Spoiler The Perfect Destiny

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  1. JadeBunny

    JadeBunny Well-Known Member

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    https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-perfect-destiny/
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    At the beginning of his crossing, Chen Ligou’s heart is rejected.

    However, he soon discover that after crossing, he encounter a men with a handsome and eight abdominal abs. The point is, these men also likes him.

    As someone who is gay, Chen Ligou is simply excited and is full of tears.

    But the world is not much good.

    Because when he is about to drool on it, a system came out and told him: Buddy, you can’t be with these people.

    Chen Ligou: If I insist?

    System: Hehe.

    . . . . . . . . . .

    Chen Ligou: You trashy system! Destroying my youth! Messing with my sexual relationship!

    @alexfilia
    This is a new novel that came out just recently in NU, and it seems like another world-hopping, system, possessive ML story. I really enjoy reading these kinds of BL, so I really want to know the future developments for the couple:aww::cookie::blobmelt::blob_grin::blobReach:
    What I really like about this story is that the MC’s love for the ML is strong from the beginning, and is not just the ML chasing the MC until he falls in love:blobnosebleed:
     
  2. alexfilia

    alexfilia Bromance & Fluff <3

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    By world hopping you mean like the face of the devil?
     
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    Jadeite524 Well-Known Member

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    Have you finish this novel? I read the first two arc but is not sure whether to continue as there is quite a bit of non con and dub con. How is the ending?
     
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    JadeBunny Well-Known Member

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    I’m not sure, it was only mentioned that MC world hops
    Sorry:blobsad:, but I can’t MTL well, I always get so confused and feel like I don’t completely understand the story.
     
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    Too bad. Thanks for responding :)
     
  7. JellyJellyFishy

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    It's like FotD but not.
    I was half way through the story before I stopped and took break...

    MC died on a car accident on the way to the wedding of the ma that he loves. He died a 29-years old virgin lol.
     
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    MC died and he bounded with a system. like mostmost quick wear, he do mission for the system and he revives 10 minutes? before his death. His mission in each world is to make sure the the world's daughter AKA the female protagonist achieves 100% happiness

    The first Arc is actually the 2nd world for the MC. According to the system, the first world was a complete failure cuz mc have gone OOC and was "seduced with beauty" xD

    Anyway .in the first Arc, MC's character is a guy who like Female Protagonist for a long time and everyone knows it except FP. He is an illegitimate child in a big family with and evil brother and sister. He left the county cuz he was heartbroken (lol) and returned bcuz FP invited him to her wedding(ouch).
    ML in this world is FP's brother.
    The real reason why MC left the country and away from FP and ML.
    MC is attracted by ML and to avoid the tragedy that happened in the first world, he left. Which is good since it's within his body's character.
    So, the wedding happened. Everyone looked at MC with pity, MC acts heartbroken and left the reception. He met ML in the bathroom, they talk. MC avoids being alone with ML.
    Back in the reception, MC saw ML with his sister and become jealous.

    After a few days, they met again after MC's sister ask him to meet her to severe their family ties and give him compansation money. ML ask whether MC is leaving again, MC nodded the ML ask MC to have dinner... In his house. MC wanted to refuse cuz ML is really handsome and he does not think he can stay in character XD but ML persuaded him.

    They go to ML's house and ML personally cooked. And dun dun dun duunn.

    The food is drugged!!! Then MC faints.

    The next time MC woke up, he's on ML private island, chained and ML confessed to him!

    Papapapa fade into black

    And starts MC imprisonment. Ofcourse MC have to act like his very unwilling but deep inside He's rejoicing. Poor system is faced with mosiac everytime papapapa happens xD

    The MC is very contented with his current lifestyle but still needs to act his character so he is always unwilling and always ask about FP which blackens ML even more

    Stuff happens, MC found out that ML faked an accident and announced his death. MC acts confused and lost.

    Then he found out that FP is pregnant ad in a bad shape, as her most faithful spare he begs ML to let him see her. ML refused. MC, threathened by the system, plans to run away. He slowly tried to sever the chains.
    He acts like he already accepted ML to avoid suspicion which makes ML happy and have hope but then he saw the gap and the chains and became very angry.

    Papapapa and system mosiac.

    After the very intense but faded into black papapapa, a doctor checks over MC. MC tricked the doctor, left the villa, stole a yacht and successfully escaped.

    He calls his friend to help him return to China.
    A secretary of ML found him and gave him 2 tickets, a new I'd card and a thousand dollars cash.
    Then a phone call where the ML says that he will let MC go and will not go to him unless MC returns to his side willingly (lies!!!)

    MC and his friend go back to China and at the visit to the hospital, MC found out that FP is already doing great and decided not to appear to her.

    With only an id and money, he tries to find a job but always get fired for unknown reason(it's ML!!) until he have no more money to stay in a hotel. Tired and hungry, MC sleeps in the park.

    ML is watching MC's every move and is very angry why MC didn't ask for his help. He sat with MC in the park and let MC Lea on him. When MC woke up, ML is already gone.
    MC is sick. He freshened up in the Park's bathroom and met a douchebag whom he beat up ad stole money from xD
    MC have a fulfilling breakfast. Then he fainted and ML's men who have been watching MC panicked and called ML.
    ML took MC back and nursed him to health.
    FP's happiness is still not 100% so MC is idle, asking fp's situation to the system from time to time.

    Then FP, after giving birth got kidnapped. The same thing happenned before where FP got kidnapped and MC comes to the rescue. MC is doing the same thing again.

    MC follows the kidnappers and called ML.
    ML and his men arrives. FP got rescued and everything worked out perfectly.
    But! They missed one person, the kidnappers aimed at ML and MC block the bullet.

    FP's happiness finally reached 100% and MC's body died.

    Note: Once FP's happiness reached 100%, MC will always die immediately to go to the next world.
     
  9. clear

    clear 『クソ主』 川(-'﹃ '-)川 『Bi Wenjun's Yoyo』

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    Stupid system, i need detail not mosaic :blobsob::blobsob::blobsob:
     
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    The system always get mosiac whenever papapapa happened to protect the host privacy lmao.

    Despite the many many many instances where the MC and ML do the deed, the detailed ones are very small in number

    It's not even that detailed! A few paragraph of foreplay, and papapapa..and then it fades into black....
     
  11. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    Hm..... im no so sure of this.... i came looking for heavy smut but nothing ! >/////<
     
  12. clear

    clear 『クソ主』 川(-'﹃ '-)川 『Bi Wenjun's Yoyo』

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    Finished read this, and really funny xDD i like MC and system interaction, lmfao, bc MC being shameless (since he enjoy world w/ sex life), so his system always in need to read Buddhist scripture. It's actually quite touching, but when i almost cry MC will start to talk w/ system and ruined the mood :blobrofl:

    And about non-con or dub-con, honestly idk whether it can be called like that since MC only "acting" he didn't want to do it while inside he's hoping that ML will do him more and enjoy the sex. As for ML, He also acting to "force" MC doing it, while actually he can see barrage of contents/words popped out on top of MC's head that MC enjoyed the sex, and what ML did to MC, or when MC thinks that he can finally have sex life w/ ML. (only at the end it's explained that ML can read what MC feels, so)

    Oh- right ML also world hopping too like MC, he followed MC, and he's actually MC's crush irl world. But he shouldn't act like himself and pretend like his character, or MC's character will collapse like in the first world (not first arc), and ML's mission is to make MC happy, but he should let MC do his mission, and should not get in the way.

    As for the ending, in the last arc (arc 12), MC in a world as himself but not himself, bc the world different from reality. Irl MC's an orphan and have to struggle to live, he needed to work and study hard to get scholarship, but in arc 12 he still has his parents, loved by everyone, anyway a popular guy. Zhou Yi (ML's name irl world) later even gave him a ring and confessed to him. Everything perfect, ML even worried that MC will stay in arc 12, bc MC was so happy in this world, and ML has no heart to tell the truth, the world could exist if MC decided to stay, but irl he'll die means real ML won't be able w/ MC. ML in arc 12 didn't play as himself (Zhou Yi), but as Lin Zhaorong, a man who likes pretty boy. But MC eventually choose back to real world, bc arc 12 just like a dream comes true for him, and the person he likes is the ML in real world even though he didn't like MC and about to get married (MC thinks so). MC hoped he can at least back and congratulate ML.

    When MC back (10 minutes before accident happened), ML suddenly rushed to him and kissed him. Said that he wanted to fuck MC to death, he's so happy that MC actually choose to come back. They did it for like 2 days LOL, MC was confused bc why ML did sth like this. Everything resolved, when MC accident happened, ML right away bound by system to follow MC in order to save MC, ML's system said only MC himself that can save MC by doing mission, so ML followed MC to transverse.

    About ML didn't like MC, it's only MC who thinks so, bc ML actually love MC, and even MC's close friend (female) who has crush on MC could see it, but MC alone who didn't realize it. And for the wedding, it was ML's friend idea bc ML not sure whether MC has feeling for him, MC hides his feeling too well. Also, for the fiancee who visited MC and told MC to not get close to ML, is ML's half sister (not sure whether step/half sister bc mtl). She hated ML+ML's mom bc her father married ML's mom. She previously even tried to kill ML's mom, it failed but made Mom miscarriage. And now tried ruin ML's life . . . MC's accident also instigated by sister, she wanted to kill ML but MC saved ML. The father and sister's mom actually agree to divorce before father met ML's mom, but sister still forced her parents to back together . . . and the divorce has nothing to do w/ ML's mom at all.

    btw, the chapters that written on NU was wrong, it's not 263 chapters, but 157 chapters (i checked jjwxc) . . . at danmeila the page indeed 263, but when you read till the end it only contained 150 chapters and you need to search/read the extras on diff site.
     
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    Ahah I want to read!
     
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    clear 『クソ主』 川(-'﹃ '-)川 『Bi Wenjun's Yoyo』

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    Arc 2 is ancient setting, MC was a wheel-chaired military adviser of the crown prince (2nd prince), and ML is the 3rd prince. As for FL, she's unfavored princess, ML+2nd prince's sister. In the original bc FL was unfavored, she was bullied even by servant in the palace, and later has to marry a foreign country's prince for peace, but eventually end up miserable since FL's country in war or sth w/ the prince country. So MC has to prevent FL to marry to foreign country.

    Bc MC couldn't even walk in arc 2, he thought system probably did it on purpose, so MC won't be able to have any sex life since in the original MC's chara should still be able to walk xDD It's actually true bc the system likes to scheme so MC won't have sex life, system tired to see full mosaic whenever MC started his sex life pffft

    So, in arc 2, ML wanted MC to stop supporting 2nd prince and follow himself. Ofc MC's acting super loyal and refused ML whenever ML tried to force MC, and it made ML more interested in MC. And when ML tortured a enemy spy, he brought MC in order to scare MC, but MC didn't even blink when see the torture scene . . . well it's bc MC asked system to mosaic the torture scene LOL

    ML started to force MC to have sex ... MC so happy bc finally it happened, later when MC visited 2nd prince, the 2nd prince angry bc he thought MC defected to ML already, since he got reported which saying ML kissed MC, and how there's a porn fanfic about MC and ML, the fanfic was actually written by ML's guard, so 2nd prince won't trust MC anymore. MC looks so sad bc 2nd prince didn't believe him anymore, but inside he talked w/ system how ML's guard is so genius in writing fanfic xDD

    MC met w/ FL, she looks so pitiful, MC gave her foods and later also gave her money. ML jealous bc MC looks so close w/ FL. ML gave MC a gift, the gift is a box full of jade w/ different shapes (ancient dildos) xDD MC looks humiliated which amuse ML, while inside MC liked the dildos so much, he even asked system whether he could bring the dildos to the next world in case he won't be able to meet w/ 8 packs muscle beauty like ML LOLOLOL The system said it might be possible and he'll try.

    Let me make it short, MC prevented FL to marry to foreign country bc she falls in love w/ a guard. FL even tried to help MC ran away from palace, bc ML home arrested MC once ML became emperor, but it failed. ML married MC in secret too . . . though later ML still has to marry a woman as his empress, ofc ML never touch the empress and do his job as a good emperor (it was revealed at the extra). ML rarely visited MC, and bc FL already reached 100% so MC could leave the world, he didn't forget to hug the box full of dildo bc prepare to bring it to the next world. MC died in his bed hugging the box . . . but he just realized that he failed to bring the dildos PPFFFT system gave excuse that he couldn't bring it to the next world . . . system actually just prevent MC to bring it LOL. After that MC couldn't imagine what ML will look like if he finds MC corpse hugging the box of dildos xDDD. In the extra it revealed that ML didn't know how to react when saw MC corpse hugged the box . . . he thought did MC not satisfy w/ ML that he prefer the dildos ? and he intended to punish MC later LOLOLOL but ofc ML won't punish MC since he'll forget the arc 2.

    Bc MC collapse the character in the first world (not the first arc), ML was punished by forgetting the previous world memory/succeed mission and only remember the first failed world task . . . so whenever he's in the new world, he'll always think that it's still the 2nd world mission after the first failed world . . . he still remember himself, MC and all but think there's still so much world mission to do.

    Arc 3 is ABO world, MC = alpha, he's a general who's betrayed by his close confidant (omega who pretend to be a beta), this friend actually a younger brother of leader (?) of star pirate. And ML = pervert doctor, also an alpha, he could change someone sex (like alpha to omega or omega to alpha or beta). FL is an omega who pretended to be beta, in the original bc her estrus came she was raped by scum alpha and marked by him, which ruined her dream. FL rly hate her gender, bc her gender gets in the way to pursue her dream.

    When MC took over, he actually ran away bc he was wanted by country or sth, he ended up back to pirate ship met w/ the friend who betrayed him and ML. Anyway ML captured MC and tried to turn MC as omega. MC didn't know what ABO world means, so he's afraid that ML will "cut" his genital when he turned MC as omega LMFAO xDD Only later he realized that there's no need to cut it, so MC relief right away and didn't mind being omega which made system speechless. To change alpha to omega, need lot of process, and ML needed to inject MC lot of time.

    ML thought that MC's alpha pheromone actually quite nice like a wine and ML wanted to do alpha MC right away, while MC think ML's pheromone smells like lemon cucumber (i forgot what the smells like lol), when they did it, MC realized, he actually couldn't get up! why ? MC so depressed and harass the system lol MC still didn't understand abo world where alpha won't have interest w/ alpha. But ML still could get up ? actually i kinda forget why ML still react but most likely bc the body he possessed is a pervert doctor or bc MC's pheromone is his favorite. And iirc after ML keeps to inject sth to MC, MC later react when do it w/ ML.

    MC managed to run away from pirate ship w/ the help of friend who betrayed him before, MC actually didn't want to escape bc enjoying his sex life, but system remind him about FL's fate. After back to his country and inform about the close confidant betrayal MC later met FL . . . when FL about to enter her estrus, her pheromone actually smell like MC's favorite pepper steak and MC reacted to it. He asked system, and system iirc replied him bc MC's body is normal alpha who interest in omega, so . . . MC helped FL to buy inhibitor. And MC+FL ended up live together, when FL about to refused MC mentioned that he knew that FL's omega, so it's better to live w/ MC than in military dorm, and FL agreed. At first FL thought MC has interest in her, but it didn't look like that. When MC bought inhibitor, the courier was ML, MC surprised bc ML could find him. Btw ML also threaten MC that he'll release the video where ML did MC if MC didn't want to come back to ML.

    Later FL's rape about to happen bc estrus and MC saved her from it. He also asked FL whether FL wanted to be alpha ? FL wanted to be an alpha but that was only a dream that'll never be come true, MC told her that she can be alpha and gave FL 3 days to think more, ofc FL agreed. MC did a deal w/ ML, ML should change FL to be alpha and MC will let ML do anything to him (guinea pig or sthh ??), ML agreed. Half a year (?) and FL fully turned as alpha and join military as researcher or sth and that group only accept alpha, she also changed his name from Feifei to YuanYuan iirc, and bc now she's alpha her face also a bit different. Her fate also rose slowly.

    ML back w/ MC and live at MC home, until later MC decided to go to war, bc MC should not OOC so MC has to do so which pissed ML bc he never thought MC would go to war, but in the end ML let MC go, but only 3 years and MC should back to ML.

    ML sent a msg to FL about whether she knew the price of her change herself into alpha and that someone paid the price for her. She realized that there's must be a price of it, and she finally know about what MC did for her, she feels regretful, bc she knows how it feels to be a weak omega, but MC actually turned into omega for FL. FL determined to take MC back from FL. Anyway FL and ML keeps fighting whenever they meet lol. There's this one scene i remember where ML got jealous and slammed the table till it broken and left MC alone, inside MC's pretend crying to his system how the table worth his 3 months salary or sth, system asked him about the bank account (?) of the original body he possessed, but MC replied that he didn't know the pw xDD when ML saw MC's body tremble and looks like crying, ML so distress and try to appease MC to not cry, MC thought what to do, bc he actually only pretend to cry to his system LOL MC stared at his broken table and ML was it's okay there's me here and he'll replace the table w/ the new one xDD

    The end, FL succeed got award for her research, iirc the research could let omega do anything w/o worried about their estrus, so omega could have more choice whether to pursue their dream or do what omega normal to do to raise kids. Oh- iirc MC died in his sleep after did it w/ ML.

    It's modern world, MC = Lu Zhiyang (ML)'s son . . . not real son, so no incest. And ML's the head of Lu family. FL's MC distant cousin; in the original MC won't even cross w/ FL. FL grown up w/ her sweetheart (let me called him protag), but everything changed once the protag in accident, he amnesia and ended up liking someone else, after twist and turn FL died, only after that protag remember about FL, he's so regretful and end up in tragedy.

    MC has heart disease (i forgot what kind), it's actually not threaten his life, but bc his mom to busy w/ her works as model, she ended up neglect MC health and worsen his heart condition which made him in a hospital when take over. MC was still 4-5 years old when it happened and met w/ his father (ML), MC lamented to his system that system must be do it on purpose bc turn him as 4-5 y.o, so MC won't have sex life! LOL Originally bc oriHost character is timid and not close w/ ML, he won't live w/ ML and will never meet FL, but now MC has to live w/ ML in order get in contact w/ FL. ML so angry bc his son health worsen and wanted to take his custody from his mother.

    MC life as 4-5 y.o is enjoyable, ML pampered him so much and MC even thought that his IQ probably getting lower bc he acted like a truly 4-5 y.o, he also didn't have adult needs bc his body still a shota, but system replied did his IQ ever that high to begin ? PFFt. MC also like to watch spongebobs, he can watch it for hours that ML need to limit his watching time. Whenever ML did so, MC will show his puppy eyes and said how the butler always let him watch spongebobs, but ML not soften and always try to make MC do sth else to forget his spongebobs. ML also change MC's room to yellow and using spongebobs things just to make MC happy, and MC like it so much xDD ML brought MC out to eat, but at night later, MC got fever bc he allergic to carrot (?) . . . ML was too busy before and didn't get close to MC, the doctor even scold him how could a parent didn't know that their child allergic to sth. ML regretful and promise he'll pay more attention. As for MC, he didn't even know about the allergic, before he ate at it and got fever, and the butler just know from doctor that MC allergic to carrot and never use it for MC meals.

    MC met w/ loliFL and shotaProtag too and be friends w/ them, it's still long till protag accident happened, so MC can only get close to them from now on. A kid from certain family pushed MC down which pissed ML, iirc ML most likely did sth to the kid family later, till they came asked for MC to forgive them, but MC pretended he didn't know who are they and what they did.

    MC met w/ his mom, and mom asked MC to go w/ her, she kinda threaten MC iirc and said whether MC wanted the mom to abandon him, she also pulled MC, and whisper that MC is not ML's son. Huh ? not ML's son ? MC asked system right away but system said he didn't know bc in the original it never revealed. If it's true, MC feels sorry for ML, bc he could see grass land on top of ML's head (green hat). ML found that mom force to take MC away, and strengthen the guard around their house or sth. Mom went away overseas, ML even gave her resources as long she didn't get close to MC iirc.

    MC slowly grow up and in junior high school, btw MC skip grade iirc, so even though he's slightly younger than FL, he's on the same grade as FL, while protag in one higher grade. MC actually lazy and like to skip school, once he skipped school and ML knew about it, ML waited him on study, MC was scared bc of it. ML asked MC to take off his pants so ML could hit his bottom lmfao MC bit crying bc of it . . . also, i think ML kinda react bc of it.

    In order to watch FL's fate, MC went to the same high school as FL+protag and later the same uni as FL, bc protag went overseas. ML misunderstood that MC in love w/ FL and always remind MC that no puppy love. Later mom came again and told MC that he's not ML's son and MC should back w/ mom. MC acted so scared, and asked whether mom wanted to take him bc love MC, or bc afraid that ML will ruin the mother lives once ML knew about it ? Mom was stunned bc MC actually read her mind, and told MC it's MC choice if MC still want stay w/ ML, and shouldn't blame the mom if ML ever did sth to MC later. And once ML knew that MC actually not his son he acted super cold (ofc acting bc ML should not OOC, so MC won't collapse the world character). iirc MC went to bar or sth, and was drugged and almost raped (please correct this), ML saved him, and what will happen if ML not come ? MC was like im sorry father, and don't abandon me and such. ML told MC to not call him father and ML soon did MC.

    Anyway ML+MC started physical relationship, FL kinda noticed that ML+MC relationship isn't like how it used to be bc MC isn't ML's son. But FL+protag couldn't do anything since ML so powerful. At the end, when protag about to get in accident, MC rushed to get there, and he ended up in accident in place of protag, so protag save when about to meet FL, iirc he broke his ribs, and begged the driver to take MC back to home. At home, ML did not notice sth strange from MC, MC said he just back and asked ML to do it. MC blindfolded ML when did it, ML overjoyed bc he thought MC finally love him, until he found sth wrong, bc MC no longer move (MC rides ML *coughs*). When he took the blindfolds, ML found that MC no longer breathing. He called doctor, the doctor checked MC and he was so disgusted w/ ML bc he thought ML didn't even spare MC even in his death, plus broke MC ribs. ML shouted to find out what actually happened to MC, the doctor finally realized that ML didn't know what happened to MC.

    ML found out about the accident and that MC most likely save protag from it, iirc he jailed the driver, he also ruined the mom's live by not giving her resources and get in her way. iirc ML also said that he not killed mom bc ML she's MC's mom, if not she most likely already dead by now. FL+protag visited MC's grave . . . almost every years they did it. And if my memory correct for this arc, later protag forgot everything about ML+MC, while FL was like, how did protag forgot about MC ?

    It's Zombie apocalypse arc. MC just an ordinary guy, and later when end of world came he has space ability, with the kind of spring water inside and MC could grow vegetables there. ML= FL's baby son. And FL's in the original she got pregnant by a scum male, she loves him so much and gave birth to ML, but someone stole the baby or sth and FL never meet w/ ML, and most likely baby ML dead in the original. Later FL will meet w/ the scum lover again, but the scum lover end up w/ white lotus, and betrayed FL, iirc FL then destroy the world or sth.

    When FL gave birth to ML, MC took baby ML away and raised him, but there's sth wrong w/ ML, bc he grows too fast, MC not sure whether it's bc MC gave ML the spring water in his space or bc there's sth wrong w/ ML genetic since baby. In only a year, ML grown up as old as MC, when peeps see them, they'll think of ML as MC's brother instead of son. ML also a genius and read lot of books. There';s another guy who live near MC's apartment during end of world, and surprised when MC said that ML is his son (MC lied to the guy), and that MC already 30-40 y.o, when in actually MC still like 20 sth.

    ML is so sticky to MC, and bc MC think ML as son so MC thought it was normal until ML got morning wood PFFT ML is totally MC type, but bc ML is his son (MC treated ML as his real son), he never think about ML in that way. ML confused why he has that kind of reaction, later MC gave ML book related it. Oh- also bc MC liked to hide ML on his space, ML could freely enter MC's space.

    ML+MC went to certain city w/ other peeps in group where MC will meet FL later. During the trip, they met w/ someone who could control vines fight a bit, later that person suddenly lose her ability to control vines and asked MC group what they did to them, but ofc no one know what happened to her. At night when it's MC time to do night watch, MC actually dragged by vines and kinda molested. MC acted so scared and such, but in reality he thought that it was so cool and hoping the vines+owner would molest/do him again xDDD ML kept asking what's wrong w/ MC, but MC tell him nothing.

    When reached the base, MC reminded by someone (the guy who live near MC before) that MC should pay attention to ML, bc ML's good looking and pretty boy type, someone (a pervert S-level) might take interest in ML, plus bc both ML+MC didn't have ability so they most likely won't be able to resist. The guy didn't know that MC has space ability, while ML still hide his ability, even MC didn't know ML has ability. The S-level guy later actually take interest in MC though, he groped MC butt and wanted MC to be w/ him. MC was dragged to the S-lv perv home and about to get raped, but ML saved him. Later the guy was killed using ice ability or sth, but MC didn't know that ML was the one who did it. ML's ability actually to steal someone else ability, so it's actually quite scary.

    MC finally met FL, unlike what's written in the original FL isn't the weak type but strong woman type, she also like to smoke. She was in argument w/ the scum lover, bc the scum defend the white lotus. When FL met MC, she thought MC likes her bc MC always stare her or follow her, but MC said he already has a son. FL was like Ohh . . . ML quite jealous to see MC like that, and asked whether he likes FL, MC said no, ML told MC that he didn't want MC to get marry and give him another mom, MC soften and promise ML that he won't give him another mom, while inside, MC was like I'm gay son, and i won't be able to give you mom.

    Later MC told ML that FL is ML's mom and that MC stole ML away blablabla, MC also brought FL over and told her about ML existence. FL didn't believe at first, but then asked a few of ML hair for DNA test and proved that ML was her son. Although FL so happy, but ML+FL not as close as a real mother and son, but FL support ML feeling for MC, and remind ML to not force MC too hard.

    Scum lover+FL+white lotus in argument, in original FL will accidentally hurt white lotus, and scum lover will break up w/ FL. MC's watching it, FL asked scum lover to let her talk w/ the white lotus alone, he reluctantly agreed. White lotus said how she likes scum lover and FL should let them be blablabla, and FL (she knows MC watching her) asked white lotus whether she knows why FL+scum lover always in argument ? it's bc scum lover couldn't satisfy FL and that the scum lover is "small" LMFAO MC asked system how could this be so different from the original plot ? system will check whether there's a bug pfft. FL continued that white lotus shouldn't w/ scum lover and better with her (FL), bc FL much stronger, richer and have more ability (in bed). FL kissed white lotus, and white lotus panting bc FL technique, afterward white lotus acted so tsundere and how FL could do sth like this to her LOL White lotus finally choose to be w/ FL and dumped the scum lover. When scum lover knows about it, he thought FL just wanted to ruin scum lover+white lotus relationship, but the white lotus said that she was the one who like sister LOLOLOL

    So MC finally know that the vines owner is ML, MC keeps saying how MC only see ML as son and such, but ofc ML still force MC. And when ML fight zombie, he actually got bitten and turn as zombie (zombie king i think), MC searched him and brought ML back, at first ML still attacked MC, but ML feels that MC smell so similar, and ML like it, there's no zombie who want to get close to MC, they afraid of MC (most likely bc they also smell ML's scent on MC). MC took care of zombie ML, ML sanity slowly come back but still like 4-5 y.o. MC wondered why ML didn't turn zombie (as in those zombie who eats flesh), apparently it's bc ML most likely infected by zombie when he was still in his mom womb, so even when ML was bitten by zombie, it only awaken the virus or sth.

    I forgot how MC died OTL, but when he died ML confused why MC didn't wake up when he talk to MC, ML's memory slowly back and about how he treated MC (using vines and force himself of MC), he's so regretful and begged MC to wake up. Using ML as research (though FL didn't tell the higher up about ML condition) iirc, they found antidote for zombie virus, and manage to survive in the end of world. As for ML he keeps brought MC corpse everywhere hoping that MC will wake up someday. ML also back to their previous apartment and live there for decade, MC corpse won't root, it's only explain in the extra, it's bc ML+MC only data, so MC corpse won't root there.

    FL found ML and stunned when saw MC corpse still looks like MC decade ago, FL tried to tell ML that ML should accept MC death and such. And the end ML+MC suddenly disappear and FL could not find them again

    It's not in chronology, and i most likely didn't add detail bc there's soooo much funny moments, i rly recs to read the raw or read the translated chapters bc it;s rly worth it qvq. As for next arcs, let's hope someone could do the summary . . . *off to read other novels*
     
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    Are the chapters or arcs long? Because I wanna read but I’m reading 2 other quick wear novels
     
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    clear 『クソ主』 川(-'﹃ '-)川 『Bi Wenjun's Yoyo』

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    i think it's not that long (iirc there's an arc which contain 14-15 chapters), but idk whether i feel that way bc i enjoy the novel QAQ i read this one quite fast compared to other quick transmigration though
     
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    Hmmm I think I’ll be able to read if I have some free time.... or sneak a bit at a time. If I finish I’ll spoil!!
     
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    Thank you. I will give it another try.
     
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    I recall that I checked into this one on jjwxc and the character count for the later chapters is very high. like around 8-9000 per chapter. I would say that most stories that I see average in the 3000s, and end up with 2500ish english words.

    All in all it doesn't have a super high chapter count though.
     
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    Thank you! I think I’ll read it the MC is really interesting :blob_grin: