Spoiler Quick Transmigration: Heroine Arrives, Woman Rapidly Retreats

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  1. Daoist_Squidzella

    Daoist_Squidzella Well-Known Member

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    I will post the last part of the arc soon :blobpeek::blobsalt:[/QUOTE]

    can't wait for it! :aww::aww::aww:
     
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    Aquaa 『We Lost The Summer』

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    After the school the fl confronts mc and says that she is gonna kill her bit mc takes her heart out instead and smiles sweetly ,then she notices that someone is watching over in the shadows it turns out it was ml and then she asks ml that will he hate her after what she has done and ml never thought that mc can kill someone with a sweet innocent smile.Ml says how can he hate his fiancée and his only sister.:blobmelt:
    The ml "eats mc" later that night and mc is like are vampires that energetic:blobjoy:
    Mc also asks Ml to take care of vampire association,which he takes immediately by holding meeting of the powerful vampire families and asking for there help.
    MC's appearance changes to a adult just before the marriage and then a happy ending with them kissing under the moon~.:blobicecreamlove::blobicecreamlove:
    Sorry for posting late~:blobtired:
    Its done I hope u guys understood what I wrote..:blob_pompom::blobwhistle::blob_pompom::blobhug::blob_pompom:
     
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    Is there anymore arc summaries :cookie:
     
  4. araarq

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    Sorry for the long absence, here is arc 24
    • primitive orc world
    • Orcs are humans that can turn into animals. They are separated into male and females. Males heavily outnumber the females, and are responsible for hunting and heavy labor, while females are responsible for easy work and bearing children. Because of this, females are highly valuable in each tribe. Females also can have their own harems
    • MC transmigrates into an orc high priest of the one of the strongest tribes, the Yi tribe. High priests are rare and powerful. She is part unicorn
    • MC's goal in this world is to stop Vikal from the Li tribe. Vikal is a fox lady, and she has the powers of a fox, namely temptation. One of Vikal's harem member is the patriarch. Vikal wants to be the high priest, but since the high priest is integral to the survival of the tribe, she can't because she doesn't have the qualifications. She doesn't give up.
    • There was a conference of all the tribes, and somehow Vikal got into the front row seat of her tribe, which is usually reserved for high priests and patriarchs. When MC's host saw this, she left, and the entire Yi tribe left with her. This caused the Li tribe to be viewed as a joke from the other tribes. This caused Vikal to be the target of frustration of the Li tribe. Even though she eventually got forgiveness, she blamed MC and her tribe for this humiliation.
    • She tempted her way into being the first high priest without power, and she tempted other tribes around Yi, and they attacked. MC's tribe was caught unprepared, and were losing. MC's host used all of her power to give the remaining warriors of her tribe a boost, which allowed them to escape. She died soon afterwards.
    • MC looks at herself, and notices that she is weak. Females in this world, although classified as "weak", they are still strong compared to other worlds. Despite this, MC feels like her body is weaker than she was in the last world. MC also notices the magic power in her, and figures out it is like sword cultivation. Since this world doesn't have any cultivation knowledge, witches, who are born with a special physique are able to stand out.The system than selects the random ability for MC, which happens to be sword cultivation, which makes her very happy.
    • MC asks if she were to "invent" cultivation, would the laws of the world notice, and the system says no, on the contrary, it would be good for the world.
    • MC gets her lunch, and is devastated to find out that there isn't any salt or spices, and makes a resolution that before she teaches the Yi tribe cultivation, she will teach them cooking. MC goes out, and she sees young orcs, who can't fully transform, so they have ears and tails. MC finds them very cute, and has to hold herself back from them. MC ends up playing with them
    • Later that night at the bonfire, she announces that she had a "revelation", and that she will be taking the young ones in order for them to become priests. Everyone became exited. The next morning, when MC woke up, the orcs were already in front of her house.
    • MC starts examining the young orcs, using her cultivation to see who can train.
    • After that, she teaches the orcs how to cook
    • While eating, MC notices an orc, Orvis, repeatedly stealing glances at her. He is admiring her beauty
    • In the end, she picks 30 young orcs to cultivate. For those who couldn't cultivate, she gave them a method to strengthen their bodies.
    • She recognizes that Orvis is the ML, can't be in a relationship yet because he isn't strong enough. In orc culture, in order to be with the high priest, you must be the strongest orc. ML is a golden lion
    • The Yi tribe got stronger, and their hunting time became shorter, and other tribes began to notice it. The leader of the Li tribe also noticed something was going on in the Yi tribe
    • They went to the conference. Seeing MC in the vip seat, ML decides to become the strongest orc so that he can be with her. Everyone notices MC's beauty and how her tribe respects her. The males in her tribe are unhappy. They secretly take a mental note of which orcs are eyeing the MC.
    • The Li tribe finally arrives, and Vikal sits on the lap of the patriarch. This bothers the other tribes because they see it as an insult, having a normal person where the patriarchs and high priests are supposed to be.
    • MC ask the Li patriarch what this is, and he responds that Vikal is his lover, and that he is comfortable with her around. MC demonstrated her strength by breaking his throne, and this shocked everyone seeing how strong MC is.
    • Seeing her strength, the Li patriarch had no choice but to apologize. Vikal also reluctantly apologized. MC took her tribe and left.
    • Seeing the Yi tribe leave, other tribes also left. This made the Li patriarch very angry. Vikal also envied MC, because she had strength and everyone respected her because of it, not because of her body. Vikal also remembered the look MC gave to her, as if she was dust.
    • MC encouraged ML to train, and that nothing is impossible. This reaffirmed his determination to become the strongest. MC asks ML to be her guard. ML agrees
    • MC asks ML how strong he wants to become, he replied "stronger than you, I want to be the strongest orc in the continent." MC gave him a special cultivation technique. It is a very powerful technique, but also a very difficult and painful one. Most of the people who did it died. MC also suggests other, less dangerous ones, but ML picks it. MC is taking a gamble teaching ML this technique because it isn't supposed to appear on this continent, and the laws of the world would notice, but MC gambled on ML's true identity to protect him from the laws. MC isn't worried about the dangers of the technique because she knows her lover is fully capable of handling it.
    • MC went to her room and sent her consciousness to the Li tribe, to Vikal. MC talks to Vikal, asking her if she wants strength. Vikal is smart enough to know that there no good thing comes for free, and asks what is the catch. MC says that she needs to swear loyalty to her. Vikal says she needs to think about it, and MC gives her three days.
    • After MC first saw Vikal, she decided it was better to have her as an subordinate rather than an enemy. Three days later, Vikal agrees. MC gives her a technique of seduction.
    • One of MC's student gives her a flower, and puts it in her hair. ML walks into this scene and thinks that MC is gentle around children, and wonders about having a little orc with her. ML's ears gets hot thinking about this scene.
    • A year passes, and everyone became a lot stronger
    • Vikal also became the high priest of the Li tribe. ML became strong and handsome, and many were wondering which female has his heart. They didn't think of MC because in their eyes, MC is too above and respected to be a female.
    • ML challenges the patriarch for the position. ML wins and becomes the patriarch.
    • After this, MC asks ML if he wants to dominate this continent with her. He agrees
    • MC spent a lot of time thinking of ways to unite the continent, but in the end, decided to just brute force it because this world respects the law of the jungle.
    • MC asks if ML is interested in her, ML replied yes. MC says that her lover must be the most powerful and noble orc on this continent. ML is happy because this means that she didn't reject him. He also puts together that she asked him if he wants to dominate the continent together, so she has all but accepted him already
    • The Yi tribe began to mobilize, and MC also told Vikal to mobilize also.
    • The Yi tribe conquered all the tribes on their side of the river. ML during the war became tougher. When he met the MC, he hugged her, and wanted to do more, but since he saw MC was unwilling, he stopped himself. He asked MC what was wrong, and MC said she needed time to adjust.
    • MC ordered the Yi tribe to rest, and the other tribes saw this as a mistake because this would be the perfect time to attack the Li tribe, who was also in the middle of conquest on their side of the river. People wanted to sow discord between MC and ML, but it was easily dealt with. They thought ML must have some resentment to MC because MC was more honored and powerful than him. MC and ML share an intimate moment. MC also asks ML to call her by her name, and not high priest. ML gets exited, and they almost do it, but the Li tribe arrives.
    • Vikal demanded to meet with MC. She sees ML and falls in love at first sight. She tried to use the seduction technique on him, but he was totally immune. This made her desire to conquer him rise. When Vikal meets with MC, she said that everything is done on the Li side
    • Vikal noticed ML's gaze of love towards MC, and realized why her seduction technique was useless on him. He already had someone in his heart. She gives up on ML.
    • MC announces that the allies of the Yi tribe, the Li tribe, is becoming the territory of the Yi tribe. Everyone is surprised that the Li and Yi tribe have and alliance, and Vikal goes up on stage as the high priest of the Li tribe to hand over authority to MC.
    • They go on to build a unified kingdom, and ML becomes the first king. He isn't as excited about being crowned king as he is about finally being able to be with MC. MC and ML got married. They ruled for thousands of years, but none of that mattered to MC except that she spent her life with ML.
     
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    Modern online world
    • MC's host is Qu Fu, a daughter of a rich family. She has three older brothers. Since the mother always wanted a daughter, she spoiled Qu Fu alot. When Qu Fu was seventeen, she started to sing music online. In just two years, she became famous with the internet identity of "One Sake". The one thing Qu Fu doesn't like about herself is that she is short. the rest of her family is big, but she is short. Her family even gave her the nickname of doll. The biggest wish of Qu Fu is to become a "cold queen" like her mother, but due to her appearance, the most she can be is a "tempered princess".
    • There was a web drama about a popular novel. There was a famous music composer, Chunhua Qiushi. Qu Fu dubbed the main character. CQ brought a friend, who was a newcomer in the field, "Ryoko who loves to eat buns" (i'm shortening this to RB). During the audition, Qu Fu tried to give some helpful advice by saying this sort of character doesn't fit RB. RB took that as a personal attack on her. RB told the internet that Qu Fu was a vicious woman. This ruined the reputation of Qu Fu online. Qu Fu with her brothers help exposed RB's lies, but she was now disillusioned with the online world and quit. She decided to climb a mountain for a new experience, fell and died
    • MC transmigrated not because Qu Fu died, but because she quit online, and since this is an online world, that is equivalent to losing the protagonist's aura.
    • MC transmigrated a day before the auditions.
    • MC went out to eat, and blogged about it. A man saw it, and went to the restaurant MC was at. MC's message was forwarded by "A drunk dusk", who was a famous CV and rarely had any personal things on his blog. MC was a bit confused because she didn't have any recollection of being acquainted with ADD. People online started speculating the relationship between ADD and MC.
    • The man looked at MC, and thought that it was unexpected that One Sake would be a little doll in real life.
    • While MC was going back to her dorm, a fellow classmate came up to MC. In the past, he confessed to MC, but she rejected him, and he didn't give up. She keeps declining his advances, but he doesn't get the hint.
    • The next day, she logged into the audition, but was surprised to see ADD there, because he wasn't there the first time around.
    • RB gave her audition, and it was completely the wrong tone. She used a cute tone for a cold/tragic character. Everyone was to embarrassed to point it out until ADD asked MC to try. This broke the atmosphere, and everyone started to pay attention to MC, and people joked about ADD and MC being together. In real life, RB was furious, because she wanted to humiliate MC, because she came to the circle, got hooked up with CQ. I think everyone paired CQ with MC, and RB is jealous, i'm not really sure about this part
    • When told she isn't suitable for the part, RB asked what part of her performance was wrong, and everyone thought "did you even read the novel?" CQ tried to defend RB. CQ accused everyone of bullying a newcomer. MC dismantled the argument saying that just because she is a newcomer doesn't mean all of her mistakes get a free pass. She also recorded and screenshot-ed the conversation. RB accused MC of being jealous that CQ brought her personally. MC replied "who are you". CQ kept repeating the argument that they shouldn't bully newcomers, and MC said that they have a disease in their brain and that they are excessively paranoid that they are right and everyone else is out to get them.
    • MC auditioned, and surprised everyone because of how drastically she changed her voice, from a warm gentle tone to a cold lonely and proud tone. The producers are excited because they finally found the perfect role for the voice. ADD sends a friend request to MC. He also invited her into his group/network
    • After this, MC went to gym class. Her regular teacher didn't come, but rather a handsome man, Gu Yunxiao. He is the substitute teacher for the time being. MC felt his voice was familiar. The class thought that since there is a substitute teacher they can slack off, but he quickly dispelled that notion. GY said that a bit of long distance running is nothing, and MC retorted that since he thinks it is nothing, he should join them. MC laments that she can't control her mouth, and notes that GY is always paying attention to her. GY agreed.
    • While on break, MC checked online, and RB posted about MC being a bully. MC was surprised that most of the fans were on her side, and that was because the other members who were there defended her and accused RB of distorting the facts. MC responded to RB that "People are doing, and the sky is watching. It’s still a bit of conscience to talk". RB accuses MC of being jealous of her being with CQ. MC responded that "if she wants to be in this circle, you should practice harder and try your best when you audition. Don't think too much. Most people in this world have no hatred with you"
    • People think what MC said is reasonable. RB was frustrated because she thought that by playing the victim card, she can gain sympathy but it is going contrary to her expectations.
    • RB called CQ for help. CQ knows what RB did is stupid, and that she can offend a lot of big people with a bit of transparency.
    • CQ agreed to help RB, and they both underestimated the online scene. They thought it was only a small circle on the internet, how big can it be.
    • When CQ defended RB, many people started to believe that there was a love triangle, but MC stopped it by saying that CQ isn't good enough for her to target RB for.
    • GY saw MC on her phone and decided to help her out. GY is ADD (GY is ML). MC also needs to prepare for exams. ML released a recording of the audition, which was more complete than the one MC had.
    • Everyone turned against RB. People also started to go against CQ because he helped her.
    • MC is in the middle of exams, and seeing her busy ML gives the class a bit of a break. ML asked MC if she was taking a lot of exams, MC replied basically every day.
    • ML chatted with the previous teacher, and the teacher joked that ML was chasing a girl from his class, ML responded you think i'm that sort of person?
    • ML went to a seafood restaurant, and coincidentally met MC and her roommate. Since the tables were filled, ML couldn't find a table, and MC noticed him. MC invited him to eat with them.
    • After ML left, MC's roommate teased MC about MC being a match for ML.
    • When the exams finished, MC went back online, and RB had posted an apology. It was insincere and forced.
    • MC recorded lines for the novel.
    • When the cast list was revealed, many people questioned the choice of MC being the female lead because she usually had a pretty soft voice. RB used this opportunity to insinuate that the reason MC was selected was because of her position. RB's logic is that since she is familiar with MC's work, she knows that she isn't suitable and she is using this opportunity to strike back at MC.
    • At this point, even though CQ still has feelings for RB, even he can't help but use brain damage to describe her. Even he thought, "you are a small newcomer, and you are honestly staying on your own territory and not confusing. If you hate a song and a mountain stream, you can spend some money to hire a black soldier. If the secret point of this matter is not found, the mountain stream at this time is estimated to have no intention to check this. "
    • CQ reprimanded RB's sense of revenge being so naive. They got in an argument, and CQ ended up hanging up. This infuriated RB. When CQ went online, he thought RB was an idiot. she thought that she was a big deal and people would rally behind her, but it was the opposite. People ridiculed her for being a newcomer and having the guts to call out a well established person, and that it wasn't even that long ago that she apologized and she was back insulting MC right away. RB's name was forever sullied in this circle.
    • CQ called RB to try to explain the situation to her, but she didn't answer. The reason why CQ did this is because all of their fans put CQ and RB in the same boat, so the bad reputation of RB is affecting CQ also. Many of his fans have already left him.
    • MC finished recording the lines.
    • The drama finally came out. Everyone is amazed by MC's performance.
    • ML messaged MC, and MC finally figured out ADD and GY are the same person. The next day, she confronted him about it.
    • ML said he wanted to pursue MC, MC said a teacher student relationship is wrong. ML countered by saying he is only part time. MC agreed to let ML pursue her.
    • Everyone had a hard time believing MC's performance because it was so different to her usual performance that people started speculating that it might be another person. MC decided to deal with this by going to a event where they interacted with the fans. Everyone is excited that MC will go because she never went to something like this before.
    • ML invited MC to the movies. ML confessed again at the movies during a very powerful scene, and MC agreed.
    • During the event, MC introduced herself with three sentences, each being the different voice she used in the drama. This convinced everyone.
    • The regular gym teacher came back and everyone was disappointed that ML was not going to teach anymore.
    • ML took MC to his base, and the community (basically other people in the industry) finally met MC in real life. They are all surprised that MC was a small girl, they imagined her to be a cool beauty.
    • The next day, RB posted some pictures of her and CQ together. They are in a cold war at this moment, but others don't know that, and RB did it to try to make MC jealous. This backfired because people in ML's community said that MC and ML are together, and that MC would never look at CQ because she already has ML, and that if CQ saw MC in real life, he wouldn't chase after RB.
    • RB also did it because since she already has no future in this circle, she might as well try to latch on to CQ as hard as possible. RB also thought that since she can't win with MC in the voice department, she might as well try to beat her in the looks department. She wanted to annoy MC, but all she ended up doing was damaging CQ's reputation more.
    • CQ called RB and was angry that she posted that picture without his consent. When RB hung up on CQ, he went online and posted that he has broken up with RB for a while and that was a picture taken before he "found out about her true face". He thought that this would help his reputation, but it only worsened it with people accusing him of not being a man.
    • MC went to an annual CV of the year party. This was being broadcast live, and at the award ceremony, everyone else finally got to see what MC and ML looked liked. Everyone was shocked.
    • When RB saw MC's appearance on tv, she yelled how could this be, this is impossible. She even tried to tell people that that isn't MC, and MC asked someone else to go on stage for her. No one believed her at all. MC and ML also declare their relationship on air.
    • RB's private life was also exposed, that she dropped out of high school and was using her looks to gain benefits from men, and even right now she was playing three different men at the same time.
     
