirit isn't mindless but it still needs the host body to give it wisdom in order to thoroughly meld together to break through. This is one of the most dangerous hurdles, to grant spirit the spiritual wisdom and after that stage is the problem of the spirit body becoming selfish after granted wisdom, if not vigilant in dealing with it, then it will cause a backlash and the body can burst and die.

    The moment MC melded with the pink flower he felt its thoughts, explicit desire, boundless, intolerable, and unspeakable.... MC got excited and suddenly back to his sense he quickly started the pure heart mantra and now the flower became obedient and stabilized. Then his body felt a flow of heat and saw that it was because of the robe spirit, because the pink flower's leading, the robe spirit also gained wisdom and MC was vigilant with it and once they melded, he felt a sense of relief, like a union of friends that have parted for a while, very positive and energetic like bathing in the warm sun.

    MC excited told ZY that he broke through, ZY told him to first do the ice flower then after it stabilizes they can talk. MC looked at the 3rd technique of the robe spirit and realized why ZY would be excited over it. Thinking of how much effort ZY put into helping him these days, MC asked ZY if he wanted to try it, he wasn't sure if he can completely copy ZY's ability but they can try until they get it right also said that ZY needs to be lenient and not....

    http://www.lwxiaoshuo.com/44/44787/10109900.html [i found that danmelia is actually missing some o.o....anyway it starts here and continues all the way to ch90...]

    ZY pulled him close and eagerly kissed him, his voice low but its was sultry and made one's ears tingle upon hearing it:

    No hurry, i'll make you feel good first.

    MC stunned then he felt his body burn and tried to push hard, but the next moment he was distracted.

    LYY just woke up...woke up at the wrong moment, MC was a bit overwhelmed. He switched over to the body near LYY but he can clearly feel ZY kissing him and the feeling of tongue and gentle touches of his fingers moving downward making him feel faint.

    But he still has his control. Just as he stood up next to LYY, LYY opened his eyes and and glanced around and found MC, MC called LYY's name softly and tried to ask him of his condition but he stopped because his own voice sounds strange.... even thought it was a different body but still the same soul and so he was still effected... his face started flushing and he didn't dare speak again. LYY pulled him over to hold and didn't' speak a while but MC felt that LYY's voice at that moment was low but very sexy...he didn't know if its because he's feeling dizzy but he felt his heart race, and felt heat surge as if burning.. LYY looked at him gently and smiled...there's a saying that people who don't smile often, their smile is the most beautiful and that moment MC was dazzled. MC doesn't know what he was thinking but suddenly felt like kissing LYY, those cold lips, charming taste, confusing him, then his head muddled, he tiptoe and kissed LYY.

    Warm, intoxicating, enduring his trembling heart surging, MC pressed his lips clumsily against LYY's and suddenly LYY held him close and with long suppressed desire kissed him back hard.

    MC felt as if he was going crazy, because at that moment ZY was also kissing him and he was being so stimulated that he almost gave in to such fervent kisses.

    Its just getting started as MC sense that LY woke up...his mind was muddled atm.

    LY knows he died plenty of times and endured the pain of death and life again over and over and so he thought he really wouldn't die, however this time he thought he would die because this place was empty of spiritual energy and so despite this he wasn't afraid, he was very calm and a bit lost. He's been alive too long and was bored and when he finally found a person he wanted, but can no longer have him. LY didn't understand love, he only followed his instincts, he liked MC's blood, he also liked him as a person, he wants to possess him, conquer him, want to completely own him...he always followed his heart so that's why he just fell into the bottom of the sea.

    MC for full 3 months, constantly provided him with blood and blood energy, with care and attention, and guard him, never abandoned him...LY has resurrected many times now but there was no such person like now. The regeneration of skin, the flesh melding, this feels bad but as long as he feels him around, he wouldn't feel the slightest pain, he only wants to wake up sooner, as soon as possible and then...

    LY suddenly woke up under this strong obsession, and without hesitation he pulled MC into his arms his eyes bright filled with passion and seduction. LY stared at MC and with a voice overflowing with emotion he asked MC to become his wife for all eternity, MC eyes were misty and stared at LY for a while before he stuttered out LY's name, LY stared back w/o blinking and told MC to promise him. MC frowned a bit, he didn't hear exactly what LY said but he saw LY woke up very happy and don't want to make him angry and after a bit of hesitation he nodded.

    LY saw MC nod and his eyes bright full of joy and he took a dagger out and cut his wrist and the blood start to flow and a sweet fragrance spread, MC was stunned and anxiously asked LY what he was doing, LY didn't reply but raised his arm up to MC's mouth and said that a complete contract needs to start from scratch. MC frowned but he was entranced by the fragrance, he wasn't a blood kin but he has LY's blood in his body and soon the instinct roused by the blood took over, MC gave into indulgence and drank with an entranced appearance which made LY feel thirst and LY suppressed his rapid heart and then his gaze fell on MC"s neck. LY smiled and licked his fangs...That delicate skin hiding the sweetest blood that he was never able to forget, now he's right here and they were going to be together forever...exchange of blood, the union of their body and they will be together eternally. Finally LY gave in and bit down and felt MC tremble a bit and tasted the nectar of ecstasy.

    MC felt light sting on hi neck and felt his heart skip and then there was no pain only felt as if his blood was rejoicing and he felt pleasure...as the blood flowed between them he felt heat spread everywhere beyond control.

    MC is barely in control, ZY fingers are wandering, LYY lips are hot and fierce, LY's blood, their all stimulating him so much his mind is being overwhelmed losing himself.

    [ahhh i'm feeling shy putting all these details (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄]

    MC felt like fireworks went off and end up thoroughly venting and 3 times the pleasure overlapping, made him completely mindless as his brain went white and his mouth parted as if whispering. [not sure~]

    OH but its not over, no one wants to let go, they want to monopolize him, how can they let him run away again.

    ZY with his blue eyes burning, closely to his ears: Don't be afraid, give me your body.

    MC trembled and for a long time did he return to his sense...until the feeling of his spirit space being invaded and ZY merged with the robe spirit and the entangling love flower burst out with joy and once again infected him.

    MC protested softly which tempted people's hearts further.

    LYY kisses his eye and brow, gently moved, full of affection: Don't be afraid, He Wei, I"m here by your side forever.

    The most beautiful sound, stimulating his ears, which made people want to sink into it.

    LY let go of his neck and kissed him with the scarlet blood, sweet and feverish, as if they were caught in ecstasy. MC once again fell into a daze.

    MC sobered up a bit when the system notified him and then he felt extremely happy, it finally found master, MC immediately chose a body and after landing he felt a bit dazed but this is a new body so he needed some adapting. MC was trying hard to keep control over the feelings melting him from 3 other bodies and then looked around and saw a figure suspended in mid-air.

    MC stared at his master who seems to be completely ok, even his clothes are intact. MC thinks about how his master is ok while LY and ZY was injured even though his cultivation should be comparable to theirs. It seems the robe that master has on is a rare guardian artifact for it to completely protect master from the terrible sea. MC was relieved and as he moved forward, SDY eyes opened.

    Light gray eyes that are beautiful but indifferent as if untouchable turned to see MC and those empty eyes brightened up ....

    SDY: You've arrived.
    MC heart soften as he heard that gentle voice and whispered: Master i feel relieved that you're ok.
    SDY slowly landed and walked over to MC, MC felt his heart hammer and couldn't say anything.
    SDY walked up to him and looked down then chuckled: Why don't you have any clothes?
    MC stunned then suddenly realized he was naked...his face red, he hurried and tried to find some clothes but then remembered that he doesn't have any sets left, suddenly LYY touched a certain place and made his head go mush, MC barely kept himself from falling to the ground. SDY looked over him carefully and reached out his hand to touch his neck then slowly slid them down. MC was constantly being stimulated, how can he resist, and although the touch was light but his little brother responded. SDY eyes fell there and stopped motionless. MC was dying of nerves.

    SDY voice filled with a sigh: Can i understand this as ....you thinking of me? [not sure]

    MC heard this and felt his head heat up and his mouth parted. SDY embraced him into his arms and the cold clothes and soft body didn't cool him down but fanned the flames. MC felt he was going to go crazy. MC wanted to speak with SDY but he couldn't because the other 3 where stimulating him too much and he was afraid he would make a wanton sound. Until their actions became wild, MC felt his last bit of control broke. He wants...really want...

    SDY noticed his excitement and looked at him then softly asked: He Wei, who am i?
    MC voice shook: Teacher....Master...
    SDY: Like me?
    MC eyes widen, trying to suppress his restless heart and suppressed himself to answer: ...Like
    SDY eyes narrowed a little, pressured him with his eyes, he induced him to answer: Even if you ignore the world, against heaven and earth, are you willing to be with me?
    MC finally can't endure any more and clung to SDY and desperately whispered: willing....please, please give it to me.

    At the same time the other three heard this sentence.
    He wants, his He Wei wants him.
    Already intended to join with him, what are you waiting for?
    Four different places, four different people, but at the same time possess a single person.
    MC completely in chaos and finally let go, desperate, he found that he trusted them.
    Trust each and every single one of them.

    在让人窒息地短暂疼痛之后是让人彻骨的欢愉,而这种快乐又以四倍叠加,那是……会让人发疯的致命快|感
    After a brief bit of pain, came such pleasure enough to drown one, the happiness was overlapped 4 times, that is...enough to drive a person crazy from the fatal pleasure. [uhh idk if i got this right]

    MC thought he would die, because all 4 bodies at the same time reached the peak and he felt as if he couldn't breathe and then his mind blank and completely fainted. When he finally woke up in a very terrible way, he felt his body was very sore and weak but they still continue and only felt like his head vaporized again...just regained his sense and sank once again.

    MC couldn't describe absurd situation and was afraid to think about it, he faced the four of them and there was no confusing them, their temperament is different, preferences also different, so he was astonished as to why they have an incredible unexplained similarity...

    Kisses, touches, long foreplay, and uh..various positions and postures are different but their movements are completely synchronized rhythm is like one person.

    Someone...

    A thought flashed in his mind and MC felt it faintly....what to think, how can he confuse the four of them who doesn't have the tiniest hint of resemblance... but MC can't help but think that way because of the system...he also has 4 bodies... but he dismissed the idea, he does have 4 bodies, but these four bodies only have his one soul, the four bodies are not independent, so they are not 4 separate people.

    Don't know why MC suddenly thought of his first dream, its been a long time but he remembers it as if he dreamed it yesterday..

    >He always remembered a man who stood in the sky negative[?] hand [or maybe missing a hand idk]...he had silver hair, but dark black eyes, but the tears in his eyes were like real tears[?], soaked into his heart and those wings.... he felt it was familiar but... <


    Absently thinking, he heard a quiet voice, asked him what he's thinking of, MC looked up and saw black eyes, LYY was above him, he seems to like looking at MC's face and love looking at his expressions, and this made an impact on MC, as he saw all of LYY's sexy body and as MC admired his body, LYY made his move and suddenly MC blanked out and found himself back in the system space.

    MC didn't understand why he was back here but finally didn't need to **x to death so its worth being happy. Then the system gave him a blow.

    Please note that the main body's mental state is too low and needs plenty of rest to support 4 bodies at the same time.

    MC: ....

    Sure enough he's still dying!

    He just thought this and then the system decided to answer him:

    In theory, good sex and love joy will enhance the strength of the main body's spiritual power but first time facing four at the same time is beyond the existing mental strength limit..please continue to work hard and practice more or....

    Stop stop! MC didn't want to hear anymore of this explanation. MC asked when he can wake up and the system said that he can within 3 hours and also he should show some restraint and its best not to.... MC cut it off and said he won't be so reckless next time.

    Ok i couldn't finish it, the biggest reason is because of the different websites with and without certain details and information thus completely throwing me off..like on this lwxiao site there's more details of the intimate scenes, but on the danmelia one there was an important flashback that wasn't present on the lwxiao and so i'm starting to think maybe i missed some important details because i read mostly on danmelia x.x...well try to finish up tomorrow but enjoy this one for the night... i probably shouldn't have went into detail tho lol

    http://www.danmeila.com/book/20150210/16766.html [half way down the page]
    >He always remembered a man who stood in the sky negative[?] hand [or maybe missing a hand idk]...he had silver hair, but dark black eyes, but the tears in his eyes were like real tears[?], soaked into his heart and those wings.... he felt it was familiar but... <

    I was looking for this passage on the other website in order to get a better idea of what's being conveyed but then realized i couldn't' find it and end up finding more details on the intimate scenes instead o.o...
     
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    ... WOW. Wow. Wow. 4x at the same time? 4 different consciousnesses at once?! [mind blown] :blobsleepless::aww::blobmelt::blobnosebleed::blobowoevil_horns::blobdrool::blobdizzy::blobrofl::blobpopcorn: I really need to learn how to read Chinese now. @Kailyria20 , you've successfully gave me a new year's resolution to learn Mandarin so I can read danmei smut. :blobsweat_2:
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    :blobpopcorn: Oh finally the love-making scene made an appearance, and four at the same time too. The author have quite an imagination. :blob_grin: Thanks for translating this, it must have been quite *cough* *cough* harsh.
     
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    I prob need to get a red carpet soon.....
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    *cracks fingers* Time to MTL a little... Lol, after all the teasing, we get an extreme love scene, but it's probably going to be first and last haha. Can't see how the author can top it. Maybe an extra with ML's complete body? Crossing my fingers.
     
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    MC got a system prompt waking him up after 3 hours and MC hesitated, he shouldn't wake up in all 4 or he'll repeat the same mistake and so he chose to wake up next to master since his master disappeared for so long...plus they didn't really get to talk..

    MC woke up and felt pain and soreness and understood why the system had him wake up 1 body first, it was good before now he's tired and sore...really retribution comes fast. SDY was surprised MC woke up so soon, he told him to sleep some more.... although MC was sleeping in the system for 3 hours but actually in those 3 hours SDY was working him so he was surprised when MC woke up. SDY said he would apply medicine and told MC to rest a while and MC nodded and said something i'm not sure, but the voice was hoarse due to so much screaming...and the tone was a bit sharp. SDY heard him and felt very good in his heart because he made MC scream out his name, ignored his pleas and ruthlessly said stimulating words, and he still has that impulse but held himself back because its been a whole night and if he continues, he's afraid he can't stand it.

    SDY applied medicine and all those traces of love last night faded away and MC felt much better but he was distracted by SDY's features and SDY turned to him and asked good looking? MC paused then slowly said he was good looking and SDY smiled at him then kissed his lips and said he thinks MC looks better. MC just blushed and looked away shyly and this made SDY feel like a brush swept over his heart. Initially SDY was going to hold back since he was applying medicine but they were still naked and this dishonest boy was seducing him again and so the touches became sultry and by the time MC realized what went wrong he was eaten clean again....he woke up from the peak and felt that staying in the system might be better, if it happened once then 2,3,4 rounds won't be far behind and master is safe and sound...there's no more need for talk. MC fell asleep tired in SDY's arms and SDY wasn't surprised, the medicine has the effect of calming and add on that they just worked hard it's expected that he would fall asleep.

    [...ok will try to shorten it now x.x all this kyaa moments really dragging it out lol...next time won't do too much details, i only did so this time because i felt that it showed MC finally couldn't run away from his feelings and being bent and there was a hint about the 4 too even tho it was cut off on danmeila]

    SDY summoned a portable house with courtyard and laid MC on the bed to rest...apparently it's a really special one where it can be warm in the winter, cool in the summer, keeps the body in shape, healing, and even the aftereffects of love making will be healed up.... [why do i feel like it's made just for that lol] SDY tucked him in and kissed his forehead and felt that he wasn't a good to anyone for a long time and felt like being good to MC, because he's fragile, obedient and vulnerable...he likes the feeling of cherishing him, this lit a flame in his empty heart. His disciple, the only one....if he could he would spoil him all the time.

    SDY finally checked on the other 3 and a dark glint entered his eyes as her frowned, he saw a sleeping youth that looks exactly like his disciple with each one and his eyes narrowed when he saw LYY and ZY look up in his direction, it seems they are aware of someone peeking on them...SDY waved away the mirror...he got up to look down at MC with unspeakable emotions in his eyes.

    MC woke up and thought they returned back to the sect but then walked over to SDY when he was called. SDY waited til MC finished eating and drinking then asked MC how he got to know LY, LYY, and ZY. MC was startled and wasn't sure how to explain. SDY stared at him and said that MC never left his side but somehow he got to know the others and even formed a relationship with them so he asked how it happened and then SDY showed the images of LYY, LY and ZY with a copy of his body. SDY softly asked again what's going on. MC heart was pounding as he thought the situation was worse than he thought.

    MC finally looked at SDY and asked if SDY will believe him and SDY said he would believe what MC tells him, and so MC said those bodies are his but he doesn't know why has a such an ability to always appear by SDY's side and MC said that it started after he awakened his spirit robe, at first he wasn't able to control it, he saved LYY, saved LY and met ZY... SDY asked if MC's robe spirit had such and ability but MC said no and so SDY suddenly thought of something and asked to look at spirit and after looking a while he didn't find anything else in his spirit space but then he told MC to bear with the pain and then moved towards his lower abdomen.. MC didn't think SDY can find the system since he has no idea where it is either...but he wonders if SDY was looking for the 'dantian' in this world that cultivation system doesn't exist...

    However the next moment MC felt sharp pain and just as MC was confused over having a 'dantian' at all suddenly noticed there was a half-moon shaped thing, it flashing brightly and MC got spammed by an alarm from the system that there was an external invasion and will go into forced sleep mode. That thing is the system!? MC wanted to speak to SDY but then he felt dizzy and fainted. SDY wanted to catch him as he fainted but he was suddenly pushed back by a strong power and he felt pain in his chest and coughed up blood due to the strong backlash and his eyes were full of amazement.

    Didn't think that it's been sleeping inside this youth's body, he's been searching for it for thousands of years SDY smiled and his eyes were gently looking at MC, sure enough, this is his chosen person. Then he remembered the other MCs and his eyes darkened...then his brow loosened....that's easy.

    MC was back in the system space and saw the system flash red and it seems to be healing...he wasn't sure what happened but he never thought it was hiding in the dantian of all places but this world, that cultivation system should not exist so why did SDY know to look there....MC also wondered why it ended up in his body...what's the connection between the targets, the tasks, the skill and all of them....then he was startled as something was happening with LYY.

    MC woke up with a bit of pain but LYY was holding him while flying on his sword, the place they were at before had suddenly opened up a large abyss-like hole where you can't even see the bottom. LYY flew into the hole and MC why LYY wanted to go in there but LYY felt like there was something there he felt compelled to go see. MC was nervous but they saw a red light and after a while it grew larger until it seems endlessly large like the sun...LYY said it was an entrance but didn't say to where, when they went through they found a city ...it looked like it should be in the human's territory...but there were people of all clans here, why would they all be here together weren't they at war?

    MC and LYY were startled by this scene in front of them as they walked along, MC asked if there's nothing that LYY wanted to ask him, but LYY gently said that MC doesn't have to say anything, he doesn't care what MC's relationship with ZY was, there's only 2 things that will not change, he will kill ZY and MC can only belong to him. MC felt an unspeakable emotion, he felt that something wasn't right but he doesn't know what to say... LYY only wants to avenge his hate and so he doesn't ask...on the surface it seems like absolute trust but MC felt bursts of piercing in his heart which made him flustered he wanted to speak but LYy started to kiss him intensely. MC maintained clarity and realized there seems to be a hint of deep anxiety in that fierce kiss, MC heart soften and hugged LYY and kissed him back.

    MC feels that since LYY treats him like this, he doesn't want to hurt LYY. MC wanted to tell everything to LYY but didn't have the chance yet and soon they see the city entrance and there's a plaque that says Forgotten Immortal City [忘仙城]. MC asked if LYY has been there before, but LYY only frowned and suddenly formed a brush from spiritual energy and then wrote out those same characters in the air and MC noticed that it looked the same, as if the one who wrote the words on that plaque was LYY but then LYY said he doesn't remember this city. Everyone in the city treats LYY with a lot of reverence and respect and call him master. MC was confused...but LYY also reacted naturally as if he knew them....they welcomed him back, these people made up of all different clans ...they threw a welcoming feast and that night LYY and MC just went to sleep.

    MC soon woke up again next to SDY and SDY asked where he went all day and MC was surprised then smiled and SDY asked if he was with LYY, MC just nodded and SDY looked at MC gently then asked MC, do you really think LYY likes you? MC's heart missed a beat because he has a bad premonition, the first thought was that he can't let his master bewitch him and MC tried to avoid the subject but SDY told him to not run away. MC then wondered if there was something his master saw that he didn't notice and so he asked SDY what he thought. SDY ignored that tone as if baiting him and there's a hint of worry in his eyes [not sure]

    SDY begin to sow seeds of doubt in MC's heart, he said that LYY is only obsessed with him that's not love, that even if he was a corpse LYY would still treat him the same as the only light in his life, LYY doesn't care if he was alive or dead so long as MC was by his side forever. This made MC think of the words LYY said to him before...so that wasn't absolute trust but perhaps LYY doesn't dare face it....the words were like hammers smashing on MC's heart as doubts begin to spring up. ZY and MC was obviously close so why would LYY treat him so well...LYY is not cowardly, not afraid of hatred...but in fact it seems he's just waiting... MC's heart jumped and he paled.

    SDY observed MC not missing anything and when he saw MC pale he embraced him and talked to him gently like the most gentle lover with the most beautiful words he told MC that true love is mutual dependence, empathy, and consideration, I wholeheartedly want to be with you, protect you, I also feel jealousy, resentment, dissatisfaction, but ultimately i care about you. SDY whispered in his ear, I want to know your thoughts, what you do, and know where i am in your heart.

    MC was still shocked by his thoughts and he did hear SDY's words but it has yet to enter his mind that was still occupied by LYY's issue, but suddenly he came to his senses..but did not interrupt SDY. SDY is only looking at him, forehead rested against him, MC can see the affections in SSY, his eyes full of emotions are not false. SDY kissed him and hugged him gently and said that MC is still young, so he can't tell apart what's real yet, so just listen to him, MC didn't say anything.

    SDY said that LYY see you as a thing, LY likes you for your blood, and ZY, now that you're at integration period, you already know that he's after your ability to copy spiritual skills, it is his heart's desire to pursue it...so don't be bewitched by them, stay by my side, ok?

    MC's mind cleared up and he regained his calm, he didn't say anything and stayed quietly in SDY's chest and after a while he wearily said he was tired. SDY just laid him in bed and tucked him in and gently told him to sleep and that he will be right there beside him. MC eyes flickered but nodded and held SDY's hand and fell sleep. After a long while SDY gently left and closed the door, MC suddenly opened his eyes and stared at the door.

    Master what are you after?
    Want me to destroy LYY or is it the system in my body?

    MC felt his heart jerk at this thought and couldn't go back to sleep so he switched to LLY, MC asked LYY what happened that it was suddenly day, he only left for bout half an hour and LYY said that this place was an illusion, a fragmented memory and so time flows inconsistently and he said he's seen this place before in his dreams, he every since he was born, but he realize that that he seems to be different than everyone else ...because he can understand and learn everything easily, MC asked if it was his past life memory but LYY said it wasn't ...its like a body's intuition.... to died and live again... [not sure if i'm wording that well] So they stay here for roughly 10 days and MC notices how LYY was a lot happier than before, this city treat LYY like their master and god for saving them.... MC wanted to talk to LYY and tell him everything but seeing him happy like this he was reluctant...then thought that LYY never really believed him anyway but still treats him with affection so this is enough.

    MC woke up next to LY this time and was stunned to see him smirk at him and said

    Baby, woke up? Lets have more fun! Beautiful but vulgar ofc it can't be anyone else but LY, MC told him to roll but LY just nipped his lip and MC was trying to push him off when suddenly the land cracked and MC was suddenly shocked as he felt the ground from under them disappear...MC quickly summoned the ice flower and LY quickly summoned his blood crystal flower and MC saw a deep abyss again.... LY has to go to the Forgotten Immortal City as well? LY said there was something at the bottom and took MC along to to it, as they got close MC saw a purple light and once they got through there it is again the forgotten immortal city.

    MC asked LY if he ever saw it but LY he said he didn't...MC asked if he ever saw it in his dream and LY said he only ever dream of MC not something boring like a city.
    MC:...
    LY said that he doesn't even dream...
    MC said how can LY not dream anything at all
    LY: Baby, your husband is not human.
    MC glared: Don't call me that!
    LY: Ah, I'll listen to you baby *gently nipped MC on the lips and the smell of blood spread*
    For normal people this show of anger but for the blood kin this is a show of love and affection.
    MC was dazed and almost distracted for a moment then he manage to calm himself and told LY to stop, LY said there's no one nearby so MC doesn't have to be shy but MC told him it was the forgotten immortal city so how could there be no one.

    LY froze and then asked MC to confirm again, LY asked MC how did he know and MC said there was a plaque but LY said that there isn't one. MC asked him why it seems to concern him and LY said that ever since he came into existence the name forgotten immortal city were the 3 words that were present in his mind and he never forgot it. When LY came was born he was actually one of the first blood kin to come into existence and suddenly MC remember an image from that dream....

    That man that fell from the sky, silver snow hair, black night eyes, those beautiful wings floating in the sky stained in red with the color of his blood falling to the earth. MC suddenly had a trace of a clue take root. MC was worried about LY meeting LYY there but decided to see what would happen. He silently followed LY into the forgotten immortal city and the city seems changed, the building seem a bit older, some familiar faces are gone, most people have fighting spirits now and some have reached transformation ....the citizen seem to look at LY curiosity rather than with admiration, LY commented that he liked the way the buildings and palace were built since it suits his taste.... once they got to the palace tho that same man that greeted LYY before has turned into a middle age man and call LY as master as well.... at first MC thought LY reply negatively but he actually replied the same as LYY even their expression, words, and posture are exactly the same.

    The disciples seems concerned about their cultivation not going as fast as they would like and LY promised them he will find a way to help them and give them potions to help...MC found this to be a bit strange but continue to observe....after 10 days suddenly LY bent over in pain and MC started to panic and asked what was wrong, LY assured him he was ok but MC tried to give him blood and tried to use the robe spirit to help and it only made the pain worse. Finally MC tried to use I.H. but the system told him that the target is not stable, so they cannot use the skill.

    MC was shocked and confused...suddenly he decided to go ask SDY...but at that moment LY grabbed his hand and MC said that LY won't leave don't worry but suddenly he looked up with a hoarse voice and asked MC what he called him...for a moment MC thought he saw LYY but... he suddenly thought of something and went to check on LYY and there's a problem at this end too, except when MC saw LYY's eyes they had turned red... MC's heart started to thunder...

    Just who is this..?

    MC carefully held LYY and tried to help him with the robe spirit and I.H. but the results are the same..both are under great pain and he can't do anything to help. MC felt desperate and wanted to go to his master again but LYY gripped his hand and LYY was going through a lot of pain but fragments kept pouring into his mind confusing him with its rush and those scenes kept stabbing at his heart....his eyes are dark again but there was a red ring in them...

    LYY: It was him!

    MC was distressed over LYY and held LYY and told him to wait for him and he'll be right back but LYY started to talk

    LYY:He's the one who killed my parents, destroyed my home, everything was manipulated by HIM!

    MC felt his heart stop, LYY found out, but how did he find out, then MC a bit confused but put on calm facade and asked what LYY was talking about...

    LYY was under a lot of pain but grit his teeth and stared at MC as he said that MC was SDY's personal disciple, MC wanted to stay calm but now he panic and wasn't able to say anything, LYY then chuckled, and said that MC knew all along and started to squeeze MC's neck, MC could only feel that he can't breathe and his mind was blank but he couldn't resist. LYY stared at him and his eyes seem to darken with madness as he demanded MC tell him why MC stayed with him and although MC wanted to answer but he couldn't due to LYY's tight hold so he only looked at LYY with tears, eventually LYY loosen his hold to let him speak, MC clung to LYY and said he was sorry, where as LYY became even more tense and asked if MC admit to it.

    MC tried to explain but because he was panicking and distressed it didn't sound right, after a bit he calm down enough to tell LYY that originally he didn't know about SDY's plan because he became SDY's disciple when the lotus zen sect was already destroyed so he had no idea about the plans at the time, and he didn't want to hide the fact that SDY was his master but he was afraid of LYY's reaction and that LYY wouldn't believe him. MC then promised that he never thought to hurt LYY, never betrayed him, as long as LYY wants him to stay...*MC finally admit his real feelings* then he will stay forever.

    There was only silence then LYY looked at MC while he was dealing with his pain, he mentioned that MC had married to LY and even exchanged blood, you even...

    LYY made a brittle smile at him, MC was startled that LYY found about this too, LYY went closer to MC and stroked his nape and said that MC sacrificed his life to save LY, and helped him regain his power, even helped him suppress the demonic blood crystal flower...for LY MC had done everything regardless of life and death repeatedly...LYY whispered and looked at MC's skin and felt his blood surge, and smiled evilly...he likes your blood, does it taste delicious? I'll try it. MC tried to move but LYY hugged him tight and licked his neck before he bit down, MC trembled but couldn't say anything because something was happening with LY as well.

    LY looked at MC while suppressing the pain of his soul but couldn't stop the pain in his heart as he confront MC about LYY, he said that MC liked LYY and MC felt chaotic at this point, LY felt pain in his heart due to the bitter betrayal, before was so happy and now feel despair and felt madness take over...

    As much as he loves him now he wants to kill him, lifelong companion....ridiculous! A horrifying thought came to mind as he focused on MC, suck out his blood and make him into a doll so he can only belong to me, no thought no consciousness, just listen to him, real dependance, no lies and no more betrayal!

    LY smiled and his red eyes darken to the same paranoia as LYY, he bit MC's neck and the blood poured out and drove him crazier, MC just stood there as his heart was consumed by despair and didn't react to anything until the both of them fell to the ground unconscious....he felt a cold breeze at his neck..then came to his sense...he hurried back to SDY.

    MC ran to SDY in tears to beg him incoherently to save LY and LYY and SDY hugged him while he listened and suddenly his eyes brighten then turned to ask MC if what he said was true and MC felt there was something wrong with this reaction but confirmed it and SDY said that MC has to take ZY to the forgotten immortal city. MC asked if that would take away LY and LYY's pain and SDY asked MC if he ever lied to him.

    MC then asked why SDY he got ZY to destroy lotus zen sect.... why have LY destroy LYY's body and open the door to the nether realm, why have LX befriend and betray LYY. MC wanted to know all this time, but didn't dare ask but now LY and LYY are both in a bad situation and he wants to know...he can't risk endangering them any further. The moment MC asked these questions, SDY felt the urge to kill, his plans no one ever found out but somehow MC knew. MC wanted to know why SDY hates LYY so much.... MC knows master has a way of saving LYY and LY but he hope to know why he did all that to LYY so that he can figure out a way to minimize the danger.

    SDY tried to maintain his facade by saying that MC was mislead by someone but MC said that ZY told him, and LY also told him some things but also he met LX and he said he was able to discern from all this information and he wants to understand why.

    SDY said he didn't hate him and that no one else in the world would care more about them than he does, but he can't explain it clearly. MC saw SDY's expression and felt like he caught a hint of the truth but found it hard to believe....suddenly MC asked what SDY's relationship with the heavenly master of forgotten immortal city and SDY suddenly panicked and gripped MC's throat..this was SDY's bottom line, now that it was expose he felt anger burst out. MC was afraid and directly spoke out his conjecture.... The heavenly master was SDY and SDY is the master of the forgotten immortal city. SDY started to squeeze down and MC felt dizzy but he refuse to give in...he saw with this reaction that his guess was right. MC just stared back at SDY, while SDY looked at MC and feel his pulse and blood and he only needs to use a bit of force and he'll be quiet...but after that there will be no such person anymore...

    As this thought came to mind, a terrible maddening pain rose, not only his heart but also his soul, even if he was angry, resentful, disappointed but still sad...he thought he never feel anything like that again but it seems he just didn't meet the right person.... SDY slowly let go...this is the only He Wei ...not with him...

    SDY said that he would not harm them, but there are things he forgotten how to explain, LYY is not the son of Ling Changting [lotus zen master] LY and ZY has lived for a long time, beyond imagination, one of them is dead but still alive and the other doesn't know what death is. LY will die but will live again but the price is to experience excruciating pain that thousands of people do not want to face and ZY will never die, but he has nothing in his life, no peers, and forever unable to reach his goal, forever lonely enough to drive one crazy. LYY is the lucky one, he also will not completely die, but reincarnate every thousand years although no biological parent but no memories, even if every life is full of thorns but he can bear it.

    SDY suddenly held MC tight enough as if he can't wait to meld them together: I am the most miserable, I carry all his memories as he reincarnates, but all of the experience he went through, that sword, the curse, his dark life of only blood and betrayal that ends with despair and loneliness, he forgets but i have to bear it all.

    MC then asked why SDY would blacken LYY, SDY buried his face into MC's hair as he said he had enough, he wants to end it all. This time LYY reincarnated early and so there was a catastrophe and so he couldn't look after LYY and so he entrusted him to LCT and thought that due to their relationship that they would be kind to him but due to LYY's excellent talent they were afraid of him and wanted to kill him and so SDY had to interfere...and so he thought that since he has to interfere anyway why wait anymore and so he led ZY to destroy the lotus zen sect and wanted LY to destroy his body so he can completely let LYY degenerate into the devil, only this can wake the fierce sword of blood remnant completely so he can get true power and end everything.

    MC was shocked and wondered about the relationship between the 4 of them when he suddenly saw that man in his mind again... suddenly pain and MC came back to his sense again. SDY asks MC to help him and that he would not harm them... take ZY to forgotten immortal city and come back to him. MC asked if ZY will also get LY and LYY's memory and SDY nodded. MC asks what happens if it doesn't work and SDY only laugh and said that they won't die but life will continue on for them until they all go crazy.

    MC felt pain in his heart at this answer and paled and said he will help. SDY hugged MC and kissed his head and said he was glad to meet MC. MC stiffened and said something...SDY's eyes brighten when he heard it...then MC switched to ZY.

    ZY looked at him and commented that MC seems to have been through alot and MC asked him to go to the forgotten immortal city with him. Then the land immediately collapsed under them, ZY quickly held MC and MC just tiredly told ZY to held to the blue light in the abyss. MC starts to realize something and that each person has their own period in time at that city and the key is their color that the system identified them with....... this false seabed why would it have these memory fragments appear now. MC speculated why didn't SDY failed to succeed before because it was obvious that SDY was preparing for this since he was completely unharmed when he fell into the sea but then he realized something and checked the system and now he only see 4 names and beside each name was a red heart...

    MC recalled all that happened after he fell into the sea and blushed then realized that he seems to be part of the reason of why these memory fragments appeared and said to SDY

    I seem to exist for you.

    SDY just thought MC was just comforting him.

    I came here for you, Yes he transmigrated here and the system was here and have always been near them, thought it sounds hypocritical but like fate he's been guided to them to meet them and even please them...this fate is the system in his body... Finally ZY and MC arrived at the forgotten immortal city. MC noticed the changed, there are more people at transformation stage this time and even some at spirit boundary, that same man is now older but when he looks at ZY and greets him there seems to be fear, caution and jealousy... MC can see what they feel, they've tried hard to cultivate and they are still aging almost near death and yet their master is still youthful and powerful even after thousands of years....if...

    MC was shocked when they got to the palace, it was the palace from his dream ....that tragedy was about to happen, MC thought that he won't let it happen, since he can copy ZY's power can these people actually take down ZY and his doppel, but unfortunately at this moment ZY started to feel pain and MC told him they should go in first but then MC realize that no one reacted to him....from the start no one saw him...if that's true then does that mean he can't change what's about unfold? ZY held on to MC's hand and paled and MC told him to be careful of these people because he can't help at all....the scene from the dream appeared but with more details.

    The disciples turned against him and wanted his blood in order to extend their life i think basically they are getting older while the heavenly master never aged or weaken in power so they grew jealous and turned against him and wanted his blood and body in order to supplement their own from what i gather. MC went back to SDY since he couldn't change anything, SDY asked if ZY was there and the memory started and so SDY smiled said he never thought he would go back to the forgotten immortal city again....then the land collapse and the abyss opened up again....MC was going to say to go to the black light but its already black so how can one tell where it is.

    MC explained his thoughts then mentioned his worry of ZY and SDY said to not worry because that's not the moment when the ZY falls....SDY that in fact the worst of it is yet to come. SDY quietly told MC everything from the start, originally he was called Duan Qing and was called Heavenly master [Tianzun] he was honored as a god in this world but he was not originally of this world, he came from another world with another cultivation method with Dantian and after he finally made it to Mahayana he tried to break through the void but at the critical moment made a mistake and fell and his body should've been destroyed but he abruptly tore through space and arrived into this fight spirit world.

    He discovered that his cultivation method didn't work here and tried to find another way and found there was no form of cultivation at all in this world due its primitive state. His cultivation slowly started to regress until hundreds of years later he finally discovered fighting spirits and came up with a cultivation method for them. However his disciples became ambitious and selfish and betrayed him which is the current memory stage that ZY is at. Basically sum this up he was betrayed by every single clan just about and even the ice clan that he trusted the most. The reason he didn't destroy the other clan was because he still needed them for their spirits in order for the aura of heaven and earth to be active so he can continue to cultivate.

    However after the ice clan betrayed him, he became thoroughly disgusted and hatred and grudges filled his heart and the scene that MC saw was when everyone in the world rose up against him, finally before he completely fell he sacrificed his life and released a ancient forbidden curse, when those that cultivate fighting spirits reach the age of 17 they will experience the trial of god.

    MC asked if DQ died, and SDY hugged MC and told him that he can't die, the curse took his life but the soul still exists, its just fragmented. LYY is talent, ZY is power, LY is instinct and SDY is memory. MC said that they were separated for so long to the point where they developed their own personalities so why continue, but SDY said that they are all incomplete, the pain of lacking a soul is horrible...every cycle the spirit will suffer unspeakable pain but they have been through it thousands of times. MC can hear the bitterness as SDY spoke...then he asked why they haven't become whole yet...

    SDY said he failed every time, the others do not remember only he does. MC asked how he can help them and SDY he's not sure but it should be related to MC and his gaze fell on MC's belly where the system is. SDY just hugged MC and kissed his head...MC smiled at him and thought about a way to let them come together again after a few tries he finally got one but it required them to kill each other then MC once again thought strongly for a way w/o them hurting each other and then he suddenly thought back to what he told SDY, that he was here for them and suddenly he spoke to the system, he wants to know its purpose and intention, regardless of the price he had to pay he will help the system and then he opened the shop and found a piece of paper..this handwriting he recognized it... the letter from the heavenly master. After he read through it he realized the system is him, he opened his eyes on all 4 of his bodies despite the system's warning of his insufficient mental capacity, and MC thinks they probably all hate him now that they have each other's memories, and probably deserves to be hated by them but everything is already done there's no point in regretting it.

    MC looked at each one and in his heart he likes LYY' persistence, appreciates LY's bluntness, admires ZY's power and admires master's wisdom...he loves them all , he wants to be with each of them but its an insult to them...but it happened somehow...but regardless he wants to tell them.

    If i can, i want to be by your side forever.

    At the same time they all gripped his hand, he doesn't know their thoughts but just kissed them...everything started as an accident but now he's willing. MC immediately started to feed spirit energy to their dantian and he willed the system out of his body...well its actually a soul...at the time when the heavenly master soul fragment...none of them knew there was 1 more soul that broke away and that's the reason why SDY failed. This soul was a thread of his obsession, it wandered the world and finally after countless years it regain consciousness and by chance throughout space it found a destination. It chose MC because it liked him and thought the others would like him too..it was the most primitive thought but the most pure. So MC finally started the chant for the soul rejoin technique.

    The energy wrapped around the half-moon thing and it went into their bodies ...MC stayed focus and he doesn't know how much energy is needed but SDY finally realized what MC was doing..his eyes widen in fear as he clung to MC, voice trembled...how can this be... The four of them connected realized it...LY roared at MC to stop and LY and LYY used their fighting spirit to feed spiritual energy back to MC but they found out too late. MC willed over all of his power and the technique succeeded, the memory illusion disappeared and the 4 of them appeared together in a space and then a man appeared, Floating golden six wings, silver hair, deep black eyes and the tear mole under his eye. MC knew who it was but he's too far now...

    I'm sorry, although i promised to be by your side, but i will have to break it.

    Losing spirit energy wouldn't make him die but MC was born with one less soul and was destined to live to only 20, if it wasn't because of DQ's wandering soul that joined him and made him transmigrate, he would've died early..now lived for a while, he felt it was worth meeting them...he exists for them..now they're safe and he's done....just reluctant to part. MC wasn't afraid to die, but he was afraid to part with them....but luckily it won't be too long...once he dies the thoughts will disappear ...even if he's reluctant once he doesn't exist then...

    Abruptly a sound from his soul ....Don't want to leave!

    MC opened his eyes and felt blank....he felt as if he slept for a long time, and felt dizzy...he sat for a long while before he reacted... he was overwhelmed with emotion as he thought of his name....Duan Qing. Did the technique fail? He look around and saw his familiar room and paled.... he went back to bed and felt that this was just a dream, he has to wake up and he fell asleep but his pillow was wet. MC woke again and saw his room again...he felt despair, was it just a dream, his feelings, his sacrifice, them..all gone. MC felt that he can endure anything and face anything but right now he can't face this. Can there be such a realistic dream... he saw the book open on the computer and read their names and completely collapsed.

    MC felt pain from his heart rise up and spread as he was filled with bitterness and desperation and started sobbing....although he's alive but he can't find the reason to live...

    If it was a dream, then why let him wake up.
    If it wasn't a dream, then why not let him die.
    MC admits he's a coward but ...why such cruelty.
    Gave him everything, then tell him everything was false...how can he face it..

    MC went into a depressive state and sat there for a whole month before the landlady knocked at the door and woke him out of his daze due to concern. MC realized that a normal human being wouldn't be able to survive without food or water that long. After he reassured her that he was fine, he trembled as he checked his body and found the 3 spirits weak and asleep... he started to cry, it's not a dream, they're real, now he found a goal, if DQ can break the void and make it to that world, then he cultivate and will try as well...even if there's only a small chance then he will try it.

    MC was about to leave to find a more suitable place for cultivating when he felt a familiar flow of energy and he felt his heart skip, full of fear of disappointment....he had hoped but didn't expect more... eventually a familiar black hole opened above him and slowly a man appeared. Golden wings, dark eyes, silver hair and that tear mole... MC stared afraid that this would just be an illusion but that man embraced him and his voice was full of emotions...

    Finally found you.

    MC was startled and then completely relieved he hugged his neck and started to cry.

    Thought he completely lost him but didn't expect that he can still have him.

    I broke my promise, but thank for keeping my promise

    Let me stay with you.

    Um there's an extra but taking a break, been distracted all day long lol but wanted to reach the end before posting..~~
     
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    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    MC kept looking at DQ and didn't' want to take his eyes away even after they went through the black hole back to the world of fighting spirits. DQ took him and landed at the Qing Luan peak and went straight into the palace, MC immediately kissed DQ, he missed him too much, after a whole month of thinking that they would never see each other again he wanted to prove to himself that DQ is real and the best way is skin on skin contact.

    DQ was more anxious than MC, MC waited for a month, but DQ waited for 900 years. MC's soul scattered in this world and he had to recollect his soul which took 300 years but that did not wake him up...although DQ locked in his soul, MC's conscious wasn't there. MC didn't originate from this world so for DQ this was a great shock to him. However he never gave up, 600 years later, he improved his cultivation and he finally found MC's home world and was able to find MC's conscious.

    So conscious and soul joined together for a true rebirth, even so MC was born 1 soul less, if he didn't fix this then there will be risk...

    So he will give it to him.

    It was his and he will give it back to MC.

    At the peak of the moment, MC vaguely saw a small half moon.....and it merged into his body...MC eyes widen as he realized what it was

    DQ kissed him and moved until the body under him could only moan, his eyes thick with overflowing emotions.

    Just one less soul for him, but its only a once a century pain of soul tearing, but this pain is nothing compared to losing him...

    I'm willing to pay whatever it takes to keep you.


    MC finally got out of the room, his waist just about broken, fortunately he has high cultivation or he would surely die in bed....although 4 people became one person, but this 1 person has 4 people's stamina!

    MC felt a bit overwhelmed! MC then saw a beautiful woman and wondered who she was when he saw 2 little buns follow her, 1 was a adorable girl and the other was an arrogant little boy. MC had a deja vu feeling seeing them...YW and TY...but how did they get smaller..

    Then the woman came up to him with her voice a bit choked...brother you finally woke up.
    ....wait isn't that woman YW...he was only gone for less than a year...

    The little girl called MC uncle and said he's been sleeping for 900 years..

    MC was stunned... 900 years!. Then he asked YW for details, MC immediately rushed back to DQ....he only dealt with that desperation for a month and felt like he'd gone crazy but DQ had wait for him for 900 years!

    MC move to tears, and he entered the room and saw DQ casually dressed in robes and felt his head hot and rushed up to him. DQ chuckled and asked if he didn't get enough and MC said yes and kissed him earnestly and started to tell DQ that he loves him over and over again repeatedly until DQ just kissed him and held him up and went straight in. Looking at MC dazed, DQ changed their position and leaned against his neck and whispered softly that he loves him too.

    Well there's a price to pay after indulgence, MC was in bed for a few days and suddenly remembered something..

    Mei Shao!!!

    He thought it had only been a month, but it was 900 years...how is Mei Shao ....

    Far away lord Mei Shao head of the plum family[?] sneezed and wondered who was gossiping about him... he calculated with his fingers and pondered, MC should be awake now right....how come no one told him...Should he go over to go look or wait...

    From behind there was a thump and MS turned around angry, Mei Xiao Huang [Mei little yellow?] Can you stop shaking[?]! this house is full of your feathers!

    MXH flat mouth: Chirp, daddy bad, I want to go to my father!
    MS listened and immediately felt as though his head would explode, now the flying spirit clan can cultivate fighting spirits, their cultivation rose like a rocket, he was defeated not long ago and then get overwhelmed again....extremely rotten to the core!

    Shut up shut up! Giving birth to you really was the fall of 8 life times, MS was nagging but still resigned and picked up the feathers.

    OK DONE! I might work on RSG tomorrow or the day after depends if my kids don't disrupt too much lol...or do a quick spoiler for a short novel someone did ask me for another mpreg.
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    :blobparty::blobparty::blobparty: Great Job!! 42 made me :cry: at the end. The extra was quite nice and relaxing after all that drama. Thanks for translating this entire novel as a spoiler!
     
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    :aww: Thank you SO, SO, SO much for your detailed translations! ♡❤♡❤♡❤♡❤♡ This is one of the most unique, fun, and hot danmei ending ever! :blobnosebleed: I tried looking for fan art for this story, but I guess it wasn't that well known in the BL circles. :blobmelt: It's too bad, since fanart for this would have been absolutely amazing and smutty. :blobxd: