Spoiler Pleasing Start-Over (BL)

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  1. ludagad

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    SYH -_-;;; Also some dudes I already forgot from some novels with transmigrated doctors. Het novels. The ML's in BL usually get more character. Most start as icebergs and are kinda annoying, before they warm up (after hundreds of chapters) and start doting on the MC, but by then I've already lost interest in them. It's not like I want them to dote on MC from the start, just be more interesting as characters, u know...
     
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  2. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    And here I'm gone :blobninja:
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    :blobfearful: Gone where, come back! :blobpeek:
     
  4. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    lately too many system world hopping with the ole similar reason behind the world hopping.
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    Oh I see xD;; Would hopping is my jam right now~ The system is just kinda there tho, like a panel - there's no interaction. After each arc, MC comes back to the real world, 10 days pass each time he's in the alt worlds. I kinda like the setting and the reasoning here better than most other world hopping novels tbh. This one you can tell was thought out beforehand, while I've seen some that seem to be thought out at the last moment lol. Anyway, hope to see you back here when you're into world hopping again (and get bored with the other genres). Hate to see a vic- *cough* reader slip away.
     
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    not going to lie, i'm excited about the SM world
     
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    :blobfearful::blobfearful::blobfearful:Which arc? I'll thread with caution...
     
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    That's what caught my eye, too. I also like that the ML exists in MC's original world and all the running around the MC does is for his sake.
    DITTO. :whistle:
     
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    its one of the military worlds lol good luck with that XD it's not really a sm world, but sm play but eh i'll take what i get.

    im not so sure about which sec that is, you'll have to ask @azure_sea about that
     
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  10. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    not that im not into world hopping, i mean if it gets translated i would still maybe read it, but im very picky nowadays about plot xd
     
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    That arc not exactly SM world but in that arc ml was more rough towards mc. Mc did some kind of dangerous mission, ml was angry and he punished mc with 50 whip. Mc wasn't injured but he feel a lot of shame and anger. When ml saw mc's tears system started download in the end mc couldn't protect his chastity.
    Every arc ml ask mc to call him father lol
     
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    I was hoping it won't turn into a thing cause it gives me bad vibes honestly. with the MC beign an orphan and them livin in a society with extended lifespans...please no. Drop the father kink, I beg thee author.
     
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    I am reading right now arc 1, and i am telling you guys this novel is incredible:love: This is actually like quickly wear the face of the devil:X3:. the characters personalities are very similar or the same (almost):love: and the theme of the arcs are really interesting, is like in QWTFOTD were the MC take revenge for the cannon fodder and the ML is a powerful seme obsesed with the MC. :blobnosebleed::blobnosebleed::blobnosebleed::blobnosebleed::blobnosebleed: the best.
     
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    Binged this story today...

    The world is a futuristic setting, but with a imperial government. It's also got 3 genders: male, female, and "yaci" (ie. feminine looking men with reproductive capability). The additional twist is that in this world, music can literally create miracles, and hence good musicians are both extremely popular and highly sought after.

    MC's original background is that his grandfather used to be the head of the Second Army. His dad is one of the few males who tried to make it in the music business, and his initial talent attracted the original MC'smom, who married him against her family's wishes. However, the dad eventually couldn't progress in his music career, and had to give up his dream and become a businessman instead. He grew resentful that he had to rely on his wife's status/connections for his living, and got involved with one of his wife's friends and had a bastard son, which he brought into the family under the disguise of distant relatives he's looking after. The bastard son however was taught by the mistress to hate the original MC and his mom, and he would torment the kid when the mom wasn't around, and his dad helped cover it up. This resulted in the original MC becoming a nervous wreck and never being able to get into music school.

    Then one day, the grandfather and uncles were killed by the old emperor out of senile paranoia. Now without her maternal family backing her, the dad revealed the truth about his mistress and bastard, and basically forced his wife to sign the divorce papers so he can marry the mistress. The mom was heartbroken but tried to remain strong her her son and took him and left the planet. They settled on some distant backwater and basically muddled along for three years until the mom died. MC transmigrated into the body after he had gotten drunk after the mom's death, and decided he would avenge her.

    So he plays a song on the piano in the bar, using the system to increase his music ability so that it drew the attention of everyone who could hear it. This gave him a lot of tip money which he used to buy a ticket back to the capital. At the station, though, it suddenly comes under attack, and MC takes out his violin and calms/heals the panicky masses. This draws the attention of several people who were fighting one another. One group asks him to step away, but he recognizes the guy they were attacking as the incarnation of his lover, so obviously he's picked his side. MC plays a song to heal the guy and boost his combat ability, and the ML starts kicking the assassins' butts. Then some military guys arrive and calls the guy "your highness"; apparently he's the younger brother of the new emperor (also apparently the emperors right hand man and black ops guy).

    The prince is obviously interested in this mysterious talented musician who just helped him out. MC jokes that he just wants to be paid for his performance in order to buy a replacement ticket. ML goes says he can offer a free trip to the capital on his private ship. Plus free lodging at his place. *winkwink* MC goes along. He ends up plays healing songs for the prince whenever hubby comes home injured from whatever black ops job he's been doing. As well as romance songs. *winkwink*

    At the capital, the MC signs up for this grand contest he knows his half-brother, who was already a popular musician, was going to be in. The signup people look down on him because he's also a newly registered rank 1 musician. But of course the MC wins the contest easily, throwing his newly revealed talents in his half-bro's face as a welcome back gift.

    Later the prince takes the MC to a banquet at this one important general's household, which the half bro had also gone to in order to curry favor with the head of the house. MC again shows him up, playing the original style of a popular romance song, which turns out to have been originally written by a soldier as a battlefield song. This gets him an invitation to perform for the military, where he shows up the half brother again, since he can better tailor his music style for soldiers, whereas his half bro is a pop music star who's used to doing romantic songs, and who also has no respect to begin with for military people because of who MC's family came from.

    At this time, MC's maternal family is revealed, and the prince is troubled by the fact that his grandfather and uncles were wrongly executed by his father. MC is able to assure him he doesn't blame the new emperor or the prince for the old emperor being crazy in his senile days. After all, the reason the ML is out risking his life all the time is because the imperial brothers have their hands full cleaning up all the messes left by the old emperor.

    There's another competition playing for...dolphins? Anyway, the half bro tries to cheat using a fish attracting tech piece in his instrument, but it backfires when the dolphins attack him. MC is able to calm them down. And ML reveals on camera that the half bro was cheating in an imperial contest. Punishment is that he looses his license for 3 years and can't rise in rank for 6 years. Also, he loses many fans from around the nation.

    Half bro further plots with some unscrupulous nobles, trying to frame MC for treason. Of course ML protects the MC against the trumped up charges, and then they spring their own trap and captures the entire true conspiracy against the throne which includes the half bro. He's punished with the fate that he tried to visit on the young MC -- his nerves are wrecked and sentenced to isolation. He dad and the mistress are also punished as collaborators, to hard labor on a prison planet.

    MC eventually marries the prince, becomes a teacher at the royal music academy, and they live happily ever after for that life.
     
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    lol, there is a zombie arc ^^ it's also military arc bc MC is a military doc and ML is the general there. it's also the arc where ML whips MC 50 times :oops: so all in one arc :D
     
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    Takes place in the past, a Wei dynasty that's ruled by an incompetent child emperor, who's basically being puppeted by his officials. The two largest factions are the Xiao family who holds the majority of military power in the empire, and Yongan Wang who leads the literary faction of the imperial court.

    MC's counterpart is the son of the official wife of an official who's part of the Yongan Wang faction, because his mother (and original MC's grandmother) hates the Xiao faction for executing her maternal family on (accurate) corruption charges. MC's father has a concubine, and her son is a transmigrant from the modern world. This half brother transmigrated in early, and started showing off adult reading/writing abilities at 4-5 years old, creating the impression that he's a genius, and causing the father and grandmother to favor the concubine and suppress the official wife and heir. He also introduced various inventions and nicknacks to make money and to impress Yongan Wang, who he had a crush on. Standard transmigration trope, really.

    In the original version, the original MC was a genius artist whose art caught he eye of Yongan Wang as well, which caused the transmigrated half brother to get jealous and cause his death. Now with the new MC, he doesn't really care that much about his standing in the family or imperial politics, but he does care that the ML is the son of the Xiao family head and a general leading the defenses of the southern border against the barbarian tribes. In the original version, Yongan Wang and the half bro colluded with the southern kingdoms to trade over several border cities in exchange for eliminating the Xiao family and their military power. The ML died a pretty horrific death in the hopeless last defense of a city. MC got sick just going over the details of his death, and decides he can't forgive anyone who had a hand in it.

    MC entered his original's body as they were returning to the capital after he and his mom had been essentially exiled to the northern border for a few years on the machinations of the concubine and her son, at the exact moment he first met the ML incidentally on the road, while ML was chasing some southern kingdom spies. Last time they missed the spies, which led to some tragic results, but MC immediately helps them find the spies they're looking for, leaving a good impression with the ML.

    On returning to the capital, the MC forms secret deals with the competitors of several businesses that his half brother had invested into, like restaurants, craft shops, etc. He provides them with more and better recipes and stuff, so they can start undercutting the half brother's finances. He also showcases his superior art skills during a lantern festival. He gifts an artpiece to the grand monastery outside the city, getting on the elder's good side and also the ability to base himself in a cottage behind the monastery. Because the place has very high standing, not even Yongan Wang can charge in to look for him there.

    ML however already frequents the monastery due to a clinical case of insomnia, nightmares, and general irritation. MC flirts with him and tells him he's actually been poisoned by an exotic southern 'fire poison' and that the MC can help him cure if he trusts him. Despite reservations b/c their families are on opposing sides, the ML of course agrees. So for almost every night in the next few months, they meet and MC has the ML soak in a holy spring behind the monastery for a few hours, while he flirts with him. This of course eventually leads to the ML finally having enough of the flirting and they have sex. Of course, MC didn't tell him that the last step of the cure was to have the poison being transferred to the MC's body during sex, which he can then finish purging using the system. ML realizes just a step too late, and is a bit horrified at the MC enduring the pain while the poison is purged.

    There's a few other clashes between the Xiao family and Yongan Wang, which the MC explicitly helps the Xiao family side out. Yongan Wang is pissed at the MC's family (Cheng family) for appearing to be playing both sides, and pressures MC's dad. The MC's family tries to pressure MC through his mom, but he basically throws their mistreatment of him and his mom in their face. This causes the grandma to get mad and demand MC to be beaten, and that creates the impetus for MC's mom to finally demand a divorce. Since everyone except the dad (who's pretty henpecked by all the females of the house, honestly), they draw and sign the divorce papers then and there. MC immediately moves his mom over to a villa that ML had prepped for them on Xiao land. Yongan Wang is not happy b/c that's not what he meant by pressuring the guy, and now he lost someone who's obviously better than the transmigrated half brother to the opposing side.

    Still, the original plot to collaborate with the southern kingdom still proceeds. But MC goes to the border along with ML. While there, he uses draws how the people suffered from the barbarians and the Xiao army liberated them, etc. and send them back to the capital to his secret allies to print and distribute as propaganda. He also helps ML find all the betrayers/spies and turn the original plot back on itself. They then secretly speed back to the capital and head off Yongan Wang's coup attempt at the child emperor, revealing it before the entire court, and thus being able to catch and execute everyone in the conspiracy.

    Still, the child emperor eventually abdicated in favor of the Xiao family anyway. Though, that might've been a willing abdication, if only because it seemed like no one in the Xiao family wanted to be emperor. The Xiao dad took the position in name but basically tossed all the actual work to ML. After the Xiao dad died, ML just took MC and disappeared in the night, leaving behind a note giving the emperor position to his poor younger brother who had no one else to dump the job on.
     
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    Thanks for the detailed and great summaries, @charysa ! :blobsmilehappyeyes: We appreciate your efforts!
     
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    MC wakes up in a pit surrounded by monster wolves. Obviously he doesn't have the time to do read about his background. He's able to quickly pick up that this is a world where people have superpowers which can be used to defend themselves, and he frantically sets the system on boosting that stat. He also learns that normally powers can only be exerted using a mechanical shield, but his apparently has been broken on purpose by whoever knocked him out and left him in that hole - the offense/defense functions are offline, and only the record/store functions are available.

    He pushes the power increase to the bare limits of what his current body is able to withstand, and is barely able to get it up high enough to kill off the wolves at they attack. Afterwards, he collects the monster cores they wolves drop, then climbs a tree to review the backstory.

    This is another 3 gendered futuristic setting. People also have powers which are normally ranked A-E, with A being highest. There's also 2 special classes - F being unstable, usually given to kids whose power levels haven't settled. AA being the rare off the charts individual that don't need mechanical assistance to use their powers. Original MC used to be F rank (which is low, considering his in the last year of military school and most people's powers have stabilized by then), but now he's AA.

    Family backstory is the same old. Born to a noble family. Mom died and then dad remarried. The stepmother came with a stepbrother, who's a white lotus who basically seduced away all of original MC's friends and caused MC to become disliked by friends and family because of his persuasive speaking skills, manipulative ability, and A rank power. Yaddayadda you know how it goes.

    In the original version, one of his many admirers wanted to teach MC a lesson, KO'ed him and sabotaged his gear during a military training exercise. Original didn't wake up in time and was attacked by wolves. His screams eventually alerted a classmate nearby who called for help. But it was too late for original MC and he was relegated to life support for the rest of his short life. Meanwhile, white lotus helped the culprit get away scott free.

    After reviewing the original's short and tragic life, MC see a huge fiery lion fly overhead. He immediately gives chase, thinking that such a specimen would give him a lot of points (the cores he got from the wolves aren't enough for the requirements of the exercise). He attacks the lion and is able to bring it down with his raw power. As he's collecting the core, he suddenly senses something behind him, and turns around to see a bunch of mysterious people appear behind him, having obviously seen his fight. The guy in the lead is the ML, who walks up to MC and teases him about kill stealing their lucky beast.

    MC: o_O lucky beast wtf?

    But then the group gets an urgent call away, and ML leaves, leaving behind a comment about how MC will make it up to him.

    MC is still confused, wondering if the lion was somebody's pet. But it was on the grounds during a training exercise so it's not his fault it's fair game. He's more interested in the ML's identity, his companions having referred to him as "young general", and apparently he's the leader of the military's most prestigious Lion special division (of course). Still, he decides maybe he shouldn't put the lion core in the recorder, and goes off to catch more game.

    He quickly completes the needed scores and heads back to the grounds entrance to turn in his recorder. The teachers are surprised he finished early (they all dislike him due to white lotus). The teacher from A class is even skeptical if he cheated or something after seeing the readout and insists on verifying it several times. But, despite the skepticism, in the end the posted scores for the exercise had MC taking 1st place, surprising everyone.

    As the school is entering a break period, white lotus asks MC if he's ready to go home. They verbally fence MC tells him he's going to be staying with his maternal grandfather for the break. (He has no wish to return to a pretty toxic home environment.) While at his grandpa's place, MC uses his 2nd uncle's professional training room to train up his physical stats so that it can more easily withstand his new power stats.

    He also goes to a noble's banquet with his uncle's wife. White lotus is also attending, having been snuck in by a noble friend, and tries to frame MC for spilling juice on him but MC is able to turn it back on him. The lady of the party comes and greets MC because she's friends with his maternal family, giving white lotus a cooler response since he wasn't actually an invited guest. MC is given a room to change his somewhat splattered clothes, and gets ambushed in the room by ML, who gets all handsy. MC calls him a pervert. ML tells him that his muscles aren't firm enough yet to properly handle his power output and what has been doing the last 4 years of training? After giving MC a physical disguised as molestation (or molestation disguised as a physical?), ML leaves with the command to train more.

    After the break, as it's close to graduation, the various military divisions are releasing lists of potential candidates that they're considering accepting. MC of course is on the list for the Lions division, as is his new best friend (the guy who in the original version called for help for the original MC). He finds out they're also kinda in the same situation, as the other guy has a fiance already in Lions corp, and that's probably the only reason he's getting in (another F-class kid). The friend is feeling insecure about getting in not on his merits, so MC makes some enhancements to his shield equipment to normalize his offensive output. MC then also calls his uncle and convinces him to pull him out of school for a few days. Using his uncle's lab, he whips up some kind of chip which he surgically installs onto his new friend which will permanently stabilize his power even without the equipment.

    Next is the process of determining who will actually be accepted into the Lion corp. It also doubles as a test for who would be competing on behalf of their nation in a competition proposed by a rival nation.

    First there is a medical exam, which of course the ML uses the opportunity to replace the doctor to perform a hands on exam of our MC. (His friend apparently got the same treatment for his fiance, so maybe Lion corp just has that kinda people...)

    Next is a test where the candidates are dropped onto a prepared area in groups of 3, with some vague clues of where to find 3 special cores, and then to bring them back to the rally point. MC teams up with his new friend and another classmate from F-class, avoiding white lotus's attempt at getting him to take on the guy who attempted to kill him last time. MC easily solves the riddle of where the cores are located.

    The first spot is a swamp with a giant mutant toad and a bunch of lesser monster toads. They get there at the same time as white lotus' team. MC's team do the work taking down the monsters while the other team just stands and watches. After nearly taking down the boss toad, white lotus suddenly jumps out to get that last hit and tries to seize the core. However, he then screams as his hand starts melting. MC carefully cleans and wraps the core with nearby leaves to avoid the poison on it. He then waits until white lotus teammates have cut off a huge chuck of the poisoned flesh, before idly revealing that there's a specific type of leaf which could counteract the poison. White lotus and friends accuse him of causing him to be maimed, and MC just shoots back they were trying to kill steal and leaves.

    Next spot is a spider cave. MC and the third guy goes into the cave, leaving the friend out to guard the entrance. The bully that originally tried to kill MC gets his two lackeys to attack him, but he's easily able to beat them back with his new equipment and powers. However, then the bully attacks personally, and despite being more powerful, the friend is not as skilled or experienced in fighting and gets beaten up. But before the bully could step on his face, MC gets back in time and blasts him into a tree and then beats him up. Meanwhile, ML and his teammates, including the fiance of MC's friend, are watching all of this on surveillance. And none of them are impressed about the guys attacking and taking shit about their sweethearts.

    Last spot is in a giant hornets nest. MC designs a clever trap to lure away the hornets and trap them in a barrel while they go collect the gem. The bully guy had followed them, and blasts open the trap. MC had anticipated this, and his team had smeared herbs that the hornets disliked on themselves. While the bully had been crawling through bushes with pollen that attracted the hornets and well, he got to have the same fate as the original MC had, being stuck on life support for the rest of his life.

    MC's team head back for the rally point, but are cut off by white lotus who had gathered a bunch of other candidates to back him up to take the cores by force. He claims the MC cheated because ML had told him the locations of the cores and how to get them beforehand, and that he doesn't deserve the spot, yaddayadda. Everyone is ready to fight, but they're interrupted by two giant bear monsters that are way beyond all of their abilities. White lotus immediately grabs the cores pouch from a random neighboring team, and runs away with his teammates, ditching everyone else to face the monster (and thinking most of them won't be walking away alive).

    Up on the ship, ML's colleague suggests intervening at this point because the giant bears are beyond the scope of the planned test, but ML say to wait a bit and see. MC finally stops holding back and reveals his full AA rank abilities to kill the bears, shocking everyone. He then leads his team back to the rally point. As it turns out, there's a serious of obstacles set up around the rally point, so white lotus had only gotten through part way yet. MC tears through the obstacles and still achieves first place, shocking white lotus' team when they get there.

    At the closing of the exercise, ML reads off the results. MC's team obviously made both the Lion corp and the contest rights. By points, white lotus' team also made the contest, but ML is scathing in his admonishment of their behavior and caustic when he addresses their claims that MC only won because of cheating (given his revealed AA rank, no one else could believe it either). So the next runner ups made Lion corp while white lotus' team received the lowest scores that isn't negative (being unable to reach the end at all).

    Back at school, everyone is now shunning white lotus and his team, since word got out of how he left everyone behind during a crisis. White lotus has to assure his teammates that they can still get back the regard they're due by winning the contest. One of MC's former friends who had ditched him for white lotus now comes back and tries to confess. MC ignores him, but then runs right into ML, who overheard the attempted confession and gets jealous. ML drags MC back to his room and pushes him with lashes on his butt with his belt. After he's done, he seems MC crying from the 'punishment', and the download suddenly starts. MC silently calls ML a pervert that just wants to see him cry.

    Later, as the contest is about to start, MC wonders if the rival nation has an ulterior motive for holding this competition. ML says of course they do, and gives MC strict orders to make his own safety no. 1 priority, even over winning the match. Anyway, the match happens, the rival team gangs up on the white lotus team, then get taken down by MC's team. But then the rival nation's capship appears and they're all 'escorted' up to the ship and disarmed. Turns out the rival nation is using this chance to sneak in their armada for an attack, and the 6 competitors are now hostages.

    The captain toys with them, saying that he'll allow one of them to leave alive only if they kill all of their companions. Nobody takes it up except white lotus. MC knows they're actually being recorded, so he goes ahead and goads white lotus to reveal his true nature and about how he manipulated everyone to hate MC.

    ML then contacts the capship, revealing that they expected this betrayal and even now their own armies are on the way to attack the rival nation's capital, which is currently lacking the present armada to defend it. As the enemy captain frantically tries to establish comms back to HQ to confirm this, MC uses his AA powers again to take out the entire enemy command crew. He then cuts off comms before ML can say anything more, and tells the other five of his classmates to leave now in the evacuation pods.

    After they leave, he uses the system to take direct control of the ship and starts attacking the rest of the enemy fleet, up until all the ammo is expended, and then he turns on the self destruct. Doing all of this taxes him beyond the limit of his current physical body. The ML bursts in on the bridge just in time for MC faint into his arms.

    MC wakes up 10 days later. ML is vastly not impressed and accuses MC of pushing himself beyond his limits and endangering himself on purpose. MC admits this, as he realized midway through the contest that they were actually a lure being used against the rival nation, and he was angry about being used by his lover like that. ML tells him that he's been removed from the combatant ranks of Lion corp, because he failed the last test of being able to follow orders without question like a soldier is supposed to be able to. In the end MC has to accept this, and he basically becomes ML's personal secretary in the corp, mostly handling administrative duties, but also sometimes accompanying hubby on special missions that absolutely require two AA rankers. Meanwhile, white lotus actions past and present are revealed, gets convicted of treason, has his powers destroyed and sentenced to 100 years on a prison planet.
     
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    Arc 3 is interstellar world where there exist 3 types of human ,men,female, and man that can have children (they have a mark or something). In this world music can heal people spirit. (music and military background).
    Arc 4 is ancient times where the MC is a painter and is a young master with a official father (scum by the way), while the ML is a general. The MC brother is a transmigrated person from modern time and is in love and comp-lice with a prince that is the ML rival.