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    • Cultivation world
    • MC goes back to the white space, and the system tells her that she has reached a state where she can create things virtually. MC asks the system that it said that her soul needed to be a certain strength, so what realm would this count as. The system than asks MC to try to create something so it can gauge her level. She creates the villa from a previous world. The system is surprised at how quickly MC has learned this, and notes that the villa doesn't have any weakness. The system then asks MC to try to create a living thing. She tries to create a bird, but it only lasts for a second before disappearing. The system says the next level is to create a living thing and then she can leave the white space. MC gets motivated and asks to go to the next world
    • This is a cultivation world. MC's host is Cheng Linyin, the daughter of the general of the national guards and a peerless genius. She is also the pro-disciple of the strongest master in the entire continent. She was supposed to be a natural winner at life until Cheng Ling transmigrated into the body of Cheng Lingyu.
    • Cheng Lingyu was a "waste" and the family didn't care much about her. Cheng Ling transmigrated when Cheng Lingyu fell into a pond. Cheng Ling was a mercenary, and she decided to get revenge for all those who wronged Cheng Lingyu. Cheng Ling found out that the body of Cheng Lingyu wasn't simple, because her mother was from the mysterious Yue clan who are able to practice a secret technique, but only when they become 18 years old. She got together with the great emperor, and with their scheming they got rid of the Cheng family by framing them for rebellion. Only Cheng Linyin was spared because she was the pro disciple of the strongest master. Cheng Linyin hates Cheng Ling because of causing her families downfall. Cheng Ling didn't want to leave any hidden dangers so she had her assassinated.
    • MC arrived a day before Cheng Ling transmigrated.
    • MC's weapon is a jade flute, which can transform into a sword. This is a very powerful weapon given to her by her teacher because he really cares about his youngest and only female disciple.
    • MC went to see her teacher. Her teacher looks like he's in his early 20's, but MC knows that he looked like this for decades. No one actually knows how strong the teacher really is, or how long he lived. Everyone only knows that he is to be respected.
    • MC used the excuse that it was her grandmothers birthday to go back home. Before she left, MC suddenly felt that her teacher was very lonely, so she hugged him. The teacher was surprised, MC said that her teacher was the best teacher in the world
    • The teacher said that MC is too old for this, (she was training with him since she was 6), but MC only tightened the hug and said that the teacher was the closest person to her, and that he's her biggest backer, if she isn't close to him than who should she be close to. The teacher only had three disciples, one who already died, one is the strongest person in the continent besides the teacher, and MC. The teacher had indulged MC a lot when she was growing up.
    • MC asks when is the teachers birthday, and the teacher was surprised because no one asked him this for a long time. He thinks its a trivial matter, but MC insists that it is a big deal.
    • After MC leaves, the teacher had a warm feeling, and smiled, which is rare for him. He quietly whispered MC's name, thinking it sounded a bit sweeter than before. The teacher is ML.
    • MC's family had a grand welcoming for her. Cheng Lingyu was also allowed to come.
    • MC had a big family, mainly because cultivators lived so long, MC's family had a great lady, two concubines, and aunts that numbered more than cows, so MC had a huge number of brothers and sisters. Everyone was curious to meet their sister who they all heard great things about.
    • MC notices Cheng Lingyu. She is 16, but looks 14 due to lack of nutrition. When Cheng Lingyu saw MC, she felt inferior, and thought that she can never be like MC.
    • When Cheng Lingyu left, MC whispered to her maid.
    • Cheng Lingye met Cheng Linyue on her way back. Cheng Linyue often teased Cheng Lingyu, and was the reason she fell into the pond. After seeing MC, Cheng Lingyu felt that she should stand up for herself. Before anything happened, MC's maid appeared and stopped everything, saying MC said that since this is grandmother birthday, unhappy things shouldn't take place. MC told her maid to prevent any accidents from happening to Cheng Lingyue
    • MC wanted to see if she prevented Cheng Lingye from falling in the pond, can she prevent Cheng Ling from transmigrating.
    • She prevented Cheng Lingyue from having any accidents for a week.
    • MC's grandmother's birthday arrived, and Cheng Lingye was nervous. MC comforted her, and this surprised Cheng Lingyu because she didn't think MC would take the initiative to comfort herself.
    • The first and second princes. The empress wanted MC to marry the first prince so that his position would be more stable, because there were rumors about the second prince being the emperors favorite. MC's family didn't want to do that. Fortunately, because of ML, there wasn't much pressure on MC to marry.
    • The first prince wanted to make small talk with MC to try to get closer, but was disappointed. The second prince secretly sneered at his brothers efforts, seeing MC was obviously disinterested but still trying to court her. The prince emperor also disliked MC, because she was arrogant and even his father had to give her some face.
    • There was an assassination attempt at the first princes life, and MC saved him. The assassin clearly knew that MC was out of his league, and grabbed someone as a hostage. Wouldn't you know it, it turned out to be Cheng Lingyu.
    • Cheng Lingyu fainted, and the next day, MC's maid told her when she woke up, it was like she was a completely different person.
    • When Cheng Ling woke up, she said that she doesn't remember anything. So she had one of the servants tell her about herself. When she is told MC is worried about her, this arouses her suspicion. This was all heard by MC's maid, and she reported it to MC.
    • MC debated on whether or not to kill Cheng Ling now, because at this moment, it would be a simple thing for her to do. MC decided against it because the sins of the Cheng Ling from the original story shouldn't automatically be placed on the current Cheng Ling, who didn't do anything yet. MC tells the system to monitor Cheng Ling, and if she is like the original story, don't blame her for being heartless.
    • MC visited Cheng Ling, and this made her suspicious because according to the servent, she and MC are from two different worlds, why would MC care about her. Cheng Ling decided to "reward" Cheng Lingyu for allowing her to come to this world by taking care of all her enemies.
    • MC went back to ML, and told him that Cheng Lingyu might of been possessed. Though it is rare, it is still a known thing to happen in this world. ML told MC not to worry about small things, and that to cultivate, you need a clear heart.
    • When MC goes to a mission world she reverses time and space, and is technically in a parallel world. And the soul of the original has already long left the original world. The system tells MC that no one can tell the difference between the original soul and MC.
    • Cheng Ling is different though. She only occupied the body of Cheng Lingyu, and without a body to support it, the soul of Cheng Lingyu will eventually dissipate. Right now, the body of Cheng Lingyu has two souls, one of Cheng Lingyu who is in a state of deep slumber at the moment, and one of Cheng Ling.
    • Cheng Linyue tries to to bully Cheng Ling, but Cheng Ling retaliated. While retaliating, Cheng Ling notices a presence, and it turns out to be the second prince. They team up, both hating the Cheng house, and planed to destroy it from the inside.
    • When MC saw this, she had many questions, why did the prince go to that courtyard, there was no reason for a prince to go to a courtyard of a waste person, why did he suddenly show mercy and decide not to kill her, why did he want to team up with her. MC demanded a logical explanation from the system, but the system said it can't give one. The system says that since this is how the plot is written, no matter how illogical it may seem, things will work out the way it will in the plot. The system also tells that if MC still has doubts, then after she gets strong enough she should come back and question the laws of the world personally.
    • To disrupt the plan of Cheng Lingyu and the second prince, MC summons her four maids, and gives them orders.
    • There was a rumor that Cheng Lingyu and the second prince are together, and Cheng Lingyu's father questions her about it. The father doesn't believe that it was a mere coincidental meeting that sparked loved between them based on the second princes temperament. He thinks it might of been a secret meeting or something. He also sends someone to verify with the second prince, if there is indeed love between them, then he'll send her there, but if there isn't, he'll protect his family from a corrupt daughter.
    • After returning to her room, Cheng Ling was surprised that people found out about them being together, but chalked it up to bad luck. Even though they met only once, Cheng Ling knew the personality of the second prince, and knew that he would throw away a piece that isn't worth using so she decides to make plans for herself
    • On the second princes side, he is in a bad mood. He is surprised that the matter is known, and doesn't belive it was a coincidence. He suspects that the entire encounter between himself and Cheng Ling was orchestrated by her. He thinks that Cheng Ling did it in order to try to get out of the household. He doesn't like it when someone counts himself, so he decides to say that the rumors are true. When Cheng Ling heard that the second prince recognized the matter, she was surprised, but it also made her become vigilant of the prince, because she knows that it means he is up to something. Cheng Ling was sent to the palace to be with the second emperor.
    • MC smiled because in the original plot, when Cheng Ling awakened her talent, she was still in the general's house, and was thus, trained by them, and gained their trust. This allowed her to destroy them from the inside. Now if she were to "discover" the crime of the family, people would think it was the second prince trying to deal with the generals house rather than it being a person who genuinely discovered something wrong.
    • ML came to MC and told her that he told her not to worry about small things, and MC said that she was worried that since Cheng Ling and second prince teamed up, she was worried about them calculating her family. ML was surprised, and never thought about these things. Since he was very powerful, he never encounter someone trying to calculate him or any plots. ML wants MC to also reach this level of strength were people can't scheme against you.
    • MC hugged ML and promised him that she will study hard. ML was confused as to why MC would grow closer to him, so he spent a lot of time reading ancient books, and came to the conclusion that MC must want to get closer to him because of some inner unease or embarrassment. This made ML feel sorry for MC, and he let her hug him. MC also said in the next few days, he's not allowed to look at her whereabouts.
    • ML said that if MC didn't want him to know, she won't mention it, and MC thought ML might be a bit jealous.
    • MC pays attention to the second prince and Cheng Ling. Everyone thought that since she is the first woman the second prince has brought, he won't be ordinary to her, but the second prince doesn't even visit her. Cheng Ling's treatment is only sightly better than it was at the generals house.
    • MC threw a birthday party for ML. ML appreciates the gesture. MC got drunk of a special wine. This wine brings out the deepest desires of ones heart. MC confessed to ML. ML was a bit conflicted, he didn't know how to answer. After MC passed out, ML sealed MC's memory of confessing. The next morning, MC asked ML what happened because she doesn't remember anything. ML answers that she got drunk and fell asleep. MC is a bit upset that ML still treats her like a child, but is content with the fact that nothing bad happened, and since the system didn't say anything either, she thought nothing of it.
    • There is going to be a tournament to decide which is the strongest youth that takes place every 5 years. Since MC is a peerless genius, its expected that she will attend. Since this year the tournament is going to be held in a empire far away, she won't be back for a year, and this is the year Cheng Ling will turn 18 and awaken her powers. So MC asks ML to watch over her, and asks if he is able to get rid of Cheng Ling without hurting Cheng Lingyu.
    • Cheng Ling persuaded the second prince to take her to the tournament also, and the second prince agreed thinking it would be better if he can keep an eye on her rather than letting her out of his sight.
    • MC arrives there safely. MC is aware of Cheng Ling's plan, to steal the prize of the tournament, a medicine that can maximize the potential of a person, but it was extremely dangerous. It can even make a person who can't cultivate be able to.
    • When the get to the other empire, the younger brother of the current emperor there falls in love at first sight with MC.
    • ML wanted to see what MC was doing, and he saw MC talking happily with another person, the younger brother of the other empire. ML got jealous. ML figured out his feelings for MC. He went into meditation to sort out his feelings.
    • The system notified her that Cheng Ling's poison on Cheng Linyue started to take effect. MC already knew she poisoned her, and gave the antidote to one of her maids. She instructed her not to give the antidote until Cheng Linyue suffered a little, hoping this would be a lesson for her. Cheng Linyue actually did change for the better.
    • Cheng Ling was having strange dreams, and when she researched what it was about, she found out about her body, that she was sharing it with Cheng Lingyu. She learned that once Cheng Lingyu woke up, she would be expelled from the body. Cheng Ling didn't want this to happen, so she tried to expel Cheng Lingyu from the body instead. Since it was difficult, she planed on trying to expel the soul when she took the medicine, since while taking the medicine a person would be at the weakest.
    • The ML opened his eyes from meditation and disappeared.
    • When the day of the tournament arrived, MC saw ML in the crowd. Even though ML was perfectly disguised at the moment, MC was able to identify him at a glance. ML saw MC looking at him, and thought MC might recognize him, but dismissed the thought since she too low leveled.
    • MC easily crushes her opponents in the tournament. Seeing her strength, someone murmured that he vowed to get MC. No one heard it, even the people sitting next to him, but ML heard. Hearing this, ML's face was black. That person felt ML's cold aura, and decided against going for MC. ML watches MC, happy to see another side of her. In front of him, she is well behaved and smiles, but now, she is like a cold beauty. ML's heart stared to beat faster. He is surprised because he always thought of himself as a cold person.
    • Cheng Ling also see's MC, but thinks that this is the life that she should be living. She thinks that since she received the body of Cheng Lingyu, she will clear all the past grievances of the body. If MC could hear her thoughts, she would slap her and tell her to stop hiding her selfishness as something selfless.
    • MC wins the tournament. ML goes to her, and MC recognizes him. ML asked how can she recognize him, and she says that no matter what, she can recognize him at one glance. ML is happy, and unseals MC's memory. ML accepts MC's confession at this time. MC hugged ML and kissed him. ML asked about the relationship between her and the younger brother of the emperor, MC finds out he was jealous. MC says she has nothing to do with him. ML knew that, but he still wanted her to say it. They plan to deal with Cheng Ling now.
    • A masked figure in white, (ML) came out and went towards the carriage of MC. He "attacked" MC, and MC got "injured" and "accidentally" dropped the medicine. This was a set up by ML and MC. ML was disappointed with the empires security because if it was a real master who wanted to attack, MC wouldn't be safe. MC thought that these were the best guards the empire had, just how high are the standards of ML.
    • When they returned, Cheng Ling took the medicine. She underestimated the pain of the medicine. She successfully passed the medicine. In the other room, MC and ML are there. MC wanted to give a chance to Cheng Lingyu for a better life.
    • After this, Cheng Ling tried to expel the soul of Cheng Lingyu, but before she could a force stopped her, and pulled her out of the body. She noticed MC and ML. She didn't recognize ML, but instinctively knew he was terrible.
    • She accused them of counting her, but MC said she is the one who counts others. Cheng Ling says that she only did it to live, and MC counters by saying that she is only doing this so that Cheng Lingyu can live. Cheng Ling pretended to give up, but MC knew that she wouldn't give up easily. So she pretended to relax her guard, Cheng Ling rushed towards the body of Cheng Lingyu again. She thought that they expelled her at this time because they can't do it under normal circumstances, only when she was weakened from taking the medicine, but she underestimated them. ML easily froze her and woke up Cheng Lingyu. MC thanked him, and Cheng Ling finally found out the identity of ML.
    • Cheng Lingyu woke up, and all the memories that happened the previous year rushed back to her. She saw that another person was living as her, but she didn't like it. Even though it was a better life than the one she was living, it wasn't her. She wanted to live her life, not watch someone live it for her even though it might be better. Cheng Lingyu thanked MC for not only making it so her body can cultivate, but also saving her from Cheng Ling. MC asked if Cheng Lingyu wanted to see the person who tired to kill her, and she said yes. MC used her power to allow Cheng Lingyu to be able to see Cheng Ling.
    • Cheng Lingyu asked Cheng Ling why she wanted to harm her, Cheng Ling replied that since she was so weak and a miserable life, it would have been better for her to die. MC said that what Cheng Lingyu did is her own business, and that Cheng Ling had no right to criticize it, and how she is only trying to cover up her selfishness. MC asked Cheng Lingyu how she wants to deal with Cheng Ling. She says that she doesn't want to let her go because she wanted her life. ML destroyed he soul of Cheng Ling.
    • MC asks Cheng Lingyu what she wants to do know, but because of Cheng Lings actions, she doesn't know at the moment. She can cultivate, but she is also the woman of the second prince. MC gives her time to think about it. When they leave, ML asks why MC is concerned about Cheng Lingyu, and MC says it may be fate.
    • ML asks when are they going to get married, and MC is a bit surprised. ML says that since they have mutual affection, the next step is marriage. MC didn't expect ML to want to go that fast.
    • ML visited MC's family and asked to marry MC.
    • When MC visited Cheng Lingyu, she decided that she didn't want to be the woman of the second prince. She is unfamiliar with him, and the only reason she is with him is because of Cheng Ling. MC solved the problem, and also told their father that Cheng Lingyu was possessed, but was solved by her. Since Cheng Lingyu can now cultivate, her treatment at home got a lot better.
    • MC and ML got married. MC went on to become strong, leaving behind a legend. MC lived together with ML for millenniums, and she died happy. ML took MC's body back and was never seen again
     
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    • A magical world with demons
    • MC transmigrated into a peach blossom forest as a young nine tails fox, Qingbo. When a nine tailed fox reaches the highest level, it can be compared to dragons and phoenixes.
    • The story goes that there is a female, "Unintentional teacher Taiyuan"(Literal MTL) that had her family slaughtered by an evil demon. This makes her hate demons. She goes around killing any demon she see's even those that are innocent. Qingbo met her while she was still young and powerless and died. Eventually, she killed too many innocent demons and heaven obliterated her. But even if she is dead, the damage had already been done, countless innocent demons have been killed.
    • This forest has a special protection, but it only protects the demons in the first stage before transforming, but after transforming, the protection becomes ineffective. Qingbo left the forest right after transforming and died. MC decided that since Unintentional teacheris still far away, she will leave the forest before she gets here avoid her till she gets enough power to protect herself. MC notices a problem though, she is too eye catching.
    • Before MC leaves, she talks to her only friend here, a plum blossom tree demon "Cloud Tree". Cloud Tree asks if MC is leaving, and MC says yes. MC asks her if she can transform and she does into a little girl, around 12 or 13. MC asks if she wants to go out to see the world with her. Cloud Tree is excited. Even though she is over 100 years old, she has a simple character.
    • They decide to pretend to be a young lady that sneaked out with her pet fox. Cloud tree summoned a person/butler/servant. They decide that they should call her Yun Shu. They decide their backstory is that Yun Shu is a young lady who is looking for her relatives in a different city because of the wishes of her sick mother
    • They stay in a small city. In this world, cultivators don't mess with regular humans, so when they go into a regular city, they behave like regular people and don't use any powers.
    • They live in that small city for three years, but move because since they are demons, they don't age.
    • They plan on going to the only city where humans, demons, and cultivators coexist, the city of Liancheng. The reason is because of the Liantai Buddhist sect, who don't discriminate and are very powerful. The reason she didn't go there earlier is because she wanted to avoid Unintentional teacher, who was a part of that sec, but she couldn't understand the model of Liantai and usually waits outside the city to kill demons. The sect expelled her, because they don't like her behavior. She also takes advantage of their kindness
    • Unintentional teacher's teacher had a soft spot for her, so he gave her a lot of amulets and life saving measures.
    • At the entrance of the city there are no guards, but there is a formation. This formation lets people only with good intentions enter, and if you have a bad intention to enter the city, it won't let you
    • A man came up to them and he knew that they were demons. This surprised MC and Yun Shu. He said he has no malice towards them and reminded them of the rules of the city, that there shouldn't be any fighting. He also asked where their elders were, because young demons are cherished. By seeing the looks on their faces, he recognized they were always alone. He invited them to go with him because there are a lot of places for orphaned demons. This man is named Xuan, and he is a black panther demon.
    • When they got to the courtyard, Xuan respectfully called out to Bodhi saying he brought two cubs. This surprised MC because she knows that Xuan is powerful, so who can make him be respectful
    • It was a female. Yun Shu commented that she felt like a female bodhisattva. They introduce each other. In the past, Bohdi was a linden tree who was planted at the gate of the Liantai sect, and when she awoke her wisdom, she entered the sect as a disciple.
    • Bohdi teaches Yun Shu because she is a fellow tree demon. When Yun Shu asked why she won't teach MC, Bodhi said that she can't teach her, she isn't qualified. MC knows that after she unlocks her genetic memory, there will be a suitable technique for her.
    • MC wanders the city, and eventually becomes lost. She finds herself in the sect, and bumps into Yuan Xiu, and immediately recognizes him as ML. She notices how beautiful he is, and comments that in this world, using lotus to describe his is perfect.
    • She is surprised that ML in this world is a monk. After seeing MC is alright, ML continues practicing. MC sticks around in his room. She eventually falls asleep. When ML meets MC, he inexplicably feels a closeness in his heart, so he decides to let her stay. Since Buddhism pays attention to this type of stuff, he doesn't reject it. After MC fell asleep, he picked her into his arms and hugged her. MC woke for a few moments, and fell back asleep. ML finds this adorable. He also laments the fact MC is too trusting to strangers, and decides that in the future, he must look after her. He also pats MC.
    • MC slept the entire day, and when she woke, she saw ML in a beautiful scene. She went up to him and kissed him. ML was surprised to be kissed by a fox. He realizes that MC likes him. He said that MC's family must be worrying about her so she should go back. MC used paper and ink to tell him that she was lost. ML says that if she can't find her way out of the temple, he'll help her. He thinks that if she really can't find her way back, it would be a good thing because then she can stay with him, but is surprised by him having this type of selfish thought.
    • While they were leaving, many people called him teacher, laughing teacher. etc. MC notices that a monk who didn't finish his shaving was unusual.
    • ML was a bit reluctant to say goodbye to MC.
    • When MC got back home, she found Yun Shu was very worried about her.
    • The next day, MC went back to visit ML. ML was surprised to see MC, and called out to her. MC was a bit disappointed that he called her little fox doner, so she wrote her name and showed it to him. ML knows that MC isn't a fox, but a demon that hasn't grown up yet. He also thinks that she has the intellect of a small child, and that he is a monk, so how can he be too close to her.
    • MC notes ML is thinking too much. MC became popular in the sect because she was always seen around MC and because she was beautiful and harmless
    • MC also finds out ML isn't actually a monk, but a student of Buddhism. Even though his skill and understanding is really high, his master never allowed him to become a monk.
    • Later on, ML goes and asks his teacher if he can shave and become a monk again. His teaches says that ML isn't suitable to become a monk because he has a passionate root inside his body, which means he has a destined lover waiting for him. ML argues that no one ever made him feel in love. The master insists on not letting him shave because if he does, then he can never be with his destined lover.
    • MC is also happy that ML didn't shave, but she doesn't know about his master. She is just happy that since he didn't shave, he can be with her.
    • ML notes that when MC finally has the ability to become human, she will definitely be a beauty. These thoughts surprise him, and he recalls the words of his master. Due to his feelings being messed up, ML asked MC to leave so he can sort things out. MC wasn't willing to leave, so ML picked up and put her out. ML's feelings were chaotic, and he couldn't explain it to MC at the moment, and he hoped that this wouldn't drive her away. MC understood, and wanted to come back the next day to see what happened.
    • The next day, MC couldn't go because she began to awaken. Bohdi and Yun Shu were there, and Bohdi was surprised at MC's awakening, because of the amount of spiritual power present. Bohdi shielded MC from thunder by releasing her own body. She was surprised to learn that MC wasn't a six tailed fox as she imagined, but a nine tailed fox. Another reason she released her own body to protect MC was to make it look like she had a breakthrough, because even though most demons revere nine tailed foxes, some won't accept one coming out of the blue like that.
    • MC successfully awakened. Her human body is a beautiful adult female.
    • Bohdi gives some advice to MC, like to keep her identity a secret for now, and how to control her natural charm. So, she couldn't go out a few days because until she controlled her natural charm, just setting foot outside would lead to a disaster.
    • She practiced for ten days, and Bohdi was surprised she was able to control her abilities in such a short time. MC wants to visit ML because she was worried about him because she didn't visit the past few days, and he might worry about it.
    • ML was worried because MC didn't visit him, and was secretly afraid that she was angry with him. He was depressed at the thought that MC might not visit him anymore
    • He was happy that MC finally came. He said little fox doner, you came, and MC said Little monk, my name is Qingbo. ML gets a bit annoyed at her calling him little monk, so they go back and forth calling each other little fox doner and little monk
    • MC tries to go to ML, but ML was avoiding her. He is a bit tangled because MC is a female, and he is a monk. MC knew this, and decided not to tell him she can become human right now. Although he isn't a monk, he was still raised in this culture. MC argues that she isn't a girl, but a fox, and ML reluctantly accepts.
    • MC says that she can't visit him every day, because she needs to cultivate. She reassures him that even if she can't visit everyday, she is always thinking about him and that he is her favorite person.
    • MC deliberately used that phrase because if not for the fact that she was scared that it would scare the pure minded ML, she would be more explicit, because as an enthusiastic demon, how can you be subtle in front of the person you like. She resigns herself to take it slowly, because in the end, ML can't run away from her.
    • She needs to get stronger because of the threat of Unintentional teacher, and she can't stay in this city forever. MC asks the system why the leaders of the demons don't kill her, and the system responds because they are divided, and to kill her they need to use a lot of resources and potentially get the revenge of her teacher. MC sneered at the selfish nature of them, and notes this is the reason why there wasn't a unified demon king in so long, and why the demons are able to be suppressed by humans.
    • ML gets more and more attached to MC. MC slowly praises him, like how he is the most beautiful person, etc. At first, ML was uncomfortable, but soon he got used to it. He also started to praise MC's eyes.
    • At one point, MC didn't come for half a month, and ML's master notes ML is upset. ML goes outside to look at the moon, and thinks if the moonlight were to be sprinkled on MC's body, it would be a beautiful sight.
    • Yun Shu says tomorrow is the lantern festival, and MC should go with her to play. MC declines. MC instead goes to ML and asks to go with him. ML at first doesn't want to go, but when MC says that she will find someone else. After hearing this, ML immediately says that he will change clothes and goes out with her. They have fun, and MC leads ML to a pond where there are not a lot of people. MC asks ML to close his eyes, and she reveals to him her human form.
    • MC gives ML a lantern, and ML accepts. MC teases ML a bit, and ML says to her the reason he didn't become a monk is because his master said he has a passionate root in him, and that he finally knows what his master meant.
    • ML left the sect.
    • Rumors began spreading that the new demon king was born, and was in the city. MC plans to leave in order not to bring chaos to the city. ML appears in MC's house, and MC is surprised because she didn't tell ML that she was planning on leaving yet, but it seems he already knows. ML says he knows that she is the new demon king, and that he doesn't mind. All he wants to do is to be with her.
    • Yun Shu also decides to leave with MC, because even though it might be better for her to stay, MC is the closest person to her.
    • They lived in another town for a year. At one point, the system told MC that Unintentional teacher was near this town.
    • They tried to leave in order to avoid her. They took the opposite direction of her route but they still ended up bumping into her. MC asked the system what was up, and the system said it does't know. It analyzed the route of the original, she clearly wants to go in the opposite direction, but somehow she ended up bumping into them. MC curses the power of plot
    • MC and Yun Shu had ways of concealing their demon auras.
    • Unintentional teacher wanted to kill the waiter of the restaurant, Abai, who was a good demon, who even used his own money to buy food for the children on the street. The people there tried to defend him, but Unintentional teacher said that if they continue to defend him, she'll kill them also.
    • ML defended him. ML tries to talk some sense into Unintentional teacher, but it doesn't work
    • They escaped with Abai. Unintentional teacher chased after them, and Yun Shu lamented the fact that she was too weak.
    • MC taunted Unintentional teacher, and while she was angry and distracted, they teleported out. ML also lamented that he wasn't strong enough so MC had to use a large portion of energy so they can escape. They sent Abai to the city.
    • There was a ten year time skip
    • ML had grown by leaps and bounds, and MC grew her fourth tail. When this happened, she was in a weakened state. ML saw this and MC said that she was fine, but ML said that he was worried about her. They shared a kiss. MC wants to go further, but ML said that does she want to destroy years of hard work. MC didn't do much intimate things with ML this past ten years because it could hurt her foundation, but after growing her fourth tail, she didn't have to worry about it anymore. MC "forgot" to tell ML this fact, until now. Yun Shu was beginning to get worried about MC, because it was a while since ML went in to check on her.
    • When ML came out, she asked how MC was, but ML only said that she was tired and fell asleep.
    • After that, they went to deal with Unintentional teacher.
    • Unintentional teacher was found dead with her sins written on the wall. The person who wrote it claimed to be a nine tailed fox and was disappointed at the leaders of the demons for letting a murderer roam free for so long. The demons who had lost hope suddenly found a new ray of light. They tried to find MC, but couldn't 200 years later, when MC was fully matured, she went out and united all the demons.
    • The demons who opposed ML being with MC were met with MC's fist.
     
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    • Mermaid world
    • MC transmigrated into a dark space. The story goes the MC's host, Yu Yang, was born as a mermaid. She was curious about humans because she didn't have much experience with them, so one day she went out to observe them. But she encountered a storm, and was forced to hide in a giant shell. She fell into a slumber, and many years passed. When she woke up, she didn't remember anything.
    • When she woke up, she was met with a man. The man took care of her, but two days later, a woman came in. The man was Bai Gang, a small white-collar worker, and the girl was his girlfriend, Shao Zi. She is in the entertainment circle. Because the people looked down on her boyfriend, she came here today to break up with him.
    • Seeing Yu Yang, she thought of an idea. She sent MC's host to a director in order to land a role. That director was cruel, so MC's host had to kill him in self defense. Shao Zi panics, and Yu Yang gets sent to a research facility where she dies, and her body gets dissected. Shao Zi lives a happy life.
    • MC woke up when Bai Gang found the shell. In the original plot, he planned to sell it until Yu Yang woke up and came out. MC plans not to come out and let him sell it. No matter how hard Bai Gang tried, he couldn't open it, and thinking of how much money it would take to open it just for a big pearl, he thought it wasn't worth it.
    • MC is in a predicament, because she can't walk, she needs to be in water, and she can't speak the human language. MC bets on ML finding the shell, because she knows that he will find her in each world wherever she might be.
    • Meanwhile, Fengcheng, the ML arrived at the city. He was supposed to have a meeting for a collaboration, but his boss of the other company got in a car accident. With nothing to do, one of his friends, Li Zi, said that there is going to be an auction.
    • ML went to the auction. The people went there, and they weren't fools. They knew that this unknown item may not be any worth. Bai Gang prayed someone foolish would buy it, and someone bid a million dollars. When people turned to look at the "foolish" person who bid 1 million dollars, they saw ML, and quickly turned away. No one wanted to make fun of him, and even 1 million dollars for him was nothing.
    • ML had the clam sent to his newly built swimming pool. When ML first saw the clam, his instincts screamed at him that he needs to own it.
    • At ML's home, MC came out of the shell. ML was surprised that there was a mermaid in the shell, and MC was relieved ML found her. MC pretended to be weary of ML, but when ML held out his hand, MC grabbed it. ML pulled her out of the swimming pool, and MC, surprised, hugged ML to not fall.
    • ML took her inside, and asked if MC can talk. MC replied, but ML couldn't understand the language. ML asked by gestures if MC was hungry, and MC said yes. ML fed MC. MC blushed, and thought that ML was marrying her. MC then noticed that even though it was the first time they met, and they were different species, ML was intimate with her, so she thought if this version of ML was genuine or just are these actions a product of experience. MC asked the system to investigate his past. MC was relived that he didn't have any lovers in the past, mainly because his vision was so high. He wanted his woman to be the best woman in the world.
    • MC was sleepy, so ML sent her back to the swimming pool. After MC slept, ML made two calls. One to renovate the house so it can be more accommodating to MC, and one to one of his subordinates to get all the info on mermaids that he can. ML learns that after reaching adulthood, a mermaid will grow legs, and will decide its gender. They will usually decide their gender based off of their lover
    • ML didn't go to work because he was worried that someone would stumble upon MC. He also started to teach MC human language.
    • MC and ML got closer. MC's first words were ML's name. MC also kissed ML at this time, and ML had to hold himself back from going further. MC blushed hard. System protested saying that MC was already an old wife, why is she blushing so hard because of one kiss on the cheek, and it refused to accept the cold dog food
    • ML at the office is monitoring MC, and is happy to see her rolling around on the sofa embarrassed about the kiss. He smiles at this cute scene. His secretary Alice saw this. ML throughout the day periodically checks in on MC, and watches her do stuff like watch children's tv. He thinks MC's cute appearance makes him want to "bully" her and "press her on the sofa"
    • The people in the company saw ML leaving early and asked Alice what happened. Alice thinks to herself, whats the use of asking me, i also want to know. Remembering the scene in the office, Alice deduces ML is in love, and daydreams what sort of woman caught the attention of ML.
    • His friends start to suspect ML is in love, and when Li Zi asked him if he was in love, ML replied yes. Li Zi didn't think ML would outright confirm it.
    • MC checks Shao Zi's situation. She didn't break up with Bai Gang because he recently got 1 million dollars from selling the shell. Without MC as a "gift" she missed the role that she wanted. MC can't do anything to her yet except monitor her situation, but luckily, in her past life, her golden finger was MC, but since MC is with ML now, she doesn't have it.
    • MC originally wanted to wait two years until she became an adult to deal with her, but when she saw ML enter the room, she had an idea. She thought if she did nothing, the changes that could occur in two years could be too great and the plot will somehow find a way to make her rise
    • MC watched tv with ML, and when an advertisement with Shao Zi came on, she trembled in fear. ML hugged her to calm her down, and MC told him that Shao Zi was a bad guy.
    • ML briefly thought that it would be impossible for MC to have met her, but seeing MC distressed he ignored that. He hugged her and said that nothing can harm her. Looking at the pearls, he thought that even if they were top grade pearls, he didn't like them because they were MC's tears. MC was reluctant to leave ML's side, so they slept on the same bed. ML couldn't wait until she reached adulthood
    • ML was awakened when something was moving, so he pressed his legs to stop it. MC was embarrassed because it was her tail, and ML "natural reaction in the morning" was pressed against it. When ML found out what happened, he rushed to the bathroom and didn't come out till half an hour later.
    • When he came out, he saw MC rolling on the bed. MC knows its childish, but she can't help herself. ML asked if it was fun, and MC said she liked it because it contained his scent. When ML heard this, he thought if he stayed any longer, he would need to go to the bathroom for another half an hour. ML thought these two years will be difficult for him
    • ML said that he is going out, and she needs to remember to eat. If she doesn't eat, he will punish her. MC remembered that when she slacked off learning language, her "punishment" was to be pressed against the sofa, and she blushed. ML saw this, and thought that mermaids were very straightforward, and thought to himself the cruelest thing about these two years is that he won't be able to eat her. He kissed her and left
    • All this time the system pretended it didn't exist, and complained it wanted to apply for dog food leave
    • ML made a call and suppressed Shao Zi. The assistant felt pity for Shao Zi, that she did something so bad that ML personally called to suppress her.
    • Shao Zi is surprised that her agent said she has to change her role. She had gotten this role by bribing the wife of the director with a very expensive necklace that she got with Bai Gang's money. Her agent got a call saying that they won't want Shao Zi in order not to offend a high person. Her agent asked if she offended anyone recently. Shao Zi didn't. She tried calling the assistant director, but he wouldn't talk to her, and directly hung up the phone.
    • There is a rumor in the company that ML is in love. Recently, he's been going home early, and smiles. There was a meeting where ML received a phone call. He usually doesn't pick up phone calls till the end, but after seeing who called, he picked up immediately. MC just wanted to call ML, and that made him happy
    • When others saw ML's behavior, they doubted their eyes, thinking it must be an illusion. When people said what they saw, others thought they were getting delusional due to overwork
    • When ML said he needed alone time, Alice thought ML was thinking about the second half of the year of the company, and admired his dedication. ML was really pondering if MC liked sea food
    • ML saw MC stare longingly at the sea on tv, and worried that MC would one day return to the sea and leave him. Even though this thought pained him, he thought he would be willing to let her go because he didn't want her to be sad
    • ML took her out to the sea to play at a private beach on an island.
    • While ML prepares dinner, MC asks the system what her power for this world is, and it replied the power of studying. MC thought what was the use of studying for a mermaid, and the system replied looking at the host behavior... . MC swears she heard the unfinished sentence of the system, and said the system wasn't as cute as before. The system replied ""Ah! It may be that the dog food has eaten more. Now I want to see the love of the show and want to burn.". MC decided to stop stimulating the system.
    • MC uses her power to get a high score on a mobile game
    • During diner, MC asked ML what was wrong. ML was worried after going to sea, MC wouldn't come back. MC reassured him that she likes ML, and that she won't leave him
    • They played at sea. MC sang to ML, and he fell asleep. When ML woke up, MC wasn't there ML was worried, but MC was still there. He kissed MC when he saw her. MC went out to get a tourmaline necklace for ML's mother's birthday
    • ML's mother's birthday arrived. ML wanted to bring MC, but couldn't. ML gave the necklace to his mother and said it was a gift from her daughter in law. Mother was happy, because her only regret was that ML was still single, and even started to think he might be gay, and hinted that she wouldn't mind that. She really liked the necklace
    • Mother wanted to meet MC, but ML said she can't at the moment. He also clarified that she wants to meet her, but can't. ML also thinks the first thing to do when MC grows legs is to get a marriage certificate.
    • Coincidentally, Shao Zi was also at the birthday party to find a thigh to latch onto. No one dared to give her a role, so she was desperate, so she decided to try to find someone rich who might help her.
    • She saw ML, and for a moment thought to try to get him, but decided that she can't risk offending him. ML saw her and thought she looked a bit familiar.
    • She ends up going after a famous playboy Liu Gongzi. He planned on breaking up with her in two weeks, but she managed to capture his heart. He though that she was pure, unlike other ladies in the industry. He tried to help, but couldn't
    • Even though her life was okay at the moment, MC didn't worry about Shao Zi. Liu Gongzi's parents wanted to find a good wife for him, and Shao Zi didn't fit the qualifications, and she was also two timing with Bai Gang.
    • A year passed. Everyone knew ML had a girlfriend, but she was mysterious. People asked Alice, but Alice responded "you have your own professional ethics, rest assured that I understand, you should be when I didn't ask.". But deep down inside she also wanted to know
    • MC was getting closer and closer to awakening, and she got more and more fevers the closer she got. When she finally started to awaken, ML was by her side. It was really painful. After that, they did the deed.
    • ML proposed to her. MC was disappointed that it wasn't like on tv. MC thought " Where were the Flowers? What about dinner? The one-shoulder confession of the deep feelings?"
    • ML later decorated the living room with red roses. There are countless red roses with enthusiasm and fire in the shape of “ILOVEYOU” in the center of the hall. Even the entire living room has a layer of incense. Soft and soft rose petals.
    • ML took MC to see his mother. She thought MC looked beautiful, but a bit young. She thought ML might of tricked MC into marrying him. ML said you think i am that sort of person
    • ML and his mother started to discuss holding a grand wedding.
    • Shao Zi still didn't give up the entertainment circle, and hope that whoever was suppressing her lost interest. She still didn't give up even though she was being petted by Liu Gongzi and Bai Gang. MC compiled some evidence of her life and sent it to them.
    • Liu Gongzi was furious wearing a green hat. Shao Zi was with Liu Gongzi, Bai Gang, and with other people
    • The next day, video began circulating of Shao Zi in bed with different people. Her reputation was ruined.
    • She was knocked out, and when she came to, Liu Gongzi had many men have their way with her. He was furious that he wanted to marry this type of person. He also filmed it, capturing the pleasure on her face and her screaming for more. He spread that video on the internet, but even though it was banned, many people saw it. Now, whenever she went outside, she was recognized as an erotic woman. When the police came to her because she was the "protagonist" of that video, she said that she was forced, but no one believed her due to the look of joy on her in the video.
    • This affair also affected the director that abused MC in the previous life, and it alerted the police to his actions
    • MC had a perfect wedding. Everyone was surprised at how beautiful MC was. They lived happily ever after. When ML died, MC donated all their assets and took ML's casket into the shell and went to sleep in the ocean.
     
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    Warning, in this arc, ML drugs and rapes MC for their first time. Other than that, ML is decent.
    • A modern school world
    • MC's host is Ling Su, who was born with congenital deficiency. Although there isn't much of a problem, she is weak. Her parents died when she was thirteen. Her father found a guardian before he passed away.
    • She grew up kind, helping stay cats and dogs.
    • There was a person who was jealous, because she had the same circumstances as Ling Su, named Tong Yuanyuan but her parents didn't have anyone to look after her after she died, so her assets were eaten up by her relatives. She pretends to be a white lotus.
    • She thought Ling Su wasn't really kind, but a facade, because she thought genuinely kind people didn't exist. She discovered that it was true, Ling Su was kind.
    • She framed Ling Su into making it so that she is kind on the outside, but abuses animals. In order to clear her name, Ling Su donated all her property to an animal charity, and died thinking it was her fault and not someone framing her.
    • MC woke up, and extracted the skills. She ended up with elf queen powers. Under the limitations of this world, it means that she will easily obtain the goodwill of others and animals.
    • MC's guardian is her cousin, Ji Shi. Their relationship isn't bad, but it isn't close either. Most of the time he is at work. MC is sixteen
    • MC practiced piano, and went outside to feed the animals. They quickly surrounded her. In this life, she hadn't met TY yet.
    • MC was taking good care of the animals. She invited vets, breeders, and others to look after them. Her home was basically a mini shelter.
    • MC decided to start a foundation for these animals. She asked the vet, Zhang Quan to help her start it. She said that one persons efforts were limited, and that it would be more benifical if others helped. ZQ was moved, because while his kid did stuff normal stuff teens would do, MC was weak, needed protection, but still chose to help small animals.
    • MC also asked him not to use her name, and when he said it would be good for her, she replied that she isn't suitble to be famous, and it would be better if it were attributed to his hospital.
    • MC did this to because TY won't be able to use the trick she used in her previous life now.
    • On her way back from school, MC saw a boy on the side of the road, he was thin, the clothes on his back were worn, he was malnourished. MC heart trembled, because this is ML, and ML was supposed to be noble and powerful, and her heart couldn't stop hurting.
    • MC asked why was ML alone, why didn't he go home. ML is Shen Nian. He saw MC, and noticed her beauty, but he thought beauty didn't equal niceness. His mother was beautiful, and she left him when he was ten. He was taken care of by a beautiful lady, but when he discovered she had been raising him with ulterior motives, he ran away. So when MC approached him, he felt slightly disgusted, but there was another part of him saying that she was different than the others.
    • MC asked the system for ML's backstory, and it gave it to her. His father got into an accident and couldn't walk, and his mother took the money and never returned. His father vented his negative emotions on him. His father eventually killed himself, and ML was basically a problem child. He was bullied everywhere. Even some milk and bread was a luxurious lunch for him. ML is thirteen
    • MC sat next to him and shared her story, that her parents died when she was little and that she lives in a big home alone. She is afraid at night. She hopes that one day she can have a brother that will be close to her so that she won't be afraid. She said you lack a home, i lack a brother, lets be family.
    • She knows that she shouldn't be saying this to him yet, they basically met for the first time in this world, but MC couldn't endue it. In each world, ML has been petting her, so she decided in this world, she will pet ML.
    • ML thought this might be a conspiracy, but agreed to it on impulse, because he felt subconsciously that he couldn't stand MC being sad
    • MC brought ML to her home, ML was a bit reluctant at first because he was dirty, but relented because MC didn't give up. ML took a shower. It felt like a dream to him, someone was willing to give him a hand and give him a home when he was at his weakest. Years later, ML thought if he hadn't met MC that faithful day, his life would have turned out differently.
    • ML feared this was all a dream, and he would wake up alone again. When they ate dinner, ML teared up a little because since his mother left, no one gave him a warm meal.
    • The nanny came and warned MC not to eat a certain dish or else she won't feel good. ML noticed MC only ate plain dishes, so the other ones must have been made for him. This warms his heart. They watched TV together. ML felt even though they were siblings only for a day, it felt like they knew each other for a lifetime. MC fell asleep, and ML felt that there was no one better than his sister. He took MC into his arms and fell asleep also. The nanny came and saw this, and felt her eyes water up. This scene to her looked like two lost cubs holding each other together and living together.
    • MC woke up in her bed, the nanny had taken them to their rooms the night before.
    • The next day, MC called Ji Shi and told him that she found herself a younger brother. Ji Shi came back immediately from an overseas business trip looking serious. He told MC that family members aren't like tableware, you can't just pick one up. MC said that she knows what she's doing, and that she can afford it no matter the consequences. Ji Shi respected MC's decision and helped the adoption process of ML.
    • ML didn't want to go to school, mainly because of bullying. MC said it was her dream to go to school, but can't. ML agrees to go to school for MC.
    • TY heard that there was a new animal shelter, and to strengthen her image as a soft and kind person, there was no way she wasn't going to come. She carefully picked a white dress to look pure. She admired herself in the mirror, but frowned when she remembered she was going to see dirty animals.
    • TY and her friends went to the shelter. TY was known to be "kind and pure", an image she created at school. She disdains the people at school, because they don't care about what's true and false. During the car ride to the shelter, she had her eyes on one of her rich classmates, Qin Caochuan. She was pursing him for his background
    • Many people were chasing after QC, and he never responded to any of them. When YT said that she wanted to visit the shelter, QC heard it and said he coincidentally got a car, and offered to drive them. YT thought that QC was doing this for her. When her friend asked if QC was doing this for her, she responded in a way where even though she was denying it, the other person got the idea that YT and QC were in a relationship when they weren't
    • When they got there, YT was surprised that this place wasn't a mess
    • YT said to be careful, who knows if these animals have been vaccinated. A voice calls out to them don't worry, all these animals have been vaccinated, and MC appears. MC is wearing a similar white dress to YT
    • YT gives off the atmosphere of a quiet girl, while MC gives off the atmosphere of warm sunshine, peace and tranquility.
    • QC calls out to MC. QC has always always been looking for an excuse to come here to see MC. He is a relative of ZQ. He wanted to pursue MC, but MC had made it clear in the past that she wasn't interested. QC didn't give up though. ML came up and said do you know my sister. ML didn't like QC, and has always blocked his advances towards MC. ML grew up, and is now fourteen. He received many love letters from girls, but never answered any of them.
    • Whenever ML thought about anyone getting close to MC, he couldn't stand the thought. QC taunted him that he should grow up and let go of his sister. MC gets angry because ML is her most important person, and no one is allowed to make fun of him
    • TY saw this, and was angry, QC didn't come for her sake, but for MC. TY's friends weren't idiots, and they saw that QC was pursing MC. They always assumed QC and TY were a pair, and TY never denied it.
    • TY got angry at MC, because if it weren't for her, she wouldn't lose so much face today. She left angerily.
    • QC saw TY, and knew that she had been scheming to try to make them a pair. This would have worked if QC was an ordinary kid, but since he was part of a big family, these schemes meant nothing to him. He also deliberately brought them today so that he could also crush her schemes.
    • MC asked if TY was QC's classmate, and what was wrong with her. One of the girls, Xu Miaomiao likes animals, and that's why she came here today. XM told MC that they assumed QC and TY were an item. MC said to her that QC and her were just ordinary friends. XM thinks no wonder QC likes MC. She also thinks TY and MC are the same type of beauty, but while TY felt a bit artificially gentle, MC felt like she is genuinely gentle from the bones. XM and MC bathed the animals
    • QC went to get a drink of water, but was stopped by ML. ML warned him to stay away from MC. QC said that one day she will marry and they will have to separate eventually, but ML said that he does't know about the future, but he knows that right now, if he were to tell his sister that QC bullied him, MC would hate him. QC said that MC always praises ML, saying that he is the most well behaved brother, and wouldn't she be sad if she knew what he was doing. ML said that she won't know, she would always believe him. QC said to look behind him. MC was there.
    • ML panicked, thinking MC might hate him now. MC didn't hate him, but comforted him. QC notes that MC is a bit too fond of ML as a brother. MC said that she is in charge of ML's education, and that outsiders don't need to interfere. QC had seen MC come, but deliberately said things that would obviously make ML upset in order to trick him to say mean things in front of MC. MC of course saw right through it.
    • ML is MC's reverse scale, she won't let anyone bully him or make him upset.
    • When they went home, ML said that he was sorry and that he was wrong. MC asked if he knows where he was wrong, and ML said that he shouldn't have threatened QC. MC asks what else, but ML didn't know what else. MC said that one, "your defense is too weak. If QC does not just want to make a joke today, but wants to induce you to say something more. Serious words? If it’s not me who came over today, what kind of misunderstandings will you have when you hear from others? Have you thought about it, Second, you shouldn't hurt yourself, (his nails were biting into his hands when he realized MC heard him)
    • ML was surprised to see MC so emotional, mainly because she usually isn't emotional due to her health. This image planted seeds in his heart.
    • MC also said its useless to act spoiled, that she has to punish if he made a mistake. MC asked where ML learned that type of thing, ML said its because my sister spoils me so much. MC said that if i don't spoil you, who will i spoil
    • QC apologized to MC, and MC said it doesn't matter. QC notes MC treats him like an ordinary stranger
    • XM saw this, and thinks that QC is dreaming in order to win the heart of MC, and MC doesn't have even the slightest feeling for him. When QC looks her way, she pretended to go back to playing with the cats
    • QC sends XM home, and while they were driving back, QC starts becoming interested in XM because he was just rejected by MC, and even though countless girls try to get his attention, XM isn't.
    • When they got home, they had dinner and MC gave ML his punishment, 50 pushups.
    • Before leaving, ML asks MC for a hug. He couldn't help himself and gave her a kiss. He saw MC didn't realize the true meaning of the kiss, and gave the excuse it was a good night kiss. MC said that he isn't a child anymore, but still gave him one. ML got flustered, and began having thoughts of "you are mine"
    • MC discussed a serious issue with the system, about the kiss. She knows that eventually he will fall in love with her, but is she doing things too fast, he is only fourteen. She feels like she is dating someone underage. The system dared not tell her that she had already planted the seeds of love, and her pampering of ML is only making it worse. The system lies and said that MC was thinking too much, it was only a good night kiss.
    • Someone asks ML out, but ML couldn't help but compare that girl to MC, and everything falls short. In his mind, MC is perfect.
    • Two years pass. MC officially grew up and got her property that Ji Shi was looking after for her.
    • The students had to bring their parents to school, and ML brought MC. Everyone was enamored with MC, saying that since MC was so beautiful, no wonder no girls caught the eye of ML. People came up to her saying they were ML's classmates hoping to get close to her. ML became jealous. ML regretted bringing MC.
    • TY saw them. TY could never forget MC, because in her mind, MC was responsible for breaking her scheme to get together with QC.
    • TY called someone. She got information on MC. She became jealous that even though they had similar lives, MC was better than her. She also found out that ML isn't related to MC.
    • Someone tired to get to MC through ML, saying that he fell in love with ML's sister, can ML help him. ML is has an indifferent expression to him. He tried to persuade ML, even giving ML a love letter to give to MC. ML to get away from the pestering stuffed the letter into his bag and walked away.
    • When ML got home, he acted pitifully to MC, saying that since he doesn't have blood relationship with MC, when she gets married will he move out. MC denied it. After hearing this, ML went back to his room in a hurry because he couldn't control himself. He was starting to get a bit crazy in front of MC. He imagined himself holding MC, embracing her
    • The next day, ML met TY at school. She said that she has something to say to him, but he ignores her. She said it has to do with MC, and he stops. She tells him she knows that he's adopted. She tries to sow discord by saying MC is hypocritical by not giving him any of her property even though she adopted him. She said that MC did it only for a good reputation, and she knows ML isn't willing in his heart to get nothing, and the love she shows him is superficial. She also says that since he is the closest person to MC, if MC had an accident, he would inherit the property.
    • ML says what hatred do you have with my sister, why do you want to count her. She gave me everything, and doesn't owe me anything. TY is surprised that MC is genuinely nice to ML. She also says that it is the two of them here, he doesn't have to pretend.
    • ML asks again why does TY hate MC, and she replies that her life is too perfect, she wants to tear it down. ML has to hold himself back from killing her on the spot. TY is confident that ML won't reject her offer. ML asks what does she want him to do. TY said that she wants to use MC's weak constitution. ML had to use all his strength to leave the cafe normally.
    • When he got home, he asked if MC knew TY. MC said no. MC knew TY sought out ML, but she also knows ML won't hurt her
    • ML had recorded the conversation with TY, and he uploads it to the school forum. It blows up, and her reputation is ruined.
    • The next day, she denied the recording. She gets called into the office, and there were policemen. She said that the recording was fake, but they said someone else sent the entire conversation. They said they need to investigate this because it might be attempted murder.
    • Even though ML didn't like Ji Shi, mainly because Ji Shi protected MC before he had the strength to protect her, he still got his help because the life of his sister is more important than his dislike.
    • TY tried to gain sympathy with ML, and said that it was a momentary lapse in judgement, and that he should forgive her. If he forgives her, she will do anything for him.
    • ML responds I am sitting here, from the beginning to the present, a total of eight minutes and twenty-three seconds. During this time, you said three times that you are wrong, but from beginning to end, I have not heard any of your apologies for MC, So Miss Tong Yuanyuan, your admittance, is it specifically for me?"
    • TY went to prison for two years.The school she left because said it was because of an illness, but everyone can see it was an excuse.
    • Two years pass. QC and MC were out together, and QC asked her what gift he should get for XM. ML saw them and got jealous. C called ML, and he said he wasn't coming home tonight. ML met with some gangsters, and vented on them. When he got home, MC saw that he was bruised and told him to go take a bath, she'll get medicine. ML says that he can do it on his own. MC saw the bruises more clearly and got angry. He allowed MC to put medicine on his wounds
    • ML hugged MC, acted spoiled and lamented that one day she will marry and leave him. She said that they will always be together.
    • From then on, MC felt like ML was sticking closer to her.
    • ML saw MC and QC in a jewelry store together, to look for something for XM. and misunderstood. He felt like he couldn't even breath. One day, MC will get married and leave, and thinks he is only deceiving himself that they will be together forever. ML went in after they left, and saw they were looking at rings. The misunderstanding grew in his heart.
    • ML asked MC that after the college entrance exam can he have a gift. MC agrees
    • ML asks if MC and QC are together, MC says what do you think. ML misunderstood her to think that she was shy. ML says MC promised him a gift and that she should remember. MC says that if it is something that she can give she'll give it. ML thinks in his heart you said it, and there is no chance to take it back
    • When MC woke up, she was tied to the bed. MC asks ML whats going on, ML reminds her that she promised him a gift, and he wants a child. The system felt that as a qualified system, it should stay silent. MC felt hot, and realized ML gave her an aphrodisiac. ML raped her.
    • The next day, MC slapped ML. She was mad at ML. ML said that she can punish him, but MC said that can punishment offset the thing he did. ML said that he was jealous between the relationship between MC and QC, and MC said that they were looking for stuff for XM. MC said that she also had some feelings for ML. ML was happy until MC said that she never wanted to see him again
    • MC tried to leave, but ML held her back. MC told ML not to let her hate him. Ever since MC said that she did like him, ML thought the only option now is to be shameless and pursue her, and grovel for her forgiveness. He spent months groveling for MC's forgiveness. MC originally wanted to give him the cold shoulder for a while, but it not only ineffective, but had the opposite effect. Instead of suffering, ML was satisfied because he knows MC liked him before.
    • MC eventually felt like if she continued on like this, things will get boring. She forgave him. He was willing to spend a lifetime in order to gain her forgiveness, but now he can spend a lifetime petting her.
     
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    Poor_Hero your hope is crushed under the flag of "REALITY"

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    :blobconfused:it's like ML's brain is offline in this arc, the rape isn't my fav...
     
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    In this arc, not even being in a different space time can keep ML away form MC
    • Ancient world
    • MC's host is Su Chaohua. When she was born, a virtual Phoenix descended upon her house, and it stayed without scattering for three weeks
    • Because of this, she was engaged to the crown prince, Yunxiao
    • She became the model of women, and at the age of sixteen she married the crown prince
    • She lived ten years of happiness, but had no child. After that, she was sent to the Yunyun palace, a place where the un-favored woman were sent.
    • Su Chaohua went to the emperor for an explanation, but he ignored her and was with a different woman. It was Lu Xi, the emperor's cousin and beloved form before the marriage. Since the prince could only marry Su Chaohua, he had to secretly be with her. They schemed so that Su Chaohua didn't have children, and the prince never favored her. Lu Xi hates Su Chaouhua because she thinks if she was gone, she can be with the emperor. Lu Xi tires to kill her, and frame her death as a fire, but she barely survive. Before dyeing, Su Chaohua made it so Lu Xi got burns all over and that she couldn't conceive.
    • MC transmigrated into a sedan chair. She came right when she was getting married to the prince. MC thinks since she is just getting married, she has a bit of time before Lu Xi came into the harem, because the prince can't afford not to give her face. MC thinks to herself that she actually appreciates Su Chaohua's actions, because even till the end, she didn't let her enemy get the upper hand
    • While the sedan was going, in a store nearby Lu Xi is sitting, seething with hatred. She thinks it should have been her out there today. But when she thinks of the princes word, that she will only be in his heart and that they will scheme against MC, her heart calms down.
    • Meanwhile, the prince had no joy on his face even though he was getting married today. The people thought it was nervousness, but it was completely different. Yunxiao woke up in a completely different place, and was about to get married, he could barely manage to keep a calm appearance. This Yunxiao is different form the prince Yunxiao. He was a self made business man from the modern world, and after one night drinking with the people from his company, he woke up in a completely different world with guards and servants around him. He transmigrated into ancient times into the prince. He is the ML. (not even being in a different space time can keep ML away form MC) He thought to himself that if he goes back to sleep, he might go back to the modern world, but alas, he couldn't. He hadn't even adapted to his new identity before getting informed that he was getting married. He is fine with his body, but is slightly uncomfortable that MC is only sixteen.
    • ML then accepts the memory of the prince, and still has a hard time coming to terms with his transmigration. ML thinks that the prince was a slag, loving another woman even though he has a fiance from very early. He thinks the prince is very stupid to promise Lu Xi that she will be the only woman in his heart, and that he feels "wronged" her because he can only marry her as a concubine. ML thinks the the person who is really wronged here is MC, who is innocent and lives unaware of the princes true feelings. Thinking about this, ML suddenly feels a bit of pity towards this little wife he hadn't met yet.
    • The servants announce the sedan has arrived. When MC saw ML, MC's inner heart was like this, inner heart is like this: (⊙o⊙). MC asked the system why was ML the prince. The system said that it's checking the data at this very moment, but couldn't find anything. MC expected this, because she now comes to expect the system can't telling anything about ML.
    • ML finds MC beautiful, and thinks to himself that in his time, MC would still be in high school, and is a bit bothered by her having to marry at this age.
    • When ML took the veil off of MC, he found her dazzling. ML never thought of himself as a dog. In modern times, because of his identity, he saw countless beauties, but never even batted an eye at them, until he met MC. ML thinks that MC wasn't so beautiful in the princes memory. He also curses he prince again, thinking that how could he abandon a wife like MC, if it were him, he would put her in the palm of his hand and pet her everyday, and not let her suffer the slightest bit
    • ML was surprised by such thoughts, why did he have such superficial thoughts when he met a person for the first time. ML and MC sat there awkwardly while ML was pondering over his own thoughts. MC tired to break the silence, but ML said that MC should call him by his nickname, not prince. ML suddenly realized that this would be a huge thing in ancient times, and he was right MC was deeply blushing.
    • MC also told him her nickname. MC while doing this, was paying attention to ML. She noticed the unusual tension he had. MC knew the plot, and thought that the prince had no feelings towards MC, so why was ML so tense. She thought about his behavior being different from the plot, and the fact that he was her lover, guessed that he transmigrated. To test it, she told ML that it isn't early and that they should rest
    • ML understands what MC means, but since MC is sixteen, he can't really get over this hurdle. So he does just that, sleep with her. They laid down next to each other and tried to sleep. MC knows that this prince isn't the prince because he wouldn't do such an unusual move. MC doesn't know why ML transmigrated, but expressed her love for this bizarre development.
    • MC pretended to sob lightly, and when ML asked whats wrong, MC said does he hate her. ML thought, how can i hate you. He then realized what she meant. He was a prince, and if they had a dry wedding night she would suffer from humiliation. ML tells her that the only reason he's doing this is because he is worried about her health. MC said that the doctors regularly visit her, and that there is nothing wrong with her. ML couldn't handle MC's pitiful appearance and MC kept pushing him, so they had their wedding night.
    • ML woke up next morning with MC in his arms. He thought to himself that since he already has a wife, he will thoroughly pamper her and never let her suffer one bit.
    • They went to meet with ML's parents. MC was tired after that, so they decided to rest in the imperial garden. ML led MC by the hand, and MC protested saying it's not appropriate, but ML says if he doesn't pet her, who will he pet
    • ML saw MC relaxing, and thought that it wasn't a bad thing he transmigrated. While he was enjoying the sight, one of his servants, one who knows about the princes affair with Lu Xi comes in. He thinks its only for show ML is being nice to MC. He tells ML that Lu Xi came wants to see him.
    • ML frowned. He didn't want to judge the past between the prince and Lu Xi, but since she came, he thinks he should clearly break up with her. ML was also angry at the guards. Even though they saw him enjoying time with MC and ordered no one should disturb them, they still interrupted them for Lu Xi.
    • Lu Xi came. She had resentment towards MC because of the red wedding dress she was wearing. ML said that isn't it the rules that you have to salute when you meet royalty, and Lu Xi was surprised. ML in the past never paid attention to these rules with her. She looked at ML, and realized that the warmth before was not there anymore. She thought it was because of MC.
    • MC asked Lu Xi why would she visit. Lu Xi thought it was obviously to meet ML in private. She looked to ML to seek help, but ML ignored her. She gritted her teeth and said that she was just visiting, and saw MC and ML, and wanted to greet them.
    • MC thought that if she let Lu Xi off easily, where would be the face of the royal princess, so she smashed her cup and scolded her for disturbing them and that she didn't know the rules. The guard, thinking that ML still values Lu Xi, tried to defend her, saying that Lu Xi was precious to ML. MC scoffed at this and said since she is precious to ML, than what was ML's idea to deal with her. ML calmly replied that MC should deal with her, and that he is okay with anything she does. MC punished Lu Xi by making her study the rules, and that she has to copy the "female" book then times.
    • Lu Xi was indignant that MC would dare punish her, and even though the punishment was light, the important thing was that it came from the palace. Because of this, she will surely become the laughing stock. She tried to argue, but MC just increased her punishment.
    • Lu Xi thought that ML didn't like this type of character, so he would start hating MC, and started to act pitiful to try to gain ML's sympathy. But since ML was from modern times, he liked a confident woman, so instead of hating MC, it only made him like her more.
    • Seeing ML look fondly at MC, she couldn't stand it and called out to him. Everyone was surprised at her move, and thought she was stupid. Lu Xi's mind told her that ML was acting cold towards her to protect her, but her heart said that if she doesn't fight for ML, she will lose him.
    • ML looked embarrassingly at MC. He wanted MC to deal with Lu Xi because this wasn't something he had caused, it was a problem leftover from the prince. He was going to let MC handle her and than meet with her to break up and find her a suitable person to marry. But before he could do anything Lu Xi called out to him and created an awkward situation.
    • ML thought that the intimate name Lu Xi called out to him would indicate there was something more to this relationship, and even if he were to try to explain there was nothing between them, even he wouldn't believe it. MC said that it seems that Lu Xi has something to say to ML, and says she'll leave to give them alone time. ML asks her not to leave, because she is clearly angry, and knows it would be a mistake to let her leave. ML says that it isn't MC who should leave.
    • This makes Lu Xi's face turn white, because this sentence was equivalent to making a choice between the two in front of them, and she was the one abandoned. She started crying thinking it shouldn't be like this
    • MC says that this is a private matter with ML, and that he should handle it. She tells him he should resolve it as quickly as possible.
    • Her maid is worried because she is letting ML have a private meeting with Lu Xi, but MC believes in ML. She chose to leave to let him clean up the mess from the previous prince.
    • Now they are alone, Lu Xi's face turns from pitiful to affectionate. She tries to call him by his nickname, but ML says that she should address him by his title. She asks if he'd forgotten the promise that they made. ML is angry at the prince, but since he took over the body, he needs to deal with the aftermath, whether it be good or bad. ML told Lu Xi to forget the past affections between them. He said that he is now married, and in the past he was young and frivolous. He says that Lu Xi should also try to find a husband that will love her and make her a proper wife.
    • Lu Xi was distraught. She said that he said that liked her the most, and that he never liked MC, that it would only be a play. That they planned to abolish her in the future.
    • After hearing this, ML got angry. He at first pitied her because she was sincere to the prince, but he isn't the person she loved, but hearing her talk about harming MC turned that pity into anger. No one would count MC in front of him. ML said that offending the royal family is a major sin, and he'll pretend he didn't hear it this once, but if she insists, the consequences aren't something she can handle. He leave angrily .
    • What happened in the imperial garden got reported to everyone. The emperor was happy. Even though the prince and Lu Xi thought their affair was secret, it was known to everyone higher up. They didn't interfere with it because they thought of it as trivial, but seeing ML's decisive action made the emperor happy. The Emperor and Empress regarded MC as their daughter since she was little because she was raised to marry the prince.
    • The only one not so happy was the empress empress dowager, who was from the family of Lu Xi. The excuse Lu Xi had reason to visit he palace was because of filial piety. The empress dowager also thought if Lu Xi hooked up with ML, her position may be more secure, but seeing ML's reaction to Lu Xi, she abandoned the idea.
    • When MC came back to her room, ML was there. ML hugged MC and apologized to her. MC doesn't care because she knows ML is different from the prince. ML explained his and Lu Xi's relationship to her, and he spun the story not as a tragic love, but as an awkward phase he was going through. MC was happy that he was willing to tell her about this, because it means he trusts her.
    • Seeing MC tired, ML made MC sit on his lap. Looking at it from a modern perspective, it was nothing, but is is an ancient and conservative culture, and what ML did could be considered bold and unrestrained. MC blushed deeply and tried to stand up, but ML didn't let her. ML thinks MC's shy and embarrassed look is very cute. ML finally let go when he thought MC might faint from the embarrassment.
    • ML sincerely told her his feelings for her.
    • MC's and ML's love life became the talk of the town. Everyone knew of the sincere feeling of ML toward MC.
    • Lu Xi naturally also heard about this. She thinks its the scheme of MC, and refused to believe that ML would fall in love with MC. She thinks to herself that she made the prince fall for her once, so she can make him fall for her a second time.
    • There was the empress's birthday. Since being related to the empress dowager, she could attend. A few days before the party, her mother picked a sliver red dress for her.
    • MC picked some deep purple cloth that had black lotus's on it and sent it to be made into a dress. ML came in, and MC said she was just picking her clothes for the party. MC is a lot more casual with ML now. MC says that they are married for three months, but there is no sign of her getting pregnant.
    • This is because of ML. He thinks she is too young, and wants to wait until she is eighteen before he lets her get pregnant. He knows that medicine isn't as good as modern time here, and that giving birth is a dangerous thing. So he secretly consulted the doctor and asked him what food would be bad for getting pregnant. The doctor, thinking that ML asked because he wants to avoid MC eating that food told him, but ML instead took note and started making their diet consist of that food.
    • They attended the party. Lu Xi's mother wanted her to wear a red dress, because she is smart and knows its not a good idea to stand out in this particular party. Lu Xi disagreed and picked a lavender dress, and because the mother only found out about it while they were leaving, she couldn't do anything about it. When Lu Xi saw MC wearing purple, she was surprised. She was wearing a better color purple and a better dress than Lu Xi. MC ignored her presence, which infuriated her because the worst thing your enemy can do isn't contempt, but ignore you entirely.
    • Lu Xi's mother wants the best for her daughter, and tries to persuade against going after the prince. He already has a beloved with MC, and if Lu Xi married another house, if she was wronged, she can help her daughter, but if she married the palace, there is nothing she can do.
    • ML arrived. He surprised everyone by wearing clothes made from the same cloth as MC's dress. ML thinks this is normal, they are wearing couple's clothes.
    • When Lu Xi saw this and as indignant, but managed not to let anything show on her face.
    • When MC was out to get some fresh air, she met with Lu Xi. She tries to sow some discord between MC and ML by asking MC whether ML mentioned her, MC replied that she doesn't remember if ML mentioned her or not. Lu Xi tries to tell MC that she is someone low, and that she can't even be a dust in MC's eyes, but MC just said that she is trying to enjoy the flowers, not listen to her embarrass herself. Lu Xi thought the atmosphere she is trying to create was ruined, and is frustrated that MC isn't going with the flow she's creating. MC wants to annoy her till she leaves frustrated, but she underestimated Lu Xi's relisliance
    • Lu Xi eventually just straight up said can MC help fulfill the promise between her and the prince. Her bluntness shocked everyone. She told her the story of their childhood, painting it as a tragic love that was destined not to bloom. When she finished, she expected MC to be angry or sad, or anything, but MC didn't change expression at all. ML had already told her about their past, and she knew from the plot. She also knows that ML isn't the prince, but her lover who won't betray her
    • Lu Xi said that ML promised to marry her after marrying MC, but ML appeared and said i did? Lu Xi was shocked ML was there, and had never seen a more terrible expression on his face. She had no doubt that at this moment, ML wanted her life. ML denied making that promise, and said that he isn't rude to women, and he made his point very clear the last time they met in the garden. He said that he will only have MC in this life.
    • After chasing her away, ML was scared that MC would be scared because he just showed her his tyrannical side. MC was instead happy that ML said that he'll only have her in this life.
    • When Lu Xi's mother saw her heart broken, she asked whats wrong. Lu Xi told her what happened, and she thought her daughter must be an idiot to provoke MC and ML. Lu Xi was expecting pity from her mother, but her mother was only thinking of how to calm the anger of ML. She also told Lu Xi to copy the rules again
    • Lu Xi's mother tried to send gifts to apologize to ML and MC, but they rejected them. The empress also mentioned this incident to the emperor.
    • There was the harem election for the emperor, and Lu Xi made it in. She protested, saying she doesn't want to be in the harem of the emperor but with the prince, but her father shut her up afraid that if the emperor heard, the entire family won't be spared.
    • Lu Xi was sent to an isolated courtyard. She was given sub par food and wasn't treated very well. No one visited her.
    • A year passed, and she fell into obscurity.
    • While she was out walking she met MC. She was surprised because she didn't think of ML in the past year, because she was miserable. MC ignored her and continued walking.
    • MC told ML that she saw Lu Xi today, and ML could barely recall who that was. They flirted a bit, and MC realized that she was pregnant. They were happy. ML thanked god for allowing him to come to this world, and to meet her
    • Lu Xi heard the news, and her mind was blank. If a person is better than you, then you would be jealous, but if a person is much better than you, then those feelings don't matter and you think of them as way above your league in a different world. This is what she was experiencing with MC. Her only solace against MC was that she didn't have a child with ML even though he petted her a lot, but now, she doesn't even have that. She compared her life to MC, and her life was cold, dark, alone.
    • Everyone congratulated MC and ML. MC came to ML and said that she wants to sleep with him, and their child wants to sleep with their father. ML says that they are spoiling him even before he is born yet. MC wants a boy, while ML wants a girl.
    • MC eventually gave birth to twins, a boy and girl. MC and ML lived happily ever after
    • Lu Xi was sick. When she heard the festivities outside, she asked what was going on. One of the other woman told her what was happening. Since it was a happy occasion, there were gifts to the harem members. Lu Xi gave her share to this girl because it would be of no use for her. During one of her fever dreams, she dreamt of the original plot, but lamented that it was only a dream. She died not long after.
     
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    • cultivation world
    • MC wakes up feeling confined. She takes in the story of this world. Her host is Shi Ling Shi, a powerful cultivator from 10,000 years ago. There was a disaster, that caused all the aura to leave the planet, and in order to survive, Shi Ling Shi gave up her physical body and tied her spiritual body to a ring. She fell asleep, waiting for when the world would have aura again
    • After the disaster, most of the cultivation techniques were lost. After the world recovered its aura, the cultivators had to start form scratch. The low leveled people would be elders in this time.
    • The ring was picked up by Qiao Qiao, who was from the Qiao family. They are a family of cultivators, and she is considered a waste. Shi Ling Shi helped her, giving her good techniques and helping reshape her foundations. Her only request was that Qiao Qiao find some herbs to help reshape her body. She swore that she would do it
    • When Qiao Qiao got stronger, she realized that Shi Ling Shi was very powerful, and at this time she was famous. If Shi Ling Shi came back, she would overshadow her. She learned a soul eating technique and ate Shi Ling Shi, using her soul to gain more powerful. The original plot was supposed to be after gaining a body, Shi Ling Shi would start a school, which would greatly boost the average power level of this world, but because of Qiao Qiao, this didn't happen.
    • MC woke up in the ancestral hall of the Qiao house. Since she slept for so long, she is weak, and needs someone to bind with the ring, or else it might damage her. This is one of the reasons Shi Ling Shi chose Qiao Qiao. MC extracted the skill from the system, and it chose a beautiful singing voice.
    • MC looked around. QQ was usually ignored by her family. She is very mistreated by the Qiao family. In the original plot, since QQ frequently visited the room MC was it, SLS eventually revealed herself to her, but MC didn't do it. While QQ was stealing some food from the ancestral hall, she thanked the ancestors for the food and said that eventually one day, she will give all those who bully her a life worse than death. MC thought that SLS didn't see this scene, because if she did, she wouldn't help QQ. MC used a bit of her power to move herself so that the ring is picked up by QQ.
    • While outside, MC looked for a person with good foundations, but most of the people were trash if placed in her time. MC noticed a little boy, 7 or 8, and felt that his roots were good. MC manipulated the ring so that it fell into the boys pocket.
    • The boy went to an abandoned temple. This made MC feel a bit of pity towards him. MC thought that in her time, his qualifications would make him instantly an inner disciple. Later that night, MC saw him desperately trying to start a fire, but was unsuccessful. MC used a bit of her spiritual power to help. He took out a potato and ate the only meal for that day.
    • Suddenly, he heard a voice. He was surprised. He thought it might of been a ghost, but MC says that she isn't a ghost, and does he want to be her apprentice. He says that there are better genius's outside, but MC says compared to his talent, they are only trash. This surprised the boy because other people usually disdained him and ridiculed him, here was someone praising him. He asked if he can be as strong as the powerhouses, and MC said how can my apprentice be such a low level. He is cautious because he knows no good thing comes for free. MC is happy at his vigilance, thinking that he isn't stupid or naive. MC says that they'll make a vow to heaven and earth, MC trains him, and he helps get MC's body back. SLS didn't make a vow with QQ because she was too weak at the time, and trusted QQ.
    • The boy believes MC because he has nothing, there would be no point in deceiving him.
    • MC asks the boy his name. He says he doesn't have a name. MC gives him the name Gu Yan. She said that she gave him her surname because he is now a disciple of MC. He is the ML, but MC doesn't figure it out till near the end of the arc.
    • MC tells ML her backstory, and ML says he doesn't remember his parents, only being raised by a good old man, and he recently died. MC thinks that compared to ML, QQ's suffering is nothing because she didn't have to worry about food every single day.
    • MC instructs ML to pour some of his blood onto the ring. Looking at the ring transform from an ugly black ring to a precious ring made from purple jade with intricate runes, ML felt that he isn't worthy to wear this ring. MC told ML to take some medicine out of the ring that will solve his hunger for ten days.
    • ML washes his hand and face. He tells MC that the old man used to tell him to dirty himself when he went outside, and MC thought that he was a wise old man. People who have a good appearance and had no protection in this time had a miserable life.
    • MC also gave ML some herbs to go sell to buy things
    • ML went to a pawn shop. MC instructs him on how to act. MC tells ML to tell the person who greeted him bring out the master, is this how they treat a guest. The person thinks ML is a boy from a noble house that snuck out by himself.
    • The manger saw him, and doubted his story, but when he saw the herbs ML gave, he quickly changed his tune.
    • While bringing out stuff for ML to buy, the store owner is getting more and more nervous, because he thinks none of these things catch he eye of ML. ML just doesn't know any better, and MC thinks these are all trash. MC finally decides to just ask for the raw ingredients, she'll make it herself.
    • While changing into better clothes, ML got shy and asked MC not to peek. ML couldn't put on the clothes because they were too complicated for him, so he had one of the servants help him change. They misunderstand him thinking that he won't wear the clothes himself because he is from a high family
    • After they left, MC asked ML if he wanted anything to eat. MC is reminded of Allen from the elf world. She raised him also. But because of the different environments they were raised in, Allen asked whenever he wanted something while Gu Yan hold back what he wants. MC noticed ML staring eagerly at a sweet stand, and she told him if he wants it, he should get it.
    • MC tells him that since he in now her disciple, he can do anything he wants as long as it isn't a nuisance. While eating it, ML thought this sweet is the best meal he had, and secretly thanks MC in his heart
    • They met a man accusing a little girl of stealing. ML recognizes him as a person who once bullied him and took his food.
    • ML pities him, because he steals things because he is too hungry. MC is surprised and happy that even though he had a rough childhood, his heart is still pure.
    • MC tells ML what to do. He pretends to be a rich person and tells them not to fight. The man said the girl stole from him, and the girl said this is the only time she stole, and she didn't steal before. ML says its not worth it and shoves money to the guy stop disturbing him
    • The girl thanked ML, and ML said that he doesn't need her thanks. The girl thought that ML was from a rich family, and thought that if she held on to him, she didn't need to worry about food. MC didn't intervene because she wanted to see how ML would deal with this situation. She kept on insisting. In the end ML says that he saved her from that man, he is perfectly capable of sending her back in the same situation
    • MC asks why did ML not let her follow, ML ask if he did something wrong, but MC said no. His decisions are his decisions and she just wants to know the reason. ML had three reasons, one because the ring is a secret and he didn't want others to know, two because he sensed he girl had ulterior motives, and third, he didn't want MC to have other disciples
    • MC made ML rent out a yard and three servents
    • MC made the servants swear to heaven to follow ML, and she gave them low level cultivation techniques
    • MC starts to train ML. MC has monitored the situation of QQ, so the only thing left for her is to find ML. MC started to think ML was ML, but dismissed it because she didn't smell the lotus on him.
    • MC is helping reshape the body of ML with a medicine bath, saying that this is the foundation, and even though it is painful, it will make it so that he can soar in the future. ML doesn't care about becoming the strongest, or anything like that, the only reason he's enduring is because he doesn't want MC to be disappointed in him.
    • ML's body became pure, and looked like it's been pampered his entire life, but hold a surprising amount of power.
    • MC says that today they can go out to enjoy the city, because tomorrow they will move to a different place
    • ML fantasizes about MC's appearance. In his mind, MC is a granny. He can't be blamed because MC used a voice changing skill to sound more majestic and reliable
    • Outside, they ran into QQ. She wasn't someone who looked like a person neglected by her family, but rather one valued by them. MC sensed magic in her. MC thought that since she didn't introduce herself to QQ, the plot may have shifted. The system then comes in and says that its been dormant, and it forgot to inform MC
    • QQ found a jade, and it contained the inheritance of a technique that let you steal the talent of someone else to better your own.
    • QQ was half paying attention to what her cousin was saying, because when she was nothing, they didn't bother with her, and now she has strength, they suddenly pay attention to her.
    • ML got her attention. She has been practicing a technique to look at the talent of others, and ML was like a sun compared to everyone else's candle.
    • ML noticed her gaze, and it felt different from other gazes. Other woman now looked at him hoping to get his attention, but ML felt QQ's gaze is more like she wants to eat him.
    • This made MC angry, how dare QQ try to take someone she raised personally.
    • MC told ML to stay away from QQ. ML says why, and MC explained how QQ levels up. She doesn't have any negative feeling towards magic cultivation unlike others, but just the technique QQ is practicing.
    • After MC and ML left, there was a rumor saying that QQ is using a magic cultivation to practice. Many people are convinced of this, otherwise, how can a waste become a genius overnight.
    • ML frees his servant and they went to a remote valley to train. MC is going to teach him for half a year, and will then send him to Tongtian Pavilion to study there. ML asks why does he need to go there to study. MC is doing this for his social skills.
    • That night, while ML slept, MC came out of the ring. She doesn't have a physical body yet, so this is only a spiritual body.
    • MC asks the system to check in on QQ. The Qiao family was torturing QQ in order to learn the method of how QQ got so strong. QQ managed to escape. The Qiao family doesn't know where QQ is. MC asks the system to send them her locatation
    • QQ was always on the run. No matter where she hid, the Qiao family always seemed to find her.
    • While MC was doing this, ML woke up for a bit and saw MC's true appearance. He thought he must be dreaming and went back to sleep
    • Half a month passed. QQ escaped the city, and MC thought that no wonder the Qiao family does't have powerhouses, even with someone giving them directions they still managed not to catch QQ
    • ML eventually goes to Tongtian pavilion.
    • QQ had bad luck. Whenever she found someone's talent to steal, something always happened.
    • The entrance exam started. It tested the talent of the people. ML had the top talent and qualification. Many people came to make ML their disciple. ML stopped them by telling them he already had a master
    • ML grew, and became the youngest person in this generation to level up. A few years pass.
    • ML heard there was an auction where one of the materials to help MC recover her body was being so
    • After ML got it, some people tried to rob him. Even though ML was weaker then them, they underestimated him and got beaten up.
    • After the fight, MC spit out some blood. MC and ML didn't notice the blood was a bit gold. Later on, a mysterious man appeared to look at the blood
    • The man asked ML where are his parents, and seemed to know a bit about ML's body, saying its pure
    • ML wanted to leave, but that man prevented him, saying that ML's blood is a tonic, as long as he ate him he would get stronger
    • MC recognized this man as a demon. He tried to attack ML, but MC used her strength to stop him.
    • ML finally got a good look at MC, and was enamored with her beauty.
    • The demon couldn't see the strength of MC, and tried to pass it off as a misunderstanding. MC quickly killed him
    • MC disappeared, and ML panicked. MC reassured him that she consumed too much power now, thats why she disappeared. She went to sleep using too much power.
    • Many powerhouses were interested in ML's blood.
    • ML meanwhile, was rigorously training, because he realized that he was too weak. He also felt the presence of someone monitoring him, but he could never find them.
    • When MC woke up, the system told her that QQ gave up trying to steal the talents of others and joined a magician. It also told her that people were looking for ML due to his blood, namely demons. And finally it told her that ML was training nonstop.
    • MC was angry at ML, because this type of training harms you, not helps you.
    • MC also tracked the people who were tracking ML. MC learned MC might have the blood of the red fire unicorn, a demon king
    • Some demons wanted to kill him because there was already a new demon king. Many people came for ML, and even QQ came, as an apprentice for one of the demons. The system warned MC if she were to use her power again to try to save ML, she could die because her soul hasn't healed from the previous time yet.
    • MC still saves him, killing everyone who wanted him. MC said some parting words to ML, like you have to live well, and disappeared.
    • ML's eyes turned golden red and he broke through multiple levels instantly
    • ML was mourning MC's disappearance, lamenting the fact that if he was stronger, MC wouldn't have to sacrifice herself.
    • MC woke up, but she realized she was still in the world. The system has told her she was sleeping for 487 years. The system told her that ML awoke the red unicorn blood and preserved MC's soul. He then became the strongest, uniting the demons, and restored MC's body 50 years ago. MC was sleeping, unable to wake up until now.
    • MC thinks this is because of filial piety
    • When he heard MC woke up, ML came over as fast as he could. When he arrived, MC noticed the lotus fragrance on ML. MC was confused because she was with ML for many years but didn't notice the fragrance before. The system gave her two explanations, one that she was a soul and ML hadn't awakened his blood yet.
    • ML hugged her, saying that he waited more than 400 years to see her again. ML chatted with MC, telling what he did these past 400 years
    • ML asked for MC's name, he never learned it, always calling her master. MC gave him her name. ML says that in the past, MC said that she gave him her surname, but its different. MC lied and said that Gu was her surname when she was a common person
    • MC wanted to go out, and ML treated MC as something fragile.
    • ML proposed to MC, and MC accepted. ML was scared that she might reject him, but was ecstatic due to her accepting him.
    • MC started a sect, and ML told all the demons to promote it.
    • Many people were uncertain of MC being the wife of ML, because ML is the strongest. To quell this, MC leveled up to the highest level, and her tribulation had more than 99 thunderbolts, which surpassed the previous record, 49. MC entered the highest level, and the only other person was ML.
    • MC's sect broke the monopoly other sects had, and even though they disliked it they couldn't do anything about it. After successfully raising the next generation of cultivators, MC and ML retired to live their lives happily. They accompanied each other for millions of years.
     
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    • When returning to the white space, MC tells the system that it will take her ten more worlds in order to successfully make the bird come to life. After thinking about the moment she can finally leave the white space, she smiles. She then tells the system to take her to the next world
    • She woke up in a simple room. MC then took in the story of this world. Her host is Qu Fei, the princess of Tian Zeguo. Qu Fei wasn't like other ladies, and liked to fight. So the king let her take part in the military. She was good at military, and made a name for herself.
    • Everyone knows that Qu Fei isn't interested in romance, she is only interested in fighting. She was supposed to lead a legendary military career.
    • In the middle of one war, Qu Fei got injured and fell down a cliff. She got saved by a mountain villager named Shi Lei. He took her to his village, Wood Village, but when she woke up, she couldn't remember anything. She was originally supposed to regain her memories in two months and leave
    • But a girl from modern times transmigrated into the bodies of one of the villagers, Ai Xiu. She recognized this world as one of the dramas from her world. At first, she thought she was a heroine, but she soon found that all she had was a village life. She was discontent, wanted to hold onto the thigh of Qu Fei. Qu Fei, even though she lost her memory, still could tell when people had ulterior motives. When that didn't work, she killed her and took her identity. She was a surgeon, and she knew how to change her face.
    • She took over Qu Fei's identity and her legacy.
    • While MC was thinking about the plot, she heard a knock. It was AX. MC asked who are you
    • AX had just transmigrated. She realized that this world was a drama from her life. She planned on using MC to get a better life than a simple village life.
    • When she saw MC, she thought that MC was beautiful, and that even if she wore simple clothes it wouldn't diminish her beauty.
    • AX said she heard her mother mention Shi Lei saved a girl and she came over too see.
    • MC said that she has seen her, can she leave because she is injured and the owner of the house is out
    • AX didn't expect MC to be rude, but she came here with a goal in mind, so she persisted. AX complimented MC's beauty and asked for her name. Although she know who MC was, she still wanted to be certain. MC says that she doesn't remember
    • After confirming MC's identity, AX left, thinking that her being too forceful would only breed resentment
    • When she left, the owner of the house, Shi Lei came back. He was very muscular. MC felt the familiar aura of ML on him
    • ML said that he found MC in the woods. He panicked and said that he didn't sleep in this house, and his neighbor Zhang Auntie to change her clothes. MC thanked him, and seeing her not misunderstand, he breathed a sigh of relief. He didn't care MC was being a bit cold, because anyone would be on guard if they suddenly woke up in a strange house
    • MC wants to laugh at ML's pitiful appearance, but had to hold back because her character is cold to those she doesn't know. MC notices the basket in ML's hand, and he remembered it too. It was some porridge he made for when MC woke up.
    • While watching MC eat, ML saw MC's movements as elegant and graceful, and he thought this was the first time he thought that someone eating porridge can be so beautiful. He thinks MC must be an elegant lady from the city
    • MC asked for ML's name. ML asks for MC's name, but she tells him she can't remember. Remembering something, ML goes out and comes back with a jade. This was on MC when ML rescued her. It has the symbol of the royal family on it. ML says maybe it can help remind her of who she is.
    • ML the next few days came to give her food, but didn't stay long in order to not damage her reputation. Instead, her free time was eaten up by AX. Even thought MC made it obvious that she didn't like her, AX didn't give up.
    • ML asked if AX was disturbing MC, and if she was, he could go talk to her mother later. MC said not to bother, that she'll be up in two days, but AX likes to ask her strange questions
    • ML said there was a rumor going around recently that AX changed, and that her mother was scared that she was possessed.
    • A few days later, MC got good enough to walk around. She tried to help ML by doing chores, but she wasn't that good at it. ML could finish the 2-3 times faster than she could.
    • Seeing her raw hand, ML joked that being from a big family, MC must of never done chores before
    • MC asked the system what her power was for his world, and the system replied that she got the aura of a weak and delicate beauty. MC thought, what use would that be, i'm supposed to be a famous war general.
    • Fortunately, MC could still cook good. So she made them lunch.
    • ML bushed, thinking this scene was just like they are a family.
    • After eating, MC washed dishes. AX came in, and was surprised that MC was washing dishes. How could the war princess wash dishes. MC asked why was it strange for her to wash dishes, does AX know who she is. AX said no, I just think that you are such a beautiful beauty to wash the dishes, really It is an insult to the hands. MC found out that washing dishes can be insulted
    • ML makes an excuse and said he heard her mother call her. The person she fears the most here is her mother, and she quickly goes back
    • When she left, ML says that he sort of agrees with AX, MC isn't suitable for washing dishes.
    • When ML saw MC smile, he thought of a story where a cow farmer met a fairy and they fell in love. ML thinks that one day, she'll leave, and will have someone to love her, and there will be no reason for her to remember this place. He gets sad thinking of this
    • MC noticed ML feeling down, and asked what was wrong. ML left in a hurry because even if he wanted to laugh to show her he's fine, he couldn't smile
    • MC asked the system is there something i haven't noticed yet. The system responds that the human emotion is a complex thing, even will the best calculations i still can't figure it out.
    • The next few days, ML was avoiding MC. Then, he suddenly went back to being normal. The system thought that the human world is too complicated, it doesn't understand. MC also says that even though she's been to so many worlds, she still doesn't have a grasp on human emotions.
    • AX hasn't visited in a while. MC asked the system what happened, and the system informed her that AX's mother was convinced that AX was possessed, so she slaughtered a chicken for her, she was crushed under chicken feathers, forced to drink ash water and chicken blood to try to exorcise her.
    • A month passed and MC was nearly healed. She knows there's a month left before she "regains" her memory and her people find her
    • When ML came back, MC said that she remembered a few things. ML asked what did MC remember, and MC showed him her martial arts. ML was surprised, because in the mountain, martial arts was seen as a luxury. MC said did ML look down on her, and they sparred. MC used a branch as a weapon. He was surprised at how powerful MC was
    • MC asked ML if he wanted to learn martial arts. ML wanted, but was a bit hesitant because he heard that marital arts wasn't supposed to be taught to outsiders. MC says ML isn't an outsider.
    • When he heard MC doesn't think of him as an outsider, he thought that must mean MC must also have him in her heart, but he stopped himself from going that line of thought. He said to himself that MC would never belong to him, so he shouldn't think along those lines. He thought that without hope there can be no disappointment.
    • MC asked to go hunting with ML, and ML surprisingly agreed. He said that he was familiar with the forest, and that there was no beast that he couldn't take down, and with MC being strong, with the two of them together, nothing could harm them.
    • Some villagers saw them and said that woman can't hunt. MC said that where does it say a woman can't hunt.
    • ML thought MC's words was novel and reasonable, and he secretly thought that MC was different from other woman
    • MC heard a sound and shot her arrow, and she got a pheasant. He was amazed by her skills. He thought that he was way out of her league. MC saw his expression, and said that i said i'll train you, and that one day you can also do this.
    • There was a beast that usually doesn't come near, but it happened to come out today. MC's arrows wren't effective on it, and while she was thinking of what to do, ML rushed out and grabbed the beast, and lifted it up. It must have been 500-600 pounds. ML threw it, and it caused a tree to snap. ML rushed and tied the beast up, it was near death.
    • When they got back, everyone was attracted to the beast they killed. AX's mother tried to get some of it, saying her man hasn't returned yet, and that the meat will probably go bad and they can't eat all of it soon. MC said that they can preserve it.
    • ML thought that MC must like this meat, and that if he gave it to others she might not have enough. So he decided against giving it to others
    • AX's mother vented her frustrations by yelling at AX. AX thinks that she didn't transmigrate only to live a simple village life.
    • When they got home, ML asked if MC liked this meat. MC confessed that she never saw this beast, but didn't want to let the prey ML worked so hard to get be taken by others in vain. MC in the past month never saw AX's mother give anything to ML, and ML even asked Zhang Auntie who lived far away for help rather than AX and her mother, which shows her who he is willing to ask for help.
    • MC felt that ML was used to give AX's mother stuff, and that she wasn't the type to be grateful, but will ask for more next time. ML laughed and said he knows her true personality, but it doesn't matter to him because he is young and this isn't a big deal to him. ML is also happy that there seems to be a place for him in MC's heart.
    • AX visited. MC said that ML is outside, but AX said she was looking for MC specifically. She said that MC doesn't belong here, and that she is obviously from a big family, and they must be looking for her. MC replied that even if she were to go out to look, she has no memory and won't know where to begin
    • AX said that she has some herbs that might help. MC thinks your identity is a simple farmer girl, where would you learn about medicine, and to think of a better excuse.
    • MC was just about to refuse when ML comes in and said that he didn't know where AX learned medicine, he watched her grow up. She said that she learned it from the village doctor, but ML said that he just came back from visiting him. ML says if you don't know stuff, don't spout nonsense
    • Later that day, MC and ML talked, and ML thought how could MC be so intimate with me, and that MC must be the best woman in the world.
    • MC thought in half a month, her memory should be "recovered"
    • MC and ML went out to hunt almost every single day, and since ML was with MC, AX didn't have a chance to meet with MC. One day, on the way home, MC paused for a moment, and ML asked whats wrong. MC said nothing. MC asked whether the yard had been tampered with, and the system replied yes, there were some herbs along it.
    • MC looked at it, and even though it looked like common grass, it was actually a poisonous herb. Occasionally being around it was okay, but if it were in the yard, it could be dangerous. It would lead to coma, and eventual death. The next day, MC went and looked for herbs to counter it. ML asked what they were for, and MC said that in this season its easy to get sick and she knows of a recipe to prevent them from getting sick.
    • ML was happy that MC was recovering her memory, but also a bit sad that once she did, she will leave. ML thought to himself that he shouldn't be thinking these selfish thoughts.
    • MC thought ML looked like a big dog that needed his owner to comfort him, and she resisted the urge to pat him on the head
    • MC asked whats wrong, and ML confessed that he was feeling sad that MC would leave one day, and he can't bear that. MC thought that she was being selfish, and she assumed that ML was willing to leave with her to a new and unknown life. MC asked him if he wasn't going to go with her.
    • ML was surprised, and MC figured out that he didn't even think of this idea. ML got excited, chiding himself for not thinking of this sooner, and suddenly cheered up. ML said that is it alright to go with MC, and MC realized that all her worries were for naught, she just wasn't on the same wavelength with ML. She always assumed that they would be together, and didn't think of the idea that ML would think that they would separate. It wasn't that he didn't want to leave, but never thought of leaving with her
    • This also gave a bit of distress in MC's heart, is he not confident. He doesn't think he is worthy of her. MC laughs, and ML thinks that if someone were to come now, they'd think MC was a real fairy, and MC says well. ML realized that he said this out loud.
    • ML says he didn't say anything, and MC asks ML not to be so restrained in front of her. MC realized that ML would become very nervous in front of her, and she thought she would take her time to make him comfortable with her. But she realizes that half a month is too short for that.
    • ML thinks that he doesn't want to be nervous, but every time he's in front of MC his mind goes blank.
    • MC took the medicine herbs and wrapped it around ML's waist, saying it can ward off evil. ML thought that no one cared for him this much, and all of this thoughts became about MC.
    • In order for AX to not suspect anything, she even added a few scented herbs to the medicinal herbs
    • Although drinking the medicine soup would take care of it, she wants to be safe rather than sorry. The next time she visits its going to be bait for her
    • MC waited three days, and told the system to go ahead with the plan. The system put ML to sleep. When the system said AX went out, MC pretended to fall asleep. AX was cautious, waiting to see if they really fell into a coma.
    • The system said that it encountered an emergency, and would it would take one night for it to come back. MC thought it was okay, she didn't need the system to deal with AX
    • AX took MC deep into the mountains. She took her to a cave. AX marveled at the beauty of MC, and said that it will soon be hers. She had medicine tools like scalpel ready. AX said don't blame me, i didn't want to do this. If you just let me go with you, none of this had to happen. She didn't want to stay in this place, and that she shouldn't worry, she'll continue on her legacy when she went to the palace
    • MC said that was a nice monologue. AX was surprised MC was awake. MC asked what was the true nature of AX, and AX said you didn't forget. MC said she "conventionality remembered" right now.
    • AX tried to defend herself that she was just a harmless mountain girl, and MC says a harmless mountain girl won't know her identity.
    • MC also gives the advice if you want to kill someone, don't talk so much nonsense or else you'll die in the middle of talking, and AX says you're telling me this because, MC says that AX poses no threat to her.
    • MC says she knows about AX's plan, but she doesn't have the skill and doesn't have the life. MC knew for a person of AX's character, this was the biggest insult, and if gazes were weapons, MC would be dead on the spot.
    • MC says that AX should feel lucky, MC isn't going to kill her, but AX knows that MC wouldn't just let her go. AX suddenly felt her consciousness retreat.
    • When she woke up, she was surrounded by villagers. They were saying how can she be so vicious, that it is definitely the work of something evil.
    • AX suddenly sobered up, because she remembered what had happened. She thought that she wasn't ever going to return, so she poisoned her family. She was tied up by the villagers. She wants to argue, but the entire family was found dead, and the herbs were found in her room. People said that she used to be a good girl, it must be the work of something evil.
    • They decided the only thing they can do is to burn her to exorcise her. Zhang Auntie thinks this is too cruel, but they argued that AX might come after them. If she can kill her own family, no one is safe from her.
    • MC and ML came back from hunting. When AX saw MC, she started squirming like a madman, and this only strengthened the villagers image of her as a devil or something.They burned her, while also cremating the bodies of her mother and two brothers. The villagers thought by doing this, the souls of those murdered can finally achieve peace.
    • ML came over and asked what happened. Someone told him what happened, and he couldn't believe AX would do this kind of thing. They reassured him that the original AX is long dead, and that this was a devil or something that possessed her.
    • The next few days were normal, and then MC told ML that she regained her memories. She revealed to him who she was, and ML was surprised that MC was a princess. He know she was a high lady, but never thought it would be that high. ML worried that since she is a princess, she might not want to take him anymore.
    • MC noticed ML nervous appearance, and confronted him. MC asked if he was nervous, ML nodded. MC leaned closer and asked if he was nervous that she will ignore him now, his face got redder and he nodded. MC got closer and said you can't bear to leave me and ML nodded. Suddenly, ML had a bad thought. If he moves forwards even the slightest bit, he will kiss her. His body stiffened. This was something he dared not think about.
    • MC smashed this paper window by asking him if he liked her. ML couldn't answer. She said that he said yes to all those previous questions, if he liked her, he should just say it openly.
    • ML thought the think he wanted to do the most was to take MC into his arms. He wanted to kiss her. He wanted to yell that he liked her, and that he was even willing to die for her
    • MC thought was ML still a man. She said it clearly, so why could ML not understand what she meant. MC thought that waiting for ML to take the initiative would mean she would have to wait forever. MC said that she will only say it once. If you can't bear to leave me, tell me, I am by your side, you can tell me loudly, If you like me, hug me, kiss me, tell me by action, and before she could finish her sentence, ML took MC and kissed her. He finally confessed to MC.
    • MC's people arrived. The villagers were surprised to see them, and everyone was surprised to learn MC was a princess. MC ordered her subordinates to prepare stuff for ML so he can come with her.
    • ML saw MC in armor, and thought he never saw such a beautiful sight
    • They left for the palace. MC pretended not to care for ML, because if he is a person who saved MC, it would be one thing, but as a lover of MC, it would be another thing. ML realized the only way to be with MC is to become stronger, so he can match MC.
    • When they got to the palace, the emperor wanted to reward ML for saving his daughter. ML asked if there can be some protection for his home village. MC told her father about ML's superhuman strength, and ML demonstrated it. The military leaders were excited because of this. Military leaders wanted ML for themselves, but MC had already called dibs on him. ML said to MC to wait for him, and that one day he'll be able to stand by her side.
    • In five years, ML made a name for himself. When people think of Tian Ze’s military commanders, they think of MC and ML. People think he stays in MC's army even though he can become the leader of his own army because he is grateful to her, but in reality he doesn't want to separate from her.
    • During one of the emperors birthday, ML came back from a military expedition. The emperor was happy. The emperor wanted to reward him, ML asked for MC's hand in marriage. Whenever anyone asked this, the emperor would always deflect the answer to MC, and she would always reply i don't marry. This time, she said that its for the emperor to decide, which he understood as that MC didn't refuse him. Everyone was surprised that MC didn't refuse. The emperor set their marriage
    • The emperor was slightly worried about MC not finding someone to marry He loved his daughter too much to force her, so he was secretly glad for ML
    • They had a grand wedding. They had two sons and two daughters. When MC died, ML went soon after her. On his deathbed, he thought why are you crying, i lived long enough and i lived happily. Now, his grand kids are grown up, and he doesn't want to manage the kingdom. He doesn't want to keep MC waiting, or else she will be unhappy.
    • In the white space, MC was looking at this scene. The system tried to comfort her by saying that this is just an illusion, but MC thinks if this is an illusion, what is this. MC says these experiences are real for her.
     
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    araarq Well-Known Member

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    This is one of the arc’s i didn’t really like. So here’s a very brief summary of it.

    • Basically this is an arc where MC and ML are in school
    • MC chases ML, but ML in this one is an iceberg.
    • ML gets used to MC’s presence, but doesn’t reciprocate her feelings, or do anything much at all. He basically lets her stay by his side, and that’s all.
    • MC had a meeting with ML, but ML doesn’t show up due to circumstances
    • MC thinks she can’t wait forever and goes abroad to study. MC knows its not ML’s fault, but she’s been pursuing him for 5 years and he never responded, or did anything.
    • ML finds out that MC left, and finally realizes he loves MC
    • MC comes back after 5 years ML chases after MC, but MC doesn’t give in easily and makes him work for it.
    • ML chases after MC for a couple of years until MC finally accepts his confession
    Edit: i corrected a couple of typos
     
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    Yumika12345 Well-Known Member

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    @araarq Thanks for all the amazing spoilers :cookie::cookie::cookie: Do you know what chapter arc 35 starts in please? :aww:
     
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    araarq Well-Known Member

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    Arc 35 starts in chapter 1121
     
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    Ryss ... a small emanon...

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    Tears?
    Aka "tears of blood" ? :aww:
     
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    araarq Well-Known Member

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    Sorry, misyped years.
     
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    Also about arc 35
    In the origional plot line, (if i remember correctly and not confusing it with a different arc) the female lead is the enemy to MC’s host, but is actually an attempt to hide her true feelings, that she is in love with her. When she realizes she doesn’t reciprocate her feelings, she kills the host and herself, basically if i can’t have you no one can. In the current timeline, MC becomes friends with her.
     
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    JuuHachi Be My Glucose Guardian

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    yes yes yes ah lesbian arc yes
     
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