Spoiler I Will Make an Effort to Change the Genre

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  1. ChiZuki

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    FL: why am I your mother? I'm not your mom, I'm your aunt!

    Luca: mom, don't leave me!

    fl thought: aaaagghhh!

    Luca: (in tears) I'll call you aunt from now on. So don't leave me, yeah

    *gloom*

    ML: ehem! Miss ... didn't you tell me it was Luca's aunt?

    FL: yes, I'm his aunt ...

    Luca: (shouting hugging her hard) mama! Mommy!

    FL thoughts: Hey Luca! can you stop doing this to me?

    ML: I don't know what's going on with you ... miss, not if she's Luca's mother, I can't just take Luca with me.
    How could I separate them? Miss, come with me to Winterwald.

    Fl thoughts: no, no, no!
    Why would he go to the stage where the revenge will take place? Luca's sadness is one thing and my life is another!


    FL: n ... no ... I like the rural atmosphere ...

    Luca: You said you wanted to live like a princess in a castle.

    FL: I like this simple life.

    Luca: You said you wanted to wear a jewel ring on each finger.

    FL: my mouth is so cheap that I get sick when I eat greasy food.

    Luca: You said you would have no other wish if you could eat a beef steak.

    FL: well, Luca.
    Of course, I am a person, so I like to live in abundance. I have lived in Emden my whole life. All my friends are here and I don't want to go anywhere else now.

    Luca: aunt ... no, mom doesn't have friends. (stab the words to FL)

    FL thoughts: aaaaah! (internal hit LOL)

    Luca: (cries) I understand ... are you trying to get married after leaving me? because a nuisance, you are trying to sell me to a strange man who appeared out of nowhere!
    not! I will not go! I'm not going to go and I'm going to live with my mom in Emden.

    * serious look between ML and Luca *

    ML: well if you are thinking of getting married again, wouldn't it be better to find a partner in Winterwald instead of finding her in Emden?

    Luca: that! that's it! it's good for mom and me too

    FL thought: not good for me!


    Fl: lu-luca, if I go there after all. What are you going to do if I go and they make me have a hard time? Hey? Wouldn't it be okay for a woman to take care of a child alone? I will go crazy!

    Luca: Wouldn't it be nice to be a woman who gave birth to a dead child?

    FL thought: I'm going crazy!

    ML: miss. A single woman on her own ... in Winterwald would be fine. If you like the rural and simple environment, we will create this environment within the territory. If you want to live like a princess in a castle, that's fine. fatty food, good food, healthy vegetarian diet, whatever you want. everything is possible in winterwald.

    FL: ...................... (speechless then cries in her mind)

    * fl loses and luca wins. LOL*
    *luca triumphantly fist his hand on the side*


    fl thoughts: .... I want to believe it is a dream.
    It was quick to leave because I have no luggage.
    It took me so much work to get it right, and it came back like a boomerang. This is what I get for trying to change the main story ...?

    * fl internal crying by herself *


    Leah (fl's friend): judith, Judith!

    fl: leah ... what are you doing here ...?

    Leah: I thought you said you would become a noblewoman!

    FL thoughts: Words travel fast!

    Leah: you have been wanting so much to catch a rich nobleman, and now you are fulfilling your wish ...

    FL: what ?! What are you talking about? we don't have that kind of relationship!

    Fl thoughts: what will Ludiger think of me if he listens to her?

    ML: It seems that you are ready. We have to go now, so get in the carriage, Miss Maybaum. * extends his hand to assist *

    Leah: .....! it's okay...
    I'll be big from now on
    I will find a boyfriend who will not lose against you. So, go to society first and wait!

    FL: what? wait .. Leah, Leah ?!

    * leah runs away *

    ML: * lean closer to fl * ... is there a problem with your friend?

    FL: * blush *
    oh no no! there is no problem, we can go!
    go! * rides the carriage *

    FL thought: wow, that scared me! it's bad for the heart.

    FL: oops ...

    ML: * looks at his extended hand and closes it * sigh

    FL thought:
    ignore your hand! (she forgot to accept his hand because she rushed inside the carriage)


    FL: oh, I'm sorry

    Luca: why don't you come in quickly?

    FL: Lu, Luca! don't talk to your uncle like that!

    Luca: * looks away *

    fl thoughts:

    Luca in the original story, hungry for affection, desperately tried to look good in front of his new family. I wanted to be cute no matter what.

    it was so nice in the original. At this rate, I will wonder about how I will educate my son!


    FL: come on, Luca can't you say it? Tell him Tio, Tio.
    ... Luca are you listening to me? Luca?
    * luca ignores fl *


    ML: let's go right now.

    coachman:
    yes, Lord.

    fl thoughts: after so many comings and goings,
    after passing this door, I will say goodbye to Emden ...


    * FL saw the guy who likes her *
    Fl thoughts: what are you looking at?

    Even though the future is unstable ... I can't help it anymore. Crying over spilled water is ...
    Surviving in this revenge novel is just the beginning.

    funny chapter :blobjoy::blobjoy::blobpopcorn:
     
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  2. Hypothon

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    Although this could change later on, a bonus on my points on the manhwa
    The available raws literally went as far as novel ch.40-41 (just arriving at Winterwald. Basically, to those who don't know, novel translations originally went as far as 40 where Judith tells Luca to refer to her as mom before they arrive at Winterwald. But because the translation group got warned by either the artist or publisher, they had a time limit on post ch.21 which was by then the clothes shopping scene by chapter 7-8 I think)
    Since I can't read moon runes, this might be viewed negatively but
    -I think the adaptation failed to make me sense the "feel" of the tension or something. Not like the character designs (which imo is the strongest point for now). I had hoped to see more subtle emotions from Rudiger, showing his small attraction to Judith early on. I only sensed it once when he looked flustered (most likely the banter of them being good sub parents to Luca). The characters aren't really "flat" portrayed or anything like some complaints of "Methods to save the villain" where the character designs, notably the eyes make them look flat
    - not enough art background/setting, the artist focuses so much on character specific panels (which again is the strong point) but I can't appreciate their other portions on the art dept., the showcase on Judith and Luca clothes were sadly downplayed for me *sad*

    P.s do we know the artist's other works?
     
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    biha Mr. Callisto's soulmate

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    The. Art. Is. Pretty.

    :blobsob::blobsob::blobsob:
     
  4. MitsukiKanou

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    Wait a min, does that mean Larissa and Jonas are cousins or closely related?
     
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    Exactly my thoughts haha but ig it doesnt matter much since they both dont know and ofc theyre royals
     
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    did luca return to the past? its because his behavior kinda strange and different from the OG!novel that MC read...
     
  7. Hypothon

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    Probably? I believe someone posted a family tree in the spoilers here.

    Plus, its a different era, cousins are fine in in-breeding even in modern standards in some countries
     
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  8. Hypothon

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    Essentially mentioning this spoiler again (especially the family tree to those confused)
     
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    yukihibari A Silent Reader

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    tbh yes, they were. jonas's mother vanessa was the current king's sister, as well as the former king's daughter. meanwhile, larissa's grandmother is the former king's sister margaret/greta.

    so, to put it simply, jonas's grandfather and larissa's grandmother were siblings.
     
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    Mae Rogel 82 Call me Mae _ [Red step-siblings(Eldest)]

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    Who is the mother of judith
     
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    Judith is the granddaughter of Greta aka Margaret who is the former King's sister. Greta ran away to marry a commoner... because she fell in love with a commoner for his looks.
     
  12. MitsukiKanou

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    Thank you for explaining! I was getting lost with all the relatives. So they’re second cousins, slightly better than cousins I guess, genes-wise

    For the looks. That would explain why most of their family is good looking.
     
  13. NohrNeir

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    All my spoilers are on page 5 which includes the family tree and yes, Judith's family is good looking because they look like her grandfather. Judith on the other hand looks like her grandmother so she doesn't look as beautiful. What she does have are the purple eyes which for some reason almost everyone is obsessed with.

    Also to others, Jonas and Judith's sister are more like 2nd cousin. Luca doesn't end up with the princess so that's good.

    As for "cute" Judith-Luca moments, I don't think there is much. In fact, from reading, I couldn't see any unless if you like Luca treating Judith like he's a guardian and Judith trying to treat him like a kid but failing. Other than that Luca does really act like a mini adult, so the cute moments can only be seen in images when you see a kid acting like an adult, but in words, it doesn't seem as "cute".

    Also if someone nice wants to edit the table of contents to link all the spoilers on this forum, that would be nice. I don't know how to link specific posts. The pages before 5 have sparse spoilers going from where translations left off until when they have the first family banquet.
     
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    I’m so happy with the Manhwa! I was afraid of what the art would look like since I wasn’t a fan of the novel cover art. They really did the characters justice!
     
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    Aight. So i just noticed that jonas and larissa are cousins.....and that's on incest. Periodt.

    Gosh i want moooaaaar cute judith-luca spoilers plssss
     
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    thank you for the spoiler!!!!!

    guess im the only one who see this as a light-hearted romcom? :blobsweat: (blame me for not able to feel the tension since im not reading the full novel yet, hehe)
     
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    I’m really going to be curious how Franz/Frantz will look like in the manhwa? Will he be a good looking villain? :whistle:
     
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    Exactly I feel Luca turned back time or he may have som vague memories.coz his behaviour and how he is good at fighting and studies and all
     
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    Aah I really like luca more than the ml lol. Too bad luca doesn't have love interest till the end:unsure:
     
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    Thank you for all the spoilers :blobmelt:
    So Luca's parents: Larissa and Jonas had the same great grandparents. Well, they're the 4th generation anyway.